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Chapter 10 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
Hermione woke up spluttering with a foul taste in her mouth. Snape was looming over her looking rather amused. She glared at him, thinking he was amused at her expense, but he just smiled even more and stepped back.
"Dinner is served," he said almost jovially before handing over her wand and heading out of the room. She sat up in the bed watching him go, carefully holding the covers up to preserve her modesty. She swore his robes were billowing more than usual, and wondered if that was Snape's equivalent to a bounce in his step. He did look almost cheerful...
After he closed the door, she quickly dressed herself, then moved Ron back over to the bed proper. She didn't want to risk the failure of the transfiguration what with his delicate condition. All in all, it only took three minutes before she was out in Snape's office, staring at him eating with a gusto she'd never seen before.
He gestured for her to sit and join him, which she did, although cautiously. His mood was not one she had ever seen in him before, and it was more than a little unnerving.
She watched him cautiously for the length of the meal, and it wasn't until he leaned back with a satisfied sigh that she dared say anything.
"I take it the meeting went well?"
He raised his glass of wine to her and nodded. "In one aspect, it went rather well, yes."
"Only one?"
His smirk faded a little. "Yes. Only one. The other subjects broached were less than thrilling."
"Dare I ask?"
"I suppose so, as they pertain to you. The Dark Lord has decreed that I should flaunt you. He was rather unhappy that I've kept you hidden away so well. He didn't spell it out explicitly, but I am assuming that he will want you present for the return feast tomorrow night."
"And I'm assuming that means I'll be on display like some slave-girl?"
Snape nodded, looking disgusted. "Nothing extreme, with the exception of some obvious bondage." He sighed. "I think it would be best if you stood by the wall behind my chair for the meal. Will that be adequate?"
She frowned unhappily. "I suppose so. I'd rather be standing against the wall than kneeling at your side the entire meal. And at least that way, I won't be in the other teachers' faces."
Snape nodded. "Yes, that's what I was thinking as well." He drew a breath, looking hesitant. "I also thought that perhaps you would come down to breakfast with me. It would be best to let the other teachers know you're here before the children get back, and I'm hoping to stage some sort of conversation with Alecto to try and assuage the other teachers' outrage about the new situation."
Hermione nodded wordlessly, fruitlessly trying to think of some way to let the other, good, teachers know that she wasn't being mistreated. That it wasn't as bad as it looked.
"Will Poppy be there?"
Severus shook his head. "No. I'm afraid that she rarely attends meals with us, preferring to stay in the hospital wing in case of any unexpected accidents. Especially this year."
"Doesn't she have friends on staff?"
"Of course she does. As I gather, she and Minerva are quite close."
Hermione felt a little smile peek through her gloom. "Good. That means McGonagall will be likely to take her tales of horror to her after breakfast."
Snape, however, looked horrified. "You don't think Poppy would tell them not to worry or anything as blatant as that?"
Hermione shook her head quickly. "No, but she's in a better position to subtly assuage their outrage than you are."
Snape looked doubtful. "Perhaps I should talk to Poppy just in case..."
"Just trust her, sir."
Snape's face contorted into the sneer he wore whenever he saw Harry, but Hermione was saved from a scathing retort by Dumbledore's portrait.
"Miss Granger is right, Severus. Poppy will not give you away needlessly."
Snape whirled on the portrait. "Needlessly? Needlessly? I do not want her giving me away at all!"
"She is not going to stand by and see you lynched, my boy."
"If that's what happens, she should!"
"That wouldn't be in the best interests of the students, or Harry, or the wizarding world, though, sir," Hermione interjected quietly.
Hopes of Snape having not heard her quailed as she saw Snape tense up, then slowly turn to face her. His face was frozen with rage.
"How would revealing my true role be a benefit to the war effort, Miss Granger?"
Hermione took a nervous step back, but lifted her chin defiantly. "If it were a case of you either being a dead Death Eater or saved Order member, saving you would mean we'd still have you alive to help us."
Snape gave her the glare reserved for the dimmest dunderheads. "Oh, and that would be so helpful, I can tell you. The only role I can see myself being helpful in is as a decoy, and pardon me if I find that a less than appealing role."
"Oh, give yourself some credit, sir!" Hermione cried, losing patience. "You've got to be one of the most powerful wizards alive! And not only are you powerful, but you're brilliant. Even if it was just as an adviser, with your help we could win the war."
Snape didn't immediately bite her head off as she'd expected. Instead, he just observed her coldly.
"What did I tell you about romanticism, Hermione?"
"Well, we might as well be dead without hope, sir."
"You overestimate me."
"You underestimate yourself."
"I could be playing you right now. I am not a good man."
"Bullshit, sir."
He raised his eyebrow at that, caught by surprise. Hermione pressed her luck, swallowing before saying, "Yes, I suppose you could be playing me, but if you were, wouldn't you have changed your Patronus to a phoenix, or something equally obviously associated with Dumbledore and the Order? But you didn't. I don't think that's because you think I'm smart or cynical enough to doubt such an obvious symbol, because you had never given me any indication that you thought I was anything but a know-it-all who had a good memory. No. Instead, your Patronus was a deer. The same deer that led Harry to the real Sword of Gryffindor. And if you were playing me, then you would have to be playing Voldemort as well, because I seriously doubt he would want you to be giving us help like that!"
"Patronuses can't--" He stopped and seemed to think better of what he was about to say. Instead he spat, "You could have been Confunded. It could have been a goat or a dog, but you only remember it as a doe."
"But I never saw it! Only Harry did. And if you were close enough to Harry to Confund him, why didn't you stun and deliver him to your 'master'? Besides which, what is a loyal Death Eater doing casting Patronuses in the first place? It is a spell for the protection against Dark Arts. As far as I know, it isn't possible to use a Patronus evilly."
"I could be in the practice of casting Patronuses because I search for potions ingredients in lethifold territory. I could be handy at the charm because I was sent to spy on the Order. There are many reasons why a loyal Death Eater would cast a Patronus to fool a naive girl into believing he was loyal to her side."
"And arguing about them with me is the best way to keep up the game?" Hermione asked snidely.
He smirked. "If what I want is to keep you on your toes, yes."
Hermione was unconvinced. "Well, if that's what you want me to believe, you'll have to provide more persuasive arguments than that. As it is, I am considering you innocent until proven guilty."
Snape stared at her, nonplussed for a moment before swelling in rage. Hermione stepped back, suddenly alarmed, though also confused as to why her statement would be angering him so.
He stared at her from his ashen face. "You stupid girl!" he yelled. "You are completely at my mercy right now, and you blindly, stubbornly, recklessly endanger not only your life but your boyfriend's life by believing me innocent until proven guilty? You are a fucking idiot to do so on such paltry evidence!"
She stepped forward, throwing her arms wide to present an open target. "Well if I'm an idiot, here you go! Do your worst!"
Snape flexed his hand and raised his wand, aiming it at her heart. She held her breath, wondering if she had pushed him too far, but then he lowered the wand, still looking angry.
"Go tend to Weasley," he said through tight lips. She hesitated, prompting a harsh, "NOW!"
She bolted to the bedroom, closing the door behind her forcefully, not sure whether it was from fear or anger. She heard what sounded like furniture being thrown about and flinched, edging away from the door. When something crashed against the door, she jumped back, quickly casting a shielding and locking charm on the door to protect it from being broken in the face of his temper.
She backed up to the bed and only when she turned to look at Ron did she realize she was crying. She blinked and wiped her eyes until he came into focus, and then collapsed onto her knees, sobbing into the duvet on the bed.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Shelter
177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??