I still think he is more experienced than she thinks he is....but it is good he refrained in her room. Very romantic at the end. Loving this story!

She is crazy! I don't think you should mess with Snape like that! I love the fact that she graded his homework! FUNNY!

just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying this story-its a very fun take on the marriage law challenge, looking foward to more-great job.

Yay!  Another update, Woooo-hoo!  You seriously rock!  This chapter was so much fun!  Their kiss was very awesome and I loved the additional girl talk with Ginny!  I know you said Ginny is important to this story, but I'm still very excited whenever I get to see the girl time squees.  Thanks for posting.  Much Love ~ Brena

Love it.  The butt smacking hex was a nice touch.  I love the reversal of the usual roles here, making Severus the virgin and Hermione the adept.  Looking forward to him becoming a fast learner!

Excellent how you tweaked this old promt! The basics are inverted, and yet the outcome is just as scary a prospect as before.

Wonderful chapter.  I love how playful and flirty she is with him and I think it sweet that he is being a good sport and trying to flirt back.  Oh, I cant wait to read the rest of this, I hope it's coming soon.

Wonderful, this is my favorite chapter so far.  I love that Hermione is so sure of herself and the way she is keeping him off balance is great.  I can't wait to read more.

I was thrilled to see Hermione throw her hat into the ring. They could be very hot together.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  I also loved the girl talk, it was so real.

This is wonderful, I cant wait to see who ends up with who.

Oh such a game of cat and mouse. GInny reaction was wonderful. At least one friend is happy for her. Severus' room was a surprise, but delighful and his reacions to her overtures fantastic!

Simply hilarious. Thank you for writing such an entertaining story.

what a fun romp! Can't wait to see more - thanks for your hard work!

Oh, I like it! I love a take charge Hermione. Too many stories have her overwhelmed and I just don't see that as totaly in character. I can see her as internally trepedatious but she would still wrest for some control of the situation.

Great chapter!! She's awesome!!

This is so much fun! I can't wait to see what "tricks" he knows. I think he may be more experienced than Hermione gives him credit for.....Well we'll see!Keep up the good work!

I've only just come across this and I think it's absolutely wonderful! Normally, I avoid fics on The Marriage Law like the plague but this is different.  Really, really amusing and so well written!I have to say that I actually feel very sorry for Snape taking on Hermione, not the other way round; does he reallyknow what he's letting himself in for?!There are just so many good, witty lines in this but probably my favourite has to be what, mockingly, Ginny says in chapter 2 ... 'Madam Snape.  Ten points off Gryffindor for improper use of my wand' ... priceless! :-)

Dear author,
I'm trying to guess who you are, and I may have a few ideas, but I'm still hesitant. Anyway, once I'll find out I'll make sure to send a box of chocolate or something for the immense pleasure you're providing me with your wonderful story.
Might I just add that you should warn the readers about drinknig and eating while reading it. It may cause great damage to the screen of the computer, at least serious cleaning.
With all my gratitude and admiration,
Snitchette

Your twist to the old (and very much loved plot) MLC is one of the most entertaining WIP's I am reading this days. I just love how you balance Severus and Hermione with eachother and the dialogue is magnificient. Extremely well done and I am looking forward to read more!

Love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

haha! This is brilliant! A really clever little twist on the old Marriage Law stuff.. and I cannot wait for Severus's first time!!

Marriage Law stories usually don't do much for me, but this one is really cute, so I'll keep reading.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I was cheering 'You go girl!' throughout the chapter.  Well written and funny as hell. 

TOTALLY AWSOME....LOVE IT........WHAT A VIXEN!CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

i'm really enjoying your story, even if hermione is a bit conceited. hehe way to go severus.