I didn't think their relationship would be up so quickly. Not that I complain of course. It's a nice surprise.

Needed this chapter here, you did well

awe.... that was a cute way to end the chapter, and I think if the other teachers are going to gossip, they should jsut start going at it like rabbits in the teachers room one day...

Well at least they had the first kiss - it was a good chapter. I can see everyone at Hogwarts all forming an opinion on the relationship and gossiping. It is very true to form. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Wow - the scene with Severus by himself in the bedroom was so sensual - very good. I liked the set-up with Hermione talking to her mother about a relationship possibility with Severus - it is good to set them both up on the same page even though the do not know it.

Well, this went well - and this time, they managed all right. I kept waiting for something eles to happen, though *grin*.

Author's Response: Oh, this is only the first step. Something else will happen before the end of the story ;)

Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: I suppose I wasn't clear enough - I didn't mean this kind of "something else", but another interruption or disturbance or another "muscle incident", as they had already been interrupted two times...

Author's Response: Did you see my mind? I think I've lost it in the gutter... The disturbance will merely be real life and the preparations for Voldemort's defeat anniversary.

Severus is very close to getting what he wants... and now is the time he gets to enjoy his hard work.

Oh, such a sweet ending! Very good chapter. The writing was wonderful, excellent flow. Will these two get some private time in the near future? I see our days slipping away...!

Author's Response: Thank you. And yes, they will, before the end of the week. Severus promised himself as much.

Great chapter, I'd love to have a better insight on Minerva.  I suspect she would be the female authority figure Hermione would respect the most.

Interesting chapter. I cannot wait to see how he seduces her and especially away for Ron... this should be interesting.

An entire year, and still nothing really happened... well, well... ;o) I hope he has better luck with his jaw next time. Like falling into her arms when his leg gives way or the like... *g*

Author's Response: There was that little matter of Ron being in the way for a time, then Hermione needed time to realise a few things. But "things" will happen.

Oh---so close!! I hope Minerva butts out--nosy old biddy!

This seems to be the first time Hermione has realised Severus was manipulating her. Hopefuly by the time she realises the extent of his manipulation she will be to far gone...

Poor Severus. What an awful situation for such a proud and private man to be in. Luckily for him Hermione is such a quick thinker!

I can't quite figure out where his head is at the moment. i know he wants to use Hermioen to regain his standing in the wizarding world, but he seems to be enjoying her company more each time he sees her. I think he may be getting in deeper than he thought!

Severus seems to be feeling slightly better noe that he has some schemes in progress. I cant wait to see what he is plannig for Australia.

Poor Snape. I don't blame him for holding such a grudge against the three of them. If they had just checked to see if he was even alive... Oh well, I suppose he will have to learn to live with his disabilities.

Yay! I was upset when I thought you would end the story after just seven days. I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!

Good grief, why has he taken a year to get the girl, what has he been doing the old slow poke LOL

hmmm Hermione is now chasing Severus, wh's chasing Hermione.  Her mom approves and Minerva doesn't.  Looks like fun is to be had....

Poor Severus, what a time for his muscles to fail him! Hopefully they'll both have more luck next time.

Doh... a missed kiss. I know that Severus had plotted and manipulated in order to get Hermione to be with him, but I really can't say there is anthing wrong with it. I mean, how is it any different from any other guy who sees a girl he likes and sets out to get her? Severus just has better intelligence for that sort of thing.

I can't wait to see how Severus picks apart Ron. Ron is a child for all that he is of age, and Severus has so much more to offer Hermione.

please update soon. it's wonderful so far.

What an interesting idea, the muscle problem.  Quite plausible.  And potentially quite humiliating.  I like the way Hermione jumps right into organizing things for him just like she does for Harry and Ron.  And that he has to keep biting his tongue to keep from chasing her off.