New Chapter for Magnetic Moment
Magnetic Moment
kalina_blue121 Reviews | 5.42/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 97 Favorites )
FWHG My take on the marriage law, but I created a loophole. A story about the beginning of Fred and Hermione's relationship and their struggle to be accepted by their friends and families. Will they be able to prove that opposites do attract?
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Please, please, please finish this story!
Great story. I think you really did a great job with getting the charecters personalties down. think they would have all acted the way to described in your story. Uodate soon
Glad you're back, I look forward to more!
Way to stand up to the toad, Hermione! I've just read this story all in one sitting and enjoyed it very much. I hope you can update soon. :)
What a lovely surprise to meet Fred in Hogsmeade! I like the way their relationship is developing.
The whole scene with Tommy at the beginning of the chapter was a great bit of humor, and the image of Fred counting Snapes jumping over a cauldron was another funny bit to end the chapter with. :)
I hope that someday Hermione's relationship with her parents will be repaired.
I liked that Hermione went to Fred for comfort after her argument with her parents. They need to have the chance to get to know each other.
So glad you've finally updated! I think I first read this on GrangerEnchanted.com, and I was beginning to wonder if it would ever be updated. Yay, YOU! Thanks for writing!
YAYS, so glad this story has been updated!!!
Hi there, I'm so happy you're updating again!
Phew, what a Ministry!
You can congratulate yourself to having made me love Muggle governments for once.
Fred really wasn't himself here, so silent! Shocking that even he can be that much intimidated by the Ministry.
I really appreciate that you didn't go into broad anatomic or audible details of the night's activity.
I imagine that Ginny and Arthur will see reason as the first Weasley.
The Grangers, though, won't fancy having their bright little star marry someone like Fred--besides their trouble comprehending the outrageous background of it.
hey hun, I read this over on ff.net and was just wondering if you were going to extend it here ?
I was so excited to see a new chapter!!! :)
You absolutely have to finish this story! I love it and you're killing me, having to wait on updates! I just pray that the plot bunny that bit you initially will bite the poo out of you until you finish!!! If you need any ideas, let me know...I only have one published fanfic, but I have a million ideas and I love this story so much, I look forward to the updates!!!
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoy the story so much. I already know exactly where I want to take it, however, real life insists of getting in the way of my writing time. but I will finish Magnetic Moment eventually.Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoy the story so much. I already know exactly where I want to take it, however, real life insists of getting in the way of my writing time. but I will finish Magnetic Moment eventually.Thanks for reviewing.
Another good chapter. This is the first time I think I've ever seen somebody view the Squibs as an issue, and the effort to avoid having Squibs as negative. Very interesting; I like it.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked my approach on Squibs. I was trying to find a half-way decent angle for the Ministry's propaganda. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked my approach on Squibs. I was trying to find a half-way decent angle for the Ministry's propaganda. Thanks for reviewing.
Aww, that is completely adorable and absolutely sweet. Yay for them! I thought your detailed description of the law was a nice touch.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Oh, that's just what she needed!
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
*g* Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
*g* Thanks for reviewing.
Great update, I just love the progress you have made for them in this fic, it is so well done!!! I also love how you let the twins still be the twins, like when George entered the appartement holding his hands before his eyes.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I try hard to keep them all in charater. It's nice to know the readers notice. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I try hard to keep them all in charater. It's nice to know the readers notice. Thanks for reviewing.
I can only repeat myself: it's so sweet to see how their relationship develops.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thank you.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thank you.
Poor Hermione, always ina trap in these marriage laws! I like ithe idea of a loop hole. I jsut hope it doesn't close and leave her vunerable.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Yeah, Hermione does usually have to suffer in all the marriage law fics. *g* Thanks for reviewing,
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Yeah, Hermione does usually have to suffer in all the marriage law fics. *g* Thanks for reviewing,
awwww!and btw, I think you mean "packed", not "pact".
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thanks for reviewing and pointing out the mistake.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Thanks for reviewing and pointing out the mistake.
Perhaps one day Ron will come around. Seems as though Ginny is starting to. I like this pairing, its very sweet, its better than the Ron/Hermione pairing from the original. Too bad Fred was killed off in the original. I think thats why I like this fan fic so much.Love your story!!
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Yeah, I can't believe either that JK killed Fred off. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
Yeah, I can't believe either that JK killed Fred off. Thanks for reviewing.
I look forward to seeing what Ginny's looks mean. Or even more interested in what Ron's reaction will be when he actually realizes what has happened. I'm not certain Ron will be any happier knowing that Hermione actually rejected the idea of marriage to him.(I'm not sure if it's an error, but did Fred mean to say that the Ministry would be 'packed' rather than 'pact?')
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from kalina_blue (Author of Magnetic Moment)
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for reviewing.
Lovely to see an update, as always. I can see why she'd feel less alone in his clothes, and also see why that'd trigger all of his Big Strong Male Protector emotions. Nicely done - looking forward to more!
She's definitely got it bad.