Of Punch and Hippogriffs
Chapter 3 of 5
selinablnThe Golden Trio celebrates its graduation. Dumbledore has one of his special ideas for the ball while his Potions master is not happy at all that his participation is highly expected; and soon certain secrets will be revealed. A little piece of fluff.
ReviewedThe Potions master’s mood darkened as he noted the curious glances the students were giving him. He had to get away from this ridiculous spectacle. His responsibilities for the evening were more than fulfilled.
“Severus, my boy,” Albus greeted him, just as he had turned to leave the Great Hall, placing one hand on his upper arm. “As I see, already on your way back to the dungeons.”
Stating the obvious once again, old man.
“I don’t think that I can allow that, son. We haven’t even toasted your newfound freedom yet.”
So much for freedom.
Severus rolled his eyes while the headmaster escorted him kindly but decisively back to the punch bar. “Albus, you know that I don’t even like this silly concoction for youths.”
“My dear boy, that’s nothing that cannot be changed. Remember, I didn’t even like sherbet lemons at first.”
Severus gave the aged wizard a dramatically pained look, which earned him a slight chuckle.
I am doomed.
When they arrived at the punch bar, they were welcomed by the assembled staff members. “Has your little attempt to escape our company been discovered, Severus?” Rolanda Hooch asked him, leering, as she handed him a glass of punch.
"I would have expected as well a little bit more sneakiness from our master spy, don’t you think, Rolanda?” Minerva added, chuckling. Yes, he was really doomed.
The evening was slowly proceeding as Severus nursed his second glass of punch, carefully avoiding participating in the animated chatter of his colleagues, considering the advantages of getting drunk and trying to forget his ridiculous display of sentimentalism in front of the student body. Precisely as he decided that getting drunk was his best choice, he spotted Hermione Granger in the crowd. Hogwarts’ Head Girl was standing in a corner of the Great Hall, apparently in a kind of row with Weasley.
Nothing of my concern, he thought, taking another sip of his punch and unconsciously squeezing and relaxing his left hand, the hand that had held onto hers. But the Potions master failed miserably at his attempt to take his eyes off the scene that played out before him.
The Weasley boy must have said something to upset the witch, because only moments later Granger slapped him in the face and ran from the Hall. Weasley followed her shortly afterwards, although the Boy-Who-Lived and his girlfriend tried to stop him.
Interesting.
Maybe now was the time to clink glasses with his godson, who was also carefully observing the nearby drama. Catching Draco’s eye across the room, he approached the young man with a few fast steps, handing him a glass of punch.
“Hello, Uncle,” Draco greeted him, taking the punch his Head of House offered him.
“To your graduation.” The Potions master raised his glass to the young Slytherin.
“To our shared freedom.” They toasted each other, their respect for one another plainly visible.
“I think it should interest you that this little quarrel between Weasel and Hermione concerns you, Uncle,” Draco informed him quietly while he took his first sip of the punch, his Slytherin traits not disappointing his Head of House.
“Me?” Severus raised his left eyebrow. “Care to elaborate, godson?”
“Weasel didn’t take seeing you both dancing together so well. Lavender Brown told me earlier that it was rumoured that he had planned to finally confess his feelings for Hermione to her tonight, that cretin,” Draco said, disgusted.
The former spy kept an unimpressed expression, likewise sipping some of his punch and rubbing his chest unconsciously with his left hand.
"He was jealous, and when he called you a greasy git, she told him to take it back, which Weasel surely did not.”
“And that’s why she slapped him?” his Head of House inquired sceptically, taking another sip of punch.
“No.” The young Slytherin smirked knowingly. “That happened when Weasel announced that traitors like you should rot in Azkaban.”
Severus closed his eyes momentary at the malicious words. Weasley was not the first person to have that wish. He had barely escaped Scrimgeour's claws after the final battle.
“But be assured, Uncle, I think her words have slapped him more than her hand did,” Draco continued nonchalantly while toasting smugly to Longbottom on the other side room. The Gryffindor had finally managed to kiss the Lovegood girl and had been doing so for the last ten minutes.
"Hermione was furious. She informed him rather bluntly that she had never met a more honourable and brave man than you are. Furthermore, should she ever have to decide between the two of you as to who should be the father of her children, it would...“ Draco paused dramatically and gave his godfather a rather self-satisfied grin, “…it would be you, Uncle.“
The Potions master’s glass of punch slipped through his gifted fingers, hitting the floor with a small crack.
***
Casting a silent Evanesco, Draco was quite pleased with himself.
For the first time in his life, his godfather looked as if he had been overrun by a Hippogriff.
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Oh, I'm loving this story and I hate to think it's been abandoned. *sigh* Will our favorite potions master leave Voldermort with out being punished? Will Hermione ever finish telling her beloved what's in her heart? LOL, please don't leave us hanging. The next chapter is love too, :o)
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Hello :o)I am so glad you like QE and no, it's not abandoned. Quite the contrary, it's nearly finished and slumbering on my harddrive. I only need to find the time to fix the last remaining plot points I need :o) Thanks for your review
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Hello :o)I am so glad you like QE and no, it's not abandoned. Quite the contrary, it's nearly finished and slumbering on my harddrive. I only need to find the time to fix the last remaining plot points I need :o) Thanks for your review
Oh my, I just love what comes out of Hermione's mouth sometimes. Especially when it disturbs our favorite potion master's serenity. Lovely chapter, off to read the next.
Great chapter - cannot wait to see what Ron is doing following Hermione and what Severus will do as well.
I love the story! I can't wait for the next chapters!
Ha! That sort of line would make any one look like he or she had been run over by a hippogryff.
I am in love with this story right now. If one could marry stories, I would definetely marry this one. I hope next chapter comes real soon! Also, can't wait to see what Ron will do...but if I may try to use my mediocre divination skills? He will stick to the edge while Snape and Hermione speak, and when he gets heartbroken by the result of their talk, he will accept defeat by allowing Hermione to be happy with Snape?
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
:::blushes::: I am delighted that you like QE that much. Chapter 5 is already with my lovely beta Jadey, so the wait won't be long. Your divination skills arent' that bad, your prediction is quite close to the real plot. However, I dare remind you that Ron isn't the one with the spying skills here ;-)) Sel.
Cliffhanger's are okay...as long as you don't keep us waiting to long, PLEASE
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I won't I promise. Chapter 5 is already written in with my beta Jadey :-) Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
This is a cute story so far, I can't imagine how ron will surprise us, but I guess the only way to be surprising would be to hand her over with out a fight....Keep up the good work!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I think surviving a war should have helped Ron to grow up a bit, don't you agree? He just realized something that really upset him... Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
A good story so far, and I look forward to more...
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) Chapter 5 is with my lovely beta Jadey right now, so more is on its way... Sel.
OH, after that last little dialogue with Draco, I most certainly am looking forward to reading more! Overrun by a Hippogriff, indeed.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Well, giving him a broad hint wouldn't have done the trick, I fear. It needed the famous Gryffindor bluntness to knock some sense into that stubborn man ;-))Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
AH! AMAZING! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY RIGHT NOW!(Sorry for the caps, I just couldn't help myself with them)
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*blushes* Thank you :-)Sel.
Interesting - Draco almost took glee telling his Severus about the conversation between Ron and Hermione. Well at least it got his attention.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Draco enjoys the situation immensely, indeed. And for Severus, I fear he is still in a state of denial...Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
The story is starting to get interesting now :-) Looking forward to reading a new chapter soon.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
The next chapter is on its way :-)) Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
Anonymous
I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is already in the queue... so you won't have to wait that long anymore.
Thanks for reviewing :-)
Sel.
Oh no, I've broken my resolution to leave a review every chapter! Damn. But in this case, it is a compliment, because I was so eager to get to the next chapter I forgot!I LOVE this story. It's so sweet and funny and you can really feel the tension. WOW! It was really clever how you thought up how to get Severus and Hermione to dance together, I would never have thought of that. Utterly brilliant.Five stars!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*blushes*I cannot thank you enough for your feedback. Thank you.By the way Albus was delighted as well as I proposed my idea about the dancing arrangement to him ;-)))Sel.
Too funny! Can't wait to see what comes next!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Chapter 4 is already in the queue, so the wait won't be long. Thanks for reviewing :-)Sel.
Fabulous!Overrun by a hippogriff.................I should like to see that expression on his face.This story is getting better and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*does a happy dance*I am really delighted that you like this tale. Chapter 4 is already in the queue :-))Sel.
2nd chapter is a good one. I loved the entire dance scene with Severus. He began to want and got freaked out - through up his defenses and bolted. I loved the ending where Ron was alone on the dance floor - Hermione must have left to go after Severus - I cannot wait to see what happens.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Oh, I am delighted that you like the dance scene. It was a hell to write ;-)Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
Enjoyed the first chapter. I loved the fact that Hermione asked Severus to dance. It was an interesting start. I loved where you had McGonagall tease Severus over Hermione - good line.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Well, good old Minerva has a point, hasn't she? ;-) Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Very fluffy but very enjoyable. I am enjoying Severus's inner conflict.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) I am trying to walk the fine line of writing a fluffy plot without turning the Potions master into a sentimental fool... but it is far more difficult than I've imagined. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) I am trying to walk the fine line of writing a fluffy plot without turning the Potions master into a sentimental fool... but it is far more difficult than I've imagined. Sel.
Loved the banter, and Severus's thoughts. Can't wait to see what comes next.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I am glad you liked their interaction. Thanks for reviewing :-)Sel.
Draco twisting Minerva, lol, very nice. I also really liked the little comments between Severus and Hermione; their hesitation is very sweet.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I really enjoyed writing the Draco/Minerva-scene :-) I am glad you liked it. Well, Severus and Hermione are both hiding behind those playful comments and polite phrases, but for different reasons.... ;-)Thanks for reviewing :-))Sel.
So she didn't even bother to dance with Ron after he broke in? How audacious!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
No, she didn't. Would you have in her place? ;-) Well, the next chapter is called "Of Punch and Hippogriffs" - it's a bit of humor and some Slytherin sneakiness before the plot speeds up.... Sel.
this is a brilliant story. I hope you write more, because i want to read more!