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Faking A Smile
Gemxk247 Reviews | 5.43/10 (47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 46 Favorites )
Severus Snape makes a mistake casting aside Hermione Granger.
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Im legally of age in both the magical and non magical worlds...addicted to the world of severus snape and all that concerns him. Willing to read/write him in any persona, preferably not fluff, i dont like fluff snape.
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Wow. I love this start it seems so hopeless, but this is Potions Under Duress so I'm betting on a happier note.
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
Personally, i'd make him sweat it out a bit first, but this is Hermione!Cheers for the review!
It makes me very happy to see that this is not completed. My heart aches for both of them.
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
This was originally a one-shot but my wonderful beta made me see reason and continue! thanks for the review!
I hope this fic doesn not have a sad ending. Looks like Snape is unsure of his decision. Looking forward to next chapter!
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
Which shall be up before New Year, thanks for reviewing!
Oh my, the angst!
Very sad, very painful. I hope they have a happy ending ahead!
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
oh my! My first review! thanks so much, I only posted earlier today, so proud now! You made my christmas!
Totally loved the first chapter. I also enjoyed the telling of the story from both prospectives.Hope you will have an new chapter soon :>)Linda
Please update soon i would love to read some more PLEASE',
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
Check back before New Year and i'll see what I can come up with, cheers for reviewing!
I had almost given up hope of seeing this updated. I'm glad it hasn't fallen by the wayside. Now all we need is for Sev to start the wooing and my happiness will be coplete. Hope you can update again soon.
Oh yeah! In the zone now! More pain! More suffering! Keep it coming! Torture them and make them cry and rip their still beating hearts from their chests as a bloody offering to the gods of angst! Woo!
Harsh. Very angsty. I like angst. More angst and suffering please. thanks.
Ouch! That's a nasty scene. Good emotion though. Will this continue?
wow. how sad. looking forward to seeing another confrontation between this couple.
I'm glad he's hurt. He deserves it. Bastard.
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
He aint seen nothin' yet!
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
He aint seen nothin' yet!
That jab at her sexual abilities, dirty pool! Dirty Bastard!But that's classic Snape, and brava to Hermione, took me back to the day a guy broke my heart in college- or really pulverized it. And for the same reason. He wanted to be with me, but couldn't let himself be happy. I managed to deal with the harshness he threw at me with a steel backbone. One of the hardest things I had to do-up to that point in my life. But I was proud of me. You are writing a great story and I can't wait to see where it will lead.Livvy
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
She hasnt finished with him yet. Ive had a guy throw similar insults at me and this was how I handled it. Lots more to come soon!
Response from Gemxk2 (Author of Faking A Smile)
She hasnt finished with him yet. Ive had a guy throw similar insults at me and this was how I handled it. Lots more to come soon!
Sadly, I think this is more believeable than the fluffy-Snapes-in-love we enjoy reading about. I fear Snape is the sort to make himself as unhappy as possible,
That just broke my heart. Poor Hermione... Look forward to reading a new chapter soon.
Please update soon''
Oh, this makes my heart hurt. For both of them, really. Severus still cares about Hermione very much, although he doesn't seem to want to admit it. And poor Hermione! I hope they can work through this.
Bravo Hermione give him hell. She should have smacked him on top of pouring her coffee on him. I hope it hurt like hell. And he gets blisters. Severus is so lying to himself. Why be afraid to love someone? The war is over, right? Allow someone to give you the love you deserve. You git. I still say she should hex your butt two ways to Sunday though. lol
Good job, Hermione!
I rather like this story, and I think the characters are believable. Please continue!
Wow! I could feel her emtions throughout this story. Do make sure to udate often. I quite like this story.
Ouch! Well, Severus over-estimated himself, or underestimated Hermione. He should have remembered Hermione punching Draco. All well, he's not the first man to have coffee thrown at him, nor do I expect the last. *grins*
Heart wrenching. Every girl has been through a breakup so painful she doesn't want to move, and you've managed to capture that here.
Great update!