Well I suppose Draco was the logical one, he has the money and was in debt to Severus for what he did on the Asttronomy tower.

Now they both have a job to do, how will she get him out of the hospital, perhaps they will release him to anyone who comes to claim him as no-one has before?

oops , they distracted themselves at the crucial moment LOL

would that we all could have dreams like that .... sigh..

The book seems to be simply a mechanism to enable them to understand each other, maybe then they will simply know what to do.

sounds like she has grown up more than he has

bewitching beginning, wonder what happens next?

What a lovely ending.

WOW!! Thank you, that was beautiful.  I just read the whole fic in one go and I loved every moment of it.  I shed a few tears and smiled, you know that you are a true writer if you can move your readers like that.  Well done.

That was a wonderful story!!  I looked forward to each and every chapter as you wrote them so well.  You took a rather well known part of the books and changed it into a very fascinating story with many twist and turns.  Thank you for sharing your talent with those of us who have none.  We appreciate the stories you bring to us and the enjoyment we receive from them.

I loved this story - what a great original concept. How you took him from dark and unhappy to them in love - it was brillant and well written and I enjoyed it all.

I loved the entire story, but there is something about this final chapter that I, in my sudden lack of vocabulary, will call beautiful.  This was so poeteic.  You painted the beauty of their souls in their entirety so well that it made me yearn to be able to do that as well.Thank you for posting this.  It was a real treat!

I just love the way you have described their souls... the journey they took through their memories. Brilliant!

Oh, Draco has some sort of redemption appearing, it seems. I'll be interested in seeing if you are just casually mentioning him here or if that will be a full story arc.

Oh, Severus is on a mission. Hermione better come up with a good reason for pulling his body out of that hospital.

I love it so far! I've never read a story quite like this - great job! Keep it up! :cheers:

Please don't leave us for to long wondering.  What a wonderful story

Adding Draco was a good twist!I hope you put more of him in the story,hes my second favorite guy!

I wonder how Draco was able to leave the Shrieking Shack with Severus without people noticing. Did Draco know that Severus's oul was missing, but he was still alive? Perhaps Draco thought that Severus was attacked by a dementor as well as Nagini. Hopefully Severus won't be upset that Hermione is sleeping next to his body.

It seems as if they were married or else magically connected another way. I wonder whether the marriage would be valid outside of Hermione's mind. It would be quite strange if their marriage certificate appeared at the Ministry of Magic.Hopefully Hermione won't have too much difficulty retaining Severus's body. It would be nice if she could learn how the body arrived at the hospital.

I am glad that they are both comfortable enough with each other to use the other's given name. Especially now that they've admitted to caring about each other and have had sex. The problem about having a dream lover is that no one will believe you when you tell them you're already in a relationship. Hopefully Hermione doesn't do anything during her hours awake that would jeopardize her relationship with Severus.

The book seems very strange. I am not exactly sure why Healer Shalva recommended it. It seems to have brought them closer together, but not told them more about their dilemma. Maybe when they understand each other better their souls can separate?

How heartbreaking - the way his physical body is all that is left and it is existing like a zombie of some kind... Poor Hermione taking him home and sleeping in the same bed with him while the only way she can truly be with him is to go to sleep and then be with him in her mind. I do hope they riddle out the problem of his restoration. Good writing.

I have a feeling that Hermione and Severus will discover a way to separate him from her mind . . . but that his soul will go to the Otherworld rather than to his body. Hopefully their relationship together will at least help each other cope with the past and their feelings. I wonder what Hermione is going to do at St. Mungo's. Maybe talk with some patients?

I hope that Severus's soul knows where it prefers to go before they try to join it with his body. If he doesn't want a life with Hermione, then he would probably prefer to be dead. I feel that the more time they spend together in Hermione's mind the more likely his soul will join his body, but I definitely might be wrong.