This is an excellent story.  Will we see future chapters in the near future?  I look forward to see how this story progresses.

EXCELLENT!!!!!!

I look forward to reading future chapters......

The name transition did give me pause.  I liked it when you called her Olivia with quotation marks.  It wasn't so jarring as the other styles you used, such as parenthasis or slashmark punctuation.  I liked how the quotation marks still help me keep track of the  transformation taking place in Snape's mind (and in our's), while emphasizing in that 'Olivia' is really just part of the facade--truly a codename for Hermione.

I'm really enjoying your fic! 

--Random outburst: I just love the name Olivia!!!

this is a terrific story!  i can certainly empathize about the coffee.  thanks muchly and i look forward to the next chapter.

Enjoying the story so far, sounds good telling the story in multiple parts!  Looking forward to the "next three weeks" and any sequels!

Naughty Hermione playing with his mind unwittingly! 

Coming soon to a close!?!? I just checked this having received notification it was updated and not totally remembering when I bookmarked it, but I am very glad I did. What a fun story you have here I hope you don't end it too quickly! Your story is loads of fun and very funny. I am looking forward to more....and am especially hoping you develop both sides of snapes feeling for hermione :) good work!

omgoodness.  Their dreams are going to be the end of me.  *fans self*  Great update!  :D

Severus may end up turning into a prune before this is over.  Great chapter!  :D

I love the scene in Prisoner of Azkaban where Severus, eventhough he is terrified of werewolves, threw his arms wide and used his body as a shield to protect the trio from Remus.  It's one of the most selfless, sexy things I have ever imagined Severus doing and such a treat to have you mention it here.  No wonder Hermione is having such a hard time.  She sees herself as unwanted and unworthy, and Severus unknowing jab at her 'marriage to books' had to reaffirm what she already believes.  No wonder she clammed up.  Poor thing.  Great chapter!  :D

Oh, dear.  Severus' reaction to seeing Hermione in the bikini was to be expected.  She didn't seem put off by it.  Looks like they're in for a rough few weeks.  :D

That was some dream! :)

There`s a problem with her being Snape`s cousin twice removed. She`s not twice removed. There is only one generation between them. Therefore she would actually be his first cousin once removed. Other than that - it`s all good.

Goodness me the sexual tension between them is intense! I love this!

Great beginning.  I'm off to read part two!  :D

I really like this story.  I hope you come back to it soon!

It was good of Severus to take the time to instruct Hermione on the proper usage of cosmetics, and demand that she practice to ensure her success in the future.

Mmm, I love how her dirty, symbolism filled dream caused her to have an orgasm resulting in her awakening and seeking out an additional, this time self-induced, release.

;~D

*::dirty chuckling::*'... he made his way to the shower to take a cold one. Yes, he decided, it was definitely going to be a long three weeks. If Herm--OLIVIA was a multiple-orgasm masturbator, he was in for a lot of nights like this one.'*LEER*  *SMIRK*  *WEG*;~DI love this story, and I'm really looking forward to further installments.Keep up the good work, and thank you for writing a great story!

Mmm, I'm thrilled that Severus was somewhat enthralled with Hermione's sensual perusal of the contents of his bookshelves.

It was great how his chuckle and murmured comment about her treatment of his books caused her stop dead in her tracks and to experience shivers to run down her spine.Lucky girl to find such comfort, from the hands and attentions of Severus, as he works on transforming her into her new persona.  I'm surprised that she wasn't purring like a kitten.  *WEG*;~DI love it how he is affected whenever she says his first name--fantastic!

WooHoo!  Semi-naked people getting titillating glimpses of each other's bodies, and reacting accordingly--SWEET!Mmm-Mmm-Mmm, lovely story--keep up the good work!

*SQUEE*I love how Hermione is turned on by Severus and is unknowningly emitting pheromones, and in turn is causing Severus to become discombobulated.  All the things that she is doing that affects him:  her choosing to make herself up as Jessica Rabbit, the noises that she makes from both discomfort and pleasure, releasing pheromones, calling him by his given name in a breathy voice...  I hope to the gods that he cracks and gives into temptation SOON!

;~D*::chuckling::*'“Come in here and tell me otherwise, then,” she grinned, knowing he would not, but not exactly knowing why he would not. That part still confused her. All she knew was that she had some strange power over the man, and she fully intended to exploit it.'[The vamp--I love it!  LOL]Great story so far!

Hey Ravensblood,Just wanted to say very funny. Heard you ran into Brittany the other day. She was more than happy to point me in your direction.

Snape the make-up artist, an interesting idea. Camouflage is good for spies after all!

I like how Severus takes the same care with applying her makeup as he would brewing a potion, it seems like a very unsnape  like thing to do but works all the same.

The idea of Snape as a makeup artist is quite refreshing! I can quite believe he'd be very good at it - he seems to be very good at anything he's chosen to do.I wonder how long it will take them to realise that in spite of what each of them believes, the other one would actually be quite interested...

well now, that could turn interesting...what with her pretending to be a blood relative of his.I do like this story. I even feel a bit sorry for poor Hermione as I've never been fond of makeup myself.and no need to feel bad about having the imagination of someone who names makeup. It was fitting. I suspect that if there really were such a spell, it would have been named similarly.