Lestrange Days
ancientgirl97 Reviews | 97 Ratings, 0 Likes, 74 Favorites )
*COMPLETE* This is the final installment of my Long Wait series. The kids are all a bit older and have been attending Hogwarts for a few years. They are also joined by some familiar names.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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I love the relationship between Ros and Lucius. Actually this whole chapter was moving. Well done. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Thanks. I haden't read Lucius paired with Ros before, so I decided, why not?
You know what, it doesn't surprise me that the children have formed a group. I mean they are their parents children after all. You are a wonderful author, my dear. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Thank you, you are too kind :)
See Raven your father really is a war hero. There was no other man who could have pulled it off. You should be proud. JMO Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I had that chapter in my head for so long. i'd decided to have Osiris tell Raven the truth about his father and was happy it came out so well.
It was to be expected. At least the children are being included in what is going on. That is good. Tamara
The children are young but they have their parents brains, so maybe it all will work out. Tamara
Oh thank goodness, I'm glad Lucius is careful with Bella. I almost thought he was on her side. Peter should get offed, that is what he gets for trusting Bella. Stupid git. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I've always enjoyed writing Lucius. I guess I write him as I wished JKR had written him.
My favorite line in this chapter is more fake deaths than Elizabeth Taylor has husbands. Bloody brilliant. I agree, Peter is the biggest, stupidest jackass on earth. I hope Crooks eats him. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I've got something really interesting planned for Peter. I think you will be pleased.
I still love Osiris. How knows it could have been someone posing as Severus and Osiris just saved them. I guess I will see. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Osiris meant well. He just wanted to make sure Severus wasn't going to be hurt.
I can't remember, does Bella know Severus married Hermione and has kids? If she does then he better get his ass back to her and keep them safe. Not that Hermione couldn't take care of herself but if something happened to them, he would never forgive himself. Brilliant chapter, AG. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Oy, I wrote this so long ago I forgot if she does know he's married to Hermione.
Oh man, AG, this story is going to be awesome. Bellatrix is one sick crazy ... don't really want to call her a woman. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
This was the last in my Long Wait series. I hope you like it.
I loved it!! You really captured the emotions through out the tale and wrote it out well. If you decide to write more, I will be sure to read it. Great job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Thank you. I always try to portray as much emotion as i can when I write.
This series pretty much ended with this story. I decided to give a few other things a try. I still kept writing SS/HG, but I enjoyed writing about a couple of other different ships within my stories.
i believe pettigrews end was quite appropriate. great job so far! now on the the rest of the story...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I thought he deserved a particularly nasty ending. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Mmmmmm....Perfect!Blessings & hugs
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed this.
that was great! i love the warm fuzzy feeling i have right now, it made me so happy! thank you for a wonderful story, and some great new characters! well done!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I'm very happy you enjoyed it. And I appreciate you taking the time to read it all.
aww, yay for remus! that proposal was very...real! i don't know many couples whose proposals haven't gone wrong one way or another, it just makes it all the more meaningful.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
LOL, oh I know. It's never THAT perfect.
i love crooks and osiris! "nectar, sweet nectar!" that is so hilarious! you should write more stories about them!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I've never had more fun writing a character as I did writing those two.
whew! for a minute there i thought it was gonna get all preachy or something, but that was a neat way of explaining wormtail's gift from voldemort. i'm just glad everyone was okay!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I thought it best to use the historical explaination, as well as one that is unbiased as far as Jesus is concerned. I don't like to get preachy as far as religion in my stories.
yesss! i always thought he deserved to die as a rat, being killed as peter is too human for him. great job on finishing him off.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
It's true, he doesn't deserve to die a man.
i really love that they are all family, it just makes me want them to get through this all the more. great idea!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
I really wanted to give the impression that they are all very close and would do anything for each other. I'm glad it came through that way.
i agree that hermione would stay home too. that maternal instinct would tell her to not abandon her daughter. and she trusts severus. he can take on that stupid bitch.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
That's the way I saw it. I think people make the mistake of writing her and wanting to read her as the girl she is now. They don't allow for any maturing, and this was a mature decsion of a woman thinking of her child and trusting her husband.
oh no! she needs to die! i do like seeing the paternal sides of sev and lucious though, it's sweet. i can't stop reading, it just keeps getting better!
poor severus! i can't imagine having your own son say that to you, thank goodness for osiris!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Lestrange Days)
It's hard telling kids things like that. Osiris wouldn't let Raven get away without knowing what his father had to do to make the world safe for them.