Love it!!!!  I hope you continue the story line just a bit longer..

I think this is the third time I've read this and I enjoy as much as the first time.  I will always love Severus' way of shutting up Hermione with a passionate kiss. 

Very good, loved it...hate Viktor...can't stand him in a story..skipped that part LOL

But loved the HG/SS parts.

good job.

I can't believe she jumped out of a wnindow for him! That's going to keep him up wondering. And Ron IS an idiot.

Very exciting chapter!!I enjoyed the witty banter very much and the great characterization of your "cast"!

I'd trust Harry and Severus, but not Ron--he's abandoned them before. You're right, fairy floss is so very wizarding world.

I really enjoyed watching all the things Severus thought about Hermione and seeing how their relationship is beginning to develop. Your story is well-crafted and just draws me right in.

I don't know why, but there is nothing sexier than helping a man tie his tie- I can't explain it, it's hot. I'm very curious as to what went down between these two!

Good story!

Livvy

Quite an intriguing start, Shug!  I love the fact she really would jump out a window if he said so - and am already wondering what in heaven's name she will have done in six months' time to justify being so badly injured and to make him think she has betrayed him (with Ron? or Krum? or in some other way?).  Because, of course, we know his suspicious nature all too well - you might think that he would be able to recognize what her trust in him means, but he so believes that the way he reacts to things is the way she will, as well.  I am very much looking forward to his education in your capable hands.And it is a lovely touch to have Hermione resort to good old-fashioned copy-it-down-with-a-ballpoint when the magical Xerox doesn't work!

[Pardon my ignorance, but what is EWE?  (Surely not a very large sheep....)]

Just one of my many favorites during the exchange.

Oh Severus, why must you always dissect everything and always come to the worst of conclusions? Hermione has never been known for her duplicity. *sighs*

Great start to a wonderful story!

Somehow, I think her imagined offense is a misunderstanding. Guess I'll have to wait and see.

This looks like a very interesting story. It was a great start.

Interesting beginning.  Very promising.  I look forward to more.

This is very intriguing so far. I look forward to finding out what happened between them in Bulgaria.

OI, what a great start.

I like how you have been so detailed as to what treatments he is using and why. It gives an impression of the severity of her injuries. Great job!

This is such a skillfully written chapter.  I am so drawn in!  So much mystery, so much intrigue... I am definitely going to be following this story!

Intriguing beginning! I'm very curious to read more.

Very well written too!

Excellent piece of writing!  Your character development is amazing.  Their behavior is always believable because it fits perfectly with what we know of them, especially Severus in this case, since it's from his point of view.  His actions were exactly what we would expect from JKR's Snape, but were validated because of your characterization.  Thanks for sharing your work!

Argh! But that's not enough!! Any chance at epilogue? No? *pouts*

Oh heck, I love this story anyway. I really like the way the story starts right off where Hermione had been hurt and then the flashback. Lovely. Ooh, and the part where Severus had been virgin too! That was one hot sex scene. Even if Hermione was the one who lead... I think this is great, with Hermione being somewhat older and more experience when it come to relationship and had been the one who taught Severus that. She sound more mature and then the age difference is not so apparent. Added to the intense and mystery of the story, I only hope this could be longer...4 chapters is not nearly enough when you can write like this...

Anyway, good job! Looking forward for more from you. :)

totally satisfying conclusion. dopey severus for running away - again! but i loved your scene of hermione ranting and not letting him get a word in edgewise. very funny, and sweet, resolution.

your lead-up to the seduction, and how you handled that scene, was quite wonderful. and the breakup was one of the most heartbreaking scenes i've ever read. i am really glad that i am reading this now, when it is finished, because i don't have to wait to get to read the next chapter.

stunning. what i liked best about this chapter was the way you depicted her trust in him, capping it off with the post-flying scene of them, showing his concern for her. i also like the "fairy floss" connection. it is not only the most magical term, but also kind of poetical. nice.

this is such a beautifully written chapter, and such an intriguing beginning. the part where she apologizes for whatever she did to make him leave was so poignant. off i go to read some more!

This was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I loved how Hermione had already forgiven him and was waiting for him at *home*. I don't think Severus, insecurities or no, will ever doubt Hermione again. You've given them a strong and loving relationship.  =)

Loved this chapter - I am glad they got everything straight and the make-up scene was just perfect - great story and it was only 4 chapters - fantastic short story