Friendly Fire
Chapter 2 of 5
selinablnThe Golden Trio celebrates its graduation. Dumbledore has one of his special ideas for the ball, while his Potions master is not happy at all that his participation is highly expected; and soon certain secrets will be revealed. A little piece of fluff.
ReviewedThe young woman nodded and took his hand, giving him another one of those smashing smiles, while the musing wizard tried to ignore how pleasant her small palm felt to his skin. As he led her onto the dance floor, the Potions master could feel far too many eyes fixed on them for his liking, and he swore that one pair of eyes was twinkling quite smugly.
Finally got your wish, didn’t you, Albus?
Severus brushed the thought away as they reached the middle of the ballroom. Now he had to focus on the task at hand, dancing with Granger. A slight uneasiness had gripped him, and like Draco, he did not plan on showing any shortcomings in this challenge, as Minerva had put it. The Head of Slytherin had a reputation to uphold. He positioned himself to face Granger and searched her eyes for permission before placing his right hand on her waist. The orchestra was playing a slow waltz; it was a task he could accomplish quite well.
"Ready, Miss Granger?" he asked, keeping his voice serene.
"Ready when you are, Professor," she replied encouragingly, waiting for him to take the lead.
Only seconds later they were surrounded by cheerful couples, dancing in step to the music and holding each other’s gaze, while Severus was pleased how easily his initial nervousness had died down.
"You are an excellent dancer, Professor,” Granger remarked kindly in a polite attempt to start a conversation. “Although I have never seen you dancing before, sir."
"Generally I prefer not to participate in that kind of sentimental nonsense, Miss Granger."
His stiff answer earned him a soft "Oh!" from her. Granger's smile wavered for a mere moment.
You know how to kill a mood, Snape.
"In that case, I am glad you did today, Professor," she confessed, playing down his offending remark.
"Considering the doubtful glances of your so-called friends, I dare say that not everybody in this room shares your sentiment, Miss Granger." The Potions master directed her attention on to the murderous looks Potter and Weasley were giving them. “They seem to fear that I might snatch Hogwarts’ Head Girl and lock her up in the dungeons,” he remarked, sneering.
“If you dare, I feel entirely up to cooperating with you, sir. I think their faces would be priceless.” Her eyes sparkled with merriment as she spoke. The little minx was teasing him outrageously.
Very well then, two can play that game.
“Your consent in this case is a quite intriguing insight, Miss Granger. I dare say, it reveals a multitude of possibilities that are worthy of consideration, don't you agree?” he replied in a deep voice. And while his Potions master persona was fixing her gaze playful with his dark eyes, Severus' mind was trying hard to neglect the strange sensation that spread in his stomach as her cheeks flushed at his words.
"My, just ignore them, please," she continued in a more earnest tone, one that could not hide her bashfulness. "I don’t think they will ever grow up."
"As milady wishes," he replied coolly as he initiated a half-twist to hide the smirk that was twitching in the corners of his mouth.
As they danced with her back slightly resting against his chest, he became aware of how the closeness and the warmth of the witch in his arms was already weakening his emotional lines of defence. He was playing with fire right now.
Nonsense.
Defying his inner voice of reason, Severus decided to continue their spirited banter, bringing his lips next to her ear.
"Although I have to admit, Miss Granger, it has crossed my mind to snatch you away tonight. You are quite enticing this evening."
The wizard turned her swiftly to face him again, preying on her reaction at his words. Brown eyes were holding black ones again, showing the witch’s surprise as well as a sort of deep affection he hadn't seen there before. The pleasant warmth that welled up in his chest at the sight was unsettling.
However, all too soon an indignant exclamation from the other side of the dance floor ended the moment, and their joint movements came to an abrupt halt.
"Mr Malfoy! Stop it!” Severus and the Gryffindor witch exchanged a curious glance before directing their eyes to the scene next to them.
A slightly dishevelled Minerva McGonagall was scolding a certain young Slytherin, one hand on her hip. “As I told you before, you cannot twist and twirl me like one of those young witches. Please try to remember that, Mr Malfoy."
"I apologise, Professor." Draco’s dismay was plainly audible in his voice.
Everybody in the Great Hall had stopped in their tracks before breaking out into laughter. Even Severus couldn’t restrain a deep and heartfelt laugh at the hilarious sight his colleague and godson made.
"Ladies and gentlemen, I suggest everybody pick up again what they were doing before being interrupted by this little interlude. Filius, please go on." He could hear Albus' voice announce from the other side of the hall.
The music started anew as Severus met Hermione Granger’s eye.
"May I?" he asked, offering his hand to her to continue their dance, his amusement still glistening in his eyes.
“Only if you promise to twist and twirl me, sir,” she replied playfully, giving him an inviting smile that caused the strange sensation in his stomach to return again.
“Do not dare me, my dear Miss Granger, do not dare me,” he admonished her quietly.
Momentarily the witch blinked, puzzled at his words, before her large brown eyes regarded him thoughtfully. The Potions master cursed inwardly — so much for his miserable attempt to push her out of his comfort zone again.
"You should do that more often," Granger stated out of the blue, evidently trying to change the subject of their conversation.
"Pardon?"
"Laugh. You should laugh more often; it becomes you and is thoroughly catching," she said softly, averting her eyes as she spoke.
This forthright suggestion stunned him finally into speechlessness. Nobody had ever dared to propose such a thing to the feared Potions master.
As the silence stretched between them, he took the chance to pull the young witch in his arms slightly closer to him, so she was still not able to face him again after that display of particular bravery.
Gryffindor’s precious one, indeed
She had charmed him in mere minutes, and Severus marvelled at the woman he was holding.
Her head was resting slightly against his shoulder now, so he was able to savour the scent of almond and vanilla in her hair; her left hand lay on his chest, while the small right one was fitting far too well into his palm. And the sparkle that had been glittering in her eyes as she challenged him earlier had given him a pleasant feeling somewhere deep down in his soul, making his heart ache.
Had her eyes always sparkled that way?
"Professor Snape!" an unwelcome voice from far away came to cut through his thoughts. "Professor, would you mind if I cut in?" Weasley. The boy was standing next to him, looking at him impatiently.
"Not at all, Mr Weasley," the Potions master replied reluctantly. As he realized the sight they both had made, Severus stepped away, instantly letting go of Hermione’s right hand as if he had been burned.
You are a lecherous old fool, Snape.
"Miss Granger." He bowed once again and swept away before she could respond, an unknown feeling of loss haunting him.
Oblivious to his surroundings as he left, Severus failed to notice a certain young man with flaming red hair who had been abandoned in the middle of the dance floor and was shaking his head in disbelief.
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28 Reviews | 7.0/10 Average
Oh, I'm loving this story and I hate to think it's been abandoned. *sigh* Will our favorite potions master leave Voldermort with out being punished? Will Hermione ever finish telling her beloved what's in her heart? LOL, please don't leave us hanging. The next chapter is love too, :o)
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Hello :o)I am so glad you like QE and no, it's not abandoned. Quite the contrary, it's nearly finished and slumbering on my harddrive. I only need to find the time to fix the last remaining plot points I need :o) Thanks for your review
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Hello :o)I am so glad you like QE and no, it's not abandoned. Quite the contrary, it's nearly finished and slumbering on my harddrive. I only need to find the time to fix the last remaining plot points I need :o) Thanks for your review
Oh my, I just love what comes out of Hermione's mouth sometimes. Especially when it disturbs our favorite potion master's serenity. Lovely chapter, off to read the next.
Great chapter - cannot wait to see what Ron is doing following Hermione and what Severus will do as well.
I love the story! I can't wait for the next chapters!
Ha! That sort of line would make any one look like he or she had been run over by a hippogryff.
I am in love with this story right now. If one could marry stories, I would definetely marry this one. I hope next chapter comes real soon! Also, can't wait to see what Ron will do...but if I may try to use my mediocre divination skills? He will stick to the edge while Snape and Hermione speak, and when he gets heartbroken by the result of their talk, he will accept defeat by allowing Hermione to be happy with Snape?
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
:::blushes::: I am delighted that you like QE that much. Chapter 5 is already with my lovely beta Jadey, so the wait won't be long. Your divination skills arent' that bad, your prediction is quite close to the real plot. However, I dare remind you that Ron isn't the one with the spying skills here ;-)) Sel.
Cliffhanger's are okay...as long as you don't keep us waiting to long, PLEASE
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I won't I promise. Chapter 5 is already written in with my beta Jadey :-) Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
This is a cute story so far, I can't imagine how ron will surprise us, but I guess the only way to be surprising would be to hand her over with out a fight....Keep up the good work!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I think surviving a war should have helped Ron to grow up a bit, don't you agree? He just realized something that really upset him... Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
A good story so far, and I look forward to more...
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) Chapter 5 is with my lovely beta Jadey right now, so more is on its way... Sel.
OH, after that last little dialogue with Draco, I most certainly am looking forward to reading more! Overrun by a Hippogriff, indeed.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Well, giving him a broad hint wouldn't have done the trick, I fear. It needed the famous Gryffindor bluntness to knock some sense into that stubborn man ;-))Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
AH! AMAZING! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY RIGHT NOW!(Sorry for the caps, I just couldn't help myself with them)
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*blushes* Thank you :-)Sel.
Interesting - Draco almost took glee telling his Severus about the conversation between Ron and Hermione. Well at least it got his attention.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Draco enjoys the situation immensely, indeed. And for Severus, I fear he is still in a state of denial...Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
The story is starting to get interesting now :-) Looking forward to reading a new chapter soon.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
The next chapter is on its way :-)) Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
Anonymous
I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is already in the queue... so you won't have to wait that long anymore.
Thanks for reviewing :-)
Sel.
Oh no, I've broken my resolution to leave a review every chapter! Damn. But in this case, it is a compliment, because I was so eager to get to the next chapter I forgot!I LOVE this story. It's so sweet and funny and you can really feel the tension. WOW! It was really clever how you thought up how to get Severus and Hermione to dance together, I would never have thought of that. Utterly brilliant.Five stars!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*blushes*I cannot thank you enough for your feedback. Thank you.By the way Albus was delighted as well as I proposed my idea about the dancing arrangement to him ;-)))Sel.
Too funny! Can't wait to see what comes next!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Chapter 4 is already in the queue, so the wait won't be long. Thanks for reviewing :-)Sel.
Fabulous!Overrun by a hippogriff.................I should like to see that expression on his face.This story is getting better and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
*does a happy dance*I am really delighted that you like this tale. Chapter 4 is already in the queue :-))Sel.
2nd chapter is a good one. I loved the entire dance scene with Severus. He began to want and got freaked out - through up his defenses and bolted. I loved the ending where Ron was alone on the dance floor - Hermione must have left to go after Severus - I cannot wait to see what happens.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Oh, I am delighted that you like the dance scene. It was a hell to write ;-)Thanks for reviewing.Sel.
Enjoyed the first chapter. I loved the fact that Hermione asked Severus to dance. It was an interesting start. I loved where you had McGonagall tease Severus over Hermione - good line.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Well, good old Minerva has a point, hasn't she? ;-) Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Very fluffy but very enjoyable. I am enjoying Severus's inner conflict.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) I am trying to walk the fine line of writing a fluffy plot without turning the Potions master into a sentimental fool... but it is far more difficult than I've imagined. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
Thank you :-) I am trying to walk the fine line of writing a fluffy plot without turning the Potions master into a sentimental fool... but it is far more difficult than I've imagined. Sel.
Loved the banter, and Severus's thoughts. Can't wait to see what comes next.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I am glad you liked their interaction. Thanks for reviewing :-)Sel.
Draco twisting Minerva, lol, very nice. I also really liked the little comments between Severus and Hermione; their hesitation is very sweet.
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
I really enjoyed writing the Draco/Minerva-scene :-) I am glad you liked it. Well, Severus and Hermione are both hiding behind those playful comments and polite phrases, but for different reasons.... ;-)Thanks for reviewing :-))Sel.
So she didn't even bother to dance with Ron after he broke in? How audacious!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from selinabln (Author of Quite Enchanting)
No, she didn't. Would you have in her place? ;-) Well, the next chapter is called "Of Punch and Hippogriffs" - it's a bit of humor and some Slytherin sneakiness before the plot speeds up.... Sel.
this is a brilliant story. I hope you write more, because i want to read more!