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Bookends
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Severus Snape and Hermione Granger are the only survivors of the Final Battle. The responsibility of re-building Hogwarts and usher in a "New Era" for the school falls upon their shoulders.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for Bookends
Another wonderful chapter, but I have one problem...I may not be able to eat a bowl of soup again without smirking! (He He!)Cheers.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
LOL! I'm glad you liked it!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
LOL! I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah, the familiar feeling that... isn't, anymore. I can see that totally ungluing her!Nicely written chapter, thanks!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you so much! I hope you like the next one!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you so much! I hope you like the next one!
Great Chapter! I really do love the interaction between the two, and with Poppy telling tales of school day hijinxs and then Snape flirting...in a round-about way at least :)Can't wait to see where this goes!Thank you for the great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
I enjoyed this chapter because it's the first showings of how compatible Severus and Hermione are together. He now sees her as the woman she's become, and is starting to be taken with her. Hermione also senses the change in their relationship, and is very comfortable with this development. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you. I wanted to make the transition easy and believable. I hope you like the next chapter as well!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you. I wanted to make the transition easy and believable. I hope you like the next chapter as well!Livvy
Thank you for the update, it was another great chapter! I really love your story, keep up the magnificient writing, I will be looking for the next update!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you so much! THe next chapter is in the queue! I hope you enjoy the next chappie!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you so much! THe next chapter is in the queue! I hope you enjoy the next chappie!Livvy
Interesting story and I look forward to reading more. My only criticisms are that we Brits do NOT go 'nutters'. You can be 'a nutter' but you cannot 'go nutters': the phrase doesn't exist. And 'bugger all' isn't an exclamation, it just means 'nothing' (as in 'There's bugger-all in my bank account' or 'I really ought to have done some work today but I've actually achieved bugger-all.' The exclamation would just be 'Bugger!'I'm still enjoying your story though. :-)
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I went online to find British slang and just took what I saw. I'll make the one change, but can you give me another word to put in there instead of "nutters". In the U.S. we'd stay, "he went off the wall or bonkers, crazy, insane, etc." but I would like to have a real British slang word there. Any suggestions would be great.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from Red_Sky_At_Night (Reviewer)
I'd suggest any of the following:"He went beserk""He went mad""He went right off on one""He had a fit"Hope that helps :-) Personally I'd go with 'He went beserk'.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I'll use that one.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I went online to find British slang and just took what I saw. I'll make the one change, but can you give me another word to put in there instead of "nutters". In the U.S. we'd stay, "he went off the wall or bonkers, crazy, insane, etc." but I would like to have a real British slang word there. Any suggestions would be great.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from Red_Sky_At_Night (Reviewer)
I'd suggest any of the following:"He went beserk""He went mad""He went right off on one""He had a fit"Hope that helps :-) Personally I'd go with 'He went beserk'.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I'll use that one.Livvy
You have balanced this chaptor with just the right amount of sadness and mirth that a lot of writers could not have pulled off. Excelent chaptor. Looking forward to the next chaptors to watch their relationship grow. I'm sure their will bumps along the way.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you, that was my intention. The next chapter will be even more sad as they go to visit the graves of friends. There will be more tenderness between the two of them and I hope the next chapter will prove to be just as balanced.Thank you so much for reviewing1Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you, that was my intention. The next chapter will be even more sad as they go to visit the graves of friends. There will be more tenderness between the two of them and I hope the next chapter will prove to be just as balanced.Thank you so much for reviewing1Livvy
Lovely chapter, nice bit of sexual awareness, he sees her as she is now, not as a little girl. But why is she wearing a uniform now?
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Well, she back at school and hasn't taken her NEWTs yet. Also, the clothes she has are pretty grubby from wandering all year. The uniform at least is clean. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Well, she back at school and hasn't taken her NEWTs yet. Also, the clothes she has are pretty grubby from wandering all year. The uniform at least is clean. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
“Oh, but I do bite, Miss Granger, make no mistake.”**“Anywhere that will give the most pleasure, Miss Granger,” he replied seductively.I love it. They work together very well putting the Potions Lab to rights. A good chapter. I look forward to the next!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
LOL! I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter is in the queue!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
LOL! I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter is in the queue!Livvy
Ohh, how sweet!! I really like the way you're developing them. Great work!!gab
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you!Livvy
I think Hermione's forgetting for a while, finding both comfort and forgetfulness in familiar work, is realistic. I am so pleased with this story! Thanks!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you! I'm glad you are liking it. The next chapter will deal more with Hermione dealing with her losses. Plus, more development of their relationship.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you! I'm glad you are liking it. The next chapter will deal more with Hermione dealing with her losses. Plus, more development of their relationship.Livvy
Again, I want to compliment you on the way you are developing the relationship. And I like Kingsley here.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I hope you continue to like the progression.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I hope you continue to like the progression.Livvy
I can imagine this scene very well. I'm surprised Severus didn't have a stroke if Slughorn left that much of a mess:(But working together on a common goal is a comforting thing, and this chapter is very well done, grounding the story in a foundation of reality:) Well... Potter-verse reality anyway:) You know what I mean:)Well done, I am enjoying this:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Aww, shucks! Thanks so much! I hope you like the next chapter. I'll be kicking up the angst a bit but with some extra tenderness between them to soften the pain.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Aww, shucks! Thanks so much! I hope you like the next chapter. I'll be kicking up the angst a bit but with some extra tenderness between them to soften the pain.Livvy
Very good. Can't wait for more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I loved it! I can't wait to read more...Do you have any spoilers?
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Spoilers...hmmm...well the next chapter will bring Severus and Hermione even closer as Hermione comes to grips with the loss of her friends. She will find herself unable to handle the grief alone and they will come to a realization that they only can turn to each other for understanding of what it was like to survive the battle.More sexual tension, more friendly banter, a little flirting, and also some very sad parts as well. I hope you like it!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Spoilers...hmmm...well the next chapter will bring Severus and Hermione even closer as Hermione comes to grips with the loss of her friends. She will find herself unable to handle the grief alone and they will come to a realization that they only can turn to each other for understanding of what it was like to survive the battle.More sexual tension, more friendly banter, a little flirting, and also some very sad parts as well. I hope you like it!Livvy
Just read the three chapters posted. WoW, Big Bang, Green Light everywhere, and Bella saves the Mudggleborn's life! Great concept with these two being the only battle survivors - but, I just have one question at this point... are they both still nakkid under those sheets or did Poppy come up with something for them to wear? We read, clothes off, but we never read clothes on.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, once the got situated in the Infirmary, they get put into hosptial gowns. I probably should have mentioned that. lolThanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, once the got situated in the Infirmary, they get put into hosptial gowns. I probably should have mentioned that. lolThanks for reviewing!Livvy
WoW! The killing curse all around! And then waking up to see everyone dead except themselves... horrid!
I love how he noticed her laugh at the end--I always have thought laughing is so sexy--so hopefully this will lead him to think that too!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, giggling will have an effect on him that she will be unaware of :) The next chapter will bring out the beginnings of interest and sexual tension.There really had to be a balance. The potential to slip into a really depressing tale is great, so there has to be some humor and levity to make it all well rounded.I hope you keep liking it!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, giggling will have an effect on him that she will be unaware of :) The next chapter will bring out the beginnings of interest and sexual tension.There really had to be a balance. The potential to slip into a really depressing tale is great, so there has to be some humor and levity to make it all well rounded.I hope you keep liking it!Livvy
Oh wow, this is definitely a different take on the Final Battle. I have wondered what would happen if noone, or very few survived. I think Hermione and Severus will have a good relationship from the beginning, since they will have that fact in common. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, they will quickly realize they only have each other and the respect they both felt for each other will quickly grow into something more!Thanks for reviewing!LivvyP.S. There is a fic called Understanding that I ran across on Ashwinder, I think. It was a while ago when I was in the middle of writing this fic and the same scenario was posed, that Severus and Hermione were the only survivors. It is told in Hermione's first person POV and besides the beginning of the Fianl Battle, nothing is similiar. I did contact the author and she gave me her best wishes on the fic. I'm very conscious about plagarism. But, if you had thought of that scenario about minimal survivors, give that one a go.Cheers,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, they will quickly realize they only have each other and the respect they both felt for each other will quickly grow into something more!Thanks for reviewing!LivvyP.S. There is a fic called Understanding that I ran across on Ashwinder, I think. It was a while ago when I was in the middle of writing this fic and the same scenario was posed, that Severus and Hermione were the only survivors. It is told in Hermione's first person POV and besides the beginning of the Fianl Battle, nothing is similiar. I did contact the author and she gave me her best wishes on the fic. I'm very conscious about plagarism. But, if you had thought of that scenario about minimal survivors, give that one a go.Cheers,Livvy
Beautiful chapter!!! More!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
The next chapter is in the queue- sexual tension alert coming up :)Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
The next chapter is in the queue- sexual tension alert coming up :)Livvy
Brilliant chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you!Livvy
Really like the way this story is developing. Will look forward to next chapter. Thanks
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks. The next chapter is in the queue!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks. The next chapter is in the queue!Livvy
Another great chapter! I like the phase of your story and your plot and writing are brilliant!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you! I hope you keep liking how the story unfolds.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thank you! I hope you keep liking how the story unfolds.Livvy
Great Chapter! :D I love the interaction between the two, and the description of the final battle. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I hope you keep liking how I bring these two together.Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Thanks! I hope you keep liking how I bring these two together.Livvy
excellent chapter. Sadness is laced with laughter, sometimes hysterical nervous laughter, but life goes on. I am glad you are not making this all gloom and doom, that's not what I read fiction for. Thanks for another enjoyable chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, there will be moments of hilarity mixed in with sadness, but such is life. I took a lot of pleasure in taking the basic personalities of Snape and Hermione and tweaking them to fit in this story. I mean, how can these two people stay the same when they've been faced with such loss? Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Bookends)
Yes, there will be moments of hilarity mixed in with sadness, but such is life. I took a lot of pleasure in taking the basic personalities of Snape and Hermione and tweaking them to fit in this story. I mean, how can these two people stay the same when they've been faced with such loss? Livvy