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Cursed

1: Sunset

2: Work to Do

3: Peeves and Kitten

4: Spellwork

Cursed

moogling

103 Reviews   |   103 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 6,937 Words 4 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

His lover is cursed to be a hawk at night. Weasley is pawing all over her. Voldemort's still not dead. And the old codger is still meddling. Worst of all, Severus Snape is a bloody kitten.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Sunset

Chapter 2: Work to Do

Chapter 3: Peeves and Kitten

Chapter 4: Spellwork


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moogling

Member Since 2008  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 0  |  0 Reviews Written  |  105 Review Responses

Writes a lot.
Doesn't post that much though.
Actually thinks out plots in the shower. 
Still likes drawing on the misted-up glass despite her age.
Lacks the concentration span to finish off her stories.
Has a problem juggling three languages (so please forgive me if my English isn't too good!)

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9/10

Shadow

Poor Ron. He really got himself in the deep end this time! I love Severus as a kitten, watching Ron bungle his classes from above. Too true!Now to find out what Lucius is up to...

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Lucius the evil bugger will be in Hogwarts.  And Severus the kitten will wreak havoc upon the Board of Governors.Haven't started writing, but I've got a vague idea right now.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Lucius the evil bugger will be in Hogwarts.  And Severus the kitten will wreak havoc upon the Board of Governors.Haven't started writing, but I've got a vague idea right now.

10/10

andromeda_moon

Ooh, what is Lucius up to?  And poor ol' Ron; he's definitely not right for Hermione, but I do feel a bit sorry for him - making a right fool out of himself in more ways than one!  I'm thoroughly enjoying your story so far, can't wait for the next chapter :D

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

If you've watched Ladyhawke (or read the synopsis from Wikipedia), I'm planning on Lucius being Marquet and Voldie on being the Bishop.Haven't started writing the third chapter, but ideas are down on paper.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

If you've watched Ladyhawke (or read the synopsis from Wikipedia), I'm planning on Lucius being Marquet and Voldie on being the Bishop.Haven't started writing the third chapter, but ideas are down on paper.

10/10

andromeda_moon

Bravo!  When I read this challenge I didn't think I would like reading the responses, but this certainly has my interest :D  I like Severus as a little black kitten - in a weird sort of way I think it would be more of a relief to him than being turned into the standard snake/bat -  something a little more calming (although a bundle of catnip could be amusing!) 

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

At first, I thought of Snape turning into a snake or a bat and Hermione into a hawk (following Ladyhawke), but then again, I couldn't really manipulate it into being funny.  So voila - Snape the dastardly evil kitten.Hmm.  Your comment on catnip just gave me an idea..

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

At first, I thought of Snape turning into a snake or a bat and Hermione into a hawk (following Ladyhawke), but then again, I couldn't really manipulate it into being funny.  So voila - Snape the dastardly evil kitten.Hmm.  Your comment on catnip just gave me an idea..

10/10

RedsAttic

EXCELLENT!!!!I look forward to reading future chapters...

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

0/10

sunny33

Love Snape as a kitten, he is so naughty! ( with justified cause )

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

I think I'm going to spend a bit more time on Snape being a kitten.  But I think I might be digressing to much.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

I think I'm going to spend a bit more time on Snape being a kitten.  But I think I might be digressing to much.

0/10

ChrissyJones

I can't wait to see how Severus handles Lucius! Looking forward to more -- good job!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Severus The Kitten vs. Lucius MalfoyHijinks galore!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Severus The Kitten vs. Lucius MalfoyHijinks galore!

0/10

klschmidt

I'm always up for a bit of Ron bashing.  :-D  Glad to see he's still in rare form.  And kitty Severus watching from the rafters - that was toooooo rich!  :-D

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

There's going to be quite a lot of Ron-bashing in this story (not for those who love Ron/Hermione pairings).  Thanks

Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)

None of that here, personally.  I'm a "Die Hard SS/HG" fan and a strong believer in EWE.  (lol)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

yeah. I really didn't like the Epilogue for DH - I can't imagine Ron with Hermione (cause he's more of the man = breadwinner, wife = stays home with kids).  I remember reading an essay on how JK Rowling toned down Hermione's personality just so that she could fit with Ron..

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

There's going to be quite a lot of Ron-bashing in this story (not for those who love Ron/Hermione pairings).  Thanks

Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)

None of that here, personally.  I'm a "Die Hard SS/HG" fan and a strong believer in EWE.  (lol)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

yeah. I really didn't like the Epilogue for DH - I can't imagine Ron with Hermione (cause he's more of the man = breadwinner, wife = stays home with kids).  I remember reading an essay on how JK Rowling toned down Hermione's personality just so that she could fit with Ron..

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

I enjoyed this chapter very much.  You had me laughing through most of it, and I have rated it accordingly. I'm looking forward to more.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks a lot!From what I've read, Ladyhawke is more of a tragic tale that ends happily.  I wanted to make something happier, and voila, Ron the bad Professor and the meddling Dumbledore.  There's going to be quite a bit more humour later on.  I'm still wondering if I should stick in Boy Wonder.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks a lot!From what I've read, Ladyhawke is more of a tragic tale that ends happily.  I wanted to make something happier, and voila, Ron the bad Professor and the meddling Dumbledore.  There's going to be quite a bit more humour later on.  I'm still wondering if I should stick in Boy Wonder.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Stupid Ron. LOL Looking forward to seeing where this goes. :)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

heh.  More Ron stupidness to come!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

heh.  More Ron stupidness to come!

8/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Nice start.  I'm surprised at Ron being the Potions profesor, but I'll wait to see where it goes.  Look forward to more1

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!Ron's going to appear through this story quite a lot.

0/10

klschmidt

Now I get to visualize Severus in his dark hunkiness compared to Rutger Hauer in his blond hunkiness (lordy, he was hot in that flick).  And Sev is a BLACK KITTEN!!  I love it - will he have an encounter with Minerva or Mrs. Norris?  :-DGood start.  Can't wait for more.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Hmm.. I was thinking of a Mrs. Norris one, because McGonagall already knows that Severus is a kitty. I've seen snapshots from the old movie online when I was reading up on it - I couldn't actually put Rutger Hauer together with Snape for some reason.It's probably because I've never actually watched the movie.

Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)

I highly recommend it!  Awesome flick.

0/10

cricket

This is a great start!  I have always liked Ladyhawke, and I'm fascinated to see where you will take this.  Can't wait to read more! :)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I've sent in the second chapter already, so it's waiting to come out.

9/10

chaotics

this is great very clever

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

9/10

Shadow

Oh, the benefits of being a kitten! Ron as Potions Professor - Heavens spare the poor castle. I wonder what Dumbledore was thinking??

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Well, I was thinking that Dumbledore would be my 'Mouse' character, but I'm not exactly following the Ladyhawke storyline so it might be a teeny bit different.Ron is just to stir things up a little.  And to make the castle a little more lively.

9/10

beaweasley2

I think you've done well with the movie prompt. cudos!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

0/10

WriterMerrin

So cool!  I have a vague idea how this could go, based on the prompt, and I'm terribly excited.  I hope your lovers are bright people who really shine.  They are so far!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

With this prompt, I find it hard to change directions - I mean, I personally love happily-ever-afters, so I guess it's kind of predictable.I'm glad you liked it!

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Lovely. Thanks.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

10/10

livvy6

Snarky! LOL! That is just mean having Snape turn into a kitten. Oh, the poor thing! This is gonna be great!Livvy

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I've not seen this movie in a long time, but I always loved it. I'm glad someone's taken up the prompt.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

When I was choosing a prompt, I was tempted to do the Velcro one, cause it was just full of potential sexual innuendo.  But this one caught my eye.

0/10

sunny33

The poor buggers! Interesting start :)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

10/10

pookah

I've never seen the movie, either.  But I am happy to see this prompt used.  And you've done a fine job so far with this.  ---Kitten form, interesting.  People think they are helpless and cuddly, but they scratch,bite, and trip up people (as well as  chew. )  oh yes, helpless and cuddly, indeed.  It does rather fit him.   From what I read about the movie, I had expected more of a serious tone, but am happy to see some humour worked in.Just one little problem, please don't say '4 A. M. in the morning.'    'A. M.' OR 'in the morning' bu t not both.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

I've always said 4 a.m. in the morning for some reason... probably something I picked up a long time ago.Well I'm planning for quite a few kitten hijinks involving Ron, of course.

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

Woo Hoo!  Kitten hijinks!  What fun!

10/10

aura

One question: Ron,    as a Potions Professor?!?  (Don't think I've ever seen that one before!)Loving the fic so far! And adored the summary.  Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here. 

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Well, I've always read fanfiction where Ron needs help for so many things... and I decided that Ron should try his hand at teaching.  Thanks!

0/10

elsolel

I think you have really nailed the prompt!  I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more.  Thanks for posting.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

8/10

Anonymous

Interesting premise! Thank goodness for plot bunnies. It already strikes me as tragic, tho I desperately (and secretly, so don't tell anyone) want a Severus for myself who is stuck in animal form. Don't know why. Just do.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I secretly want an animal Severus too.  But hey, if he wasn't in love with Hermione in this story he'd probably be creating a fiasco and breaking everything in sight.

I'll be posting up soon.

10/10

blue artemis

I think I could live without Ron, but this is fun nonetheless.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

When I write Snape/Hermione fics, I always try to find some kind of antagonist towards their relationship and it's usually Ron who makes a fool of himself.I generally dislike Ron.  Think of him as being a bit like 'Bottom' from A Midsummer Night's Dream in this story.

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