Take This Longing
shefa19 Reviews | 19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 17 Favorites )
Written for the divine Potions Mistress for her birthday.
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Member Since 2007 | 24 Stories | Favorited by 151 | 73 Reviews Written | 944 Review Responses
Relatively longtime reader of this OTP, fervent SSHG shipper.
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Ah! I love the touch of vulnerability he shows. Wonderful.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you for reviewing! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. :)
Awwwwwww that is all sorts of sugar and sweet and everything wonderful! My favorite line is “It is just as well, then, as my heart has already been given, and surely you don’t have room in there for two…” 
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
*grins... I love that, too... I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing...
The bed was laid with soft cotton sheets and luxurious feather blankets just begging to be warmed by more than the crackling fire.~Sighs happily.~And then he laughed. Joyful, jubilant even, the sound of his laughter and the image of the smile that accompanied it lit his face and transformed it. ~Smiles knowingly and swoons.~“It is just as well, then, as my heart has already been given, and surely you don’t have room in there for two…” ~Faints dead away with a silly romantic grin in place.~
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much for showing me which lines and passages you especially enjoyed! That makes the review so rich for me, and I appreciate that. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this piece... your review is lovely and I thank you for taking time to write it.
Wonderful interlude
So sweet! Loved the last line.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you-- I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate the review.
You have such a way with words. The last two paragraphs especially stand out as some of the most romantic sentiment I've ever read.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much, Merrin. I appreciate your comments and the specific reaction to the story. :) Thanks for taking time to review!
Whoa! -thud-SQUEEEEEEEEEEE
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
*catches you*blushes... I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :) Thank you so very much for reviewing!
Oh, that was beautiful! And I'm tearing up so terribly.The smut was tastefully done, but you were really able to bring the emotions across through it all.I loved it; great work! :D
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Oh, thank you! You hit all the high points of what I'd hoped to convey here, yay! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and appreciate the review :)
Gorgeous,Gorgeous story!!!Thanks,Catharine
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much, Catharine! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and appreciate that you took time to review :)
this was lovely. though a bit racy to be reading in the lunchroom at my job! *blushes* sweet in a good way.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Erm, oops? *blushes. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it -- perhaps you can enjoy it more later when you're not worried about someone reading over your shoulder! 
Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, this was gorgeous! There needs to be a rating higher than 5 stars!
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much! What a lovely review :) I'm delighted that you enjoyed it so much. I appreciate that you took time to comment!
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This is very touching (and lemony!). Great job.
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Lovely story. Your descriptions are amazing.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks also for taking time to review.
lovely!
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you! And thank you for reviewing :)
Too beautiful. I love tender and loving Snape.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you, I do love a tender and loving Snape as well -- I see him being this way after a long journey to get there :) Thanks for reviewing!
Seduction with words, followed by seduction in deed. Elegantly written.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you so much! I appreciate the review.
i love the allusion to two hearts trapped inside a person's chest -- it pops up in quite a few poems and it is so apt. :) Nice job. Thanks for writing.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thank you -- the exchange of hearts always seems to me to be such a beautiful and apt metaphor for loving. I appreciate your review!
Very sweet ending. Nice story.
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
Thanks so much! I appreciate your review :)
Love the title! ;) Very sweet and tantalizing, Machshefa!
Response from shefa (Author of Take This Longing)
*grins. Thank you! Leonard Cohen does have the best titles, doesn't he? I'm glad that you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing!