Poor Ron, to have to witness that :D 

gosh! having tomarry fred...poor Ron!

I just love this story and was wondering when you were going to update it again?  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Go, Hermione!  And Percy totally works as Umbitch's toady.

I found this on the front page of TPP and stayed up until 2:30am reading it. Wow! Love it. Great characterizations and story. I hope too see more.

please please update soon!!!

more please!

Love it! I'm excited for the rest of it!

I loved the breakroom scene. Very fun.

A nice chapter with Fred being the more confused of them!I'm wondering what George is thinking! Is there maybe a general trust that his twin,--sharing his brains and values--would never do severe mistakes?  > Fred was incredibly perceptive when it came to other people. She supposed it was a helpful trait for a prankster.Urgh, Hermione, please imagine that he could be perceptive even without a prank in his mind!She could have reacted harder when Fred says the NEWTs are a waste of time.I hope they get some thing clarified before Hermione heads off to Hogwarts, but I like a lot that you're developing it slowly!

Thar was such a lovely chapter!!! Sweet, sad, tender, anxious, funny - everything I want from a story!!!! Great work, I hope the next chapter comes as soon as this one...gab

Urgh! Now that was a mental image I really didn't need: Snape, hitching up his robes, jumping over cauldrons! How am I going to explain my bouts of inane laughter to the people around me? :-)

This is a really good story. The writing is lively and snappy and I am enjoying the way their relationship is developing. Great job! I look forward to your update.

Oh I am so happy to see this newest chapter. I enjoyed the switching POVs so I could know what they are both thinking. Introspective Fred is a good thing.

I love the mental image of cauldron-jumping Snapes.  And really, those two should just get married, and ignore the stupid meddling families.  Who should be punished, I believe. 

It's so easy to be able to see these two really hit it off from the get-go.  I don't see a lot of FW/HG out there (in fact this is my first, you wouldn't happen to know of any others?) and I'm usually a DM/HG or SS/HG fan, but the opposites for FW and HG is just as good and far more conceivable (unfortunately, and I'm a diehard SS/HG admitting this! lol) than the others.More please!  I love it!

I have three specific instances to suggest that you might want to edit:First: Her passionate reaction to their make-out session - Second: “There you guys are!” George yelled  - 'make-out' and 'you guys' just scream 'AMERICAN'. I'd suggest using the British terms, 'snogging' and 'you', 'you two', or 'you lot'.Third: To Hermione it looked like somebody raided all the restaurants in Diagon Ally - Alley is misspelled.There are several other smaller hiccups, but the story is so original and engaging that they're not so very noticeable. Please accept these in the spirit in which they're offered, along with my gratitude for a very good read!

Oh I liked it, very much so! A very interesting twist to the MLC, and I look forward to read more. It is "fresh" to see Hermione paired with someone else than Severus (though  I love that pairing) or at some odd times, Sirius, just as long as she is not paired with Ron. I absolutely detest the Ron/Hermione pairing and will most likely never read a story where they are paired. I migth not be to attracted to a story where she is paired with Percy either, but Bill, Charlie, Fred and George is quite acceptable:-) Update again soon, I look forward to read more!

I love Marriage Law stories. I cannot wait to see where you take this.

Great story... I really like Fred =)!

Brilliant twist on the marriage law.  I would never have imagined Hermione with Fred.

I'm looking forward to how this story develops.