I agree with you on everything. Don't worry about not rating. No problem. :) Thank you

I agree with you on everything. Don't worry about not rating. No problem. :) Thank you

I agree with so much of what you said here, and it's all put much better than I could have. Thanks for taking the time to give me your thoughts. I appreciate and applaud them. And I'm glad my message got through. :) Cheers!!

Thank you for that. I hope maybe it gives someone pause to think and maybe talk to their kids about it. "Has anyone ever done anything? ... If someone ever tries, you can tell me, and I won't be angry with you..."I remember when I was little those things (threats) were scary. "They'll hate you if you say something." "They'll make you go live with orphans." You just don't realize that it's all just threats.However, that said, there are Dumbledores in the world who just sweep things under the rug. For instance, my aunt was raped by her uncle. She told. Nothing was done, except her parents saying, "OMG! You asshole. Stay away."WTF??? How the fuck is that punishment? Crazy!Years later, this same aunt was "Meh" about a situation I found myself in. I woke up to find my other aunt's hubby lying next to me and trying to caress my breasts when I was 15. When I told, she said, "Oh, but you were wearing that white,strapless dress, looking like a woman."?????? Say what??????That's horrible. I feel that she was warped terribly. She admitted to my grandmother, who told me in confidence, that when her son was young, she was tempted to touch him when she changed his diaper.I just... couldn't fathom doing that. Later, her son was one of the ones who cornered and did things to me.It's like a cycle of abuse.I've made certain that it's been broken with me. I will never condone child abuse of any kind. I openly talk to my son about everything, but I make certain he's never left in situations like that. Sadly, he goes to no place without me (aside staying with my parents whom I trust). I'm too suspicious of a person and don't trust people.And to be honest... I would probably kill someone if they touched him. It's best to not even go there.:)Wow, a rambler. I feel so strongly about this damn subject. Sorry about all the TMI. I find its helpful to discuss it.

No appology necessary. I know I am so lucky not to have had that happen to me! We have been very protective of our daughter and taught her to "Scream and yell, and run like hell!" if anyone scares her or threatens her. (also how to fight 'dirty')

Parents can be over-protective, but it's better to be a little too protective than to endanger your child. I have been amazed at some parents who were happy to leave their kids with me before they knew me, for instance at a birthday party.

I always invited the parents of my daughter's friends to come and stay at the party. Most did, or they knew me well. (Sometimes they stayed anyway, because I organized fun parties) but some strangers would drop off their kids. One year a mom came back half an hour after he party's ending time (stated clearly on the invitation.) and I had never met her before that afternoon when she dropped her kid off.! We need to be so careful with our kids.

God bless you for guarding your child!

Your story really hit home with me because a close friend was drugged and raped earlier this year.

Now I'm the one rambling!

Bright blessings
Wahoo

Thank you! :)After I read yours, I got that damn plot bunny. ~blames you~ Snerk. It's odd how inspiration strikes the muse, isn't it? Through someone's review, I have another inspiration for a story. One where an abuser shows remorse years later. I wonder if I can tackle that. Hmmm...About this, I was in the mood for some punishment for dark deeds. ANd someone said I'm all sunsets and happy endings? God, it's horrible. ~blah~ I've not read it again since I proofed it. I told my beta that I couldn't believe I'd written it. Hahaha! On a more serious note, I think sickos that do this should be punished as much as possible. :( And the bad part is that most of them, deep down, don't really know it's wrong to abuse someone else in such a way. They come up with reasons that make it "all right."Then there are people like the Dumbledore in this story, who sweep bad things under the rug. :( Mofos!! I have an aunt like this. It's why we don't speak much to this day.

I understand completely. I wrote Smitten Pedophile because I read an article called "No, your kink's not all right."  I just wanted to explore it.  I don't write or read underage Hermione/ Adult Snape fics and only have a smattering of Hermione as a student fics. I prefer her older personally. But I still had to do it. lol.  I have to say, your reviews are a lot more exciting than mine.  I'm glad of it too.  And I'll take that blame because I did want people to think and react.  Whoa, that happened, didn't it? A fine, dark piece of work was born and like I said, you have courage girl. Oodles of it. Nothing but applause from this way.

As we Cajuns down here in Louisiana say, "I ain't skeered." (Cajun No Fear)Hahaha!I have a friend who writes things to test her boundaries. I think her latest thing is the exploration of deep BDSM, which she's not very comfortable with. I think we all need to do that at some point. Otherwise, we won't know what we can accomplish if we don't push ourselves. I have to say, your reviews are a lot more exciting than mine.You mean to say you aren't getting any nutters of there trying to flame you? O_o Well, that's not fair, now is it? HahaLike I said in my review to you there, at least you didn't have Snape act on it, especially nothing like this horrible Snape. O_oAnd the bad thing was that I had to use the old fandom standby with the months of Time-Turner usage to make her 16 (our age limit on the site).  Now that's not something you see very often anymore. :) HahahaPoor Hermione. So abused in the fandom.!

Welcome to the fray. :)I think that he had sex with Lily, and that's the only person he remembers being with. He thought that he couldn't get hard b/c nobody was Lily to him. The truth was that Dumbledore had caught him preying on a student before (not anyone in particular--I leave that up to the author). Sadly, Dumbledore's decision to not let him live with what he'd done, caused him to obsess about his impotency and think that Hermione was the first to be able to bring his... crotch to life. O_oDumbledore again makes the decision to punish him, but he keeps him around b/c he needs him.I see Dumbledore as a bad person in this story as well. Sure he hates what Snape did, but he needs Snape, so Snape isn't reported.It reminds me of the woman whose boyfriend has done somethign to her child, but she needs his support / money, so she just bitches a bit and allows him to stick around. I'm totally against that, too. I'm so glad this wasn't erotic. I'd hoped that it wouldn't be. I tried to make it as horrible as I could and to make Snape as "fucked in the head" as I could as well. My wording could be plainer indeed, but I won't change it. My words are who I am, and this is how I speak. I've put the notes in, and I feel they are sufficient. About the other story, I left a review for the author to give my thoughts. I wasn't against her or the story, I simply didn't like the person Snape was in there. I wouldn't like any man in a 14-year-old's bedroom having such thoughts. Ya know? In my mind, that's still a bit young. Most girls that age have only just begun to develop, and they certainly can't be confused with women. I agree that people have different opinions. I'm in the percentage who feels stories (yes, fiction) where women are degraded and raped (and especially children) to be too disturbing to read if it's glorified or not dealt with appropriately. Just my thoughts. :) Cheers, doll. Now go find something happy to read and get rid of this terrible story!

Thanks. I’ll just do that!

I may write another story along this lines, but this one is done. Thanks for reading, even though it's a horrible storyline.

Exactly! I can't tell you how happy I am that some readers are totally getting the point to the story. There are three different themes here, and one of them deals with Dumbledore's character.Too many people let this shit slide under the rug. I hate it. I will always regret never coming forward about someone when I was younger. I found out after his death that he'd done the same thing to my younger cousin. He'd twisted my head so much over the years that I had mixed feelings about finding that out.I never thought he would do that to anyone else. I was his "special girl" and all, right? But I would have spared my lovely cousin the grief of that if I'd only had the courage to say something. And that she had the courage to come forward and admit it--after his death--to the family, I applaud her. She's a much stronger woman than me. I decided years back that I would be a type of crusader for abused children. You just can't realize, unless you've been through it or know someone who has, how badly it warps your mind and way of thinking. Some days I'd feel like a prude, some days a wanton. It's just crazy. Talking it out helps, and there are so many others who've gone through the same thing. I wrote a story a couple of years ago called Dark Desecration. I was tired of glorified rape stories and wanted to show how it truly felt from the victim's perspective and what happens when nobody wants to help. It was amazing how many women wrote, reviewed, and messaged with like stories.And most of these crimes?Unreported. And by someone in the family or a trusted friend.:(

I feel so sorry for those women / men who were forced into things so young back then. I'm glad that times have changed (in most places). To clarify, any man who sneaks into a woman's room and does things to her is horrible and should be punished. I don't give a toss what his age is. It's wrong.That he's a man of 34 years, I think it's even worse than, say, another 15-year-old doing this. He's an adult and should know better. He's a man who should be protecting students in a school. Terrible. The worst kind.From my person experience, I don't trust anyone, even family. My parents and my mother-in-law are the only people I leave my son with. For the age thing when they are older, I think if a woman is old enough to make her own decisions as to whom she wants to date, then the age difference is something she should deal with. When I was 22 I started dating my husband, and he's about 18 years older than I am. I know that I never would have wanted to date him or been allowed to date him underaged.If she was 30, however, and his 50-year-old ass went in to do this same thing, it's still wrong and terrible. And his shit should be sliced up.>:)

Yes, I know the difference between fantasy and real life. That being said, I think glorified rape is disgusting. If there is rape, I want to see it dealt with properly. I definitely don't want to see such a horrible act prettied up.Sometimes you'll see Hermione raped, and there's no emotion after. Nothing. Wow. That's just crazy. And usually, next thing you know, she's in love and all this bs. It doesn't work that way in the real world.Hehe. I'll always write what I think. I definitely dont' write to please the crowds, else I'd just write loads of smut with very little plot. To each his own, doll.  I simply disagree about reading abuse and thinking it's hot, fiction or not.

I hate assholes who abuse women (or even other men) and then get away with it. :( Riles me up. Hahaha. Hope you've found something fun to read after this horrible thing.

Thank you. I appreciate that you read it and got from it what I'd intended. I dislike those stories as well. As a rule, I don't read them. It's not that I won't ever read a story with rape or whatever, but I'd like to see the aftermath dealt with properly.Sorry to write such a horrible story, but thanks for reading all the same.

thanks

He's very sick in here, isn't he? What's worse is that I think most of the sick mofos out there justify what they are doing in their minds."Oh, well, if I don't do this, then..."Dumbledore will take care of things, but the thing is, he's not much better. Sure, he punished Snape, but he's still willing to let his arse stick around for his own purpose.There are people like this in real life as well. The women who know their husbands have snuck into their daughter's rooms, yet they don't call the cops? ~shakes head~

I'm with you. And I also hate when it's all prettied up and the victim realizes that she'd actually wanted it, so yeah, it wasn't rape.O_o........

I wasn't trying to say that since Snape is a prick, he's a pedophile. That's far from what my point is. I did put Out of Character in the warnings and put an extra warning. I'm simply using two characters I like from the HP world and weaving a horrid tale into canon with them. Sure some people won't like the premise. I wish, however, that those wouldn't read it. It's a terrible story.Reply:  Wow, Southern, you're really on the ball with your response!  I didn't even finalize the review.  Anyhow, I do recognize the urge to write a horror story that you completely Do Not Want to see happen, just to work it out of your system and illustrate a point.  You're right that the subject of the story is terrible, but it's actually a good story in that vein.  Good job.

Dang that was wild! Hahaha. I happened to be on the page when it said I had a review. Teehee. I told my beta that I couldn't believe I'd written such a thing. LOL There was even a debate as to where to post it or if I should. :) Fortunately, this dark theme is gone from my head, and I'm now writing a chapter of Breaching (my current wip). I think if I'd started writing that before getting this out of my thoughts, it would have been something dark.O_o

Tough subject matter

thank you

I hate how he gets away with things all the time in some stories. "Oh, it was for the war." WTF

I thought of having it go totally AU and have Dumbledore AK him or send him off for a Dementor's kiss, but then I went ahead and did the canon route, so that he suffered a punishment and later Nagini's bite.

Thank you very much. I wondered when someone would say that as well. It's definitely how I feel. Kind of reminds me of canon!Dumbledore who did all he wanted to no matter the cost.

It wasn't a bad story and definitely less disturbing than this one. Yikes. Not sure why this came to me. O_o

To be honest, I'm not sure. I guess some random person that was in school. :(

It's not about answering the other fic. It's about making myself feel better after having read that. It's how I'd like to see him punished for doing something dreadful to a child in his care. You are missing the point entirely.

I do understand that the punishment was the point, not the rape itself, but it was still in there and very repulsive to me... and to everyone else I should hope. Castration is the way to go for people like that, Snape or not.

Yeah, when I began proofreading it this morning, I told my beta, "OMFG. I can't believe I wrote this shit. Yuck!" I don't like it either. It's strange how things just come out when you write on an emotional high. O_o

It wasn't really the story. The author didn't allow him to do anythign to her, but he stood there looking down at her 14-year-old body and thinking about what he wished he could do to her. And then I read the reviews and saw how people thought it was soooo hot.Yuck.Thanks for giving this a chance even though it's definitely not the right flavor of tea for most of us. :)

We allow stories where the character is at least 16. And we do allow rapes, so long as they aren't glorified. I don't think anything about this can be considered such.

It certainly wasn't glorified, it was horrific as all rapes are.I just queried it as the story involved the rape of a minor.

No problem with that. I don't mind the questions. :) I can understand the cringe factor. I don't want to read this again either.