Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 10
ladiesofthesouthHermione finds a journal to write in, but unbeknownst to her, it's been placed in her path purposely. For what end?
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Dunderheads, the lot of them. It seems as though first years get worse each year. Classes have only been resumed for a few days, and I am already wishing for a holiday. At least my Advanced Potions students are all able and ready to learn. That reminds me. The Granger girl had the journal I planted at Grimmauld Place in her bookbag today. The headmaster should be pleased that she’s bringing it about with her other things, as that should mean she’s using it.
He told me that she’d owled him straightaway to have it checked for Dark magic; ever wanting to do the right thing, that one. I expect the headmaster has a plan for her and the journal takes part in it, but I am uncertain as to what he’s playing at. Why won’t he explain things to me? What exactly does he have it charmed for? I know he placed some spells on it, though I couldn’t deduce what they were.
Wouldn’t it be interesting if he’d spelled it so that he could read her words? But would he? Hmmm. Terrifying thought, that, as he is the one who gave this journal to me years back. Spying on your spy, Albus? What was that nonsense about believing that writing one’s feelings out enabled a person to vent frustration and focus on important things? Perhaps I should have been more suspicious.
Here’s something I shall divulge for you then.
I find your manipulations annoying and sometimes unacceptable. I also don’t appreciate being asked to do something and then not receiving an explanation as to why. How would you feel if the tables were turned, old man?
Ah, an owl from Lucius. Finally. I shall finish this later.
Lucius,
For crying out loud, have you recently joined the League of Dunderheads? I'm shaking my head here. In your next owl, simply let me know what day/time is good for you so I can open the Floo connection.
SS
Sometimes I cannot believe how careless Lucius is. He sent an owl telling me how Bella told Cissy something about the Dark Lord wishing to explore the possibility of the ancient bonding that used to rid our world of wizards who became too power-hungry. As if anyone could defeat our Lord.
Sometimes, I forget this journal is just about the only place where I can be unconditionally honest. Even if Dumbledore can read it.
Severus,
You should know that my letters are warded. Should anyone but you procure it, the words would read something else entirely. I’ve not lost my touch, I assure you. On that note, expect me this Saturday morning before breakfast.
Lucius
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AN: More up tomorrow. I know these chapters are short, but I will update as quickly as I can because I feel one chapter should be for Snape and one for Hermione to keep it easier to follow.
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Its really great that Hermiones parents aren't too freaked out. I was really worried they'd like disown her or something. I can't wait to see whats up with the journals and how their relationship progresses! Cheers! ~Brena
enjoying your work - I am a fan of revelation through character's writing - one draw back is how much you must tell rather than show - I think you are handling that nicely. Also agree with the quick snapshot format, it is more realistically a journal. Looking forward to reading more of this story and other work you may have. Continued success!
Hah! Double writting in the diary, but she couldn't read it? How could she tell it was Severus' if she couldn't read it?I'm looking froward to the next - hopefully you'll explain.
Interesting about the diaries. I hope to learn more about that. And of course about the bonding and what it means to Voldie.
Deeper and deeper things go. Definitely poor Severus.
LOL I don't know who to feel more sorry for. I can completely see Severus being a mess over that decision.
I love Severus's assessment of Ron and Lavender. But I really do think they are a better match for each other than Ron/Hermione.
At least the delay will let you stock up a few chapters. :)I love that the writing is slowly appearing... though I wonder exactly what Severus thougth he saw.
Poor Hermione. She really took that betrayal well, much better than I would have imagined for someone who was just planning a huge magical bond with Rom.
typical Hermione not fully understanding the implications of something in the wizarding world. As to length of journal entires, I think that fully depends on the person and the events being chronicled. Some folks are very detailed whereas others just gloss over things.
Dumbledore, ever the meddling fool. I wonder what he's up to.
Interesting start and concept of telling it through letters and journals. Now to find out what the book was for.
Uh oh.... complications on the way! But at least Hermione seems reasonably satisfied with the new arrangement... :-DLooking forward to more!
intriguing update. thanks so much
Nice update, dear. I like where you are going with this and cannot wait to see where this heads. That Dumbledore is something else, isn't he? Always the plotter that one.
I love your idea of how you are writing this story. It is brilliant.
A great update, I love the progress in your story!
I am glad to see another chapter of this before voting, and also to know you will be continuing. Thanks for sharing this tale, looking forward to hearing about Lucius's visit!
I love typical dad to husband warnings! btw, motives would be the spelling for the reason someone does something. motifs would be accents on something.
I liked the little bit about, "and if we find a little bit of happiness along the way, so be it." Good attitude, brings hope for further enjoyable chapters, lol. Hmmm, wonder what pearls of wisdom Lucius wanted to impart? Enjoying the story, can't wait to see what happens next.
the toothbrush thing... ROFL!
OK, my guess is as Hermione and Severus get closer, the writing will become clearer. Hopefully Severus is going to yell at Dumbledore. Whatever the diaries are for, I'm sure it's for a meddlesome and probably dangerous reason.
Great chapter, dear. Looking forward to more.
Another lovely chapter. I sincerely hope that Hermione's life with Sev turns out pretty good, and that they will grow to love each other, at least in some respects.
LOL. Sev wanting to AK Trelawney. 