What a lovely ending.  The relationship wasn't rushed, it just sort of happened on its own.  Nicely done.

I am just out, looking for old stuff that I have never read.  This is a fun start.  I will admit that when Hermione jumped into Snapes lap and kissed him I was thinking that it had better be a dream, or there was no way I could continue reading.  Lucky for me it was.  They are going to have it so bad for one another by the time all is said and done, LOL.  :)

Wonderful tale! I enjoyed the idea that there were capsules of toxin from Nagini within her victims still. That was a a wonderful twist.

Are you sure you want it to end?Maybe you can write a part two.I'd love to see on things are betweeen the two a year form now.Great story,I guess thats why I hate it ending so much.

Are you sure you want to leave off there?I think we need a part two!I'd like to know what happens on weekends,I loved the story though,it makes you wish it could of really ended like this.

C'mere, little plot bunny...have some nice lettuce....

More of this would be ever so yummy, now that they've begun to figure out how to communicate, and now that she's started to understand why he is as he is and what he's afraid of.  And with his help, she could do some very interesting things.  Some of them would even be things the children could watch.  Not all of them, though.

Very well done!

Thank you, I really enjoyed this story.  It doesn't really feel finished, though.  I do hope you'll follow through on the sequel ideas!

Oh, they are coming along so nicely! Even having what for him passes for a civilized conversation!

Will she figure out what his nasty father has to do with his reluctance to use his left arm? Will she show him more interesting things to do with said arm? Will we all be disappointed that this terrific story is almost over already?

"Requesting funds to purchase powdered bicorn horn and lacewing flies so that he could go screw a whore would be degrading" - he has such a twisted sense of what constitutes acceptable behavior and what does not!  You're packing quite a lot into this little fic, and I'm loving it all!

I like her idea that she can help him if she can psychoanalyze what's getting in his way, and that she can help herself if she concentrates on his problems instead of hers.  Silly girl, doesn't she know anything about interpreting dreams?  (And if she only knew what his dreams were!)

Poor Severus - if he's not careful, she'll have him up and around in no time, fulfilling every dream he could ever have!  Nicely done!

I love the story but was sad to see it end with this chapter - he is still not ready and in trouble, she is just starting her career and they just shared a kiss.... this feels like the middle of the book and not the end. It was a great story and I do hope you write more - thanks

Cute, I liked the 'getting on with life' feel of this chapter, and thank goodness she had 'friends' in triplicate!

I just re-read your story and again enjoyed it very much. I think my favourite bit is when Hermione realises that she doesn't know how job-hunting works in the wizarding world.

I loved this chapter and didn't want it to end.Can't wait till more.

Great story so far, I really like it! :o) You had me first with the dream, I thought that this was really too fast before he woke up *g*. The hell part is simply hilarious...

I'm eager to read on!

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Yes, just a bit too fast, but he didn't realize he was dreaming at the time either.  ;-)

I really like it so far.  I look forward to reading more.  Soon, I hope?

Interesting start.  I'd love to read more when your muse hits you.

:-) thank you!

:-) thank you!

Well, they are making some headway here.  It is a shame that Hermione was ignorant to the job seeking process, but at least she now has a mentor or sorts.  I loved that the first time he was unconscious in the hospital, he was making a mess of his room.  How very like him, LOL.

Oh, dear.  Hopefully there won't be any more surprises from that damned snake.  Maybe seeing the wound he inflicted on Hermione both physically and emotionally will be the catalyst for a better attitude.  Or not.  Off to find out ...

Poor Hermione.  Noone seems to understand her.  I hope she has some luck in figuring out how to help Snape, and how to let Ron down gently.

Oh, that was both sweet and utterly unsatisfying! Ugh! More, please?

I like it, nice simple ending but with plenty of potential for the reader to imagine.