speechless

Very good.  Progress is being made!

Wow!  He threw the coffee table. 

Very nice.  I also liked her waking him up to give him a sleeping potion. 

uh oh.  What happened? To the next chapter!

oh, my.  Azkaban.I like the explaination for Sirius's actions at the shrieking shack. 

oh, my.  Azkaban.I like the explaination for Sirius's actions at the shrieking shack. 

I'll sign up to be in H.I.P.P.O.

All around great.  I don't have a specific comment.  I just like it.

The last paragraph almost made me cry.  Everybody needs hugs. 

Andrene makes me think of my great grandmother.  I think Hermione is in good hands.  even if they aren't Severus's (yet)

Severus just got double teamed!

I'm glad that Hermione didn't have to start screaming for Severus to realize what he was doing.  I really like the jarvey.

I adore your potrayal of Albus in this story.  Kind of bossy, but not to much.  I also like how Severus went instantly to the Hospital Ward.

It's one o'clock and I can't stop reading, you evil great author, you! 

I can imagine what she is going through.  My own stories (which I wouldn't inflict on any one) have a few strong empaths.  I'm glad that Severus could shield her from the pain.  is it because of his occlumency or what ever the other half of that is. 

ooo, did the salamander gift her with empathy?  On I read!

Only I would favorite a story and then either forget it or forget to read it.  Which is silly, since this is not forgetable at all.  In fact I'm mentally kicking my self for not reading this when I faved it!  Maybe it was late.  I liked that the salamander spoke a dialect of parseltongue. 

Oh give the poor thing the prize, you have her heart anyway.  Tamara

Lucky girl,  I wish I could at least hug the git, myself.  Tamara

Oh yes, do give it some thought and then make a plan to attack.  Tamara

Oh I just bet Severus is a very good grindsman, indeed.   Tamara

As much as I love Sirius.  I would have loved to see Hermione rip him a new one.  Tamara

Turpin is a hoot.  Tamara

This story is very interesting.  Tamara