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Another Love Letter
chivalric37 Reviews | 6.19/10 (37 Ratings, 0 Likes, 33 Favorites )
Quite unexpectedly, Hermione Granger falls in love with her colleague, Professor Snape. Obviously, she pours her heart out on paper.
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chivalric
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Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Another Love Letter
Beloved Severus,.. SQUEE!!!! Ooh, I like this even better than part 1 :) Love the way she starts out with "you are every bit as nasty as you were when I was your student" and then immediately gets diverted into how sexy he is. Delightful!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
He's the bravest man Harry ever knew - but she was even braver.Yay!(It's only a quiet "yay". I'm afraid I'm crying quite unnecessary tears for some stupid reason...)
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Today is a dark day for me; kind word are just what I need *hugs*
I'd love to know what Severus wrote. No doubt it would make tears come to my eyes. Hermione's letter certainly made my heart clench.Great story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you for reading and reviewing both letters!
Awww. Sugarcoated sugar with some sugar icing.I haven't read the first letter, but: awww....What is it with you that makes me not only accept unlawfully behaviour but find it most enchanting?Breaking into his quarters, eh? Old habits die hard, I'd say. And about Snape: From book two on I am obsessed with the man suddenly and silently appearing behind others. And there: He did it again and it was so lovely.Very well written. It was so sweet and made me feel so warm from within.No stars, though. But only as I try to keep up my new rating policy: No stars for no one. (You have the questionable honor of enjoying it as the first author. I hope you approve regardless.)
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Hi, there,no stars, eh? You must explain that to me sometime ;-)As to the unlawful behaviour: I just play, dear. I put people into nasty situations and watch them struggle. A major character problem, I suppose *g*I like Snape ever since someone tried to kill him. Ever since, I try to save him, mostly successfully. In case you plan to continue with my other stories: there should be the propper warnings up whereever I decided to write a darkfic. In any case, thanks for reviewing, and I will reply to your mail later in the week.
Yes, now that you mentioned that there is a sequel, I did find it! This 'letter' is funny ... the poor girl sounds like she's on the verge of hyperventilating. She rattles on and shifts directions, insistent chatter in print. Whereas in Severus' letter, he appears to be writing TO her, but Hermione's letter seems to be more of a cathartic spilling of her guts just to have it out. Thank goodness for Gryffindor spontaneity; be it breaking and entering or delivering mail in person.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Couldn't help the hint for the sequel ;-) Yep, Hermione writes just as she talks, and I truly think initially, she had no intention of giving him the letter. But as he said: she is brave ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
There is not a proper word for describing this awesome story.Vey well done
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing it and had in mind hermione and Snape scribbling on their parchments.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing it and had in mind hermione and Snape scribbling on their parchments.Thanks for reviewing!
aww, how sweet. I'm glad to see that poor Severus gets his angst-filled Heart's desire. It was very sweet. I could actually see them having that kind of reaction to the letters. And of course Hermione would be the one to act first...it's that Gryffindor Bravery I think. Severus is far too Slytherin to do something so bold. I think you captured these essences quite well in this one (and it's first half too)
I should probably go off to review the first one of the set, and will in a minute...
First I'm going to answer the question I know comes to your mind, as this is the second review in less than an hour...yes. I'm reading most (if not all) of your stuff now, as I've found I like your writing style. It's what I do when I find an author I like (and have a day off to spend vegging out in front of the computer).
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
*grins* I'm very honoured that you at least plan to read most of my stories, but be warned, that's quite a lot to read. Most are one-shots, but a few are of lenght. Currently, all are finished, although I'm working on a WIP at the moment.Thanks so much for your detailed review - I love it when readers give me detailed feedback, as it helps me to find out what I could have done better...Hugs from Germany, and enjoy what you read ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
*grins* I'm very honoured that you at least plan to read most of my stories, but be warned, that's quite a lot to read. Most are one-shots, but a few are of lenght. Currently, all are finished, although I'm working on a WIP at the moment.Thanks so much for your detailed review - I love it when readers give me detailed feedback, as it helps me to find out what I could have done better...Hugs from Germany, and enjoy what you read ;-)
Yippie! Hooray! I love it when a plan comes together!Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
lol. i just read both love letter fics. how can something be cute and depressing at the same time? very nice work.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Huh! I hope the depression left with the last paragraph of Another Love Letter. After all, a happy life lies ahead of them!
What a great follow-up. I must admit to having a heavy heart when Snape's letter went into the grate, but then Hermione's letter counterbalances it making everything right in the world. Cheers
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I love this one, is so perfect!!! I cry like a baby!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
:-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Thanks for writing! i was glad to see Severus' letter answered. I would expect both of them to be too stubborn and scared to show the other the letters. Thank God Hermione is a gryffindor. nice writing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
And she is brave ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Very nice - i was hoping there was a sequel and here it is. I can see both of them being too stubborn/scared to talk to each other in a normal situation. Thanks for writing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
"Your bed is ridiculously small, Severus"Now there is a line I have never read before in fanfiction!! Thanks for the mushy one shot! It was fun.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
:-) I tend to imagine him as an asket. So his bed would be small and hard - but luckily, there's always the floor *g*Thanks for reviewing!
Lovely, lovely!Severus is right that Hermione is much braver (or foolish) than him in matters of the heart.It`s so ironic that Severus only imagined himself breaking into Hermione`s room, but that she did indeed do the deed. That was funny and very courageous (and stalkerish) of Hermione. ;) I am glad they found each other.Thank you very much.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
I have to thank you for reading this - and the other - letter. And of course for leaving a review!
Nice sequel... it was lovely.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much. I fear I always find a way to bring those two together...
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much. I fear I always find a way to bring those two together...
As usual, fantastically written. I'm sure a film must be on the way soon:)
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Yeah, No 6 is out sort of soon ;-)Thanks for reviewining, dear. Now go on to the next one!
Urgent persoanl matters. Oh, yes! I am all in favor of attending to urgent personal matters! Thanks for writing this lovely little sequel. It would have been cruel to leave us alone and heartbroken. along with Snape. I just love a happy ending and this has so much promise for a wonderful future in it. Thank the heavens for brash Gryffindor courage.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Couldn't help it. I hereby admit that I had planned it like that from the beginning. It is rare that I write dark stories without a happy end.Thanks again for letting me know you liked what you've read!
In your response to my review for "Love Letter", you asked me to let you know whether or not I like your sequel to that story...and I do, very much indeed! I'm still a bit curious as to what prompted Hermione to give Severus the letter when she wrote that she tried not to write it and didn't have the courage to give it to him -- apparently, Gryffindor bravery (or recklessness?) stepped in to save her from going crazy, since it seems fairly clear that she was frustrated nearly to the point of losing her mind! It's too bad that most stories in real life don't end this happily, isn't it? I suppose that's why we need them -- if we can't have them in real life, at least we can have them in our imagination (even though it's somewhat cold comfort)...
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Hi! And thanks for your nice and detailed review. Of course I couldn't let Hermione keep her letter, and I figured she'd be rather angry, being driven to a course of action by her own emotions. Unlike Snape, she can't hide her feelings, so first she writes the letter and then has to give it to him, despite her own words not to do so. In my opinion, they are made for each other. And yes - most stories in real life don't end like that. But better small comfort than none ;-)
Response from MlleGigi (Reviewer)
You make a good point -- if the canon is any indication, almost all Gryffindors are extremely bad at (if not thoroughly incapable of) hiding their emotions. I think that's one of the reasons why I suspect that if I had gone to Hogwarts, I would be a Ravenclaw. Albus Dumbledore is the only example of an inscrutable Gryffindor that I can think of right off the top of my head -- but then again, if memory serves, he's also had over one hundred years to work at it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Hi! And thanks for your nice and detailed review. Of course I couldn't let Hermione keep her letter, and I figured she'd be rather angry, being driven to a course of action by her own emotions. Unlike Snape, she can't hide her feelings, so first she writes the letter and then has to give it to him, despite her own words not to do so. In my opinion, they are made for each other. And yes - most stories in real life don't end like that. But better small comfort than none ;-)
Response from MlleGigi (Reviewer)
You make a good point -- if the canon is any indication, almost all Gryffindors are extremely bad at (if not thoroughly incapable of) hiding their emotions. I think that's one of the reasons why I suspect that if I had gone to Hogwarts, I would be a Ravenclaw. Albus Dumbledore is the only example of an inscrutable Gryffindor that I can think of right off the top of my head -- but then again, if memory serves, he's also had over one hundred years to work at it!
Again it's beautiful. You put so much of them in their respective letter. While Severus' was dark, and written with despair, Hermione's is cheerful and sometimes humourus. Viva "Griffindorian courage". And Viva your brilliant and sensitive mind.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thank you so much! Right now there's a big, happy smile in my face thanks to you review.
"took what belonged to her"
Perfect ending!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
:-)))) Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
:-)))) Thank you!
Insert "AWEE" Here-- heehee loved it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thanks, dear!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Thanks, dear!
I'm glad you were able to use my Quiddich poster idea. And thanks for the sequel. After readinbg both letters, I think Severus and Hermione each are probably too dangerous for anyone else.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Really, I didn't look at it from that angle yet *g* But you are absolutely right. They earn each other!
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Really, I didn't look at it from that angle yet *g* But you are absolutely right. They earn each other!
Thanks for reviewing!
Hee! They're really quite perfect for each other, what with the spying and obsessive feelings and all. :-D
I'm very glad Hermione's Gryffindor courage made her give him her letter, instead of destroying it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Another Love Letter)
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!