Chasing Time
Chapter 4 of 9
CelisnebulaHermione enjoys herself once more.
ReviewedIt is raining as I cross the street just in front of the Three Broomsticks. Hardly an astounding feat for London, much less winter in London. I've been quite good lately at least, quite good compared to what I was just a short time ago. I've not needed to... get away in almost an entire month. A record, I think.
I walk into the empty hotel room, feeling incredibly wet and tired, though those are only inconveniences. My mind is wholly on tonight. I place the perennial bottle of potion on the table beside the bed as I make my way to the bathroom.
Once inside, I quickly strip the wet clothes from me, hanging them on the shower curtain rod so I can cast a drying charm on them. It isn't long before I hear the door opening. I wait, not wanting to see the transformation this may all be an illusion, but it is my illusion.
I open the bathroom door and watch him stride towards me. It never fails to amaze me how utterly perfect the Polyjuice Potion is; I want to devour him whole. His clothing is soaked through, and I can just make out the subtle lines of his defined chest through the white shirt.
My arms wrap around his neck, my fingers spear through his dark, lanky hair as I tug his head down to mine. Our lips meet, his cold lips opening up under mine as I taste him.
"You just couldn't stay away, could you?" he asks in that velvety voice, sending shivers down my spine. I don't know how he manages it, but he sounds very authentic.
I bury my head in the crook of his neck, too embarrassed to admit how right he is. Chuckling, he gathers me close, picking me up as though I weighed nothing no small feat. I imagine he must be quite a strong man in his normal form, a thought I push ruthlessly from my brain; for this one hour he is Severus Snape, a privilege I pay dearly for.
I shiver at the contact, not sure if it's because of the wet clothing clinging to his lanky frame or from the idea of what he might do to me our last encounter still lingers marvelously in my mind. He sets me gently on the bed. My hands reach up to cup his face, his dark eyes on mine as he leans in to softly kiss me.
I'm fairly trembling with need as he presses his wet body against me, my fingers pulling incoherently at the buttons of his shirt. I'm impatient to feel his skin against mine impatient to feel him inside of me. He pulls from me, pulling the wet shirt up over his head before dropping it carelessly to the floor. I reach for him, dragging his cold body back to me.
His hand sweeps down my body in a long caress, I arch into his touch I have missed it far too much. I brush my lips against his cheek, seeking his mouth. Our lips rub gently together, just whispering touches, and then he gently flicks his tongue against my lower lip.
I groan into his mouth as he cups my breast, those long, lovely fingers pulling and twisting at my nipple as I slowly slide my tongue against his. Desire burns in my belly, leaving me aching with need. His head dips, pulling the taut peak into his mouth, leaving me to gasp out in pleasure. My hands tremble as I skim over his shoulders, sliding up to grasp at his hair as I push my body against his. I shift so I can wrap my legs around his hips his trousers are rough and wet against the inside of my thighs.
"Such impatience, Granger," he says in a wry tone as I arch my back in a demand for more. God, I love that sound love how he's captured the tone so perfectly it does things to me. I twist beneath him, pushing him back and over so I can straddle him.
His eyes are so intense as they wander over my nude form, and I wonder what he sees when he looks at me. Am I some poor pathetic thing in his estimation? A silly fool that resorts to a paid companion to get the sort of satisfaction she needs? Tilting my head so my hair obscures my face, I squeeze my eyes shut, trying to fight the tears I feel burning behind my lids.
He pulls me down for a short teasing kiss, moving before I can deepen it. His lips wander across my jaw with soft kisses, his teeth gently nibbling a trail to my ear. I moan in appreciation, the sound coming from deep within my throat as I shudder in pleasure. It provokes the imp in me I want to tease him until he loses himself inside of me.
I can feel his hands on my thighs, sliding around to cup my arse as I move over his supine body. I nip at his throat, tasting the rough flesh with the tip of my tongue. His scent drives me crazy, though I know I must be imagining it the scent of musky male and various potion ingredients. I kiss my way across his shoulder, nipping at the hard muscle with my teeth, before I wiggle my body downward.
He hisses as I lap at a flat nipple, laving it until it's rigid before moving across his chest to other. One of his hands tangles in my hair, holding my head steady as I tease the other nipple with my tongue. A strangled moan escapes his lips as I gently scrap my teeth along it. His hips grind against mine, and I can feel the hard length of him under the material of his trousers.
I kiss my way down his chest, pausing at his belly button. I nibble around the skin of it, the tip of my tongue teasing the sensitive skin, dipping in and around as my fingers reach for the top button of his trousers. As soon as the rest of the buttons are undone I let my hand slide inside, cupping the full length of him. He is so hot and hard against my palm. His hips arch up, pressing his erection against my hand as he moans again. I look up, watching his face, my fingers curling around his hard cock. His features are a mask of intense pleasure, his dark eyes on mine as I slowly feel along his shaft.
"Raise up," I whisper in a husky voice that cannot possibly be mine. "I want this off of you now."
He arches one elegant eyebrow at my command but complies with my wishes. I tug at the trousers, pulling first the left then the right leg out of the confining material. He is gloriously nude and my eyes drink in every aspect of him.
I trace one finger down the length of his cock, watching as it jerks towards my hand. I dip my head toward the tip, just flicking my tongue against the mushroom head.
"Fucking tease," he grunts out as I slowly lick away at a drop of precum.
I can't help the small laugh that bubbles up as I kiss my way down the shaft. I slowly draw a testicle sack into my mouth, loving the way he hisses out in pleasure. I dart my tongue around the underside before sucking the other side into my mouth.
His hands twist in my hair, tightening every time I do something that causes pleasure. I look up into his face as I bring my lips back up to the tip of his cock. We watch each other as I part my lips and slowly let his cock slide inside my mouth. He tastes salty not as unpleasant as I would have thought. I let my tongue twist around the tip as I move up and down on him.
I can feel him struggling I know he wants to use his hands in my hair to guide my pace, but he allows me my pleasure. I suck him slowly, allowing myself to get used to the feel of his cock in my mouth. His breathing gets heavier, his hips arching up against my mouth even though he struggles to remain in control. The thought that I want him to lose control, to give himself over to me, flitters in my head as I take his cock deeply into my mouth.
His hands pull me away, dragging me up until his lips are on mine in a brutal kiss. We twist on the bed, his hands moving down my body. Those rough, calloused hands push my thighs apart, long fingers pushing into me with a skillful touch. I moan into his mouth as his thumb circles around my clit, my hips arching up into his hand.
"Please, Severus," I cry out, breaking our kiss. His fingers push into me, spearing me until I think I'll go mad with need. I try to reach for him, I want him inside of me so badly it hurts, but he pushes me back against the bed.
His shoulders wedge between my thighs, and I watch as he dips his head down. I can't stop the strangled cry of pleasure the feel of his tongue invokes. He laps at me, his fingers moving in and out of me as his tongue tickles my clit. I am almost at the edge, his skillful fingers torturing me so I stay right there instead of tumbling over.
"Now, Severus," I beg. I need him inside of me.
He rises above me, his lips capturing mine. I can taste myself on his tongue. I wrap my arms around his neck, tilting my hips up as I kiss him with everything I am. His cock pushes against my clit, making me moan into his mouth.
He pulls back, his eyes on mine as he positions himself. Slowly he pushes his cock into me, I can feel every inch of him stretching me. His eyes stay on mine as he moves, pushing in a little before retreating almost to the tip. I want more. I arch my back, swiveling my hips upward in an effort to take more of him inside of me. He decides to torture me with a very slow, shallow stroke.
"Please " I sob, surprised I can come up with anything coherent, my hips rising up again. I'm desperate for everything he can give me I need to feel him deep inside of me.
I feel his hands on my thighs, pulling them up and then pushing my knees back as he thrusts deeply inside of me. He hooks my legs on his shoulders as he grinds into me, pushing into me with such a force I literally scream in pleasure.
The sound of flesh slapping hard against flesh fills the room. I push against him, trying to take more of him inside of me. God, I love the feel of him inside of me. He slips a hand between us, those beautiful fingers flicking against my clit as he thrusts into me.
"Severus..." I hiss, feeling an orgasm build.
His hips piston against mine, driving his cock deeply into me. I clench around him, feeling his cock swell as we race forward. I shudder with pleasure as he grinds his hips against mine. His final thrust pushes me over the edge, and I break apart as I feel him pulsing his own release deep inside of me.
He buries his face in my hair, breathing hard as his body settles over me. I wrap my arms around him, holdng him tight to me as our breathing returns to normal. I want nothing more than to curl up in his arms right this moment an impossibility, time must almost be up.
Reluctantly, I push him from me; he rolls onto the bed without a protest. I kiss his lips gently, before getting up and heading to the bathroom. Casting a quick cleansing charm, I reach for my clothes. Already I'm feeling guilty for being here.
He is still on the bed, gloriously naked, when I return. I fumble around for the Galleons, reaching over with unsteady hands to place the money on the table beside the bed. I reach over to grab the bottle of Polyjuice Potion, gasping as I notice the time.
"Oh, fuck," I whisper to myself, shoving the bottle into my pocket.
"Problem, Granger?" he asks, eyebrow arched in a sardonic expression.
"Fuck, fuck, fuck," I gasp out. This is inconceivable. Utterly inconceivable! I can't deal with this right now I shit, this is fucked. In my panic, I Apparate away from the hotel room.
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A/N:
Okay, here is the long awaited next chapter. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to get it up in time for Keladry Lupin's Christmas day challenge to authors. I know, evil cliffhanger. But, well, we can assume she knows now.
As always I'd like to thank my beta, SgathachaptieAnie, please realize that any and all mistakes contained within this chapter are solely my own.
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Latest 25 Reviews for An Unconventional Moment
49 Reviews | 6.8/10 Average
Please please continue! I'm desperate to know what happens!!
I like how you've made both of them a bit twisted, and the conflict that they're both fighting internally. : )
Thank you for sharing!
I have never read anything of yours before. This is intense and sad and beautiful.Please I beg of you for the love of all that is good, give this a happy ending. Love unreturned is so painful and the pain she lives with everyday is hard enough,she and he deserve happiness. Isn't that why this fandom is so popular? My Gosh you write so well!!
I've enjoyed this story immensley, and can't wait to see what the final chapter brings.Hope we don't have to wait too long for the final chappie! (meant as a compliment, not a criticism)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Thank you.
I found this story on the SS/HG quiz. I had never read it before and was extremely intrigued. Now, I need that last chapter....and my two cents are that it is love but they both seem scared of it?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Thanks for the review! Yeah, Molly surprised me when she chose this for the quiz. The next (I think last) chapter is about 1/2 written - but currently on hold cause I'm working on my SSHG exchange piece for the year.
A long time coming, but very much worth reading.Poor Hermione. That's why she didn't want to tell him, but unless he was purposefully being tender with her to force some kind of reaction out of her, to find out the answers to the questions she refused to reply to the night before, am guessing he cares about her too, probably more than he feels comfortable with or is willing to admit...
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Thank you for the kind review! <br><br>I think both are... being protective of themselves, which is why we have the situation were neither is willing to reveal more than they have to. <br><br>I do hope the next chapter, at least, gives the resolution many people seem to want from them.
Sounds like his reaction was pretty much as she expected.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Pretty much - they know each other so well in many ways, yet not at all in others.<br><br>Thank you for the review.
Tell him, silly girl!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
She can't. And he can't hear it - not now, probably not ever.
Contraception?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
No... more like a medical condition. But alas, they were laxed with that as well.
She didn't need a wand... he had all that was needed.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
:) I think he had all any of us would need!
OH dear. How is she going to explain this?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
She's not. At least not really.
Sneaky Slytherin. She deserved that!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
They both have been sneaky.
Sex on the balcony in full view of anyone who looked up. Decadent!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
:) Everyone needs a little exhibitionism in their life.
Very sneaky! :0
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Sneaky of me? Or sneaky of Hermione?
How nice it is to see you are alive and hopefully well! As always reading your work is a pleasure and if I get a vote I'd lean towards a happy ending for our couple since canon Snape had a less than happy ending.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Thank you for such a lovely review. <br><br>Unfortunately, I don't think this will turn out to be as happy as people want - it will be as happy as I can make it, but they're bothing being stubborn and pathetic. Hopefully I can still do them justice.
Unless he decides that he generally doesn't do love but in this case, he wants to do love, there's not much chance for them. Hermione wasn't likely to be "loved" by her polyjuiced Severus, so this admission from Severus does not constitute a loss from where she started. But it is crushing to hear it said aloud. That dream is gone. Time to move on to someone who will love her.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
When I think about what he had to go through with Lily... he desperately wants love, but he will never admit it. Look at how his heart was torn out before. Better to turn it away, spurn it before he can reveal himself and be hurt. <br><br>Thank you for a lovely review!
Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)
It's true: Nothing ventured, nothing lost. But it is also true: Nothing ventured, nothing gained! I wonder what it would take for him to give up his self-protection in order to gain love and an end to his loneliness? I think we sometimes talk ourselves into believing that the pain of a love ventured and lost is greater than the loneliness of no love, but it is not. He certainly has data that she fancies him to such an extent that she conjured a fake relationship and put up with his mistreatment just to try to grab at the smoke of having him. Why not try?
please update. I want to know what happens.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
I have... too bloody forver too (sorry about that) and am in the middle of the final chapter. Hopefully it won't be another year of waiting.
Yay, another yummy nibblet of smut after ages. Don't forget to update soon! XD
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Don't really know if there'll be an update any time soon - but here's to hoping :o)
HER STOMACH HAS BEEN OFF.
Have they been using contraceptives?Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
OOOhh wonderful question! Mmmm to answer, Hermione put contraceptives in the polyjuice potion, however.... the real Snape isn't taking PJ. Though, not sure if she really is going to be preggers or not.
I just love this story, I have read it many times on several sites. Please, if you will, let us know what will happen next?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
While I thank you very much for the review, I have to say I haven't anything new on this, as of yet. I'm slowly (unfortunately a snail running a race seems to move faster than my writing muse these days) writing the next chapter to this. I wish I could give a ETA on it, but the rate I'm going, Aramgeddon might hit us first.
please update soon ,don let us hanging like this!!!!!!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
I'm slowly working on a new update for this.... just got a bit side tracked.
Holy mackerel, but this is HOT! I can't wait to read more -- perhaps a chapter where she's in charge of Severus with a little Snape bondage!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Hmmm, not sure if that's where the next chapter is heading, but one never knows.
I'd forgotten how delicious your writing is.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
LOL only part of the time.... other times it can get downright painful.
Oh my god........... this is delicious........
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
I'm glad you liked this latest chapter :o)
Response from FishLover (Reviewer)
Hmmm, I don't think like quite describes it... but I do think you have been reading my mind... you have written Snape just as I would like to see him... love the control, the BDSM twist, and Hermione's reaction to it... Still think the polyjuice potion ploy was brilliant!
Oye.... WOW.... now THAT is an unexpected twist.... how clever!Hmmmmm.... wonder what could be next?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of An Unconventional Moment)
Thanks :o) I'm glad you liked the twist.