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What It Is

1: I

What It Is

selinabln

37 Reviews   |   37 Ratings, 0 Likes, 81 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 2,461 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus Snape is sitting sleeplessly in the kitchen at Grimmauld Place when somebody close to his heart returns from a dangerous appointment. One shot. HBP and DH disregarded.

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Chapter 1: I


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selinabln

Member Since 2006  |  15 Stories  |  Favorited by 80  |  23 Reviews Written  |  289 Review Responses

A dreamy realist, with a heart for bookish witches and ill-tempered wizards.


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10/10

HBAR

What a lovely story!  So glad I stumbled across this tonight.

10/10

katielady08

Thats Beautiful!  I really enjoyed that!

:)

10/10

mo112

You're a queen of fluff :) Lovely, thank you!

10/10

omateido

this is lovely. a perfect cadence of speech, thoughts, looks and touches brought together in perfect harmony

0/10

TCFellows5

Well Done!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you and thanks for reading and reviewing :o)

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you and thanks for reading and reviewing :o)

10/10

KiraRaven

OMG!!! I'm gonna cry! I'm gonna cry!! I'm gonna cry!!! THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! love it, love i, love it, love it!!!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you, thank you sooooo much. I cannot tell you how much your review means to me. This was my first piece of fanfiction and I am deeply moved that you like it that much.....*does a happy dance*Sel.

10/10

remy

What a sweet story...I really enjoyed this!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Merci, I am glad you liked it :-)

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Merci, I am glad you liked it :-)

10/10

mick42

Yes it is what it is, and always will be. 

10/10

braye27

Totally beautiful.  Your description of Snape's inner thoughts juxtaposed to his spoken words was so very effective in letting the reader understand, in a one-shot, what was truly in his heart and mind.  Very lovely!Beth

0/10

Antigone

That is a beautiful poem, where did you get it from? or did you write it yourself?Good Job on the story though

0/10

mimmom

excellent!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-)

10/10

blackaces924

awwwww... that is so sweet :)

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing, it really makes my day :-) Sel.

10/10

Mazzy

Bravo! That was great... a happy ending... an absolutely marvelous poem - a poem that sounds just like Snape would feel in fact. Great job!!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Merci :-) I am a hopeless romantic and therefore addicted to happily ever afters :-) The poem is a modification of the poem "What it is" from the Austrian poet Erich Fried. And what makes some of his works very fitting for HG/SS is the fact that he was a man who was deeply in love with a much younger woman, therefore his work often deals with problems related to this situation. I highly recommend his poems "Unplanned" and "Irresponsible" .... :-) Sel.

0/10

MollysSister

OHMY! Thank goodness for Narcissa doing the resucing. It could have been quite another story if not for her. Quite lovely

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

I know what you mean. I have a soft spot for Narcissa since HBP, because I love how she defies Voldemort and Bellatrix for the sake of Draco. Thanks for reviewing :-) Sel.

10/10

kittylefish

that was lovely.  *sighs*  and that is a beautiful poem.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-) Erich Fried is a wondeful poet, his work is always very soulful. Stuart Hood's translation of his poems into English is highly recommendable. Sel.

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

i made a note of that and will look for it. thanks.

10/10

La Mariane

Great story.I usually don't like one-shots because I feel we don't have the time to really know the characters ; one-shots usually leave me with many questions about the characters, but, in this one, you managed to develop a believable "state of mind" for Severus.And the poem is beatiful, especially because it is so simple and moving. 

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

*smiles from ear to ear*


You cannot imagine what reviews like yours do to me, thats a pure dose of endorphin, especially since I am not a native speaker and therefore really unsure how my writing skills work with the English language :-)


Thank you for your wonderful review, it is dearly cherished.


Sel.

10/10

Bentwaters

Absolutely wonderful!!! Love it very, very much. Hope to see more from you! ^.~

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

*does a happy dance* Thank you for your wonderful feedback. I am already submitting a longer story here at TPP. It is called Quite Enchanting. Pure fluff, but it was something I desperately needed after DH. And therefore it is already completely written.

Sel.

10/10

sinbad

That was sooooo sweet!  Very romantic!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

I am a hopeless romantic, I can't help myself :-)


Good to hear you liked it.


Sel.

10/10

snitchette

The poem's beautiful and you did something even more fantanstic with it. I'm completely under the charm.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-) I love the poem and somehow it struck me that it would be a perfect poem for the Potions master and than it was only a short while before the plot bunny bit me ;-))


Your feedback really makes my day :-)

Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-) I love the poem and somehow it struck me that it would be a perfect poem for the Potions master and than it was only a short while before the plot bunny bit me ;-))


Your feedback really makes my day :-)

Sel.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Simply beautiful.............that's what it is!

Danke

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

*blushes* thank you.... This was my first piece of fanfiction after a long existence as lurker. Combined with the fact that I am not a native speaker it took me a lot of nerves and courage to post it at all, therefore I am overwhelmed that you liked it that much.


Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

*blushes* thank you.... This was my first piece of fanfiction after a long existence as lurker. Combined with the fact that I am not a native speaker it took me a lot of nerves and courage to post it at all, therefore I am overwhelmed that you liked it that much.


Sel.

9/10

Anonymous

I'm no HG/SS-shipper, and in general, I think a relationship between them is rather unlikely. Particularly them falling in love for each other without some dire circumstancs bringing them really close together.


But once in a while I read I story like yours, where, against all odds as I see them, this really works out, and it works out well, and the fact seems so obvious.


Lovely piece, beautifully written.



Author's Response:

Oh, merci :-) I am thrilled that I could make the ship work for you in this one shot. As you can guess I am a HG/SS-shipper by heart, who is still dealing with the aftershocks of DH. And since I am not a native speaker I am over the moon to know that you liked my writing as well.


 


 


Sel.

10/10

Isode

How wonderful, hope you will be writing more stories soon. You have a new fan.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Oh, wow. I am ecstatic that you liked my writing so much.... I am working a few projects right now. So there will be more coming... I cannot tell how much your feedback means to me.

Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Oh, wow. I am ecstatic that you liked my writing so much.... I am working a few projects right now. So there will be more coming... I cannot tell how much your feedback means to me.

Sel.

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

It is what it is--and what it is is lovely.  Very nicely done!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-) I am glad you liked it.


Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-) I am glad you liked it.


Sel.

10/10

Homunculus

This is the sweetest one-shot I have read in a loooong time!


I love how you quote Erich Fried - his Shakespeare translations are actually the most wonderful ones I ever found (I'm a German native speaker).


Thank you for this beautiful story!!

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Danke :-) I am a German native speaker myself and therefore really fond of Erich Fried's works as well.

Er ist ein wunderbarer Dichter, die Kraft und Ausdrucksstärke seiner Worte hat mich immer berührt. Und als ich im Januar "Was es ist" ein weiteres Mal gelesen habe, hat mich der Gedanke total gepackt, dass es doch das perfekte Gedicht für Severus in Bezug auf Hermione wäre. Besonders die Zeilen "Es ist Unsinn sagt die Vernunft - Es ist lächerlich sagt der Stolz" haben mir es in diesem Zusammenhang sehr angetan :-))


Sel.


PS: Wunderbare Nickname-Wahl - sehr 'faustisch' ;-))

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Danke :-) I am a German native speaker myself and therefore really fond of Erich Fried's works as well.

Er ist ein wunderbarer Dichter, die Kraft und Ausdrucksstärke seiner Worte hat mich immer berührt. Und als ich im Januar "Was es ist" ein weiteres Mal gelesen habe, hat mich der Gedanke total gepackt, dass es doch das perfekte Gedicht für Severus in Bezug auf Hermione wäre. Besonders die Zeilen "Es ist Unsinn sagt die Vernunft - Es ist lächerlich sagt der Stolz" haben mir es in diesem Zusammenhang sehr angetan :-))


Sel.


PS: Wunderbare Nickname-Wahl - sehr 'faustisch' ;-))

0/10

shefa

Ooh, this is lovely :)  Nicely done.  I like the pacing and the interpersed thoughts.  I love the poem on the back of the photo.  Beautiful.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-)

I have always seen the Potions master who has to deal with his inner conflicts - heart vs. mind, sense vs. reason. Therefore it fitted to me that he would place the poem on the back of photo to remind himself how foolish and hopeless his affection for Hermione is each time he gets lost in the gazing at her photo.

I am really glad you liked the one shot. It was my first piece of fanfiction and I chearish it dearly.


Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Well, that's what happens when you answer reviews in the early morning - whole parts of the sentence are missing or simply crap ;-))


Therefore once again with a little bit more concentration - hopefully:


I have always seen the Potions master as a person who has to deal with his inner
conflicts - heart vs. mind, sense vs. reason. Therefore it seemed fitting that he would place the poem on the back of photo so he can remind himself how
foolish and hopeless his affection for Hermione is each time he gets
lost in her photo.

I am really glad you liked the one shot. It was my first piece of fanfiction and I cherish it dearly.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Thank you :-)

I have always seen the Potions master who has to deal with his inner conflicts - heart vs. mind, sense vs. reason. Therefore it fitted to me that he would place the poem on the back of photo to remind himself how foolish and hopeless his affection for Hermione is each time he gets lost in the gazing at her photo.

I am really glad you liked the one shot. It was my first piece of fanfiction and I chearish it dearly.


Sel.

Response from selinabln (Author of What It Is)

Well, that's what happens when you answer reviews in the early morning - whole parts of the sentence are missing or simply crap ;-))


Therefore once again with a little bit more concentration - hopefully:


I have always seen the Potions master as a person who has to deal with his inner
conflicts - heart vs. mind, sense vs. reason. Therefore it seemed fitting that he would place the poem on the back of photo so he can remind himself how
foolish and hopeless his affection for Hermione is each time he gets
lost in her photo.

I am really glad you liked the one shot. It was my first piece of fanfiction and I cherish it dearly.

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