I still love the idea of cauldron jumping Snapes.  That was a nice chapter, I like that their relationship is progressing. 

I am usually a SS/HG girl, but I am enjoying your story immensely.  I hate to scream, but MORE! PLEASE!Your story flows well, the characters are believable, and aside from a few typos, very well deployed.  I like your take on the marriage law challenge, and I find your FW/HG quirky and entertaining.  Keep up the good work! 

I like long chapters.  I like hermione/fred.  I like this story.  more please!!!

Longer chapters are always better especially when we are talking about the mutual seduction of Hermione and Fred!! Hermione keeps talking about an "act" and "convincing people" Soon their make believe will be real enough!!

Thank you so much for a great update!

It is good to see that Hermione was enjoying herself and that the couple was convincing everybody else. When will they be convinced themselves?There was too much alcohol for my taste, but I'm looking forward to the massage.

Awww, this was certainly a sweet one, and I can't wait for Fred to get that massage!  LoL

What a wonderful NYE.

Wonderful update. Love the tension, and poor Fred not sleeping.

That was a heck of a lot of Snapes.  I'm glad they had fun (well, inebriated fun) for the holiday. 

I LOVED it!!! That was the sweetest chapter ever and I can't wait for the next one!! I like the way we can count the amount of affection in 'counted Snapes'.... Great work!!!!gab

I just read your story from start to finish and I enjoyed it very much :)I can't wait until the next chapter comes out :)

I'm totally loving this story! But poor Hermione...her father especially was a complete jerk. But I'm astonished with the level of fury on the part of the Weasleys. I can understand them being upset, especially Ron, but Mrs. Weasley and Ginny were really nasty. Should the truth eventually come out, I can just imagine their reactions. Or would they turn on Harry too since he's known the truth all along? Really excellent writing, BTW and I can't wait for your next update! :)

What a great story...I am completely addicted! It's so intriguing to see Fred and Hermione thrown together by circumstance and yet finding themselves increasingly attracted to each other in spite of themselves and the decidedly unpleasant reactions of their families. And poor Harry, caught in the middle. Can't wait for your next update!

This is picking up speed now. Keep up the good work.

i think that this chapter was worth the wait. can't wait for more!

You know, Fred is so right.  McGonnagal should read the Weasleys (Ron) the riot act.  And her father, well, that was just sad. 

Wow. Nothing like stacking the odds against a happy marriage, eh? Ron... yeah. Her parents? Well, there's nothing in canon to prove or disprove it, and the way you've written it makes for a vevy poignant reading. Keep up the good work!

Thank you soooooo much for the update. I cleaned out my bookmarks just last week, but I just could not delete your story (it is one of only 3 non-HG/SS-stories in there) and this update made me very glad that I kept my faith in you. This was a lovely chapter, with all the heartache and tenderness. Loved it. Great work!! More soon??gab

Its been so long I had to go back and reread the last chapter to remember what is going on! ARe you on break now from Uni? I hope the next chapter comes faster

Wow! This is a really amazing story, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. Fred and Hermione really seem to be handling the whole 'Marriage Law' thing very well; very maturely. I find myself quite impressed both with the style of your writing and the way you portray the both of them. I have always been rather enamored with the Weasley twins, and adore stories where their characters are explored more fully. Also, that part at the end where Fred thought it was ironic that while they were getting together to save Hermione from Death Eaters, their families were the ones causing hurt to them, I had just been thinking the same thing, and I was like 'ahh! Fred read my mind!' Anyway, reallly good story! Thank you so much for writing this and having the courage to submit it!~Katie

please update! I really liked how in this chapter there's an emphasis on how much Hermione doesn't know about Fred.  I think that the readers of the novels don't get a lot of insight on any complexity the twins might have to their personalities.  One is left with the impression that Hermione doesn't know them well, either.

definitely, Fred is the one Hermione must turn to, to remain believable. Let's hope no one saw that they didn't kiss when she left for her parent.I like that her parents aren't happy and supportive about the whole wizard-thing. A great thought that the top-student has come under bad influence of the top-trouble maker and therefore(!!) would not go to college! He made his patients take better care of their teeth? Well, that's an achievement as well -- haha!

poor Ron!!I like the concept, and I hope you haven't abandoned the story!!

this is most excellant!