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From the Blood of the Gorgon
Lady Strange159 Reviews | 7.03/10 (159 Ratings, 0 Likes, 30 Favorites )
Severus Snape survives Nagini’s venomous bite (or does he?) and yet seemingly drops off the face of the earth. The story opens twenty-two years after the defeat of Voldemort and covers the quest of Hermione Granger as she struggles to uncover the truth behind her recurring nightmares of Snape’s “death”.
The first chapter opens with Hermione having a nightmare about Severus Snape’s “death”. Disquieted, she resolves to delve into the past so as to understand why she is haunted by the mental visions of his “death”.
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Again very good and the plot thickens yet more, lol. So I was right in the one supposition that I made . . . now for the rest of the mystery, I guess I just have to wait for the rest of the story, eh?
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Well, now... more will be revealed eventually. Stay tuned. Thank you for following this story. :)
Very very interesting, yet again! I adore your mature and educated Hermione, it's a refreshing break from the young, nubile, and incredibly horny Hermione I usually read. Your complex plot is continuing in the most fantastic manner, and it's wonderful that I am actually learning things while reading. You've obviously devoted much work to this fic, and it radiates from your writing! Brava!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Merci du compliment *curtsies* I'm afraid there isn't much left to go. Everything wraps in Ch 11. Thank you for you continued supprt of this story.
It is amazing to see the contrast between Ron and Hermione. Ron is a huge, gigantic git, while Hermione calmly and maturely deals with him.I loved the reference to Cain and Able.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
The Cain and Abel reference was thrown in on a dare. My prelim reader dared me to insert a biblical reference, and I did. *ta da*
The story is getting good. Ron is such a jerk - he's always had it in him... I look forward to an update!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
I usually update once a week, so please look forward to Ch 10 next week. There isn't much left of the plot I'm afraid, but please continue to give me your support and readership. Thank you.
Great chapter - my only question is will Severus still look young when he is cured or will he remain young looking when Hermione and him get on to a more personal level?
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Ah... You see the story wraps in Ch 11. As it will give the remaining 2 chapters away, I cannot tell you whether:
(a) Severus will still look young after the cure if there is one,
(b) there is a cure,
(c) he and HG will get to know each other on a more personal level.
However, I can say there will be an update next week. Thank you for your continued interest in this story.
Very good, I love the way Ron is portraied.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Thank you. Only two more chapters to go and we wrap. Thank you for sticking with this story. I am very touched.
This story just gets more and more interesting! I can't wait to see how this Chinese Draught thing plays out!
Ron is SUCH a bastard. Hermione should have walloped him good (or hexed...that would work). What a hypocrite! Off having his OWN affair, and yet he acts all righteous when he suspects Hermione is having one! Chauvinistic double standard, methinks! Asshole. I hope that divorce goes through, and Ron comes out looking like the idiot he is. Though, with the way the press has already treated Hermione, it will probably come off as Ron is finally being freed from his neglectful harpy of a wife, and is now free to marry his TWU WUV, the skanky--I mean, the virtuous Lav-Lav.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
My dear Sporky, I nearly spit out my tea at the mention of the "twu wuv, the skanky Lav-Lav". I have already explained why I have portrayed Ron as he is, so I shall say nothing more on that score. The Chinese draught thing will come into play shortly in the coming instalment. Thank you for your continued support of this story.
Response from Sporky1126 (Reviewer)
Oh, no need to explain Ron any further! I was just venting. :)
I hope you didn't get any tea up your nose! That's always a bitch, especially if it's a carbonated beverage (or milk).
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
My dear Sporky, I nearly spit out my tea at the mention of the "twu wuv, the skanky Lav-Lav". I have already explained why I have portrayed Ron as he is, so I shall say nothing more on that score. The Chinese draught thing will come into play shortly in the coming instalment. Thank you for your continued support of this story.
Response from Sporky1126 (Reviewer)
Oh, no need to explain Ron any further! I was just venting. :)
I hope you didn't get any tea up your nose! That's always a bitch, especially if it's a carbonated beverage (or milk).
Hermione privately wondered when those two were getting married – their mannerisms were beginning to mirror each other’s.
Have I mentioned lately that I heart you? This combined with everybody going off to the pool table gave me some naughty images. Shame there were others present, but I could just see him helping her take a shot and well... ahem.
Hermione's reactions to Perseuss whenever he remembers something is beginning to scare me a bit. There's something about him that makes her react more violently and I can't really blame him for being a bit wary of her. On the other hand it would seem it's impossible to keep it to himself when he gets epiphanies like that. As if he doesn't realise it until it's said.
I hadn't caught that way to preserve him from the venom though. How clever of you! It makes me think I wouldn't have been very good at potions if I was a witch. :p
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Tony/Daphne is fanservice, and a foil to RW/HG. One couple has understanding and a meeting of minds and HG can see it. The other couple has no meeting of minds and well, HG can see it to. Tada, I've killed two birds with one stone!
I got the pool table idea from 'Allo 'Allo. So glad it met with your rousing endorsement.
HG's reactions occur because the whole Perseuss business is shocking. When one is shock, one either goes quiet and withdraws or one panics. Hermione panics. She's rather highly strung as I see her.
I'm sure you have done well in Arithmancy or other kinds of magic. :)
*retreats to underground bunker before anyone catches a glimpse of me*
Okay - I think he is Severus but I do not think he knows it. When Severus does not want to talk, he gets up and walks away. The pupil called her a "Know it all." This is a very interesting development and I cannot wait to see how it plays out.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Ah... all the questions - well, things will play out eventually. This chapter is the halfway mark after all.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Ah... all the questions - well, things will play out eventually. This chapter is the halfway mark after all.
Okay, I'm writing now before I even start this chapter. I'm sure I've reviewed before, but since there has been all this hoopla over your fic, I wanted to say I think your writing is bloody brilliant!! It is intelligently written and I think after 19 years with Ron, uh, I'd kinda be on the bitchy side myself!
Your style is very high-brow, for lack of a better word. You obviously take a great deal of time to research and use your creativity to come up with the things you have. So, I don't even know who you are, but I always look forward to a new chapter posted and I love to lose myself in the pictures that you create in my mind. You are really doing a superb job and I hope you won't change your style at all for anyone.
I write what is my style. And it is not everyone's cup of tea. It has hurt at times when I've expereinced little response to my work, because I do work hard to write soemthing that I think will mean something. I don't write "fluff", I have a very serious POV and it's who I am. So anyway, I'm going to start reading now! :)
Well, first, I want to say that I was struck by Perseuss' name - the whole name. And I did a little reworking and wouldn't you know - a rearragement of the entire name spells out: Severus Tobias Snape. Now, I'm sure I'm not going to get a straight answer, and I'm not sure I really want one. I'm enjoying the mystery of the character too much.
Holy Cow! I think one of two things: either Snape got himself stuck in this young guy's body, but that doesn't jive with the whole name thing. OR- Snape got himself stuck in a time warp and something with Nagini's blood made him young, and he's got amnesia or something. But I'm telling you I think this guy IS Snape! Until you tell me otherwise. But man that was a really great confrontation. More! More!
Livvy
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Clues as to what happened to Snape are in Ch 5 - read it again carefully, and you will have an inkling. The truth will be out by Ch 9 and 10, so exercise patience.
As for the storm in the teacup over this fic - the detractors can say what they like. The only thing that miffed me somewhat was the accusation that I started the whole nonsense to garner publicity for my fic. I am many things, but I do not stoop to thinking lowly of my own abilities for the sake of transitory publicity.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Clues as to what happened to Snape are in Ch 5 - read it again carefully, and you will have an inkling. The truth will be out by Ch 9 and 10, so exercise patience.
As for the storm in the teacup over this fic - the detractors can say what they like. The only thing that miffed me somewhat was the accusation that I started the whole nonsense to garner publicity for my fic. I am many things, but I do not stoop to thinking lowly of my own abilities for the sake of transitory publicity.
Continues to be very interesting. It seems they are draw to touching each other as well as trying to figure out why each seems so familiar.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
There is, of course, a reason for everything. Revelations to come eventually.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
There is, of course, a reason for everything. Revelations to come eventually.
Gah! Hermione and I need an "aha" moment! (And Ron and Lavender need kicks in their respective ... uh never mind.)I'm really enjoying this story; I like that it's more of a challenge to read.More, please!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Now you know how I feel towards the Real-Life Ron and Lavender on whom I based their characters. The real-life Lavender had called herself "simple, understanding, pure and virtuous" and exhorted me to be more like her. I don't know what sort of female calls her such, but I found it amusing. So I threw it in the story.
Well, this is the half way mark, so, stay tuned next week for the next instalment.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Now you know how I feel towards the Real-Life Ron and Lavender on whom I based their characters. The real-life Lavender had called herself "simple, understanding, pure and virtuous" and exhorted me to be more like her. I don't know what sort of female calls her such, but I found it amusing. So I threw it in the story.
Well, this is the half way mark, so, stay tuned next week for the next instalment.
Please keep writing. I'm really enjoying this story. Best of all, thanks to you I might just pass my Philosophy course this semester. This fic is actually making me want to crack open my book, lol.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Philosophy is a beautiful subject. But I am a biased judge on that since it is my profession or would be my profession. All you have to remember is that philosophy deals with the all too human things like what it means to be alive, what it is like to rule others, what does it mean to be honourable, just and true to yourself. :)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Philosophy is a beautiful subject. But I am a biased judge on that since it is my profession or would be my profession. All you have to remember is that philosophy deals with the all too human things like what it means to be alive, what it is like to rule others, what does it mean to be honourable, just and true to yourself. :)
You have done a lot of research to make this story work. The detail you put into it makes the correspondence between Snape and Dumbledore come across as authentic. Two intellectuals communicating in myths and legends that serve as a shorthand for ideas and theories.I cannot recall a story where I have seen this done better.Well done!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
The Snape-Dumbledore correspondence is meant to be a little obscure, so I am very glad that it worked. As the correspondence style is based on the letters that a friend and I write to each other (the ink on paper in cursive kind), I was originally uncertain as to whether it would add to the depth of the plot or render it more convoluted.
Nicely done thus far, barring a few spelling errors here and there very intelligently written and thought provoking. I think I have at least part of the riddle figured out, lol. I love the philosophical rambling, gives good insight to Hermione that you don't get in a lot of stories. Altogether a very nice story thus far and I anticipate the next chapter. Thanks for a good read.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Sincere apologies for the spelling errors. Sometimes the beta and the prelim reader are so close to the story (having read the numerous drafts) that they already know what to expect from me. I too am partially to blame since I write and type faster than I think. If you would be so kind as to inform me as to where these spelling errors occured (chapter, paragraph, and line in which they pop up), I shall endeavour to see that they are corrected. If it is over the "behove" and why not "behoove" reference, "behove" = Br. Eng. "behoove" = Am. Eng.Ah, you believe you have figured out the riddle? I am impressed. Things are very often not what they seem, though sometimes, they should be taken at face value. It is up to you to decide when to do so.Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a note.
Response from crimsonserpent (Reviewer)
Ack, that means I have to go back through, I'll endeavor to do so, but I make no promises, lol. There is a reason I'm not a beta, lol. And trust me I only think I have a small part of the riddle figured, by no means all. I'll try to double check and make sure it's not just my brain making up mistakes as does sometimes happen . . .
Oh dear! I was asking who CR-3 is, too, just as Goyle asked. I'd like to think I'm brighter than a Goyle :-DYou have a very good grasp of how legal maneuvering works. I couldn't help but laugh at how Cho and Hermione worked it out. The classy Malfoys and the brutish Goyles in the same profession.The Perseuss plot thickens!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
The Goyle bit was an attempt at humour however strangled. Most people would say Charles the third. But I wanted to play around with the fact that on post boxes, it is always E. R. II (as it is for the present Queen). My friends in the Uk always call it "ER2", so I thought if my friends called those post boxes "ER2", they would call C.R.III, "CR3".You have no idea of the research I had to undertake... Ah, the Malfoys and the Goyles! They strike me as the criminal sorts. Of course, this usually involves very elaborate fantasies about the Malfoys (okay - the deliciously handsome Lucius) smilingly and bitingly making shady deals.Perseuss is what he is. Unfortunately, the story is mainly in Hermione's viewpoint, so we do not delve into his. But we are given hints in the story.
Feel free to abuse Ronald Weasley all you like. I can barely tolerate his character in canon. Earlier, you explain why Hermione felt obligated to marry him, in spite of what appears to be their massive unsuitability. I hope that she will get past the idea that they can have the public image of a marriage, without any substance to it.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Without giving any of the plot away, I can safely say that Hermione will not be stuck in this unfortunate marriage for the rest of her natural life.
It is interesting to see how the role reversal between Ron and Hermione works in this story. It is rather like the American 1960's stereotypes of a husband and wife, only Hermione fulfills the husband's role and Ron acts like the wife.No wonder Hermione and Ron aren't happy in their marriage. They clearly want different things and Hermione has truly left Ron behind intellectually. It looks like he is about to be left behind emotionally. I am finding this story well-written and the characterization interesting. The only suggestion I would make is to split some of the longer paragraphs into multiple paragraphs to make it visually easier to read.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
My paragraphing style is a little dated, I own. I follow the old-fashioned rules of "one thought/idea, one paragraph". I know it does excuse me, but it makes more sense to me. I do not believe in splitting up a paragraph of one idea in many paragraphs of five to six sentences per sentence. It seems to have a staccato effort that I do not wish for in my writing. I believe writing should flow and not be choppy.Perhaps, my idea of "flowing writing" is dated. In the old days, days when Thomas Hobbes wrote or when Edmund Burke wrote, one thought/idea could span a page or two. Or it could be a British/Commonwealth idea. I found in my research that the same book is published differently in the UK/Commonwealth British English countries and in the Americas. I came across this fact quite accidentally because I own the British English version of a particular book on hermeneutics. My American friend owns the american version. We compared books and found that in my book the "one idea/thought, one paragraph" idea held true and that the one paragraph could span up to one and a half pages. In contrast, my friend's book chopped up the one paragraph into many paragraphs of five to seven sentences. I learnt from my American friend that it was easier to read that way. But to me, it made no sense to chop up one idea into many paragraphs if they were expounding on the same idea. At this point, it should be noted that I only speak of books of politics and philosophy, I do not know how far this difference is carried out in other kinds of books.While I know this does not excuse the long paragraphs, please understand and respect my reasons for having them. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a message. I know this story is not all that pleasing to everyone and that the "heaviness" of the writing may be very oppressive to some readers. I greatly appreciate the gesture and the critique.~~~~~~~~~~~~Postscript:It might interest you to know that I replied to you in the same style that I write, viz., the "one idea/thought, one paragraph" structure: (a) para 1 - brief statement of reply, (b) para 2 - explication of paragraphing style. I did not separate the illustration from the paragraph because it is an extension of the explication of paragraphing style (c) para 3 - apology(d) para 4 - thanks.
ah!! I totally forgot in my review, your greek!! bravo!! is amazing, I love it how you misc it with the story, I just love it and I like understanding it too :D, being part of my major and everything!!, Anyway you have an amazing knowledge not only in the greek aspect of the story but in everything!! Sam
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
My Greek is still wobbly (trying desperately to teach myself). Latin is the preferred language of choice in the classics when I speak. But I do prefer Greek works, especially Xenophon and Plato. I always try to inject a little of the Platonic themes and Socratic irony in my writing. However, that does not always please readers. You flatter me. There are many things that I know nothing of. Research - it is one of my main occupations and if everything I research is just sitting around doing nothing, I might as well use them whenever I can. Unfortunately, this does not seem to always please readers either. Oh well, c'es ca.
hello, well I truly love this fic, it's a little hard at times to understand but that makes it more intriguing and interesting, I love how you are writing both Hermione and Ron and I can't wait for all the mistery to be revealed soon!!! Keep up your great writting and don't let anyone make you feel bad for it!. A little off topic but I have to say it, I totally loved your response on the WIKTT group, I agree with you in everything, I left you a response there but wasn't sure if you'd read it, that's I'm writting this here. Thanks!!Sam PS: pardon my english if I have any mistakes I'm not a native speaker of english :D
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
In all my years of writing for leisure, I have always been told that my style is heavy as it requires the readers to think. I can perfectly understand this. I do know that most readers read for a bit of respite, not to be overwhelmed by heavy writing. But as I was weaned on Beowulf, Xenophon, Caesar and Dante, I tend to write with the same heavy style. It just isn't my modus operandi to stuff people in cupboards and have them shag senseless. I like drama, and themes and convulted plots that are thought provoking. I very seldom feel sad about criticisms. Since I cannot please everyone, I only seek to quell this need to write. People will say what they like and there is nothing I can do about. The tongue is theirs and they will say what they will. Eventually, they will get bored and find something else to talk about.Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a line here. I very seldom check in on WIKTT or the Potter Place owing to real life commitments.Pish posh, your English is perfectly understandable, so chin up.
I was drawn to this story as a result of comments made on wiktt's mailing list. Whereas I find it a bit too complicated for my tastes (I'm a relatively simple soul, lol) I have to state that I enjoy both Ron and Hermione's characterizations. To me, the interactions are spot on for two people who are not compatible but let's face it, stuck with each other. Hermione is rather sharp, but hell . . . she was always a bit sharp. And Ron, well being thoughtless, selfish and unreasonable is pretty much par for the course. It was stated this is 'bad writing.' I must disagree, at least in my humble opinion. Although I said the story is too complicated for my tastes, I think for the way you are approaching this story, especially Hermione's thought processes, this in-depth exploration and amplification is exactly what is needed. Rarely is Hermione shown in all her intellectual glory. This requires a lot of subtext and you are providing it. The story is well researched and you've taken a lot of time adding footnotes to clarify the terms and situations for the reader. So, although this story might not be everyone's cup of tea, it's not the writing, believe me. It's the caliber of the audience and their preferences that makes it enjoyable or not. Well, that's how I see it anyway. Good luck with the story and keep writing. :)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Owing to many obligations, I rarely pop into WIKTT and if not for the greater powers on the Poetess informing me of the ensuing debacle, I would not have known that someone had felt so strongly against my writings. I have never sought to please everyone. I write that is all - let the different individuals of the world say what they like. Thank you for the kind words.
I love that with every question partially answered come twenty more questions. Constant mystery, intriguing, and intelligent! What could be a better story!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Oh, the questions and unanswered questions that abound seem to have caught me in something of a maelstrom. To be honest, i am quite flattered you think this way given the less than complimentary whispers I have been hearing on the underground movement. (I believe that all of us who are "anon" right now are underground in a bunker.) I don't know what could be better than reading... perhaps a spot of tea whilst reading...
I am personally in love with your Hermione. I think that her character is refreshingly intelligent and has grown into the sort of woman I always saw her growing into. I love that she studied law, and I love where your story is going. Sorry my other reviews were so short and generic, but I was reading your work well into the early hours of the morning and lying in a position that did not promote vigorous reviewing :).
PMM
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Ah, I like lounging in a dress gown and reading too but it does not promote good posture. So, I sympathestise. Perhaps reading with tea and nice biscuits? Hermione is meant to be something of an antithesis. I know many consider her just a book know-it-all, that is, someone who knows nothing outside the books in the syllabus. However, given all that she had experienced whilst in the wilderness on the run from Voldy and friends, I believe she would have acquired a certain "street-wise" hardness to her character. In a sense, she is a more a man than a man. So I wanted to play around with the role reversal. What if Ron were more the "woman" and Hermione more the "man". So I gave Ron the character of the stereotypical woman (culled from observations) who wants the man to be with her constantly, and takes offence if the man looks at another woman, and so on. I have given these traits to Ron/ Likewise, for Hermione, I have given her the traits associated with the "man". She is hardworking, the main provider, the sensible and stoic one, rational, and as her Chambers calls her in an early draft "more bollocksy than all the men in Chiswell Square put together". Interestingly, in the novel Lady Audley's Secret, the protagonist, Lucy Graham/Helen Maldon is called "completely rational and unemotional. Unfeminine and worse than mad - she is insane". The same goes with my Hermione. Anyway, since she has adopted the male role, I gave her all the male traits. This however does not seem to sit well with some readers if the murmurs we get here in the underground bunker are to be believed.Still, thank you for your kind review. and thank you for taking the time to read.
Well things are looking a little clearer now. Snape may have survived, transported to Dumbledore's cousin's home on the continent while under the influence of a potion which reverses Nagini's poison. The reversal removes memory and may have other side effects, perhaps effecting aging. This brings me back full circle to the possibility of Perseuss actually being Snape.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
Oh, you may think what you want you will. Just never trust you have everything down pat. *wink* As for the rest, have patience, petite, have patience.
Loved her return to the Dumbledore archive - very complex writing and done exceeding well - what a truly gifted mind you have at weaving your stories.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
I too lament at my unappreciated genius, but I must have to suffer through it because I cannot expect everyone to share my largeness of mind. *Ahem* Dramatics aside, thank you for the review. The things our Hermione discovers only succeeds in giving a headache and more questions. We will see more by and by, but only by and by. Thank you once again for the kind compliments.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of From the Blood of the Gorgon)
I too lament at my unappreciated genius, but I must have to suffer through it because I cannot expect everyone to share my largeness of mind. *Ahem* Dramatics aside, thank you for the review. The things our Hermione discovers only succeeds in giving a headache and more questions. We will see more by and by, but only by and by. Thank you once again for the kind compliments.