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Romance General Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 6,937 Words 4 Chapters WIP

Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

His lover is cursed to be a hawk at night. Weasley is pawing all over her. Voldemort's still not dead. And the old codger is still meddling. Worst of all, Severus Snape is a bloody kitten.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Sunset

Chapter 2: Work to Do

Chapter 3: Peeves and Kitten

Chapter 4: Spellwork

About moogling

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moogling

Member Since 2008 | 1 Story | Favorited by 0 | 0 Reviews Written | 105 Review Responses

Writes a lot.
Doesn't post that much though.
Actually thinks out plots in the shower.
Still likes drawing on the misted-up glass despite her age.
Lacks the concentration span to finish off her stories.
Has a problem juggling three languages (so please forgive me if my English isn't too good!)

Reviews for Cursed

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8/10

pookah

So did Hermione change into a Hawk in the Library? Other than that question, I am enjoying this story very much. Thanks for tkaing on this tough challenge.

10/10

beaweasley2

The last bit confused me. If Hermione becomes a hawk at night, would she still at the same spot the next morning. And why would 'he cat' think she'd been up all night? and if he knew what was happening with Weasley last chapter after the change, why would he not know she was his bird? why doesn't she know or remember anything during her change? even in Lady Hawk they could see each other for a brief split second when they changed each dawn and each sunset - that was part of the torture.Still, I loved the part with Lucius - informative. and the bits about how the creation of a spell works

0/10

klschmidt

Too funny! Sneeky little kitty (and BAD Peeves! - NOT) ;-)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

10/10

Shadow

I really like your explination on how Peeves came into being, and how to destroy him. I can just see Lucius trying his hardest to get some revenge on him after the catnip incident!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I enjoyed writing the Peeves bit - and Lucius isn't done with our favourite poltergeist just yet.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I enjoyed writing the Peeves bit - and Lucius isn't done with our favourite poltergeist just yet.

0/10

kimjo2

this is a great interpretation (sp) of ladyhawk. love how severus and peeves are working together. loved your discription of how peeves came into being...made perfect sense! thank you and i look forward to further developements

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Spelling's right.I like adding my little touches to J.K. Rowling's world, cause she doesn't give us all the details in the books. I made the poltergeist thing up completely cause I was bored and wanted to make things a little more interesting, not just between Ron and Severus and Sevvie and Lucius.I'm really slow at finishing my chapters right now, cause I'm being lazy.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh I love it! Lucius covered in catnip! Too funny.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

9/10

Maddie

What a great prank!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks! There will be more later on!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks! There will be more later on!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

I really loved this chapter. Brilliant!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

0/10

WriterMerrin

There is something irresistable about Calvin and Hobbes, and something irresistable about Kitten!Severus.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

I agree. I never get tired of Calvin and Hobbes. However, with Kitten!Severus, I think it has potential to become a really bad cliche after a while.But that's just me.

Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)

Well, of course I'm looking forward to his regaining his human form ;)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

I agree. I never get tired of Calvin and Hobbes. However, with Kitten!Severus, I think it has potential to become a really bad cliche after a while.But that's just me.

Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)

Well, of course I'm looking forward to his regaining his human form ;)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I like that Peeves and the "kitten" worked together to do this to Malfoy. Haha

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!Hopefully, if my plot bunny allows it, I'll stick in more Peeves. But next chapter, we'll definitely see Malfoy try and get revenge on the poltergeist.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!Hopefully, if my plot bunny allows it, I'll stick in more Peeves. But next chapter, we'll definitely see Malfoy try and get revenge on the poltergeist.

0/10

elsolel

Catnip juice! hahahahaaa! heheee. ahhh. I like that a lot.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!Next chapter, we'll see Lucy try and bring hell upon Peeves because of the catnip concentrate.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!Next chapter, we'll see Lucy try and bring hell upon Peeves because of the catnip concentrate.

0/10

Saphira Chrysalis

The first thing that came to mind was:This is like LadyHawke except with the Harry Potter universe.Second thing: Severus is a kitten?...Cuuute:)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

yeah, well, this was following the LadyHawke prompt, so it had to at least have a little semblance to the movie. I've never watched it so I guess it's easier for me to mess around with the plot.And yes, Sevvie is a kitten. The evil kitten.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

0/10

StormySkize

Loved the catnip cologne for 'Lucy'.

0/10

StormySkize

Even as a kitten, Snape can express his contempt, can't he? That was too cute.Looking forward to more.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

0/10

StormySkize

Since I've never seen the movie, I can simply sit back and enjoy your story without making comparisons. I must, however, add my dismay at the thought of Ron teaching Potions!Looking forward to more.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!

0/10

sunny33

very funny! Peeves is cool! :)

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I'm still not quite sure whether I should put Peeves into the main plot or whether he stays as a little diversion.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I'm still not quite sure whether I should put Peeves into the main plot or whether he stays as a little diversion.

10/10

pookah

OMG Calvin and Hobbes! and catnip! This is such fun! Thank you for another delightful chapter! And thanks for giving us some information on Peeves, and Poltergeists in general. I love it when people add their own touches to JKR's world.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I love Calvin and Hobbes - and the transmogrifier machine is kind of relevant, cause in one strip, Calvin goes into the machine and becomes a tiger.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I love Calvin and Hobbes - and the transmogrifier machine is kind of relevant, cause in one strip, Calvin goes into the machine and becomes a tiger.

0/10

rachow

The reference to Calvin and Hobbes was great. I also like the Cheshire bit. Peeves is definitely Chesire-like. I loved Peeves' nickname for Lucius. Is that canon or did you come up with that? I don't remember seeing it.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

'Lucy' isn't canon.I can imagine Peeves with a Cheshire grin - he's definitely the person to do it.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

'Lucy' isn't canon.I can imagine Peeves with a Cheshire grin - he's definitely the person to do it.

10/10

blue artemis

Concentrated catnip on Lucius? That was wonderful.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Yeah. Sadly, catnip didn't work on M. (my cousin's cat) so the catnip stuff was mostly guesswork.More to come!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Yeah. Sadly, catnip didn't work on M. (my cousin's cat) so the catnip stuff was mostly guesswork.More to come!

9/10

Tsita

Yup, it was LadyoftheMasque's "Spinster".

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks! I'll put it in the Author's Notes - I didn't remember who it was by, but it was a good idea.

Response from Tsita (Reviewer)

I'll pass that along to her...

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks! I'll put it in the Author's Notes - I didn't remember who it was by, but it was a good idea.

Response from Tsita (Reviewer)

I'll pass that along to her...

0/10

emmeline33

This has been such an entertaining, funny read. Loving it!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I think I should get back on the sad bits now though.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I think I should get back on the sad bits now though.

10/10

azulkan2

Lol, perrrrrfect justice for Lucy. Looking forward to more.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

There will be more revenge on Lucy, don't worry. But I think I have to focus a teeny bit more on Sev and Hermione now.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

There will be more revenge on Lucy, don't worry. But I think I have to focus a teeny bit more on Sev and Hermione now.

0/10

KarenDetroit

Transmogrify! (Snerk) That almost makes up for a horrible week. Thanks!

0/10

KarenDetroit

Transmogrify! (Snerk) That almost makes up for a horrible week. Thanks!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I'll try and update ASAP!

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks!I'll try and update ASAP!

0/10

lady elaine

"Spinster" was where you read about the scrabble tiles, I'm almost positive.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks. I didn't remember the name. I'll put it in the Author's Notes.

Response from moogling (Author of Cursed)

Thanks. I didn't remember the name. I'll put it in the Author's Notes.

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