Beautifully ended.  I'm glad to see him show some emotion whilst persuading Hermione to stay.  Thank you for sharing!

Poor Hermione, he now wants nothing to do with her and is ignoring whatever link they have between them that's drawing him to her.

Have Tonks and Remus forgotten or are they working it out?

Good to see 'Professor Snape' is still there underneath the calm exterior, instead of just a shadow of his former self.  However, it is still a heartbreaking chapter for both Hermione and Lily.

Poor Hermione, to think he's only drawn to her because she's still alive, and a forbidden fruit that returned his wand to him.  The locked garden is intriguing.  Does someone have the key?

It's quite sad and disturbing that Tonks and Remus weren't sure that they were together before their death.  Is this supposed to be indicative that they weren't really supposed to be together?  Unlike Lucius and Narcissa, who never stray from each other's sides?

Severus is drawn to her whether he wants to be or not.  Interesting note that Lucius and Narcissa are there, but not interacting with anyone.

It's too funny that Moody is the wiseman, considering everyone believed him to be somewhat mad!  Nice to see Hermione is still remembered by more than just Severus and good explaination of why Sirius is somewhat different to the rest.  It leaves me with the question of what she would be like if she were to die there?

Good to see she's found him easily.  However, it's somewhat ominous that he's in the Elysian field.

Interesting start.