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Chapter 9 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
They settled into a routine of sorts over the last few days of Easter break. She would spend her time in the bedroom, tending to Weasley who would occasionally become almost lucid, while Snape stayed in his office, only calling on her for meals, although he discreetly observed her and the boy more often than he would care to admit.
Meals were something Snape found himself looking forward to. Not only did it serve to break the monotony of the day's routine, but he found himself genuinely enjoying the girl's conversation. She still asked too many questions, but at the same time, she asked them with such reverence for both the knowledge and the source, that he was hard pressed not to be flattered.
He noticed fairly quickly that she would come from the boy's bedside withdrawn and listless, but by the time the meal was over, her eyes would be sparkling again, and she would be prone to smiling. He found himself loathe to send her back in to tend to Weasley, although he knew it was safest for all of them if he did. By the end of the third day, he had decided to remain quiet, and let her choose when to return to her task.
So the end of Easter break found them spending more time together, talking or reading, than not. Snape knew it wasn't because Hermione didn't love Weasley; it was obvious she did. It was also obvious that it was the most painful thing she had ever experienced, having the love of her life die in front of her eyes. Watching her, he became grateful that Lily had died so quickly and, from what he knew, painlessly.
He also found himself awed that he was a source of comfort for the girl. It was rather disconcerting, but not wholly unpleasant. In fact, if he were honest with himself, it wasn't unpleasant at all.
He had almost relaxed into that role when his mark burned in warning of the Dark Lord's arrival.
"What's wrong?" Hermione asked.
"The Dark Lord approacheth," he muttered sourly, getting up. He made his way into the bedroom, not bothering to see if she followed. He knew she would. He paused by Weasley, wondering what to do with the boy. Hermione took the decision out of his hands by conjuring a cot and gently floating him onto it. He nodded in approval then went to the bathroom to retrieve the sleeping draught he'd made for such occasions.
When he came out, Hermione was standing by his bed, looking nervous.
"After I leave the room..." he paused awkwardly as he handed her the bottle.
"I'll make it look real," she said, offering him a small smile and her wand. He frowned as he took the wand, but then nodded curtly and left the room without a backward glance. He nearly paused as he reached the doorway, wanting to tell her something, offer some more comfort, but the role was still too foreign and new for him to know what to say.
He gently closed the door behind him and took a deep breath as he made his way down to the castle gates, clearing his mind as he walked. He didn't know why the Dark Lord was visiting so soon, but it didn't bode well.
The Dark Lord looked calm when he came into view, but Severus knew better than most that appearances were often deceiving.
"My Lord," Severus said with a bow after he'd unlocked the gates.
Voldemort glided onto the grounds with a regal nod. He looked around to survey the grounds, dim as they were in the dusky light. He seemed to be satisfied, and Severus had to push back the desire to relax. Relaxing wasn't an option around the Dark Lord.
"It is good to be back, Severus," Voldemort said with a bit of a sigh before looking at him. "The students will be returning tomorrow?"
Severus nodded. "Yes."
"Good, good," Voldemort said rather distractedly.
The rest of the trip up to Severus' office passed in silence. Once ensconced in the safety and comfort of the office, however, Voldemort looked around with an appraising eye.
"Where is the girl?" he asked as he sat down in the chair nearest the fire.
"In bed. I'm afraid I've been tiring her out, so she spends a good deal of time sleeping nowadays."
Voldemort smiled cruelly and nodded, obviously pleased. "I'm glad you're finding the gift acceptable."
"It is a far better present than I have ever received, my Lord. Thank you."
Voldemort nodded again, although this time with a smidgeon of a frown. "I understand you've been spending most of your time up here? The Carrows didn't know of her presence in the school until I met with them last night, and they thought you had gone away as well."
Severus nodded warily. "Yes, my Lord. I'm afraid I have found myself preferring to indulge in the girl's company more than anticipated. I have been splitting my time between enjoying her and doing the paperwork the school generates. It hasn't left much time for socializing."
Voldemort nodded understandingly. "I understand, Severus. I am pleased you have found opportunity to enjoy your gift so greatly, but I do hope that, come term time, you will return to your visible role?"
"Of course, my Lord." Severus reassured him, trying to suppress the uneasy feeling in his gut. "I have no intention of letting pleasure interfere with my duties."
Voldemort smiled again. "I had not thought so. But... you needn't separate them so vigorously."
"My Lord?"
"It is merely a suggestion, but I think it would be good for the students to see that I reward those who please me greatly."
Severus swallowed. "Master, I am not sure it would be politic to flaunt her." Voldemort gave him a look demanding an explanation. "Granger was a favorite of almost every teacher when she was a student here. They will not react to her enslavement well."
Voldemort shrugged. "They know not to cause trouble. Jobs depend on my approval these days, and they know it." His lips rose into an evil smile. "Besides, it should be obvious to you the warning inherent in flaunting her."
Severus bowed his head in agreement and capitulation. "Indeed, I do see that."
"Good. But now onto the more important business. I have need of your Gringott's vault key."
Severus' eyebrow rose, but he dutifully got up and retrieved the key from a secret compartment in the large desk and handed it over to Voldemort.
Voldemort must have sensed his confusion, as he chuckled softly. "I am not in need of your gold, Severus. I have decided that the Lestranges no longer bear the right to protect one of my more precious possessions."
"I am humbled, my Lord," Severus said, trying to force his breathing to slow.
"It will only be temporary. I'm afraid that I do not trust even you with it, and so shall have to find a more fitting place to store it permanently."
"Of course. I am honored that you chose me for even this, my lord!"
Voldemort nodded, reassured and stood up looking to the bedroom door speculatively. "How is the boy?"
"Still unconscious and losing ground."
"May I see him?"
"Of course." Snape opened the door for him, allowing Voldemort to enter first. The room was darkened, although one dim candle burned on the nightstand. Hermione was asleep in the bed, her bare shoulders peeking out from under the covers offering verisimilitude to the situation.
Voldemort's eyes passed over her briefly, but he found Weasley more interesting, and approached.
"He does look to be doing poorly. What does Pomfrey say?"
"She has done all she can. Most of the care of the boy now rests with Granger."
"Do you think it wise to trust her with the boy's care?"
"She loves him. If it were within her power, she would give her life for his."
Voldemort shook his head. "That would be a waste, however." His eyes flicked over to Hermione again before returning to Weasley's still form. "There must be a potion to force consciousness. I suggest you start looking for it, lest the boy dies before waking."
"As you wish."
Voldemort nodded and left the room, Severus close on his heels.
"Even if you do not find any potions, I shall be working on creating one. Try to keep the boy alive for as long as possible."
"Of course," Severus responded with an inward shiver. The Dark Lord's creations were usually very powerful indeed.
Voldemort smiled at Severus and laid a hand on his shoulder. "I am glad you have found a bit of respite. It has done you good. And if any of the teachers should trouble you, let me know. I shall mete out the appropriate punishment should they be so unwise."
Severus forced himself to grin. "The Dark Lord's word is law."
Voldemort grinned back. "Indeed."
He then left, and Severus sagged into his seat, exhausted, elated and, somehow, numb. He didn't know if he dared to hope that it was the Horcrux Voldemort was moving. It was what made sense. And if it was, then it would be within reach. The end would be within reach!
Snape felt the hope unfurl, allowing his face to relax. Before he knew it, he found himself smiling.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Shelter
177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??