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Snapewatch
a_bees_buzz66 Reviews | 7.11/10 (66 Ratings, 0 Likes, 43 Favorites )
The end of the war should have been a time for happily-ever-afters. For Severus Snape, it was the beginning of the greatest torment of all. He had survived the meddling of a master manipulator and the machinations of a mad megalomaniac, only to find himself subjected to the whims of an annoying know-it-all.
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They are so stubbornly adorable together!
i like the subtlety.
I love how you navigated the start of the sex scene- especially the 'assorted yeses' line. I've never seen that before- you're original! Really, I was surprised to see something both new and reasonable in that context. So much of it cliche and sort of set. I liked the rest of the story too, mind you. Just plain loved it. But I pick that one moment because it surprised me. Toodles! -Liv
Hermione can be a bit dense sometimes. I loved the ending. I think they're made for each other. :)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
She does tend to obsess about the little things, but she's clever enough to see the big picture when it's pointed out to her. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing.
oh very nice. I did enjoy this. Finch-Felching... HEE HEE.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Thank you. Glad I could make you giggle.
Oh fun! I keep reading stories to get over the trauma of reading the last book. This should do nicely. The fact that there is some humor involved is always a plus.Miriam
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
The last book? Was there a last book? We'll, I suppose there was, but Severus wasn't actually in it. Right? :D
sequel? please? I really loved this. It was different than most stories =]
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Funny you should ask. I'm thinking about an epilogue, though not a sequel. Just a bit more on how their relatiionship works. It's a definite maybe.I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Lovely! I like the way it's understated at the end, it makes sense with the rest of the plot. I just adore your food porn (or in this case your food PG)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Definitely food PG. *chortle* Most of it's not even food I like (though I'm quite happy with a roast dinner), but it fit the characters and the story. I'm still thinking about the ending - I may give in and write an epilogue.
"Seven and a half minutes" Truly the patience of a saint. *insane giggling*
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
She knows he can't resist! There are so many stories where he knows exactly how to push her buttons, I thought it was time she got to push his. :D
Anonymous
Quite an unusual and fascinating tale. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
I liked the chapter but I wished it had a little more in the ending. It was still good - they just did seem excited with the possibilities of what they were undertaking. I still enjoyed it.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I'm sorry if the ending disappointed you. While I do love a grand, romantic declaration of feelings, it didn't seem to fit this version of Severus. He's been fighting her every inch of the way in the development of this relationship. If he suddenly became enthusiastic and emotionally open, it wouldn't fit his character. I wanted to show how a man who is unwilling to openly express his feelings can still show them in little, subtle ways - like cooking for her and sharing his work with her. I imagine that they are both very excited, and very nervous, but it's not in their characters to show those feelings.
Oh, that was sweet. I rather enjoyed the whole story.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Thank you so much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Ahh so the "Sneaky Snape" was holding out on all things good until she relented. I like it Ilike it! Well done. Irish
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I wasn't thinking of it so much as waiting till she relented. In my mind, he was raised in an old-fashioned tradition, where you use the good china and the dining room for guests. As long as he didn't have a choice, none of them were his guests, and he wasn't going to honor them by using the good stuff. But your interpretation works just as well. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)
Oh I was not just talking about the dishes. I was meaning his personality and the man himself. He was not going to be coerced into living! Though she obviously made an impact on him. Irish
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Sorry, I misunderstood. I agree - he was too stubborn to willingly share any of himself with her under coercion, but despite his best efforts she managed to drag him (kicking and screaming every inch of the way) back to some sort of functionality.
Nice story with a great ending " then you should go to bed... will you show me where it is?"
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews. I really enjoy finding out what readers pick up on in my stories, and your reviews made my evening.
I like the way he got around the rules and still managed to disparage the students!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
That's the Slytherin in him! It's also him starting to be his old self again - I rather think Hermione planned it that way.
Poor Molly, she's his incentive to get better , isn't she?
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I know there are people who think of Molly as the perfect mom, but I think she'd get on Severus' nerves in a serious way.
Hermione 1 : sorting hat 0 !
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I've never liked that hat - it talks about inter-house ties, but it keeps on categorizing and labeling kids. I quite enjoyed taking a piece out of it. :D
*sigh*I love this story. You should write more humour. Then, I'd make you more icons.Oh, who am I kidding? I'll make you more icons, anyway, I'm sure.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I can't always write humor, I'd get bored and my writing would get stale. But I do go for the funny fairly regularly.*huggles my icons*
ah, delightful. a thoroughly delightful ending to a thoroughly delightful story. and i learned a new word, although one with limited usefulness! and am sitting consumed with envy of people who get to use the phrase 'naughty bit of baggage' without sounding incredibly pretentious. lucky brits. anyway. i loved the humor, as always, and found the ending just sweet enough. well done!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Should I ask which word, or just make my own assumptions? :DI quite agree that the Brits have much more fun expressions than we Yanks. Part of the joy of writing in this fandom is the chance to use them.Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
i'm pretty sure you know which word! ; ) i googled it and found there is a town in michigan called felch. but then the challenge of using the britishisms in the stories is to not sound like a yank faking it. i find it rather daunting, but i suppose it becomes easier with practice.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
There's a town? OMG, that must be embarrassing for the people who live there!It is a challenge, and I'm not sure I always rise to it, but I have an advantage - my husband is half-British, half-Australian, so he can picks out the worst of my glaring Americanisms.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
hopefully most of the people who live there don't know what it means! oh, and it's also a last name - felch. don't know about felcher.i think you do a good job, but what do i know - i'm a yank! and my bf is puerto rican, so he's no help! lol!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
You obviously need to introduce a Puerto Rican OC! ;D
yery sweet storythsnk you
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
You are quite welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Loved it. Utterly entertaining. Well done!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Thank you so much!
I'm glad Severus is recovering, but the ending was a bit fast. Will there be an epilogue?
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
I wasn't planning one, as I feel like all the essential elements of his recovery and the establishment of their relationship are there. I'm sorry if you are disappointed.
Anonymous
Hehehe. This was a cute ending. Love time dancing a fandango at the end!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Dancing time is sort of a hat-tip to Pratchett, who anthropomorphises time (among other things) so wittily in his Discworld series.
That was cute, and I love the way Neville got him to start teaching well.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of Snapewatch)
Thank you. There's a whole backstory in my mind where the Gryffindors were competing to be the one to push him over the edge and make him do something that would get him in trouble. So they are deliberately pushing his buttons, each in their own way. I couldn't figure out how to write it in without messing up the structure of the piece.