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Potions Under Duress Eburos
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Eburos

1: Phoenix Rising

2: Spinner's End

3: Prometheus Broken

Eburos

Lady Silma

44 Reviews   |   44 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Potions Under Duress 9,080 Words 3 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore George Weasley Harry Potter Ronald Weasley

Magic can’t fix everything, especially people. Hermione makes a visit and learns that some things might be broken forever, no matter how hard you try.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Phoenix Rising

Chapter 2: Spinner's End

Chapter 3: Prometheus Broken


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Lady Silma

Member Since 2006  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 5  |  5 Reviews Written  |  59 Review Responses

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10/10

septentrion

My, this is a very appealing beginning.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks :)

0/10

Calicoskys

OH! can't wait to see what's next :))

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thank you! I'm diligently working on the next chapter.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Very intriguing start.  I like what you have so far.  I can't wait to read more.  This promises to be a great story!

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thank you! I hope the story lives up to your expectations.

10/10

sinbad

OH wow you caught my interest!  I love the cloak and dagger style too....

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for the review. There will be a little of the cloak and dagger style the whole way through this story since the mystery involving Snape won't be resolved for a while.

10/10

Deeble

This is a cracking good start -- I really wanted to learn more about the Department of Mysteries, so I'm as happy to see that angle explored more as I am to see Snape alive.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for the review

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

. The Department of Mysteries was rather fascinating. It seemed as if the possibilities were endless behind all those revolving doors. I know Bambu wrote a story that featured Hermione as an Unspeakable. If you haven't checked that one out, you definitely should!

0/10

kalessan

Thank you, this is exactly what I needed to read. Please continue

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for your reveiw. I appreciate it. If all goes well, I hope to have a new chapter out in a week or two.

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Very interested to see where you go next with this.  I rather wish DH hadn't had an epilogue -- we could have had so much more fun without it!  Thanks for working on an alternative ending.  I'm a happy ending junkie, so you know what I'm voting for!

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

I thought the ending to DH was weak. There wasn't any mention of the greater wizarding world or of characters I really grew to love: Luna, Hagrid, McGonagall, etc. I'm glad Harry finally had the family he always wanted, though.

I know all Snape fans hoped for a happy ending for our beloved Potions Master. We'll see what Snape has in mind for this story. He can be so prickly at times! Let's hope Hermione is stubborn enough to stick around. 

10/10

Sampdoria

You sure knows how to start a story to keep your readers on egde:-) Update again soon, I have a lot of questions I would like answeared:-))

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

I'm truly sorry that this first chapter ended on a cliffhanger. It would have been too long of a chapter if I hadn't cut it off where I did, but it did seem a great place to end the chapter all the same :) I hope you don't have to wait too long for an update. Thanks for your review.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Great start, doll. Looking forward to more.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for the review :) I hope to get the next chapter to you soon.

9/10

kimjo2

wow...what a beginning.  i look forward to further updates.  thank you for resurecting ss from DH.  i' still angry and feel betrayed but stories like yours help tremendously.

10/10

BrenaMarie

Hey!  I just started reading this last night and wanted to tell you that I can't wait for Chapter 3!  Thanks!  ~Brena

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, Brena. It's always nice to know that a reader has enjoyed the story enough to leave a review. Chapter 3 should be out soon since I'm almost finished writing it.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Another great chapter!  Poor Severus.  He can't even seem to find peace in death.  I love the idea that things are being kept even from the Minister.  I think it makes things more interesting when there is a bit of political intrigue.  I loved your idea of the war memorial!  It was very evocative and poignant.  I'm excited for the next chapter.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks so much. It's not the main theme of my story, but I would love to explore the post-war political climate when it fits well into the narrative. 

 The next chapter should be out soon. I've nearly finished writing it.

10/10

Darque Hart

Sure sign of a good story ... the end of the chapter happens too soon!

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Too true, but also very frustrating when you want to know what happens next! I start making up all kinds of storylines in my head to tide me over until the next chapter comes out. 

I'm also glad you didn't find any mistakes this time :)

9/10

sinbad

Poor Severus, after all he's been through he's sick as a dog.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for the review. Life hasn't been very kind to him, so I figured that I had better not be either (although it would be very humorous to see him thrown into a situation where he stumbles into great fortune and fame). 

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Very interesting glimpse of the post war world. Dare I hope that Hermione takes on Snape's case and comes up with some good ideas?
Looking forward to reading more.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

You could certainly hope so, and it might even be a safe bet since this is a SS/HG story :)

0/10

Kailin

Curiouser and curiouser...  More soon?

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Chapter 3 is nearly finished. It just needs to go to my beta for review.

0/10

Kailin

Whoa!  Great start!  I'll be watching for future updates.

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks!

9/10

kimjo2

ooohhh!!  neat-o burrito!  i await further developements with baited breath.  thanks

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

Thanks for leaving a review,

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far.

10/10

jade2099

Hmmm...evil authors who leave cliffhangars like that...well, my kudos to you!  This story intrigued me when I say a description on The Wicked Companion.  That last line was absolutely delicious - I can just see it happening.  I look forward to seeing where you take this story. :)

Response from Lady Silma (Author of Eburos)

It was very evil of me, almost Snape-worthy, wasn't it? In all honesty, the chapter would have been far too long if I had kept the entire scene together, and this seemed like a great place to end it. After all, Severus Snape likes to make an impact :)

I'm not familiar with The Wicked Companion. I'm surprised I haven't heard of it since I'm a member at WIKTT and most of the SS/HG archives. I'll have to google it.

Thanks for the review. 

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