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Guilt and Suspicion
snuggleslut53 Reviews | 5.89/10 (53 Ratings, 0 Likes, 72 Favorites )
Hermione is just starting her life as an Unspeakable when something happens to her in the Department of Mysteries, forcing her to deal with her inner turmoil with some unwilling help from Severus Snape.
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just a 20 year old girl who grew up with harry potter and stumbled on fanfiction.
Reviews for Guilt and Suspicion
Interesting beginning, I look forward to read more!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thanks for the review. the next few chapters are in the editing process and should come up soon.
Nice work! Looking forward to more :)
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you! more too come
Wow! I can't wait to see where this one is going! Did the box send her to an alternate dimension, or back in time, or is time overlapping? Hmmm... Good job!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thanks for the guesses, they aren't all off the mark but you'll have to keep reading to figure out whats going down.
Ah yes, the classic battle of the hard-heads is about to begin! I'm looking forward to reading it. I love it when these two get together and iron out whatever differences they have in fandom, usually sparks fly.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
oh its on! thank you for reviewing.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
oh its on! thank you for reviewing.
I really like this, what an interesting topic!! I can't wait to find out more.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you, the next chapter is in the queue and chapter 5 is with my beta.
These first three chapters have been very enjoyable. You have set up a refreshing twist on the time-traveling Hermione scenario. I look forward to reading more.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you for reviewing, a time turner wouldn't serve my purpose in this story so I had to come up with something that would. next chapter is in queue
I am very bad with leaving reviews, however I wanted to leave a quick note saying how much I am enjoying this story and can't wait to read more of it :) Thank you :)
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
i'm very glad to hear that you are enjoying reading it sense i am enjoying writting it! and thank you for reviewing even though you think you leave bad ones and f.y.i. you did just fine. next chapter is in queue
Again, nice work! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you! next chapter is in queue and chapter 5 is with my beta
Poor Sev :( He's such a woobie sometimes.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
I know, what's a woobie?
Response from slasher454 (Reviewer)
A woobie is a boy who needs and deserves hugs but almost never gets them :)
Stroppy bugger ain't he? Great chapter! :)
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you! and yes, he is.
I'd hesitate to let some one who just splinched herself start brewing potions, too. Good story, can't wait for updates!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
yes, you know something is very wrong with Hermione when she splinches herself sense apparation is one of her many strong points, thank you for reviewing
Fascinating time adventure. I wonder if that music box isn't like the Mirror of Erised in some ways. It seems to have sent Hermione to where she can start to change things that will heal her wounded soul.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
that's a very indept review but i'm afraid you'l just have to keep reading in order to find out!
Very intriguing start. I'm hooked. I see a long road ahead and maybe some sad events can be changed.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you! i'm glad your hooked but we shall have to see about those sad events.
She checks on him after hearing a crash, tries to treat his burn, offers to help him with his botched potions, and now she's fetching sandwiches?! Honestly, the nerve of that woman! ;) Heheh. Lovely chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
I know! what a bitch
That is one stubborn man.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
very. thank you for reviewing.
Intriguing. I usually don't like the "Hermione get's thrown into the past" story genre but I'm curious to see where you go with this one. Well done!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you! i hope you enjoy were i take it.
She couldn't keep herself away from the dungeons for long, could she? And it's probably a good thing that he refused to let her do any brewing, I bet she's got some habits habits he'd recognize, since he's the one who taught her.I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to more!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
yes that diffidently catches Severus's eye but not in potion brewing.
I don't understand why she can't just tell Dumbledore what happened, then she doesn't have to worry about all the secrecy.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
don't worry. its Dumbledore, he works things out.
That's quite the situation Hermione finds herself in!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
yes it is, but Hermione is good at getting herself in and out of situations. thank you for reviewing.
Interesting, I suspect Severus is a bit ticked off that his little rescue mission cost him the DADA position. It will be fun to see where he will go with this.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
just a little, its not like him to be bitter... sarcasm. thank you for reviewing!
I'm really looking forward to the next part of this! I wonder how that box transported her to the past...Will she be able to find her way back? Hmm.. Good job!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
all great questions that will soon be answerd, just not in the next chapter. thank you for reviewing
This was a great start, I was sucked right into the story. Can't wait to find out what happens!
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
thank you, i'm glad that you've been sucked in.
Well I guess getting a cursed position won't matter if Hermione has no plans of staying. But just where (or when) does she think she is going and what is going to happen when baby Hermione wand shops and her wand is sold?
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
even more great questions. Ihaven't decided about the wand problem, it might be resolved in the story line or it might not, if i do leave it out you can just assume that the ministry re-sold it to Olivander's a few years after she disipeared, no sense wasting a perfectly good wand. however both wands exsisting together will cause problems.
Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)
So her wand didn't travel back with her? I thought it just got separated from her in the Dept of Mysteries or at St Mungo's
Well, that's gotta hurt, for both Hermione and Severus. Splinching off an arm cannot be fun. Then again, saving a girl silly enough to manage that and then have her steal the job you want away from you is rather painful, as well. I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts to an extremely young Potions Master.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
yes the young Potions Master is much different than the one who taught Hermione, think of the memories Harry sees in the books or how he was caught spying on Dumbledore and Trelawney. he's not exactly the master spy yet
Oh, dear! Hermione has landed herself in all kinds of trouble. As Jacobs said if you touch something being fired will be the least of your problems. I do believe Hermione is about to find out exactly what he meant by that. Very intiguing start.
Response from snuggleslut (Author of Guilt and Suspicion)
I don't think even Jacobs saw something like this happening. thank you for reviewing!