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firefly124

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Romance Epilogue post-HBP/HBP compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 18,843 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Nagini's bite carried some severe consequences, and Severus has a long, rocky road to recovery ahead of him. Traveling that road leads to healing, and not just for him.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5


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10/10

LadyTuesday

No, no, no!  This can't be OVER!  NO!  I LOVE this fic!  I've been so looking forward to seeing them get together ...

Oh, PLEASE say you have a sequel planned?!?!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I do have some ideas for a sequel, but I'm not sure if/when it'll come together. Thanks for letting me know you'd like to see it. *feeds encouragement to plot bunny*

10/10

pookah

Ah, propinquity and the proprietary feeling one gets over one's charges.  Perhaps those are reasons so many injured soldiers marry military nurses.I enjoyed this chapter, which was up to the high standards I have come to expect from you.  Thank you for sharing this tale with us.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  What a great compliment!

9/10

harrypotterwanter

I was wondering whether Hermione would ever ask Severus about how to obtain a job. She never actually asked, but now she knows. Hopefully her time at work won't interfere too much with her time spent with Severus. She could always visit Severus in the evenings, though she might wonder if he'd want that after he can charm his arm himself. I wonder if Hermione is ever going to take a look at that photo album again, or if she's going to make the mistake of asking Severus about his father. I'm sure that Severus would hate being asked about his upbringing and his father in particular.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  You're right, I'm sure he'd hate that.

9/10

purple dragon

Severus ought to offer Hermione a job as a personal asestent.He could never find anyone better!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

That would definitely be one option!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

That would definitely be one option!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

sunny33

So where are the offers? I think I am as confused as she is :)

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

There's an office in the Ministry, sort of a subdepartment of the Examiners who oversee the N.E.W.T.s and O.W.L.s, and they make available lists of who scored O's and E's on their N.E.W.T.s, and interested employers leave written offers with them.  It is an odd system, but then, the wizarding world is full of odd systems, so I thought this approach would about fit.  :-)  Sorry it's confusing.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

now I see, thanks for explaining that!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

There's an office in the Ministry, sort of a subdepartment of the Examiners who oversee the N.E.W.T.s and O.W.L.s, and they make available lists of who scored O's and E's on their N.E.W.T.s, and interested employers leave written offers with them.  It is an odd system, but then, the wizarding world is full of odd systems, so I thought this approach would about fit.  :-)  Sorry it's confusing.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

now I see, thanks for explaining that!

10/10

sinbad

It is interesting to see Severus fill in for her Head of House, really, why didn't Minerva tell her this ages ago?  Oh well, she must have been busy like Hermione is.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Well, Hermione did miss her 7th year, when this sort of thing would normally be covered.  And then the war and the rebuilding ... she just sort of fell through the cracks.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Well, Hermione did miss her 7th year, when this sort of thing would normally be covered.  And then the war and the rebuilding ... she just sort of fell through the cracks.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

ladyluv

Oh good chapter - I liked the Severus was informing Hermione of what she did not know about the offers - shame of McGonagall let the brighest witch that probably ever came through Hogwarts and a war hero twist in the wind - McGongall should have been telling her these things.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  Well, Minerva's had her hands a bit full what with rebuilding Hogwarts.  But yes, it's a good thing Severus was able to fill in the gaps! :-)

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  Well, Minerva's had her hands a bit full what with rebuilding Hogwarts.  But yes, it's a good thing Severus was able to fill in the gaps! :-)

9/10

ladyljd

This story has been a delight to read so far but this has been my favorite chapter.  While the belated counciling session was delightrul I'm really intrigued by Snape's issues with his left arm.  You have my head full of theories and questions: is it because of the Dark Mark or has he always known how to use it and once put it to diabolical purposes??  Anyway, thanks so much for giving me such thoughts to ponder.  And please keep these great chapters coming!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this, and I'm certainly enjoying your theories!  The next chapter should be up in a few days.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this, and I'm certainly enjoying your theories!  The next chapter should be up in a few days.

9/10

Anonymous

Oh dear, poor Snape. The news about his arm must really be devastating for him, even if he learns doing magic with his left. I'm really wondering about his reluctance to use his left one now, though. Must be a serious thing...


And so very interesting to see how their relationship changes. This renewed poisoning did have some benefits, then, didn't it?


Great new chapter, again I can't wait to read on!



Author's Response:

Yes, there is a silver lining!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  The next chapter should be up in a few days.

10/10

pookah

Another excellent chapter.  What an interesting and original idea about the venom.  YOu keep the characters IN character, and the story moves briskly along, with interesting plot turns.  Good job! 

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm glad you like the bit about the venom and feel the characters are staying IC.  More soon!

10/10

pookah

great funny bits: the badger and the troll, love the understated humor.  Your Hermione is great, overthinking, wondering, worrying.  Excellent characterization.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the humorous bits and find Hermione IC.

10/10

pookah

Reminds me of the time I spent last year living at a friend's house and forcing the physical therapy after a knee replacement.  :-)Good beginning, he's very Snape-ish, indeed.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

I'm glad to hear this comes across as realistic, given that you've experienced something similar!  Thanks!

9/10

ladyluv

Oh man - I had hoped Severus was getting better but it now he is worse. Poor Hermione and the glass - they are having a bad luck draw - I cannot wait to see where you take them.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Yes, definitely a run of bad luck.  More soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

9/10

ladyluv

Poor girl - she is so torn up about going back to the school. I think she cried more in this chapter than all the others. I cannot wait to see what happens between her and Severus.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

She really is traumatized.  More soon!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

purple dragon

Poor Severus!he was doing so good too.That was a good twist about the snake venum.I hope Hermione comes back to see him soon.He needs her more than eather one of them know.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

It is quite a setback for him.  I'm glad you liked the twist with the venom.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

9/10

harrypotterwanter

Well, it looks like Hermione, or someone else, will have to work with him far longer now in order to try to correct his arm. If Severus's right arm does not heal, then he will probably have to start using his left arm for things. Hopefully Severus didn't injure Hermione's feelings for him too badly. He'll need all the help he can get, even if he doesn't want it.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Yes, he's definitely going to need help, whether he wants it or not.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Anonymous

Oh my, what an unexpected turn of events! Poor Severus, having to start all over again... if possible. I like the chapter very much, it is very dense and shows both nicely IC, I think. Can't wait to read on *gnaws on nail* ;)


 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're liking this and find them both IC.  More should be coming soon!

10/10

sinbad

I always wondered when Severus would snap and lose control (staying in control for twenty years is amazing).  How will he react to Hermione's injury, and what will she do.  I suspect she will have quite a bit to say on the matter.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Yes, he is an incredibly controlled person, but when he loses it, he loses it big.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  Thanks for the reviews!

10/10

sinbad

Hermione is so much in character that I had to laugh at some of her actions, especially her arguing with Severus.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're finding her in character and that she's making you laugh!

10/10

sinbad

I loved the line "He restrained the urge to suggest her liver."  it was quite 'Snape like'.  The nocturnal dream he had was funny as well.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked that line and found it 'Snape like.'

10/10

LadyTuesday

brilliant chapter.  Can't wait for the next!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  More should be coming soon!

0/10

OpalJade

I like this story! Very well written and quite witty too!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and find it witty!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and find it witty!

0/10

sarahetc

This is very interesting and I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes.  The tone is thoughtful and I really enjoy your characterization: secretive, sarcastic Snape who's trying to keep everything inside and bossy, practical Hermione who solves everyone else's problems because she doesn't want to solve her own.  It's refreshing.  Really enjoyed this turn of phrase:


Get that a bit wrong, and instead of a rabbit, you’d get a very
chair-like badger that snarled and snapped and went and hid in the
fireplace until you switched hands and fixed it.


The humor is gentle and again, very Hermione.  Looking forward to what comes next!  Thanks!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it and find them in character and refreshing.  More soon!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it and find them in character and refreshing.  More soon!

10/10

Anonymous

Aaargh - evil cliffie, evil cliffie... :D


Very good chapter. Your observation of Hermione's mind and musings are very astute, as is your depiction of the whole set of events.


 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it, even with the evil cliffie. *g*



Alcina vom Steinsberg's response:

Oh, I don't mind evil cliffies at all.. provided the author is able to update in reasonable time. Some authors don't manage more than an update every other month - which I can absolutely understand and don't mind, too, but in that case, cliffhangers are really tough for the reader ;o) : In any case, a good story can have as evil a cliffhanger and take update time as much as it wants: I don't mind, as long as the story is not abandoned.



Author's Response:

I do know what you mean about long delays making cliffies difficult.  No risk of abandonment here: the story is completed and the next chapter is already in the queue.  :-)


 


 

0/10

purple dragon

Good chapter.Hermione really needs to let go and be with someune who will appercate her.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  Of course, Severus isn't doing too good a job of appreciating her yet either.  :-)

Response from firefly124 (Author of Numb)

Thanks!  Of course, Severus isn't doing too good a job of appreciating her yet either.  :-)

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