Chapter 4
Chapter 4 of 8
phoenixThe war is over, and as everyone settles back into a normal life, Hermione begins to realize that perhaps she and Ron aren’t as well suited as she thinks. When she receives strange letters from the Ministry and deceased Severus Snape, she begins to rethink her options.
Chapter 4
Hermione did her best not to let her apprehension about trusting Malfoy show externally, but she wasn’t sure that she was entirely successful. Taking hold of his arm, she prepared for the highly unpleasant sensation of Side-Along Apparition. The part she hated most was that she would be completely giving up any control of the situation. And since she had no idea where she was going, she would not be able to Apparate back out by herself.
Though the logical part of her mind realized that it was highly unlikely to be some sort of trap. After all, she would be easy enough to kidnap in her day-to-day life if that were the point.
After they arrived and the unpleasant sensation in her stomach finally subsided, she looked around and saw that they were in a rather unremarkable room. The only things in the room were a hospital bed very much like the ones in St. Mungo’s, a table and chair next to the bed, and in the bed, a very silent and unmoving Severus Snape.
At first glance, he appeared very much as she remembered him from Hogwarts, but looking closer, she noticed he was not breathing. Cautiously she moved closer and reached out tentatively to touch him. She found his skin cool to the touch. “Is he…?” She knew he had to be alive, but she could see no sign of it.
“He is in stasis. Think of your Muggle fairy tales of Snow White or Sleeping Beauty,” he offered, unable to completely keep the smugness out of his voice.
“But those are… Right. And I can treat him when he’s like this?” Once again she realized that her magical education had been woefully incomplete.
Malfoy patted his pocket. “I have the antidote to his stasis. When you have the antivenin ready, I will administer that, and then you in turn can treat him.”
“Uh-uh-uh. I haven’t agreed to treat him. I just wanted to see him, to make sure you were telling the truth.”
He dramatically placed his hand on his heart. “I am wounded that you would doubt my veracity.”
“Quit the dramatics. Why don’t you just take him to St. Mungo’s. Time is clearly not of the essence.” She wasn’t sure that was entirely true not being familiar with the state that Snape was in.
He sighed. “As I have explained, you have the curiosity, the innate intellectual prowess to find the antivenin. Not to mention the laboratory now. And no one doubts that you will honor any commitments you make to the very best of your ability. As Severus remarked, you are indeed Gryffindor to the core. ”
“Hire a Healer to use the laboratory.”
As he spoke, he walked around the other side of the bed so that he was facing her over Snape. “That’s not possible. It is your laboratory and you are the only one who can use it.”
“What are you talking about?” she asked defensively.
“I realize that you may still not be aware of all the intricacies of the magical world, so allow me to explain. Due to the nature of the laboratory and it’s contents, it may only be accessed and used by it’s owner. That is now you.”
“So give me the name of a Healer and I’ll leave it to him.”
He chuckled in a slightly condescending way. “Magic does not work like that. The only way for ownership to be transferred is through the death of the previous owner.”
She pointed at Snape. “He’s not dead, yet I now own his house. It can be done.”
“That’s not entirely true. As far as the wizarding world is concerned, he is dead. His will was executed by Magical Probate. The house, and by extension the laboratory, are yours until you depart this world for the next. You are the only one who has, and will have, the resources necessary to find the cure. His life is in your hands.”
“What are you saying? If I refuse to help…?” She was starting to feel trapped, as though someone else had suddenly taken control of her life.
“If you chose not to help, he has left instructions that heroic efforts to keep him alive are to be ceased.”
“You would take out his feeding tube? Let him starve?” She was outraged by this thought.
“Is that not the humane thing to do? Why should someone with no hope of recovery be forced to cling to the fragile human frame?”
Her head was starting to hurt with all the information she was being fed. She knew that she could not just let him die. Her Gryffindor sensibilities were forcing her to realize that she had to do something for him, had to at least try to cure him.
“Give me a couple of days to get things in order so that I can start work.”
“I’ll deliver blood samples and Nagini’s head as soon as you are ready for them.”
“The head?” The thought of working with the head of a snake, and especially that snake, made her slightly queasy.
“It was the best way to preserve the venom for analysis.”
She didn’t want to dwell on this thought. “Fine. I’ll send you an owl when I’m ready. Can we go now?”
“Of course, my dear.” He extended his elbow for her to take hold.
As she reached out, she focused on how much he had changed since the war so that she would not think about the gut-wrenching feeling she was about to experience again. She was brought back to the present when he said, “Miss Granger?”
Realizing they were back at Spinner’s End, she quickly released his arm.
“I shall await your owl,” he said before Disapparating with a pop.
Looking around the deserted street, she tried to decide what she wanted to do next. The house here was clean, but not really fit for occupation. It would be easy enough for her to spend the night going through the books in the library, exploring the laboratory – see if it was as dangerous as Malfoy claimed it was. But she knew that she also had to face Ron at some point, and the longer she took in returning, the angrier he would be. It would be easy to return to the house, pop out in the morning to get a bite to eat and bury herself once more in her research, but that would not make Ron go away.
After taking a deep, cleansing breath, she Apparated back to her flat. She stood staring at her door for several minutes before she worked up the courage to open it. As she had expected, Ron was sitting in the chair, waiting for her.
“It’s about time you got home. Where have you been?” he demanded angrily.
Rubbing her temple, she replied, “I don’t want to argue, please?” She knew there was no chance of her being allowed to go to bed without talking with him.
“Fine,” he snapped. When she glared at him, he tried to moderate his tone further. “Where have you been?”
Knowing that telling him the truth was a bad idea, she settled on a half-truth. “I needed
to be alone for a while to take in what the letter said.”
He opened his mouth, as though to start arguing, closed his mouth, and then opened and closed it several more times before asking, “Why would Snape leave a letter for you?”
She thought that it was a very well asked question. From the tone of his voice, she could tell that he was still angry with her, but he was at least holding his temper. “He was in the midst of a research project and his letter asked that I complete it.”
He eyed her suspiciously. “And because of this you ran out of the house?”
The excuse had sounded better in her mind. “Well obviously the details of the project couldn’t be put in a letter. He left instructions regarding where I could find the research. I was eager to see it for myself.”
“So are you going to do it?”
She sounded very excited as she replied, “Oh, most definitely. He has postulated several new theories on the uses of—”
Ron cut her off. “Spare me the details. How long will this take?”
“I have no idea. It’s very complex. Since I'm still waiting to hear from the Ministry, reading through the notes from the preliminary research will give me something to do to keep my mind off it.” She could see his eyes losing focus. Her deception was working and she was elated. She didn’t even mind that they slept with their backs to each other hugging their respective edges of the bed.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Letter
179 Reviews | 5.92/10 Average
A little rushed feeling at the end, but overall a charming tale, and just what I needed to decompress on this chilly fall evening. Thanks for the fun!-Wahoo
Aww, how sweet! I like that Snape wasn't even surprised to see her. He knew if he ever opened his eyes again, it would most likely be her standing there.
EEUWW! kissed by Malfoy! yuck! Bad enough Lucius has been all smarmy! Not a Malfoy fan,Wahoo
I started this story some time ago, and now I am back to read more. I am enjoying this, thank you. I agree that Hermione would have been upset about the school decision had she not had this more-important project in hand.
-Wahoo.
Hello! I just read the story all the way through and it looks and feels like you've got a sequel brewing. Well, I say write it! I like what I've read thus far and would like to read about Hermione and Snape's developing relationship furthur. Thank you!
Good. Still intriguing.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Excellent start. Just enough friction to motivate her into a course she would not have otherwise taken.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
The ending was rather abrupt, but I thank you for writing
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for reviewing. It's always hard to know where to end a story. Striking the balance between too abrupt and dragging on is very hard. I did want to leave this one open to a sequel, which I do plan on doing here in the near future. I have notes for it and just need to fill it all in.
I loved this story. It is very sweet without dragging on forever. You definitely leave a lot of unanswered questions, so I'll be looking for a sequel!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. :D I'm so glad that you enjoy it. I really do intend on a sequel. The muses have recently returned from an extended vacation and after a couple of in progress projects are done, this one is next on the list.
That's a lovely ending to a lovely story. Though I'd very much like to know what happens next. A sequel, maybe? *joins chorus*
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you very much. :D The muses are back and once I finish up an older WIP and a prompt fic, I hope to finally get to work on the sequel. I think the more I write SS/HG the more accepting I become of the pairing.
I wondered how you came up with the name Hidden Before Voting. Vote where and before when? I enjoyed this story of two clever minds finding each other. I will never understand JKR's epilogue. 19 years later and still with Ron?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and also wonder at her epilogue. As for the pen name, if you go to the Categories, and look under Challenges, you will see a Potter Place Post Deathly Hallows Challenge. All who wrote for that are having their stories posted anonymously until after the voting. There is also a link to the rules that should outline things for you. :D
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Thanks for the info. I'll check out the challenge.
Congrats on finishing! A nice romance and you provided a happy ending. Yes, more would be nice but in the end they expressed their feelings. =)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
. I'm glad that you see that it is both an ending and a beginning. :D And more is in the works so those who see it as a beginning can be happy about that. :)
This was a lovely story. Please tell me you are planning a sequal??!! There are so many unanswered questions.I like how she was so uncomfortable about the kiss that she had to blurt it out.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes indeed, I am planning a sequel. I'm so glad someone mentioned her blurting out about the kiss. I can just imagine her bursting at the seems about that. LOL
nonononooooooooooooooooooo this cannot be the end! You have to resolve Ron & Harry kicking up a fuss, hot sexxors and the happily ever after!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL Aye, aye, ma'am. :D There is a sequel in the works so many of the unresolved bits should be resolved.
What was she doing with him? The euphoria of having survived the war was well past, and she was forced to admit that they really didn’t belong together. Amen to that!!! OHNO Ron is going to continue to cause trouble isnt he?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yes, there was much rejoicing when Hermione finally told Ron the obvious. LOL AS to what he does next, stay tuned.
I don't understand why Hermione is staying with Ron - or Ron with her for that matter. They really don't seem to like each other very much. I assume a break-up looms on the horizon :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Er, would JKR wanted them together be a good answer? LOL I tried to keep it canon at the start and then diverge from there. But yeah, that is one of her odder plot decisions.
OK does this mean that they are together or what. And what happened after the Ministry was told, did they keep it quiet? And how does the public handle the news? And does Ron and Harry come back and bother them again or give up? Do they(Hermione and Severus) have sex? Get married? Have kid(s)???Don't get me wrong, I love it but what happens next? This story is awesome and I can't wait to see you are so I can read other stories by you.Tamara aka
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for your questions and your reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks to all the encouragement of the reviewers, there will be a sequel that will answer some of the questions you have asked. :D
yes, Ron, he's back and you are out so he can move in. lol
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL I kind of think she's burned that bridge anyway so it looks like there is no going back to Ron even if she wanted to.
Please continue this story, there is a lot moe "fun" do be had. I really enjoyed it.
Jeannie
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks, Jeannie. There is more 'fun' to be had and I have started work on a sequel thanks to the encouragement of my reviewers. :D
I love it though I wish there was more
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. :D There will be more in the near future as I'm writing a sequel.
I really enjoyed this story. The ending was a delightful and bit unexpected. Well done.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope that you will stick around for the sequel. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Whooo Yah! You bet'cha!
Good chapter - I cannot believe it is over - it was interesting concept and I enjoyed the story.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you liked it. While this story is over, there is another chapter in life known as a sequel coming. :D I hope you will also enjoy that.
Great chapter - I loved how quickly you let her find the cure to bring him back and I am glad she realizes that Ron and her do not make a good couple. This makes it easier to move her on with her life in the story and I cannot wait to see where you take it.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. There really wasn't much point in dragging out her search for the cure over months or longer. As for Ron... yeah, time to move on indeed. LOL
What a lovely ending, shall I expect an epilogue?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And indeed a sequel is in the works.