Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 8
phoenixThe war is over, and as everyone settles back into a normal life, Hermione begins to realize that perhaps she and Ron aren’t as well suited as she thinks. When she receives strange letters from the Ministry and deceased Severus Snape, she begins to rethink her options.
Chapter 3
"May I come in?" Malfoy asked politely.
After a few seconds, Hermione found her voice. "What are you doing here?" she asked tersely.
"I prefer to discuss this in private. May I come in?"
Still in shock, she stood aside to allow him to enter, but he remained on the stoop.
Before she could ask, he replied, "There are charms on this house, and I must be verbally invited in by the owner."
"Come in," she replied, starting to get annoyed. Malfoy had once again managed to avoid any prosecution for his actions while serving Voldemort. The Wizengamot had believed his assertion that Bellatrix had placed his whole family under the Imperius curse and that they were forced to cooperate with Voldemort under threat of death. These circumstances had been seen as extenuating enough that he had been pardoned after turning in several other Death Eaters.
While they had all been disappointed, she had to admit that after watching the Malfoys in their home while they had been imprisoned there, the Wizengamot decision had probably been the right one.
Once the door was closed, she asked again, "What are you doing here?"
"I came to see you."
Now she was getting even more irritated by his inability to provide more than the barest answer to her questions. She hoped this would not continue. "This will go a lot faster if you provide more information with your answers. "Why did you come to see me and how did you know that I was here?"
He looked around the room, scanning the bookcases. "There was a charm on the house meant to notify me when someone entered. Since only you could have safely unlocked the door, I knew that you were here. As to why, I have been sent to deliver a message." Apparently finding what he was looking for, he selected a book from the shelf. Tapping it with his wand, he muttered an incantation that she could not decipher. After he opened the book, he picked up a letter and handed it to her. "Severus instructed me to deliver this to you should the house pass to you."
She eyed the letter warily, resenting even more the postmortem scavenger hunt Snape had set her on. "Why you?" she asked, still not taking the letter.
"I was told that this letter would answer all of your questions. I can say no more than that."
"Can't or won't?"
"Cannot."
Realizing that he must have taken some sort of oath and admitting to herself that she could see no reason for Snape to want to kill her, she finally took the letter. Malfoy moved away from her, giving her privacy to read the letter.
Breaking the seal, she opened the parchment and was once again met with Snape's tiny scrawl.
Hermione,
I'm sure you are wondering why I chose to leave my house to you. This letter should provide you all the explanation you need.
Obviously, the war is over. I have no doubt that the truth of the Elder Wand has been discovered. I also presume the Dark Lord incorrectly believed me to be the wand's master as I was the one to carry out Dumbledore's final wish. I will presume that the truth of that matter has come to light. If it has not, ask Albus's portrait. Now that the war is over, it should be available for consultation.
Voldemort's trust in me was always tenuous at best, but then again, you could say that about his trust in anyone who was not Bellatrix Lestrange. I do not think he suspected me of being a double agent, or else I would never have survived as long as I did.
Lucius has come to you at my request to ensure that you receive this letter. He is only here because what I expected must have finally come to pass: Voldemort has set Nagini on me. You see, I knew that he would never kill me with his wand. After creating the Horcruxes, he lost the taste for killing, realizing what it did to his soul. That is not to say that he would not kill, just that he preferred someone else to do the deed if possible.
I have never sought death, even though I knew that absolution would be difficult to gain, especially with Albus gone. But no sane person seeks premature death. As such, I tried to develop an antivenin to Nagini's bite. Unfortunately, that was impossible without a sample of the snake's venom something I have never been able to attain.
If Lucius has done as I asked, he has obtained that sample and will provide it to you once you. You may wonder why this is important.
You see, I am not dead.
She stopped reading and sank slowly to the floor as her knees refused to hold her upright. How could Snape not be dead? Harry had watched him die. She had seen his lifeless body in the Shrieking Shack.
But then again, she could not recall anyone mentioning finding his body, and to the best of her knowledge, there had never been a burial service. It hadn't seemed important with the vast number of other war dead he had just been a forgotten casualty. Returning her attention to the letter, she continued reading.
Since Lucius is there with you, my anti-toxin was at least somewhat successful at staving off my death. But no matter how good the anti-toxin, all it can do is keep me alive, likely comatose. That is why I left the house to you.
It has the books and the laboratory to brew the antivenin, and you are the only one who has the skill to do that... and the will. No other apothecary would want to save my life. As pathetic as it is, I do not believe you will let me die. Your vaunted Gryffindor honor will finally benefit me.
By now you have had time to investigate the house, and I'm sure you are wondering about the laboratory I mentioned. In the basement, next to the water heater, you will notice a particularly red brick. Tap it twice, pause, and then tap it four more times with your wand. It will reveal my laboratory, which should be fully stocked, though depending on the amount of time that has passed, some of the ingredients may need replacing.
I know that you can do this. My life depends on it.
In your debt,
Severus Snape
She had no idea what to think. Snape alive? Could he possibly still be alive after so much time had passed? And why had Malfoy simply not taken him to St. Mungo's? After all, Snape seemed to assume that he would have been exonerated surely the Healers at St. Mungo's would be better suited to saving him than she. After all, she had yet to even settle on a career and had no experience in Potions besides her schooling.
Looking up at Malfoy, she saw he had moved closer to her.
"Severus truly is alive. I have been entrusted with his safety."
"Take him to St. Mungo's," she said simply.
Malfoy shook his head. "That is not what he wants. They would have little motivation and even less ability to save him. This has to come from you."
"Me? I'm just a novice witch, one who hasn't even taken her NEWTs. And even if I had, I have no experience with complex potions." That was not entirely true since she had brewed Polyjuice Potion during her second year.
He moved closer to her. "But you have a keen analytical mind, and a rare natural talent for potions. Snape said so on more than one occasion. And you have all of the reference materials in this house. There are books here that St. Mungo's... does not have. That even the Ministry library does not have copies of. He assured me that with these books and his equipment, you would be able to find the antivenin using your keen intellect." His voice was smooth and velvety, the praise easily rolling off his tongue.
She ignored his flattery. "I want to see him."
This threw him off balance; it was clearly not the response he had expected. "It would do no good. He is unconscious..."
She interrupted. "Either I see him or I do not work on the antivenin." There was no way she would allow Malfoy to have the upper hand.
He considered her words for a few moments. "Very well. Though I will have to Apparate you there and back."
She was uncomfortable with this suggestion, but she knew that he would never let her know Snape's location. "Fine," she replied sharply. She had no idea why she was trusting him other than the fact that he had been entrusted with vital pieces of the puzzle, and she could not let this mystery go unsolved.
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179 Reviews | 5.92/10 Average
A little rushed feeling at the end, but overall a charming tale, and just what I needed to decompress on this chilly fall evening. Thanks for the fun!-Wahoo
Aww, how sweet! I like that Snape wasn't even surprised to see her. He knew if he ever opened his eyes again, it would most likely be her standing there.
EEUWW! kissed by Malfoy! yuck! Bad enough Lucius has been all smarmy! Not a Malfoy fan,Wahoo
I started this story some time ago, and now I am back to read more. I am enjoying this, thank you. I agree that Hermione would have been upset about the school decision had she not had this more-important project in hand.
-Wahoo.
Hello! I just read the story all the way through and it looks and feels like you've got a sequel brewing. Well, I say write it! I like what I've read thus far and would like to read about Hermione and Snape's developing relationship furthur. Thank you!
Good. Still intriguing.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. I tried to put some intrigue in this along with some vagueness as to what's happening. :)
Excellent start. Just enough friction to motivate her into a course she would not have otherwise taken.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yup! That was part of the fun of this one. :D
The ending was rather abrupt, but I thank you for writing
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for reviewing. It's always hard to know where to end a story. Striking the balance between too abrupt and dragging on is very hard. I did want to leave this one open to a sequel, which I do plan on doing here in the near future. I have notes for it and just need to fill it all in.
I loved this story. It is very sweet without dragging on forever. You definitely leave a lot of unanswered questions, so I'll be looking for a sequel!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks. :D I'm so glad that you enjoy it. I really do intend on a sequel. The muses have recently returned from an extended vacation and after a couple of in progress projects are done, this one is next on the list.
That's a lovely ending to a lovely story. Though I'd very much like to know what happens next. A sequel, maybe? *joins chorus*
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you very much. :D The muses are back and once I finish up an older WIP and a prompt fic, I hope to finally get to work on the sequel. I think the more I write SS/HG the more accepting I become of the pairing.
I wondered how you came up with the name Hidden Before Voting. Vote where and before when? I enjoyed this story of two clever minds finding each other. I will never understand JKR's epilogue. 19 years later and still with Ron?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and also wonder at her epilogue. As for the pen name, if you go to the Categories, and look under Challenges, you will see a Potter Place Post Deathly Hallows Challenge. All who wrote for that are having their stories posted anonymously until after the voting. There is also a link to the rules that should outline things for you. :D
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Thanks for the info. I'll check out the challenge.
Congrats on finishing! A nice romance and you provided a happy ending. Yes, more would be nice but in the end they expressed their feelings. =)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
. I'm glad that you see that it is both an ending and a beginning. :D And more is in the works so those who see it as a beginning can be happy about that. :)
This was a lovely story. Please tell me you are planning a sequal??!! There are so many unanswered questions.I like how she was so uncomfortable about the kiss that she had to blurt it out.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes indeed, I am planning a sequel. I'm so glad someone mentioned her blurting out about the kiss. I can just imagine her bursting at the seems about that. LOL
nonononooooooooooooooooooo this cannot be the end! You have to resolve Ron & Harry kicking up a fuss, hot sexxors and the happily ever after!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL Aye, aye, ma'am. :D There is a sequel in the works so many of the unresolved bits should be resolved.
What was she doing with him? The euphoria of having survived the war was well past, and she was forced to admit that they really didn’t belong together. Amen to that!!! OHNO Ron is going to continue to cause trouble isnt he?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Yes, there was much rejoicing when Hermione finally told Ron the obvious. LOL AS to what he does next, stay tuned.
I don't understand why Hermione is staying with Ron - or Ron with her for that matter. They really don't seem to like each other very much. I assume a break-up looms on the horizon :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Er, would JKR wanted them together be a good answer? LOL I tried to keep it canon at the start and then diverge from there. But yeah, that is one of her odder plot decisions.
OK does this mean that they are together or what. And what happened after the Ministry was told, did they keep it quiet? And how does the public handle the news? And does Ron and Harry come back and bother them again or give up? Do they(Hermione and Severus) have sex? Get married? Have kid(s)???Don't get me wrong, I love it but what happens next? This story is awesome and I can't wait to see you are so I can read other stories by you.Tamara aka
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you for your questions and your reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks to all the encouragement of the reviewers, there will be a sequel that will answer some of the questions you have asked. :D
yes, Ron, he's back and you are out so he can move in. lol
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
LOL I kind of think she's burned that bridge anyway so it looks like there is no going back to Ron even if she wanted to.
Please continue this story, there is a lot moe "fun" do be had. I really enjoyed it.
Jeannie
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thanks, Jeannie. There is more 'fun' to be had and I have started work on a sequel thanks to the encouragement of my reviewers. :D
I love it though I wish there was more
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. :D There will be more in the near future as I'm writing a sequel.
I really enjoyed this story. The ending was a delightful and bit unexpected. Well done.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope that you will stick around for the sequel. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Whooo Yah! You bet'cha!
Good chapter - I cannot believe it is over - it was interesting concept and I enjoyed the story.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
I'm glad you liked it. While this story is over, there is another chapter in life known as a sequel coming. :D I hope you will also enjoy that.
Great chapter - I loved how quickly you let her find the cure to bring him back and I am glad she realizes that Ron and her do not make a good couple. This makes it easier to move her on with her life in the story and I cannot wait to see where you take it.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. There really wasn't much point in dragging out her search for the cure over months or longer. As for Ron... yeah, time to move on indeed. LOL
What a lovely ending, shall I expect an epilogue?
Response from phoenix (Author of The Letter)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And indeed a sequel is in the works.