“I’m not you’re Head of House. None of my Slytherins
are involved.

“Lupin, you’re timing is impeccable as always. Come
in.”

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in both of the above, you need to use 'your'. :)

Hoping you'll finish this great story

I'm so happy to see an update to this story.  Happy Belated Birthday as well.  I hope your dog's paw/nail is healing up.  I love where this story is going and the natural progression of their relationship.  :)

I love "The Voice", its nice to know severus is a closet freak.

wow sev is so hot.

i love death by  chocolate

its nice to see severus so happy

aww. theyre so cute, thinking about each other

whoa. they are smoldering.

she is so totally in trouble

i love that song, 

my goodness that was confusing, im not a dancer thats for sure

that was so sensual

wow, this is gonna be good. i watched a couple dance the argentine tando on youtube, it looks very complicated. cant wait to see everyones reactions at the ball

i am so loving this story

So excited to see updates to a story I've enjoyed for years! It's wonderful seeing the progression of their relationship.

Please keep this story going!!!! I love it!

You have no idea how thrilled I am to have been able to absorb this story again over the last several days. *bliss*

I did want to mention on minor inconsitency to you for your revising.  At the lunch with Michael he mentions he is Muggle born.  How then was he able to inherit house elves?

Severus thought she was pregnant? Hee hee! That sure got him thinking!

I knew I liked Senalda Trelawney! Master Ag Viridis sounds perfect. Let's hope he truly is as Hermione really needs to get that part of her future settled.

Poor Severus has been spoiled having Hermione there all the time during the holiday break. I see withdrawal pains in the near future for him!

Va va voom! There were definitely fireworks there, but I also enjoyed Severus' introspective examination of the dynamics developing between Hermione and himself.

Oh, the description of Severus in the costume made my mouth water!

Ah, the pendant is such a lovely part of this story. I love everyone's reactions to the purchase and Severus' willing attendance to a fucion at the burrow.

Yippee! More Dances at last. I have missed it so much. 

Nice to see you continuting this. Was wondering though why you never refer to Severus as 'the wizard' as you refer to Hermione asa 'the witch' all the time.

Loving this story so far, really well written, can't wait to read the rest of it! Xx