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The Potion Mistress
a_bees_buzz86 Reviews | 7.17/10 (86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )
There is trouble brewing at the Potions Guild and a possibly-not-so-ancient mystery to be solved. Hermione is determined to find the answers, and that includes working out why all paths seem to lead to Severus Snape.
WARNING: Contains DH spoilers
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Ooh, what fun! So Hermione is pretending to be a bloke so that she can become a Potions... Mistress! LOL. I hope she has a wonderful plan for revealing herself immediately after being eternally logged as a Potions Master.
Really good stuff - the part about Harry living with Snape... the very idea makes me laugh. Wow, to have been a fly on that wall....
All right. Off to work. Can't wait for more!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Got it in one! Whether or not she has a plan, well, you'll just have to wait and see.
Not just Harry living with Severus, but an incapacitated Severus who can't do anything about it. I think I could probably sell tickets for the good wall spots for that one.
Response from floorcoaster (Reviewer)
OOh, that WOULD be quite a scene! I can only imagine that an incapacitated Snape would be a VERY grumpy thing to be around! :D
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You know, there just might be a moment or two of flashback to that living arrangement. ;D
“Yes. But they don’t exactly know I’m a twenty-four-year-old woman, do they?”Er, what? Did I miss something, or was that supposed to be kind of a bombshell. Love the bits with Molly and Charlie. Very cool lore about the Guild Hall, too. Looking forward to more!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Foreshadowing, my dear. All will become clear in the fullness of time, in due course, at the appropriate juncture, when the time is ripe, etc., etc., etc.. Just one more mystery for the pot, though that one will be cleared up quite soon.
I'm so glad you're enjoying this.
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Ah, ok. I thought I had completely missed something, but even rereading I couldn't find it. I do love those mysteries.
Great proper first chapter! I'm genuinely intrigued by this story - mystery and all!
I also really enjoyed the part about Harry and Severus; it would seem reasonable that after everything that happened - and with Harry no longer a student and a constant source of worry (and irritation ;-)) for Severus - they would be able to overcome the animosity and come to respect each other.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you.
I'm so glad you liked the Harry Severus friendship. I am a bit worried that some people will see it as too Pollyanna-ish, but it does seem plausible to me. I think a lot of Snape's nastiness to Harry was based on fear that Harry wouldn't be able to be what they all needed him to. With the war over, that is no longer an issue. On Harry's side, having seen the memories, Severus has become a person to him rather than a caricature of the mean teacher. So there should be room for a friendship.
Buzzy girl you have made my day! I saved this chapter till my lunch so I could read it w/o being interrupted.
I adore your calm, short haired Hermione. It was just charming the way she refused to let Molly get her all worked up. I laughed out loud at the free-elf made toys. Similar to free trade coffee no doubt? I think the part about Harry caring for Snape back to health is unique. I cannot remember another story (in this ship) where I read that. Where do you come up with all your clever ideas? I hope your muse continues to allow the chapters to flow from you! I already have this marked for an upcoming quiz. You have hit the big time now sister!!!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Such a pretty pink heart smiley you gave me! Awww.
I get into a quiz? But, but, but ... aren't those for the stories everyone knows? You know, the fanon. I'm just the new kid around here. *tries to look modest*
I have no clue where my ideas come from. My muse never reveals her methods, and I am far too grateful for her gifts to question them. They toys will be explained eventually; they are one of my sillier gimmicks. I do hope you weren't eating anything messy when you got to that part! ;D
I like the friendship between Hermione and Charlie. And I like the way you had Harry and Severus become friends. And I found you here! And they tell me of updates.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You did find me! Was I lost? :D
I'm so glad you like the friendships. I know some writers want to carry on the pre-war hostilities between the characters, but I'd like to think that, in the absence of the threat of Voldemort, most everyone would be able to put those things behind them and move on, at least to some extent.
Thanks for reviewing.
Hmm, a potion's mystery for Hermione to solve. Can't wait to find out what's happening with the Potion guild. So is Hermione disguising herself as a boy to get her Potion Mastery?
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
She is indeed disguising herself as a boy, well picked! I'm glad that I've managed to intrigue you with the mystery.
I'd say the plot thickened quite a bit in this chapter. This Guild Hall is sounding more and more intriguing. As well as, what is Snape up to and is he really a Potions Master?
I'm enjoying this story so much and can't wait for the next update.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm so glad you're intrigued by my little mysteries! All will, of course, be revealed in time. Thanks for reviewing.
Hmmm, even more intriguing than the first chapter. All this talk of the Guild and Houses and mysteries. I love it! I really and truly can't wait to read more!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
The prologue was just the link to canon, this is the beginning of the real story! I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Intriguing! I love a good story that doesn't tell us what happened inthe intervening years, so much as spells it out along the way. How fascinating! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Hi Jen!
This will, indeed, unfold in little bits and pieces. Hope I can keep your interest. :D
Moony did a spectacular job on the banner. It's just gorgeous! What a great surprise.I have to congratulate you on your transitions again. I liked how you moved from present to flashback. Nicely segued.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm so happy you got in the first review! Isn't the banner gorgeous! And there will be more. Moony and I have been talking about this as a collaborative work for quite a while now, but I wanted to spring it on the rest of you as a surprise.
Whose transitions? I'm pretty sure those were your input, my dear.
Well, once again, I loved this. The detail is wonderful, the world of the Guilds and Houses is just fascinating. I've got two windows open so I can review as I read. The beginning of this chapter was fascinating, but I was completely sucked in at the flashback where Hermione helped Charlie with the burns. You must have done a lot of research, learning about burns and how they're treated, and the adaptation to magical treatments were just ... fascinating. I spend about 3 months in the burn unit at the hospital I worked at, and I learned a lot and saw a lot of horrible things. I think burns are the worst possible injury. Anyway, this section was just riveting to me. LOL. I also love the nod to nutrition. :DWonderful! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I was totally thinking of you when I wrote the nutrition part. :D With so many comas, and no mention of IV lines, there had to be some magical means of feeding patients.I did do research on burn treatments (this is turning into a very educational story for me!), but you'll know much more than I do. Let me know if I got anything wrong or missed anything?I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from floorcoaster (Reviewer)
I loved the chapter! I doubt I'd know MUCH more, simply b/c I'm not a doctor, and I didn't directly treat patients. I read through the section very carefully, and didn't spot anything to mention. :)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I was totally thinking of you when I wrote the nutrition part. :D With so many comas, and no mention of IV lines, there had to be some magical means of feeding patients.I did do research on burn treatments (this is turning into a very educational story for me!), but you'll know much more than I do. Let me know if I got anything wrong or missed anything?I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from floorcoaster (Reviewer)
I loved the chapter! I doubt I'd know MUCH more, simply b/c I'm not a doctor, and I didn't directly treat patients. I read through the section very carefully, and didn't spot anything to mention. :)
Great background details for what is to come. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks.Beth
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Yes, this chapter is mostly set up for what it to come. I'm glad it worked for you anyway.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Yes, this chapter is mostly set up for what it to come. I'm glad it worked for you anyway.
Snape Lives! I like your take on reviving Severus. JKR did him (and us) a great disservice when she ended his life in DH. Good for you!Beth
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you! Severus does deserve so much better.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you! Severus does deserve so much better.
I'm just blown away by the richness and detail of your story. I feel like I could walk through the Houses of the Guild as you describe them and fascinated by Hermione's infiltration. I'm excited and nervous for her.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you for the marvelous compliment. This is my first real attempt at world building, so I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the Guild.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you for the marvelous compliment. This is my first real attempt at world building, so I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the Guild.
love it
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you!
I'm finding this story quite enjoyable!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm happy to hear that!Thanks for all the lovely reviews.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm happy to hear that!Thanks for all the lovely reviews.
THis chapter was really well thought out and quite interesting.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you, I'm very pleased you think so.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you, I'm very pleased you think so.
Very good chapter, lots of tid-bits to keep the reader interested without being overpowering.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. This chapter is really an introduction to the main plot lines, so yes, it's a lot of tidbits rather than a solid chunk of story.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. This chapter is really an introduction to the main plot lines, so yes, it's a lot of tidbits rather than a solid chunk of story.
I like your theory, it come across as a different twist to the 'How Snape survived' movement in fanfiction.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. It seems silly to have a Resurrection Stone lying around and not find some sort of use for it.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. It seems silly to have a Resurrection Stone lying around and not find some sort of use for it.
I was so happy to see this update! What a wonderful new chapter.I love reading about the Guild with its history and traditions. I wonder though if it will become even more difficult for Hermione to keep her cover when she moves into another house, and how people there will react to her line of research. I like the way the flashbacks show more of what has happened to Hermione and her motivation for what she is doing. And of course, I love the dragons :D I absolutely adore Calpurnia Bagshot's footnotes, they provide so much fascinating context for the story and its settings. Very much looking forward to more.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you so much for that wonderfully detailed review! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying all the historical detail - I've really let my inner-historian loose on this story, and I wasn't sure how readers would respond. I'll try hard not to make you wait so long for the next one.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you so much for that wonderfully detailed review! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying all the historical detail - I've really let my inner-historian loose on this story, and I wasn't sure how readers would respond. I'll try hard not to make you wait so long for the next one.
Am enjoying this so much! Very well written! Like that she has one person in the Guild that she can be at least semi-open with, even if it does put her cover at more risk. It seems to me that he may have his suspicions about her true identity as well, after all Herman Gage isn't that much different from her true name even if he supposedly hasn't considered her to be altering her age as well... Wonder how much more difficult it will be for her to journey to another House... If she sleeps there, she most likely won't get her own room, and her habits like the early morning run might not be looked upon so lightly... Plus, she just became an Alder. Won't she be leaving that guy in a lurch? So many more questions this time! But that's mostly because with the other chapts I could go straight to the next, no waiting. Looking forward to more! This really is an excellent story.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You are asking all the right questions, ones she's worrying about herself. Her life at the Guild is getting quite complicated. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You are asking all the right questions, ones she's worrying about herself. Her life at the Guild is getting quite complicated. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
I love how intricate and colorful you made the Guild. I can almost see it as I'm reading.The 'excerpts' at the end are a great touch too.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
If you can "see" the Guild, then I've done my job! This is my first real effort at world-building, so I'm thrilled that it's working for you.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
If you can "see" the Guild, then I've done my job! This is my first real effort at world-building, so I'm thrilled that it's working for you.
“What, precisely, do you think that you are doing?” “Batting my mother’s eyes at you.” Great line! “Yes. But they don’t exactly know I’m a twenty-four-year-old woman, do they?” Sounds like women aren't allowed in the Guild and she's in disguise...
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Correct - women aren't allowed, and even if she were male, she was too old when she joined. So she's disguising both her sex and her age.Harry's quite a brat in that line! It's one of my faves too. Glad you liked it.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Correct - women aren't allowed, and even if she were male, she was too old when she joined. So she's disguising both her sex and her age.Harry's quite a brat in that line! It's one of my faves too. Glad you liked it.
Interesting - how will she move onto the next level and will they grant her the title of potions mistress since she is a girl?
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Well, Calpurnia does refer to her as "the Potion Mistress" all the time, so she's got to find a way. After all, this is Hermione, and she generally manages to accomplish whatever she sets out to do.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Well, Calpurnia does refer to her as "the Potion Mistress" all the time, so she's got to find a way. After all, this is Hermione, and she generally manages to accomplish whatever she sets out to do.
Interesting chapter - so Severus told her she could not make it - Hermione is out to prove him wrong - what will happen next.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Nothing motivates our Hermione like being told she can't do something! Thanks for reviewing.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Nothing motivates our Hermione like being told she can't do something! Thanks for reviewing.