Interesting beginning. I wonder what Dumbledor is up to?

I like stories with multiple points of view, this one looks like lots of fun.  I like Snape telling Dumbledore what he thinks of him in the diary.  Thanks for your speedy updates.

Like this lots. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapters. Thanks.

Short, but engaging all the same. I want to know more

Loving it.  Thanks.

Already loving it. Pardon if I sound like Oliver Twist but, MORE PLEASE!

One critical view...the chapters aren't long enough!  Very good story

I think you're exactly right in having Hermione check with Dumbledore -- she'd be very suspicious. Since Dumbledore arranged for the journal to be placed where she'd find it, it's no surprise that he immediately told her it was fine, and he encouraged her to use it.She's being manipulated, she just doesn't know it yet! Looking forward to more of this.

Not sure where you're going to take this, but looking forward to going along for the ride.  Great job.  :-D

I'm glad Dumbledore got back to her so fast. Looking forward to the next

I like that Hermione was suspicious, especially after Chamber of Secrets....she wouldn't just write in a journal without having it thoroughly checked out. Nice Start!

Good start...can't wait to see what happens next.

Interesting!  I look forward to seeing what comes next.

This is an interesting premise.

I can't wait to see where this leads, and I think you penned Hermione exactly when she asked for help with the journal first. I've seen stories where she jumps headlong into stuff she finds, and I find that so out of character! Great job!

I don't think she is suspicious enough, she still hasn't tried to find out where the journal came from.

This is very different from your other fics, but it seems to work really well. I'm hoping that you continue this as it's shaping up really nicely! Great so far... .

So happy to see the update, I think I will like this story very, very much:-))

Puzzling. A brief chapter. Is there a word limit on the chapters or is this just your writing style? I am in favor of longer chapters, in case you wanted to know my opinion.

Great start, can't wait to read more! :)

You got me interested.  Can't wait to see how this goes. 

oh wow, I like how this starts. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I love these types of fics, because we learn so much more about the characters through their thoughts instead of their actions. Can't wait to read more!

Good start. Will keep an eye out for more!

Interesting start :)