Outside of Mind
Seph78 Reviews | 3.5/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
A young woman from Snape's past re-enters his life, but he has no idea what he should do about it. Set in Year 5. Warnings for later chapters.
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I hope u can come update soon. This has promise!
Very intriguing can't wait for another update.
Boy does Umbridge like to hurt children, of course I don't think that Malfoy and Parkinson would suffer to much by her hands. I always wondered if she was a Death Eater herself, she surely had leanings in that direction.I really like were you are going with this plot. Hope you don't get discouraged with few reviews. It seems there are a lot of readers who don't review and the HG/SS ship is so avid here. Snape in a relationship with OFC is how I started reading ff and I try to read the good stories as often as I find them.Keep up the great work! 
Great Chapter update! I can see why Evelyn is so protective of Grace. Hmmm, I wonder what Severus thinks of his precious Slytherins now?
hehe she is wearing him down. love it she sure can hold her own give him hell deary
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Much more to come!
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Much more to come!
This is a very interesting start and I can't wait to see where this is going. Until then.
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thank you! Chapter 3 is now up, and I'll be submitting chapter 4 soon!
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thank you! Chapter 3 is now up, and I'll be submitting chapter 4 soon!
These two are such a mystery. I understand that Grace has no magic just a heightened sense of empathy. Does Evelyn share what she finds out Telekenitically with Grace and are they connected? Snape's answers seem a bit to accomodating and abrupt. Remember truthful sarcasm is his best weapon. I like Grace she is strong and not easily intemidated. It looks Severus will have his hands full and seems to like it that way.
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thanks for the honesty. This was my first fic with Snape, and it has taken some time to get him right.Evelyn and Grace don't share powers, but they do have a kind of heightened intuition between them, but that is more to do with them being twins.Grace will surprise you as time goes on!I have many more chapters to submit!!If you have the patience and the time, I am planning on two more stories to coincide with HBP and DH, which will essentially be parts 2 and 3, and then a part 4 based on what happens after DH...
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Thanks for the honesty. This was my first fic with Snape, and it has taken some time to get him right.Evelyn and Grace don't share powers, but they do have a kind of heightened intuition between them, but that is more to do with them being twins.Grace will surprise you as time goes on!I have many more chapters to submit!!If you have the patience and the time, I am planning on two more stories to coincide with HBP and DH, which will essentially be parts 2 and 3, and then a part 4 based on what happens after DH...
Good start. I wonder why Evelyn is so standoffish? Why have they come to Hogwarts and why Dumbledore was so distracted? So many questions I guess I will just have to keep reading.
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Evelyn is very protective of Grace, and doesn't like the idea of someone taking advantage of Grace's good nature. She doesn't like Snape much because she's a bit like him!Dumbledore knows something that will be revealed in time!!I have chapter 3 updated now, and chapter 4 on it's way!If you have the patience and the time, I am planning on two more stories to coincide with HBP and DH, which will essentially be parts 2 and 3, and then a part 4 based on what happens after DH...Thanks for reading!
Response from Seph7 (Author of Outside of Mind)
Evelyn is very protective of Grace, and doesn't like the idea of someone taking advantage of Grace's good nature. She doesn't like Snape much because she's a bit like him!Dumbledore knows something that will be revealed in time!!I have chapter 3 updated now, and chapter 4 on it's way!If you have the patience and the time, I am planning on two more stories to coincide with HBP and DH, which will essentially be parts 2 and 3, and then a part 4 based on what happens after DH...Thanks for reading!