Chapter 1
Chapter 1 of 8
phoenixThe war is over, and as everyone settles back into a normal life, Hermione begins to realize that perhaps she and Ron aren’t as well suited as she thinks. When she receives strange letters from the Ministry and deceased Severus Snape, she begins to rethink her options.
A/N: This was written for the Winter Prompt Challenge, specifically #17. Hermione is contacted by the Ministry to say that she's been left some property in someone's will: Severus Snape! Why did he leave her his home and possessions? He's also left her a letter. What does it say or ask of her? Is he really dead?
JKR owns everything you recognize, but I had to change her ending somewhat, so just ignore the last chapter of The Deathly Hallows.
Chapter 1
Six months after the war ended, things were finally starting to return to normal. The wizarding world had been doing what it could to covertly repair some of the damage that had been caused by the Death Eaters, but it seemed painfully small compared to the massive devastation wrought by Voldemort's followers. So many lives lost, so much property ruined.
Even now the Muggles were still talking about the unnatural weather the Dementors had caused, trying to unravel the mystery. If only they could all be Obliviated, but magical correction on that immense scale was obviously impossible. The resulting chaos would only be a cure worse than the disease.
Hermione, Harry, Ron and many of the others had offered their services to the Ministry while they awaited a ruling on their status. After all, none of them had completed their seventh year at Hogwarts, but due to the damage to the school, none of their former schoolmates had taken their NEWTs either.
Her relationship with Ron had grown strained since the end of the war. She was sure that part of it was because of Fred's death and part of it was because she was stressing about their futures. Ron seemed unconcerned about their lack of NEWTs, but she could not help worrying about it, knowing how much of a wizard's future was determined by their NEWTs.
They had a flat together, but he had taken to spending a lot of time with George, helping out in the shop when he wasn't doing work for the Ministry. She was sure he would have spent more time with Harry, but he was occupied wooing Ginny. The two of them were nearly inseparable, and Hermione found that she was just a little jealous of how perfectly suited for each other they seemed. She had thought she would have that same future with Ron.
There was a tap at the window, and she let the owl in, hoping it brought the long-awaited ruling from the Ministry. Seeing the letter did indeed have a Ministry seal, she began ripping into it even as she made her way back to her favorite slightly worn but well-stuffed armchair. She was shocked by what she read.
Miss Hermione Granger,
The will of Severus Snape has gone through probate and you are named the sole beneficiary. You have been left Snape's property at 13 Spinner's End, Batley, West Yorkshire, the contents of Gringotts Vault 1199, and the enclosed envelope.
Sincerely,
Artemis Jones
Magical Probate Service
Without realizing it, she let the enclosed envelope slip from her fingers, and she was barely able to half sit, half slide into the chair before her knees buckled.
Why would Snape leave her everything? For that matter, why would he leave her anything at all? She was nothing more than just another of the students who had sat in his classes, and a Gryffindor and insufferable know-it-all to boot. Surely he would have left his things to a Slytherin, like Malfoy.
Rereading the letter, she was reminded that another sealed envelope had been enclosed. Looking around the floor, she saw that it had drifted under the coffee table. Getting down on her hands and knees, she retrieved the letter.
Examining the envelope, she saw that it was made from very unremarkable parchment and was sealed with the Hogwarts crest in green wax. Not entirely trusting Snape, she ran a series of charms on it to ensure that it was not cursed.
When she was reasonably certain that it was safe to open it, she broke the seal. As she was breaking it, it occurred to her that she should have Flooed Harry or Ron to let them observe the course of events.
Nothing happened, so she pulled the contents of the envelope out. There was a key wrapped in another piece of parchment. Flipping to both sides, she saw that it appeared to be blank, so she set it on the table. Examining the key, she thought that it looked very much like a house key. Probably his house at Spinner's End. It still didn't answer the mystery of why she had been named Severus Snape's sole beneficiary.
Leaning back against the chair, she tried to figure out what on earth this meant. Why would he wrap the key in parchment and seal it in an envelope?
She heard the Floo activate and hurriedly stuffed the key into her pocket. The last thing she needed just now was to answer questions from Ron about the letter.
He stepped out of the fire and shuffled over to the sofa before collapsing on it. "I'm exhausted. I can't believe that George has so many ideas. What's for dinner?"
Even though the routine was much the same every night, tonight she found it especially annoying. "That's all you ever think about... yourself. Never once have you asked me about my day!" She got up and stormed into the kitchen in a huff.
She wondered why she was still with Ron. He was the same frustrating, selfish person he had always been. His change during the war had been temporary, born of the stress of their situation. The disappointment that had permeated the very depth of her soul when he had abandoned both her and Harry had now returned and seemed to be taking up permanent residence in her psyche.
He entered the kitchen and demanded, "What is this?" while waving a piece of parchment at her.
"What is what?" she asked in exasperation.
"Why do you have a letter from Snape?"
"I don't have a letter from Snape!" she snapped.
"Oh no? Then what's this? 'Dear Hermione, I'm sure you are wondering why you have received this...'"
She snatched the parchment from his hand. It was the same one that the key had been wrapped in she could still see the imprint of the key in the middle of the page but it had been blank when she had last looked at it moments ago. She was sure of that. Now she realized that Snape must have charmed it so that the writing would only reveal itself after she had touched it.
"Why do you have a letter from Snape? He's dead, isn't he?" Ron asked suspiciously.
"Of course he is. He died in the Shrieking Shack." She wasn't sure how to proceed. Did she tell him the truth? What would he think? She still didn't know what she thought about this whole situation. "He left this letter through his will, and it just arrived from Magical Probate today. I hadn't had a chance to read it yet."
"But why did you lie to me when I asked you why you had a letter from Snape?" he asked suspiciously.
She realized her half-truth wasn't very convincing. She had never excelled at deception. "Because the page was blank when I took it out of the envelope. It must have fallen to the floor when the Floo activated because I was startled. Obviously it was charmed so that the text would appear only after I touched it." It was the truth, and she hoped that the truth would satisfy him.
"So what does it say?"
"I don't know. I'd like to have the chance to read it in private first. He obviously meant this for me and no one else, or it wouldn't have been protected."
"You know, no matter what he became, he was still always a big git," Ron announced before turning on his heel and leaving her alone in the kitchen.
Hermione stared after him for several seconds, remarking on how little he had changed over the years. Looking down at the parchment, she forced her eyes to focus.
Dear Hermione,
I'm sure you are wondering why you have received this letter and the key to my house. It is quite obvious that the worst has come to pass and that my will has been executed.
I know that you have many questions, especially given my behavior towards you over the years. You are the one person whom I can trust with this task. The one person who has the knowledge and skill for what I need accomplished. For safety reasons, nothing further will be put in this letter, but go to my house and hopefully all your questions will be answered.
Your servant,
Severus Snape
After staring at the letter for several seconds, she reached into her pocket and grasped the key. She had to chose between seeing what answers awaited her at Snape's house and staying here and arguing with Ron. It was an easy choice to make.
Passing through the living room, she grabbed her cloak.
"Where are you going?" asked Ron.
"Out," she replied shortly and slammed the door before he could ask any further questions. Taking the letter from the Ministry out of her pocket, she looked at the address one more time before Disapparating.
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179 Reviews | 5.92/10 Average
A little rushed feeling at the end, but overall a charming tale, and just what I needed to decompress on this chilly fall evening. Thanks for the fun!-Wahoo
Aww, how sweet! I like that Snape wasn't even surprised to see her. He knew if he ever opened his eyes again, it would most likely be her standing there.
EEUWW! kissed by Malfoy! yuck! Bad enough Lucius has been all smarmy! Not a Malfoy fan,Wahoo
I started this story some time ago, and now I am back to read more. I am enjoying this, thank you. I agree that Hermione would have been upset about the school decision had she not had this more-important project in hand.
-Wahoo.
Hello! I just read the story all the way through and it looks and feels like you've got a sequel brewing. Well, I say write it! I like what I've read thus far and would like to read about Hermione and Snape's developing relationship furthur. Thank you!
Good. Still intriguing.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Excellent start. Just enough friction to motivate her into a course she would not have otherwise taken.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
The ending was rather abrupt, but I thank you for writing
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for reviewing. It's always hard to know where to end a story. Striking the balance between too abrupt and dragging on is very hard. I did want to leave this one open to a sequel, which I do plan on doing here in the near future. I have notes for it and just need to fill it all in.
I loved this story. It is very sweet without dragging on forever. You definitely leave a lot of unanswered questions, so I'll be looking for a sequel!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. :D I'm so glad that you enjoy it. I really do intend on a sequel. The muses have recently returned from an extended vacation and after a couple of in progress projects are done, this one is next on the list.
That's a lovely ending to a lovely story. Though I'd very much like to know what happens next. A sequel, maybe? *joins chorus*
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you very much. :D The muses are back and once I finish up an older WIP and a prompt fic, I hope to finally get to work on the sequel. I think the more I write SS/HG the more accepting I become of the pairing.
I wondered how you came up with the name Hidden Before Voting. Vote where and before when? I enjoyed this story of two clever minds finding each other. I will never understand JKR's epilogue. 19 years later and still with Ron?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and also wonder at her epilogue. As for the pen name, if you go to the Categories, and look under Challenges, you will see a Potter Place Post Deathly Hallows Challenge. All who wrote for that are having their stories posted anonymously until after the voting. There is also a link to the rules that should outline things for you. :D
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Thanks for the info. I'll check out the challenge.
Congrats on finishing! A nice romance and you provided a happy ending. Yes, more would be nice but in the end they expressed their feelings. =)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
. I'm glad that you see that it is both an ending and a beginning. :D And more is in the works so those who see it as a beginning can be happy about that. :)
This was a lovely story. Please tell me you are planning a sequal??!! There are so many unanswered questions.I like how she was so uncomfortable about the kiss that she had to blurt it out.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes indeed, I am planning a sequel. I'm so glad someone mentioned her blurting out about the kiss. I can just imagine her bursting at the seems about that. LOL
nonononooooooooooooooooooo this cannot be the end! You have to resolve Ron & Harry kicking up a fuss, hot sexxors and the happily ever after!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL Aye, aye, ma'am. :D There is a sequel in the works so many of the unresolved bits should be resolved.
What was she doing with him? The euphoria of having survived the war was well past, and she was forced to admit that they really didn’t belong together. Amen to that!!! OHNO Ron is going to continue to cause trouble isnt he?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yes, there was much rejoicing when Hermione finally told Ron the obvious. LOL AS to what he does next, stay tuned.
I don't understand why Hermione is staying with Ron - or Ron with her for that matter. They really don't seem to like each other very much. I assume a break-up looms on the horizon :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Er, would JKR wanted them together be a good answer? LOL I tried to keep it canon at the start and then diverge from there. But yeah, that is one of her odder plot decisions.
OK does this mean that they are together or what. And what happened after the Ministry was told, did they keep it quiet? And how does the public handle the news? And does Ron and Harry come back and bother them again or give up? Do they(Hermione and Severus) have sex? Get married? Have kid(s)???Don't get me wrong, I love it but what happens next? This story is awesome and I can't wait to see you are so I can read other stories by you.Tamara aka
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for your questions and your reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks to all the encouragement of the reviewers, there will be a sequel that will answer some of the questions you have asked. :D
yes, Ron, he's back and you are out so he can move in. lol
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL I kind of think she's burned that bridge anyway so it looks like there is no going back to Ron even if she wanted to.
Please continue this story, there is a lot moe "fun" do be had. I really enjoyed it.
Jeannie
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks, Jeannie. There is more 'fun' to be had and I have started work on a sequel thanks to the encouragement of my reviewers. :D
I love it though I wish there was more
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. :D There will be more in the near future as I'm writing a sequel.
I really enjoyed this story. The ending was a delightful and bit unexpected. Well done.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope that you will stick around for the sequel. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Whooo Yah! You bet'cha!
Good chapter - I cannot believe it is over - it was interesting concept and I enjoyed the story.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you liked it. While this story is over, there is another chapter in life known as a sequel coming. :D I hope you will also enjoy that.
Great chapter - I loved how quickly you let her find the cure to bring him back and I am glad she realizes that Ron and her do not make a good couple. This makes it easier to move her on with her life in the story and I cannot wait to see where you take it.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. There really wasn't much point in dragging out her search for the cure over months or longer. As for Ron... yeah, time to move on indeed. LOL
What a lovely ending, shall I expect an epilogue?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And indeed a sequel is in the works.