What Do I Spy with My Little Eye?
Chapter 3 of 7
RedOrchid***This story has been abandoned. (See A/N of last posted chapter for details)*** Hermione enters a world of twisted relationships and ever-thickening plots. Independent sequel to "Love Potion no.9."
ReviewedChapter 3 What Do I Spy with My Little Eye?
Hermione entered the library with a huge smile on her face. Since this was an almost daily occurrence, no one really paid it any attention. Some Ravenclaw third-years looked at one another and rolled their eyes as she passed them, but that was also rather standard behaviour. She had got over the fact that even the most studious people at Hogwarts thought her an over-ambitious nerd by now. She was actually kind of proud of her reputation, though she wouldn't ever admit it if any of her friends were to ask.
She decided to start at the beginning, with reading up on the Consanguine Revelare, before she ventured into the Restricted Section, looking for ways to counter it. She found the book--a very thick one on medieval law and property rights, which she'd taken out for a bit of bedtime reading in her fifth year--and sat down in a secluded corner, flipping through the pages. The spell was mentioned several times, but not thoroughly described. The name indicated some sort of blood-magic, and she got up and walked over to another shelf. Frowning, she went over the titles, realising that the only books on blood and blood-magic available were those on very practical uses of blood, usually animal blood and usually in potion making. There seemed to be nothing about the theory behind the obscure magical branch--even the section on Alchemy was very limited. Odd that she'd never realised it before...
She picked out a few volumes and looked at the reference pages in the back. All of them listed one Sanguine Magic Theory and Practice among their principal sources. This book was not on the shelf so she walked over to the counter.
"Excuse me, Madam Pince, do you know where I could find this book, please?" The severe-looking librarian looked at the title she'd scribbled down and frowned.
"That work is in the Restricted Section. You need permission from a teacher in order to retrieve it." She turned back to her filing, seemingly expecting Hermione to go away.
"I have a permission slip. Here." She pushed the slip of parchment across the counter. Madam Pince took it, and her eyes widened.
"This is a general permission slip," she said, suspicion in her voice. "And I know for a fact that Professor Snape never gives out anything but the ones specifying precisely which book a person is allowed to access."
"Well, he did this time," Hermione said simply. The librarian just glared at her.
"Just a minute, please. I need to verify this." She walked into her office, and Hermione felt her cheeks redden in indignation that the other woman obviously thought she was trying to deceive her. A few moments later, she was back, her lips pursed tightly together, and without a word, she gestured for Hermione to follow her. They walked into the Restricted Section, and she pointed at a dark, dusty section in the back. Then she turned abruptly and walked back to her desk.
Hermione took a couple of minutes to just enjoy the feeling of being surrounded by hundreds of new books. They were all old, exciting and possibly dangerous--she couldn't wait to get started. Reverently, she waked down the aisle to the corner indicated by Madam Pince and quickly found the volume she was looking for. Taking it from the shelf, along with some other interesting-looking titles, she brought it back to her spot in the main library.
She stayed in the library all day, reading and making notes. Ron came by at lunchtime, and Harry early in the evening, trying to convince her to come eat in the Great Hall. She refused and instead asked them to bring her something non-sticky back. They grudgingly agreed.
Hours flew by, and before she'd noticed it, darkness had fallen. At ten, Madam Pince closed the library, sending Hermione a pointed glance. Hermione indicated the Head Girl badge at the top of her robes and went back to her reading. She was happy that Dumbledore had let her keep it even though the actual Head Boy and Girl had come back from St. Mungo's. About six months earlier, the Ravenclaw couple had been severely injured during a Death Eater attack on Hogsmeade, and Hermione and Harry had been recruited to fill their positions. Now they were back, but seeing as they both had the NEWTs to prepare for and two months of classes to catch up on, Hermione and Harry retained some of their duties, as well as the badges and the private quarters. Dumbledore had said that he figured it wouldn't do them any harm to practice a bit for the following year and then given them a small wink. Back then, she'd been elated at the veiled promise of becoming the official Hogwarts Head Girl. Now, it felt more like a strain, to be perfectly honest. Between school, Occlumency and her 'relationship' with Snape, she didn't have a lot of time for other things. And patrolling the school corridors at odd hours did lose its charm after a while.
She'd just started reading a new chapter on pureblood advantages in promotion-related programs at the Ministry of Magic in A History of Purity Politics (and was becoming increasingly angry at the bigotry and prejudice displayed by the author), when she felt a presence in the room. She looked up from her book and smiled at the tall form leaning against one of the bookcases.
"Found anything interesting?"
"Plenty. I'm not so sure whether any of it is useful, though," she answered, gesturing at the pile of books beside her.
"What are you looking for?"
"I don't know exactly. I've found out more or less how the Consanguine Revelare works, I think, but I still don't know precisely why it works the way it does."
"Think, Hermione," he said. "Once you know the 'how', the 'why' should logically follow. Now tell me how it works." She frowned, racking her brain to put the pieces together. Not succeeding, she started talking, hoping the answer would come to her.
"The Consanguine Revelare is a charm invented to show family ties between people related by blood. When applied on a wizard or a witch, it reads their ancestry, displaying the result as a coloured aura around the person's head. Each magical line has its own colour matrix, and so the result is easy to read and very dependable. It's also used to establish paternity," she added as an afterthought.
"Very good. What colour indicates Muggle parentage?"
"Brown," she answered without even looking at her notes.
"Correct. Allow me to demonstrate." He pulled out his wand and pointed it at her. "Revelo Sanguinem!"
Pure silver light shot from his wand and connected with her body. She felt her head begin to spin as the magic coursed through her veins.
"Look at yourself in the window," he said, his voice cutting through the hissing sound in her ears. She turned around and looked at her reflection in the dark glass. A brown aura surrounded her head, giving the impression that her hair had grown to three times its actual volume. It looked absolutely horrific, and a small giggle escaped her.
"Finite Incantatem," Snape said, and the aura disappeared, leaving her normal reflection in the glass before her. She turned back to him.
"Now, Hermione, based on your experience and what you've read tonight, how would you say that the charm reveals one's ancestry?" She thought back on the rushing sensation and suddenly, it all made sense.
"It reads my blood. Magical blood is pure," she quoted, "At a magical conception, both parents' blood is reconstructed in the offspring, leaving the lines' blood untainted and unchanged." Suddenly, something else clicked in her head as well: "Mudblood. Oh my God, that's what they mean?" she whispered, indicating the now normal space around her head.
"Yes," he answered, matter-of-factly. "No doubt someone thought the word play very poignant at one time."
"So all this 'pureblood', 'half-blood', 'mudblood' nonsense, it's all related to this charm?" She sounded mildly incredulous.
"Precisely, it was very popular a few hundred years ago. Still is in some circles, and it's still used in many legal matters." Hermione closed her eyes, thinking hard. There was something at the back of her brain, wanting to be brought forward, wanting to connect...
"The Basilisk!" Her eyes snapped open when the word fell from her lips. "That's how it knew which students to attack--it could see their blood aura. I always wondered..." Snape looked mildly impressed.
"That makes sense," he conceded. "So, Hermione, how could we use this to our advantage?"
"I don't know. When you first mentioned it, I thought... No."
"Go on."
"Well, I just thought that we'd pretend that I was related to you somehow. That would provide a good excuse as to why I'd approached you in the first place, say, if I were to have discovered that my real father was actually your uncle or similar, and I wanted to know more about my biological family." He smiled.
"Close, but not exactly what I had in mind." Her eyes widened.
"But, Severus, it's not possible. This charm proves that I don't have your blood."
"Not yet." She blinked, trying to make sense of what he was saying.
"But... how?"
"I believe that was the task I set you--to find the solution. Perhaps you should return to your studies? Unless," His voice dropped a few notes, "you'd rather continue tomorrow. It is rather late after all. Shouldn't you be in bed by now?"
"Shouldn't you?" She raised an eyebrow at him teasingly. He took a few steps closer.
"I should. Why don't I escort you to your chambers? Tuck you in? Make sure that no monsters are hiding under your bed?" She chuckled.
"Or in my bed, perhaps?" She looked around her, then at her pile of books, then at him. "No... I think I need to finish this, find a solution to the problem." She gave him her 'determined' look, and he smiled sardonically, turning to leave.
"Good night and good luck, then." She let him walk to the end of the aisle before calling out, just loud enough for him to hear:
"I don't believe I asked you to leave." He stopped, but didn't turn around.
"I thought you wanted to study."
"I do." She got out of the chair and walked towards him. "But to do that, I need my source material."
"Everything you need is in the Restricted Section."
"I believe you're wrong," she whispered, taking his hand and leading him back to her work station. "I think everything I need is right--" she pushed him gently into the chair, straddling him, "--here." She bent to kiss his neck.
"This is not acadaemic research," he chided, running his hands up her back. "You're supposed to find the solution on your own."
"Oh, and I will. But you never told me what methods I could and could not use. You just asked me to find the solution, and I believe I will." Her hands deftly moved to the buttons of his robes.
"What happened to 'never again in a public place'?" he asked with a smirk, enjoying her lips as they wandered from his neck to his shoulder.
"It's one-thirty in the morning. The whole castle is asleep. And besides..." She raised her head and gave him a sassy smile. "It rather turns me on." He let out a laugh at the naughty look on her face.
"You realise that you will have to be extremely persuasive, don't you?" She winked at him.
"Perfectly," she answered, placing a swift kiss on his mouth. "And I've always loved a challenge."
She parted his robes and slid out of his lap, getting to her knees on the floor. Excruciatingly slowly, she removed his boxers and spread his legs, settling herself comfortably between them. Her eyes never leaving his, she stroked him lightly with her hand a few times before leaning down and running her tongue along the length of him, chuckling softly at the expression of intense desire that filled his black eyes. Lowering her eyes for a moment, she licked her lips and suckled softly at the underside, letting her tongue explore the silky skin. His breath grew faster as she tilted her head and took an inch of him inside her mouth, massaging it with her lips and tongue, sucking smoothly. She worked her way down by millimetres, taking her time, enjoying the impatient sounds he made. At one point, his hands made their way into her hair, gently urging her to go faster. With a quick flick of her wand, they were tied behind the back of the chair, and she withdrew from him, starting the whole process over. He groaned loudly, and she smiled, enjoying the power she held over him. After a while longer of slow, teasing progression, she suddenly withdrew altogether--only to plunge down the next moment and take all of him in one smooth stroke. He threw his head back and gasped, hands straining against their bonds, jerking up against her. She moaned, letting her throat vibrate softly around him. He thrust again, more violently, and she steadied his hips with her forearms, holding him in place with her body weight. He kept struggling and groaning as she firmly set the pace, sucking him deep a few times before sliding off, running her tongue from the base up a second time.
"When did you learn how to deep-throat?" his strangled-sounding voice asked from above her head.
"Oh, about a month ago," she replied nonchalantly, giving him some more evidence of her new skill, effectively shutting him up.
"And... how?" he panted after she'd released him again, his head tilted back against the top of the chair.
"I did some reading," she answered. "And... um... I might have practiced a little... with a transfigured banana."
"I'm lucky to have such a diligent student," he managed to get out, though the usual snarkiness in his voice was somewhat lacking due to heavy breathing. "How come you haven't shown me this new skill before?"
"Three words: the opportune moment," she said with a grin, placing another kiss at the crown and letting her tongue come into play once more. He opened his eyes then, and the look in them sent a jolt of heat through her. It was a look of raw desire, hypnotic, branding... She licked her lips again and ran a finger around the tip, making lazy circles. "So, Professor," she murmured huskily, "what do I need to do to become a Snape?"
Harry was walking along the dark corridors, moving soundlessly, careful not to break the peaceful silence in the castle. He should have made his rounds just after midnight, but Ginny had managed to keep him, well, occupied (he blushed slightly at the memory) for a few hours, and now he was late (ok, very late). He would gladly have skived off patrol just then, seeing as it was three in the morning and nobody was up and about, but he couldn't. The prefect system had a magical calendar attached to it, which marked a missed patrol automatically. Since neglecting his pseudo-Head Boy duties for any other reason than imminent death would bring the fury of Minerva McGonagall down on him, he'd figured a quick sweep of the castle could be managed before going to sleep. He was just passing by the library when something made him stop dead in his tracks.
Somebody was moaning in there.
No, wait, strike that. Two people were making those sounds, one higher and one lower voice mixing together.
Which logically meant that either they were getting a very advanced snog on, or they were shagging.
Great. So not what he needed.
He was tempted to just keep walking and leave the couple in peace, but somehow, his silent steps were directed towards the sounds. A righteous voice in his head was arguing that it was his duty to catch any student out of bed after curfew, but it didn't manage to convince even himself. He was curious, simple as that.
As he crept closer, he wondered idly who would have sex in the library. He could understand the lure of shagging in a place where people might catch you, but the library? Really? He'd entertained a few fantasies about taking Ginny to the prefects' bathroom, or perhaps the Quidditch pitch at night, but the library? Seriously, who could like books that much?
Dear Lord, please don't let it be Madam Pince!
But no, the feminine voice didn't sound like the shrill and raspy one of the Hogwarts librarian. It sounded soft, familiar in some way. A foggy memory began to form in his mind, some sort of forgotten dream he'd had. That moan... where had he heard that moan before? He stealthily rounded the last corner and peered into the aisle that seemed to hold the source of the disturbingly alluring noise. What he saw made him freeze. He just stood there, petrified, staring, incapable of all coherent thought as the scene played out before his eyes.
A big armchair was placed at the end of the aisle, just beneath a window overlooking the grounds. A small table stood beside it, holding a few books and a lamp which enfolded the chair and its occupants in a bubble of soft, golden light. More books and scraps of clothing lay discarded on the floor, a scarlet thong catching his attention momentarily before his eyes were forcibly drawn back to the couple in the chair.
The girl had brown hair, swept up on her head and dark with sweat where a few curls played at her neck. Her bare back was glistening in the soft light, and big hands were greedily touching her skin, running up and down in sync with her own movements. The contour of a rounded breast could be seen from where he stood, but the girl's face was protected by the shadows, as well as the identity of the man.
He watched, transfixed, as their movements became more frantic, and then he heard it... that voice...
"God, I can't believe how good you feel..."
No, no, no, bloody hell no! Not Snape?! Not the voice that used to insult him while talking about potion ingredients! No! No, no, no!
And then the other shoe dropped, hitting him square in the face, making him stagger.
"Severus... hold me... please, just a little... a little bit more... I--I... God... I can't... I can't... I'm... I--" The incoherent speech faded into a series of gasps and moans as the girl arched and threw her head back, an expression of rapture on her face as her lips kept moving.
Hermione. Oh, no. No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, NO!
Not possible, not possible, not fucking possible! Not Hermione! Not Snape! NOT, NOT, NOT together!!! Not shagging in the bloody library! No! No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no...!
Movement suddenly returned to his legs, and he felt himself move backwards into the shadows, putting yard after yard of stony distance between himself and the now haunting mental pictures. Oh, God! He broke into a run as soon as he reached the corridor and sprinted towards Gryffindor tower, running away, far, far away, from the sounds of ecstasy that kept ringing in his ears. He took the steps up and down the many staircases two at a time, and when he finally reached his own quarters, he was sweaty and exhausted. Closing the door, he leaned against it and slid down onto the floor. Thoughts swirled in his head, and he put it in his hands, trying to force the images and all the voices to stop.
Voice number one was screaming that he had seen wrong, that it had been some other people in that chair, that it had only been a trick of the light, that he was exhausted and delusional, and so on.
Voice number two was calling voice number one a buggering fool in massive state of denial and projecting a slide show of exhibits one through infinity onto the back of his closed eyelids.
Voice number three argued that something was wrong. That Hermione was being raped and that he should run back and rescue her.
Voice number four sneered that rape victims didn't beg for more and have massive orgasms in front of his eyes.
Voice number three countered by screaming that Hermione still wasn't herself, that she must have been drugged, or controlled by the Imperius Curse, or something else evil and illegal that would be able to put his perverted professor in Azkaban ten times over.
Voice number five was shouting at everyone to get the buggering fuck out of his head and just leave him the bloody hell alone!
Harry let up a desperate groan and banged his head against the heavy wood. The pain made the progressing insanity recede somewhat.
Right, Occlumency. Clear your mind.
The problem was that thinking about Occlumency made him think about Snape, which made him think about...
Enough!
With frantic effort, he forced his thoughts to focus on Dumbledore, on the techniques he'd learnt over the past year. Taking deep breaths, he compelled his heart-rate to slow, his muscles to relax and his mind to go a blissful blank. He had to start over a dozen times as an image would flash across his mind and the anger would resurface, but an hour later, he managed to achieve the zen-like state of mental oblivion. Deciding that he would deal with everything that bothered him in the morning, he staggered over to the bed and collapsed next to Ginny's sleeping form.
The next morning, he was awakened by a tickling sensation. He opened his eyes and saw a curtain of red hair move back and forth over his chest. It felt great. He grinned and pushed the hair out of the way, finding his girlfriend's face, which was smiling mischievously. He grabbed her and rolled, managing to place a few kisses along her neck before she giggling threw him off. He pushed himself up on an elbow and looked down at her.
"Good morning."
"Good morning to you too."
"You seem to be in a good mood."
"Yeah, well, two and a half hours of snogging tends to do that to me," she said, rolling her eyes and smiling impishly. "You don't look that depressed yourself."
"I'm not complaining," Harry said, grinning. "I think your kinky mind is starting to have a bad influence on me though."
"Oh?" Ginny raised an eyebrow, eyes glittering. "Do tell." Harry threw himself back on the pillows before starting to laugh uncontrollably.
"Good God, Gin, you won't believe the kind of twisted dream I had last night!"
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Hey..i see here that you have abandoned this fic..i wonder though of your proposal as to mailing your future outline of the story...and btw...why the sudden change of heart? i mean, we readers would've appreciated it more if you had atleast finished it..but heck, i s'pose its for a lost cause to still persuade you to doing it for our sake..*shrugs*...anyways, i'd just like to let you know that this is a WICKED story..and a great one really...a bit saddening though that it will not be finished..but hey, i want to get to see the outline of this one..hopefully its still available...
I am completely fascinated with the theories you have presented in this story!"It's not what the Dark Lord will do to you, which will destroy you--it's what you will do for him.”I love this.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! That sentence you just quoted is actually my main idea behind this story. Slightly scary that you picked that one out of the whole bunch. Anyway, glad you're liking the story. More soon, I hope.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! That sentence you just quoted is actually my main idea behind this story. Slightly scary that you picked that one out of the whole bunch. Anyway, glad you're liking the story. More soon, I hope.
well i am glad you are enjoying writting it cause i am enjoying reading it hugs and chocolate
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Hugs and chocolate? Aw, that's the very best kind of review. Thank you for reading!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Hugs and chocolate? Aw, that's the very best kind of review. Thank you for reading!
Hmmm. Interesting plot twist! I'm rather turned on by it. I can see why this would be titled shades of grey. I think the moral dilemma is one that isn't as important as what it will allow Hermione to do in the war. Sacrifices have to be made. I also don't think that they really are brother and sister...I mean, transfusions take place all the time. It doesn't mean you're really related to someone else just because some of their blood is in you. I think your idea is really quite creative and I'm interested to see how this all plays out.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. I'm very much enjoying walking the borderline with this one. And yes, the moral dilemma will only worsen as the war escalates. More to come...
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. I'm very much enjoying walking the borderline with this one. And yes, the moral dilemma will only worsen as the war escalates. More to come...
The ritual was very creepy yet the imagery was beautiful and very powerful! Great writing!I am liking this story very much.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I was actually wondering if I should put a warning on that chapter, but then I didn't find one that I thought was suitable so I decided it was probably fine. Yes, it's a pretty creepy ritual. I'm a big Buffy-fan, and it still disturbs me a bit. :-)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I was actually wondering if I should put a warning on that chapter, but then I didn't find one that I thought was suitable so I decided it was probably fine. Yes, it's a pretty creepy ritual. I'm a big Buffy-fan, and it still disturbs me a bit. :-)
Very intriguing and clever plot!This is hilarious... "Suddenly, pictures of some of the Slytherins floated before her eyes. Could their deficits in looks and intelligence have something to do with situations such as this one? Was marriage to close relatives common in the pureblood community?"Re: your poll
I don't think it would be considered incest since the 'blood transfusion' does not affect the DNA per se. Still creepy, though!! :)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you!Well, I think JKR pretty much gave us that one. Slytherin House does give the impression of being quite inbred. :-)Creepy, but ok. Perfect! Exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Thanks!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you!Well, I think JKR pretty much gave us that one. Slytherin House does give the impression of being quite inbred. :-)Creepy, but ok. Perfect! Exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Thanks!
This chapter was both hot and witty...I love that combination!I thought your explanation for the term "mudblood" was brilliant!A very clever and well written story.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I always wondered how the Basilisk knew who to attack, so I was happy to invent something. Glad you liked.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I always wondered how the Basilisk knew who to attack, so I was happy to invent something. Glad you liked.
A gripping chapter.
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Thank you!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you!
Awesome. I love the slow descent into the murky waters of moral ambiguity. I'm glad you're enjoying writing this, because I'm enjoying reading it. Keep the posts coming. :D
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. Oh, I definitely will. Lots more exploring to do before this one is finished.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. Oh, I definitely will. Lots more exploring to do before this one is finished.
I second your author's note! I'm falling in love with this story too!
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Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you so much! Words can't express how happy I am to hear that!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you so much! Words can't express how happy I am to hear that!
Intersting theory. I like the spin you've put on dark magic. I am firmly in the camp that says intent is 9/10 of the law, so I'm right on board with you here. Sorry for not reviewing the earlier chapters, but I was kinda stuck in must-read-more mode. Take it as a compliment. Very thought provoking fic, this one. I can't wait for more.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. The definition (or lack thereof) of Dark Magic in canon always bothered me. More soon!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. The definition (or lack thereof) of Dark Magic in canon always bothered me. More soon!
well its been awhile but it was worth the wait thnak you for another great chapter my dear and if harry believs it was a dream all the better for our dynamic couple
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
It has, I'm sorry about that. There are a few chapters backed up now though, so I'll be posting the next four or five pretty quickly. Thank you for reviewing
Your plot is fascinating!I can't wait to see what happens next.I'm enjoying the way you have depicted the relationship between Snape and Dumbledore.I liked how Severus used his Slytherin tactics to get what he wanted out of Albus.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! Glad you liked. More soon (six chapters are posted at Ashwinder already and I'm re-posting here.)
This is very well written!Your portrayal of Snape has me on edge...I'm not sure if he can be trusted.I loved this exchange between HG and SS:“You’re still here,” he said, his voice raspy from sleep. The tone wasn’t really annoyed, nor was it pleased, or even questioning. She couldn’t place it at all.“I was just leaving,” she answered, finding her other shoe and putting it on.“Good,” she heard him mumble as she crossed the floor to the fireplace. Without looking back, she threw a pinch of glittering powder into the flames and left his bedroom.He watched her leave and continued to stare into the flames long after the emerald colour had turned back into its usual golden red.
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more!
I also love the title of your story...very clever!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you so much! I'm all giddy here from all the praise. :-)
ok this is an intresting twist om things i loved the first 2 chapters i cant wait to see what comes next thank you
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Since I have read both stories today, I do love this story and I am so glad that there will be more to come soon. The training Hermione is undergoing with Severus is intense. I can't wait to see what else he does to get her ready to become a Death Eater. Another great chapter!!!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Intense is the word. And it'll get a lot worse before it gets better, I can promise you that. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Intense is the word. And it'll get a lot worse before it gets better, I can promise you that. Thanks for reviewing!
The plot keeps thickening...and quite well I might add. What is so amazing to me, is how this whole story started as a cute little love potion story and has ended up being a huge story with a fascinating plot! I hope that there is much more to come than 7 chapters total...yes, I am being greedy!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. Yes, I'm quite amazed myself. And slightly frustrated. It's rather tricky to tweak the premises for the cute love potion story into where I want to go with SoG. But I'll hopefully manage. Yes, lots more to come than these 7 chapters. The outline is done, now I just need to find time to write.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you. Yes, I'm quite amazed myself. And slightly frustrated. It's rather tricky to tweak the premises for the cute love potion story into where I want to go with SoG. But I'll hopefully manage. Yes, lots more to come than these 7 chapters. The outline is done, now I just need to find time to write.
wow what an intense chapter but beautifully written as usual my dear hugs to you
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it.
I really liked Snape's explanations here, and I agree about Voldemort. I do believe he punishes for failure, but I don't get into the whole Dark Revels and torturing followers thing. He's too "clever" for that, smooth bloke that he is. And Hermione's reactions here (indignant that knowledge was withheld... hahaha) were spot on. Good chapter.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! Yes, I always found the whole "Snape getting back to Hogwarts crucioed to bits every single time while still being the most trusted servent"-bit rather unplausible. If that's what Voldemort would do to his top guy, how dead wouldn't then the others be? And why would powerful wizards like Malfoy put up with such treatment. No, carrot and stick I firmly believe it is.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! Yes, I always found the whole "Snape getting back to Hogwarts crucioed to bits every single time while still being the most trusted servent"-bit rather unplausible. If that's what Voldemort would do to his top guy, how dead wouldn't then the others be? And why would powerful wizards like Malfoy put up with such treatment. No, carrot and stick I firmly believe it is.
well i hope its not incest that would totally ruin it for me so id have to say it doesnt count cause it was manufactured any way brilliant as always my dear
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
It's a matter of definition, is it not? Whether you go with genetics of social norms. I personally don't consider it to be incest--this is more like a magical blood-transfusion to me--but I thought it would be interesting to introduce the concept and see what kind of reactions it got. So far, I'd say 100% are all for them staying together. :-)
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
It's a matter of definition, is it not? Whether you go with genetics of social norms. I personally don't consider it to be incest--this is more like a magical blood-transfusion to me--but I thought it would be interesting to introduce the concept and see what kind of reactions it got. So far, I'd say 100% are all for them staying together. :-)
wow cool i was owndering how they were going to do the blood thing thank you for another ownderful chapter
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I'm glad you found it believable.
I loved the ritual in here, and then after, when she felt as though she could take on the world, only to find out she was wrong, I loved the way you described her changing feelings--anger, hate, vengefulness to realization, shock, shame.Good work.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for such a substantial review. Very appreciated, especially for this story. I'm struggling with it quite badly righ now and so it's extra nice to get something concrete to go with. Thanks!
I know I must have read this before, because everything seems so familiar...but not enough so that I remember what happens next or if I even finished it.Hope you get the rest up soon! This is going to drive me crazy until I either reach the end or hit some new material!Am enjoying thouroughly.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Glad you like it. It's been posted at Ashwinder since 2005 so there's a good chance you've seen it there. Back then, there were five chapters. I posted another two earlier this year. Now I'm reposting here, and once both archives are up to date and in sync, I'll start posting more new ones. Thanks for reading!
Intriguing stuff, and I particularly like Snape being slightly deceitful towards the end. I look forward to reading more.With regards to your poll... I don't think it would count as incestuous if they carried on sleeping together. They are not brother and sister. It's that simple. Whatever spells they cast, they do not have the same parents.
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
Thank you very much!It's interesting how differently people view the subject of incest. For some, it's all genetics, for others only upbringing. Thanks for your comments!
Response from Red_Sky_At_Night (Reviewer)
Although really, in Snape and Hermione's case, it's neither, since they have neither the same parents nor the shared upbringing. It's just magic. And surely that doesn't count. Wouldn't be enough to warn me off him, anyway...;-)
I wish I could have Occlumency lessons like that!
Response from RedOrchid (Author of Shades of Grey)
LOL! Don't we all? :-)