good work. Excellent end to an excellent story. Cheers

A show that I've watched a few times and always enjoyed had a plot where the man gets killed and then gets reincarnated only to fnd himself dating his "daughter." Once he meets her mother, things start coming back to him, and he tries to get back with her. Odd sounding, I know, but it works out that the Angels who neglected to give him his "forgetful shot" or something, found him and gave it to him. The wife marries his old best friend, who's loved her for years and the daughter and the guy marry as well. It's much better than how I've described, but anyway, your story made me think of that. :)

love the dreams

I've always loved your writng style. :)

Did I mention I enjoy this Hermione? ~nod~

Mystery abounds

Interesting backstory. :)

great start

Did I mention how extremely well researched this is? And I think your every day phrases in Latin are hilarious. ^^

Before berating you for writing one of my pet peeves, just let it be said that I wouldn't comment if I didn't like your story. While heavy on writing, it's interesting and I can't wait to find out how Perseuss and Snape are connected. ^^On to my pet peeve: No German who speaks English (or any other foreign language) fluently, as Perseuss seems to do, would include easy German words like Danke or Frau in their speech (while speaking English, of course). I understand it's difficult to show somebody is from another country without altering their speech, and I know even famous published authors like to portray us that way, but that's not the way Germans speak English. Most of us do have funny accents and tend to use German grammar with English words, or translate stuff literally and use prepositions all wrong (one thing that struck me is that a lot of Germans use "or" instead of "isn't it" etc. for confirming things), but we do try to use English words, and describe what we mean if we don't know/remember the word. Ah well, sorry for the rant. :-) And on with reading. *g*

Nice to see that Hermione finally got some answers about her dreams, though not complete answers. I do wonder about the dark German stranger. I have a theory on that, but we'll see if it pans out.

Interesting start. There's a bit too much entwining of Muggle and wizarding worlds for me, but given the direction the story's taking, I don't think it will be an issue. I do like how you have Hermione having a nightmare about Snape's death as the catalyst to start her whole quest. And I really do see her an Ron not having a truly compatible marriage and you showed that very well.

I adore the way you've wrapped up this bit. The pieces all fit together perfectly, and it looks beautiful! I can't wait for Sev...Perseuss to meet the kids!

I think old Dumbly-dorr would have had a burning penchant for 007! And I am astounded that among everything else, you managed to bring Chinese history into your story! Bravissima!

It's unfolding beautifully. It's amazing how complex and captivating this story is, it will definitely be in my favorites after the reveal!

"Cease molesting me." Hah! I love it! Another fantastic chapter, I can personally relate to the propelling pen abuse, I do it all the time! 

I don't remember if you told us but it most certainly appears that things are wrapping up.  Sometimes I felt very bogged down with too many details but I also realize that is a part of your style and I have come to appreciate it - the story would not make sense otherwise.  I also appreciate the little footnotes/glossary at the end of each chap - it has really helped.  I have really enjoyed the story so far.  I look forward to an update!

First, I'd like to apologise for taking so long to get back to you!  I've been a bit busy for the past couple of days.  I really enjoyed this chapter for several reasons, first it appears to be a succesful brewing, second Severus appears to be a happier person and lastly I loved his resourceful cunning methods to aquire what he needed (the water, peach stone etc).  I'll be sorry to see this story finished, but you have given us quite a fun ride!

 A few more chapters please, it seems you are winding it up

At least Severus has all his memories back now, even if it includes all the bad ones.I love how this new Severus teases Hermione about the ingredients he has already managed to get. This interaction between them is lovely.I hope they keep him at the Chambers!

Things are looking very hopeful and I'm sure he will be happier living a life for himself as Perseuss. I guess Hermione didn't kiss him as requested did she?

Another good chapter - cannot wait to see if the potion is permanent - I do not blame Severus for not wanting to give up the life he had now and the youth- he has nothing really to return to and this life can offer him so much more.

Ron is getting downright nasty. Perseuss now believes. Hermione has moved. They have a recipe. Things are getting exciting.

I dislike Ronald Weasley.  He annoys me.  He has always annoyed me.  You've made him even more despicable and hypocritical than I would have thought possible.   I like the detail and the historical research you put into this.  It is obviously not a story thrown together on a boring Monday night. 

That was a very lawyerly discourse of a + b = c.  Very fitting in terms of Hermione's character and a creative invention of the magic process necessary to make it work.