Chapter Three: Too Close to the Fire
Chapter 4 of 4
a_bees_buzzA woman with a secret is always at risk of exposure, and Hermione knows a thing or two about being burnt.
ReviewedA/N: I am incredibly lucky to have an amazing team of friends helping me with this story. Bambu345 and Sshg316 are brilliant betas who clean and polish my prose and story. Kribu generously shares both her knowledge and photos of Tallinn, including several of the images below. And now, Camillo1978 has added her skills as a Britpicker to mask my blatantly American use of language. Any remaining errors are entirely my own fault.
Rising before the sun, Hermione moved quickly and silently through the dark House. Years of practice made it possible for her to manoeuvre undetected to the rear entrance, from where she made her way through narrow, cobble-stoned back streets to the apothecary and on to Muggle Tallinn, following the same path she took every weekday morning. Stopping at her flat long enough to change and grab her hand-weights, she Apparated to the far end of Pirita Drive, where it met the river, and began to run along the tree-lined walkway that followed the road, measuring her distance by counting the lampposts as she passed them.
Ever since that horrible night in Malfoy Manor, Hermione had felt the need to be able to defend herself, not just with a wand, but with her own body. As soon as her schedule had permitted, she had taken up karate, joining two different dojos and practicing on her own whenever she found a spare hour. Realistically, she knew that no degree of skill or martial prowess would have saved her from the torture, but she would have made it cost those Death Eaters a bit of pain first. Besides, realism had little to do with it; the classes made her feel safer, more in control, and since she'd started them, her nightmares had been less frequent.
Martial arts techniques alone, however, were not enough. She felt the need for both strength and stamina. Running gave her those.
It also gave her something else, something that came in very handy in maintaining her disguise at the Guild. Within a few months of beginning her exercise regime, she had stopped menstruating. The long months camping out with Harry and Ron had left her almost lean enough to pass for a boy without using a Glamour. Strenuous exercise and eating parsimoniously kept her natural curves from coming back, while the extra strength helped to maintain the illusion of masculinity.
The first greying hints of predawn were beginning to lighten the sky when the road left the sea to take her through Kadrioru Park and into the city. She continued running until she reached her flat, where she showered and changed back into her Journeyman's garb before heading back to the House.
"I'm not late, am I, House Mistress?" Hermione was usually very careful to get back to the House before anyone was up and about, but she'd been thinking about her research into the Guild's history while she showered and had lingered longer than usual.
"Not at all. I was just about to sound the wake-up."
The House Mistress, along with her daughters, knew all about Hermione's early morning workouts. The life of an apprentice was stifling for a teen-aged male, and in the absence of parental influences, it was the House Mistress' responsibility to make sure the boys didn't get into any worse than the usual sort of trouble in their free hours. Hermione had learnt this the first time she was caught sneaking back into the House in the early morning.
"Come with me."
To Hermione's great surprise, the House Mistress led her, not to the Potion Master as she expected, but down to the kitchens.
"You're a coffee drinker in the mornings, aren't you?" the House Mistress asked unnecessarily, as she poured two cups, adding only a dollop of skimmed milk to Hermione's, exactly as she preferred it.
"Yes, Mistress." Hermione was startled to realise her habits had been observed so closely.
They perched on the high stools that surrounded the massive workbench. The previous afternoon, Hermione had spent a long hour peeling potatoes at that very bench. Now that it was clean, she could see how the wood was softened and worn from years of scrubbing. "So am I. It's a good start to the day."
This was obviously Hermione's cue. "I like to start my day with a run."
"Very healthy. Is there a particular reason why you want to keep it secret?"
Somehow, Hermione suspected that neither "To stop my vaginal bleeding," nor "To keep my real body from being too much different from the one you see," would be acceptable answers, and "In case I have to flee for my life from the monsters that populate my nightmares," would only raise more questions.
"I'm small for my age. Sometimes I get picked on. If no one knows that I work out, then I'm always a little stronger and a little faster than the bullies expect me to be."
That evening when she went to bed, there was a key on her pillow with a note reading, "Back door".
Heading up to her room, Hermione let out a sigh of relief. If the House Mistress had noticed that she was freshly showered and dressed for work, not for exercise, there would have been a lot of awkward questions. It was going to be a difficult enough day as it was without starting things off with an interrogation.
If the day before intake was one of mad preparations, Intake Week itself was one of military-like precision. Those twelve days every year, six each during the Spring and Autumn Intakes, were the only times anyone other than sworn members penetrated the interiors of the Houses. As a Journeyman, Hermione was now one of the people responsible for making sure that they learnt no secrets they could take with them. For the next six days, she would be taking turns with the other Journeymen, shepherding the new kids around the House and answering their questions. The trick, she'd been told, was to make them think she was just there to help them adjust to Guild life.
Before breakfast, the entire House collected in the gather room, where the furniture had been pushed against the walls, leaving space for them to line up in their ranks. Having only recently attained Journeyman status, Hermione stood in the second row, most of her view of the proceedings blocked by her taller, more senior colleagues.
One after another the Potion Master called the names of the new applicants and welcomed them to the House.
"Tasgall McIslay."
Hermione smiled as the little Scottish boy stepped forward. He reminded her of Colin Creevey at that age, all wide-eyed eagerness and wonderment.
"Have you come to this House of your own free will, with no motive other than to learn what we can teach you and to join in our communion?"
"That I have."
"Do you come unfettered by other obligations, free to take the oath that will bind your loyalties to this House, this Guild and the sacred traditions of our Profession?"
"Aye, I do."
"Journeyman Gage."
A muted reaction rippled across the room.
Hermione squeezed between the two Journeymen in front of her to stand in front of Dunford.
"Will you take this applicant as postulant, to guide in the ways of our House, our Guild and our Profession?"
"I will," she replied.
Dunford turned to Tasgall. "Journeyman Gage is your Alder. You will look to him for guidance in all things and serve him as he requires. He will be responsible for your training, it is on his word alone that you succeed or fail, and you will owe him your fealty for so long as you both live and serve the Ancient and Noble Order of Alchemists and Brewers. Do you accept this service?"
"Aye, I do."
A shiver ran down Hermione's spine. Postulants were usually assigned to more senior Journeymen; it had not occurred to her that she would be made Alder so early in her career. Up until that moment, there had been no one who would suffer adversely if her deception was revealed. Now there was another career tied to hers, giving her obligations she might not be able to fulfil. Not that her own Alder had ever done much for her. He'd left the House to open his own Apothecary a scant few months after she was assigned to him, and she'd only seen him since then when he'd shown up to play his role in her ascensions. Not that she minded. Crivens was a nice enough man, and she didn't begrudge him his tenth share of the tithe she paid the House.
As a newly assigned Alder, Hermione's week was spent with Tasgall, making sure that he was never allowed to so much as visit the loo on his own and monitoring every space he entered, every word he overheard, and every conversation he held. Of course, she had to do this without frightening him with a false impression of an overly regimented life-style.
While the rest of the House went into breakfast, Dunford pulled Hermione and the other new Alder, a Canadian called Davvy Grieg, aside. "Watch how the others manage their postulants, and let me know if you have any trouble. Whatever you do, don't panic. The worst that can happen is that a postulant needs to be given a light Obliviation. Grieg, you'll have observed this process before, correct?"
Davvy nodded.
Dunford turned to Hermione. "It's early for you, but I think you can handle it. Prove me right." With that, he went into the refectory, leaving Hermione no more confident in her task than she'd been before his little pep talk.
"Nothing like being thrown straight into the deep end, eh?"
She smiled wryly at Davvy. "Headfirst with my hands tied behind my back."
"You'll be fine, keener like you."
He'd called her that before, Canadian for 'swot' she gathered, but this time there was a bit of an edge. Not that she'd let it bother her. If he resented her for being made Alder so quickly, that was his problem.
Being Tasgall's Alder was time-consuming and more than a little stressful, but it did mean that Hermione was exempt from overseeing level exams. These were given during Intake Weeks to avoid any actual brewing in front of the postulants that might reveal proprietary techniques and recipes. Starting after breakfast on Monday morning, the apprentices admitted in the last intake reported to the upper lab for the first stage test. For five days, Hermione supervised Tasgall and others in preparing the ingredients needed for the tests, while nervous apprentices marched up the steep stone stairs as their names were called, remaining in the upper lab for as many stages as they could pass before trudging wearily back down.
By the time she left Tasgall in the kitchen under the House Mistress' supervision to help prepare the evening tea, Hermione's fingers were sore from being twisted together behind her back, the tendons in her neck hurt from tensing her shoulders, and she had a headache of monumental proportions. She barely managed a half-smile as she entered the gather room along with the other Journeymen to wait till dinner was served. Lined up on a side table was an array of full potion vials.
J.J. laughed at her expression. "Step right up! We've got pink for pain," he said waving a particularly lurid vial in her direction, "blue for bruises, and oddly enough, purple for tension. Pick your poison."
"One of each, please," she answered, collapsing into an armchair. "How did you know?"
"Not me. The House Mistress left them for us. What? Tell me you didn't think you were the only one who got stressed by all this."
Before Hermione had time to answer, Grieg entered the room and headed straight for the tableful of vials.
"Praise Merlin I'm in Dunford House," he said.
"Why?"
"Oh, that's right. It's your first time. Healing house, healing potions. They don't have these at some of the others."
Hermione jumped on the chance to hear about the other Houses, and the hour sped by in a welter of anecdotes. After tea was finished and Tasgall safely ensconced in the warded dorter where postulants stayed until they became full apprentices, she returned to the gather room with one of the books she'd found in the Guild library, its cover disguised with a simple charm to prevent any awkward questions about how she'd got it. As she settled in for a quiet read, J.J. draped himself across the back of her armchair.
"You know, you'd be much more comfortable reading in your own room."
Without lifting her head from her book, she replied, "By which you mean that you'll be sneaking out and want to be sure my window will be open when you get back."
J.J. had long since moved on from Chatillon's daughter but he still found it convenient to return from his trysts via Hermione's window, making it much less likely that his nocturnal activities would be noticed by the House Mistress. While Hermione had tried using the window as an exit once herself, her fear of heights had driven her back to her room before she made it to the street.
"Of course. Will it?"
"You can go out for an hour but not much more. I need my sleep tonight."
As it happened, she was back in her room in well under an hour. Whoever had written the book she'd chosen was prone to long, irrelevant recitations of widely known historical facts, and she'd learnt nothing useful. Instead of reading, her thoughts drifted back to the day she and J.J. had become friends.
It was her second week in the Guild. Ever since the night he'd hurtled through her window, J.J. had taken to showing her around, playing a sort of older brother, mentoring role. It was Saturday afternoon, their free time, and he'd promised to take her to the best sweet shop in Muggle Tallinn.
"You're going to love it," he said as they made their way through the back streets. "They do this awesome treacle fudge that ..."
As they rounded the corner, his voice trickled off. There were three boys lined up across the cobbled road, dressed in the red and white of Karsten House. It only took Hermione one glance to see that they bore the collar pips of senior apprentices and that they were all a bit flushed. The reek of firewhisky explained why.
"Brought us fresh meat, did you, little Dunny?" asked the one in the middle.
Hermione shifted her feet into a wider stance as she noted two more, similarly dressed boys, moving in behind them.
"We're not looking for trouble. Just headed for Katariina passage," J.J. answered in a casual tone. "Tell you what. I've got a few extra florins this week. I'll treat you all to some fudge."
"Fudge?" asked the leader. "You think we'd eat Dunny fudge? Maybe we'd rather pack it ... in your little friend's arse!" He reached for Hermione, only to land hard on the uneven stones as she grabbed his arm and flipped him over her shoulder.
The next few minutes were chaos, as the four other Karsten House boys attacked. Hermione took one more down with a roundhouse kick to the side of his head, but couldn't recover her balance in time to stop another from throwing her to the ground. As she scrambled to her feet, J.J. landed hard on top of her, knocking her back down. He was up again and swinging with his fists as she caught her breath, then she lashed out with her legs and brought his opponent crashing down. By the time she got back up, the others were regrouping.
Grabbing her by the sleeve, J.J. said, "Run!" and they took off for the Apothecary and out into Muggle Tallinn. J.J. led her away from the town square, through the Katariina passage and out the nearby Viru gate, where he collapsed on the nearby grass. "We're safe now. Hansas aren't allowed out of the old city; afraid all the modern stuff will taint them."
Hermione breathed in the scent of the flowering white lilac by the gate before asking, "'Hansas'?"
"Karsten House is one of the last of the old Hansa Houses, from back when the Guild was just the Hanseatic League. Most Houses changed hands long ago, but Karsten's kept itself 'pure'." His sarcastic tone left little doubt of his feelings about that sort of purity.
"I see. Should we tell the City Watch?"
J.J. sat up and crossed his legs. "You're going to have to be more careful. Guys don't do that, going to the cops when no one got hurt. It's a dead giveaway."
Hermione kept her composure, but her heart was racing. "I don't know what you mean."
"Back there in the fight, when I landed on you, there was something that shouldn't have been there. Two somethings."
Glamours could hide appearance, but short of living on Polyjuice, there was nothing she could do to disguise her breasts from touch. "Are you going to tell anyone?"
He stared out at the busy roadway in front of them. "Did I ever tell you who my favorite is, of all the war heroes?"
"Harry Potter, of course."
"Nah. Most people go for Potter. Me? I've read everything I could get my hands on about Hermione Granger. At the end of the war, when everyone else was celebrating, do you know what she did?"
"Why don't you tell me?"
"She worked with burn victims. Harry Potter and Neville Longbottom and all the others went around getting awards and making speeches, but she didn't do any of that stuff. Too busy saving lives. She's kinda my inspiration. I mean, brewers, we don't get famous, but what we do? It saves lives. No big limelight, no fancy awards, just, you know, making a difference. Like she did. That's real heroism, for me anyway." He stood up and stretched. "My sister studied here. Just for a few years, until she couldn't hide her shape anymore. She's as good as me any day, maybe even better. Someday they'll have to change the rules. Until then, you should meet my tailor."
"I beg your pardon?" The sudden change of subject caught her off guard.
"My tailor. He's amazing. My sister swears she got a full extra year in because of his cutting. He could make Dunford look built, if he tried. It should be safe now; I'll take you to his shop."
As they walked together, Hermione's thoughts drifted back to that time just after the Battle. She'd been overworked and short-tempered and too cranky to bother with all the festivities, despite Harry's best efforts to drag her out for some fun. It hadn't felt heroic; more like drudgery.
"So, what's your real name?"
J.J.'s question broke her from her reverie. "I'd prefer not to say. I don't want to be rude, really I don't? But it's going to be difficult enough pretending as it is I think I need to keep it up all the time. The more you know about the real me, the more likely it is that one of us will slip up. Do you mind if we act like I really am Herman? Even when it's just the two of us?"
"I guess not. Makes sense. One question though."
"What?"
"The way you fight. It's a bit strange for a witch. Was that because of the war?"
So much for not mentioning the war. Hermione picked her words carefully. "You can't always count on your wand in a fight; they're too easy to drop or get broken or taken from you."
"You were right in it, then?"
"It was everywhere. Everyone was in it. And that was two questions. As much as I don't want to talk about who I am, I really, really do not want to discuss what happened in the war. I know how interesting you find it, but that's only because you didn't live it. If we are going to be friends, you are going to have to respect that."
"Yeah. I can do that."
Hermione breathed a quiet sigh of relief. J.J. was a nice kid, and she could see them becoming good friends, but he was also the greatest threat to her secret.
...
"So, who was it this time?" Hermione asked as he clambered into her room a few hours later.
"A Muggle girl, no one you'd know."
"Run out of witches, have you?"
"Nah, but they gossip too much. As long as I only see Muggle girls, Cassie won't find out."
"Cassie? Tell me you are joking. That is the one witch you cannot 'goof around' with. Ever."
Cassiopeia Dunford was the very sharp-tongued youngest daughter of their Potion Master.
"You think I don't know that? She'd dismember any guy who just tried to use her and leave the pieces in the town square."
"Then why do you care if she knows who you're seeing? You've never cared before."
"Because I'm not planning to use her. I'm twenty-one now; it's time to start thinking about settling down, and I plan to settle down with Cassie."
"But you're still sneaking out to see Muggle girls."
"Hey, I'm twenty-one. I have needs. Besides, it's my last chance to play the field; Cassie won't let me get away with anything once we're together."
Hermione just shook her head. "If you get together. She sees right through you, you know."
"That's what's so great about her." He looked at Hermione speculatively. "You know, it's about time you started dating. Unless you're planning on being a guy your whole life. Nineteen is a bit late to be starting."
"I should think so, considering you started using my window as your personal entrance when you were sixteen."
"So. What about it?"
"Sorry, J.J., you're not my type."
He threw her pillow at her. "Not me, you idiot. But seriously, how are ever going to date when you're disguised as a boy."
"Don't worry, I've got it covered."
"How?"
"There's someone. I see him on my afternoons off."
"Who?" J.J. asked disbelievingly.
"No one you know. He's not in the Guild."
"So, tell me about him."
Not bloody likely, thought Hermione. There was no way she could explain to J.J. that she had a highly satisfying, friendly, casual sexual relationship with a thirty-something-year-old man. Somehow, it had never occurred to J.J. that she could be disguising her age as well as her sex.
"He's someone I know from back home. A friend of the family." That was not entirely untrue. While Charlie wasn't actually a friend of her family's, she was a friend of his.
J.J. hesitated. "I ... wasn't sure you still had a family."
"Of course I have a family. Where do you think I spend all my holidays?"
"I didn't know. Not that I haven't wondered, but you're always so close-mouthed about anything to do with your past."
"I have two parents, both living. No siblings. A bunch of friends."
"Why don't you ever talk about them?"
"Because there's nothing to say. They are incredibly ordinary. Now get out and let me get some sleep."
Not that she could sleep. J.J. had reminded her twice that day of the world she'd left. As she lay in her bed under the flowered yellow blanket, the memories came flooding back.
In the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts, a group of Death Eaters escaped into the Forbidden Forest. They hid out there for a few days, then descended on Hogsmeade in the early hours of the morning when the villagers were sleeping off the effects of their celebrations. Surrounding a group of houses, they set them on fire, a constant stream of Incendios countering the Aguamentis of those trapped within, keeping the flames going as their victims burned. It was an act of sheer hatred, directed at no one in particular. By the time Aurors arrived, there were four dead and the Healers thought it unlikely any of the other fourteen would survive their injuries.
Severe burns were, of course, a rarity in the wizarding world. The Aguamenti spell was one of the first taught in the sixth year at Hogwarts, at an age when young wizards and witches could reliably count on having enough control to keep a stream of spell-magic steady, and the lesson was repeated several times to ensure thorough familiarity. As a consequence, burn treatment was given low priority in magical medical training.
The injuries of the unfortunate survivors of the attack in Hogsmeade were, thus, far beyond the capabilities of the Healers of St Mungo's, and the already overcrowded hospital, struggling to cope with those injured in the battle itself, could not find space for patients they could not treat. And so, the barely living charred bodies were gently floated to the infirmary at Hogwarts to be kept as comfortable as possible in their final hours as they waited for death to claim them.
These plans were made with the best intentions, but without full command of the facts. There was, in fact, one magical facility that did advanced work on severe burns: the clinic at the dragon reserve in Romania. It was only minutes after the first burn victim was brought into the Hogwarts infirmary when Charlie Weasley burst through doors and started giving out orders. "No pain relief! Sorry, Madam Pomfrey, but you're going to have to trust me on this one. Paralyze them to stop them writhing around and doing more harm, then make sure they're breathing nothing but pure oxygen." He showed her how to adapt the Bubble-Head Charm to the purpose, then turned to Harry and Hermione. "Burn paste. We're going to need a bucket of it. Someone start brewing."
"I'm on it," said Harry. He and Hermione had been visiting Professor Snape or, rather, had been trying to convince Professor Snape to acknowledge their presence. It hadn't gone well, and Harry was eager to be of some use.
"No, wait. You ..." Hermione struggled for the appropriate words.
Harry almost managed a smile. "Are pants at potions? Don't worry, I didn't mean me. I'll just get it organized."
"While you're at it, organize someone to get to a Muggle apothecary. We'll need as much as they can get of these, as quickly as possible." Charlie quickly scrawled a few lines on a bit of parchment.
"I can do that," Hermione offered.
"Not you, love." Charlie winked. "I've got other plans for you."
Those plans turned out to involve assisting him in the work. "I keep hearing how brilliant you are at Charms here's your chance to prove it. Think you're up for a challenge?"
"Yes. But ..."
"But what? I don't have time to waste here."
Hermione squared her shoulders and took a deep breath. "I can do precision work, but ... I've got out of practice ... and it's ..."
"Spit it out, love. What's the problem?"
"I'm having trouble with the stronger spells. Anything that takes real power. If you need that, you should find someone else."
Charlie gave her shoulders a quick squeeze. "Not a problem. You'll be right."
The first victim brought in must have been hit face-on with a wall of flame. Lain on its back, the body looked like nothing more than a human-shaped charred mass. Hermione couldn't even tell if it was a man or a woman. Charlie worked quickly, filling a bath with lukewarm water, then he gently lifted the patient into the bath and immersed them completely, the Bubble-Head Charm making breathing tubes unnecessary.
"Now the real work begins," Charlie said. "Normally, I'd have you do the body work, but that takes a bit more effort. So you're stuck with the tricky part." He placed the small pot of burn salve Madam Pomfrey had on hand beside her and cast a charm that projected an image of the patient's respiratory system directly above the bath. Nearly all of it was blackened and immobile, with just patches of pink tissue contracting and expanding in time with the harsh wheezing sounds. "Nothing but Wingardium Leviosa. Use it to lift out a bit of the paste and, using the image as a guide, slide it along the nasal passages."
As the pea-sized globule entered the patient's nose, its image appeared in the projection, allowing Hermione to see where she was moving it. The pearlescent paste soon turned dark, but in its wake was a path of clean, pink flesh.
"When the ointment gets too dark to see through, dump it in the bucket by your feet and get a new bit," Charlie directed, his attention focused on keeping the bubble and projection charms functioning and gently displacing the water, keeping a clean buffer around the patient's body and collecting the foul, blackened liquid at the bottom and sides of the bath.
It got more difficult as Hermione worked deeper in the lungs. Without pain relief, the patient's breaths were ragged and uneven, making it difficult to keep the ointment in contact with the surface. It was nearly half-an-hour later when Seamus Finnegan staggered in, holding aloft a carrier bag with the distinctive, bright blue Boots logo. "Ran all the way to gate. Apparated there'n back. Ran back here," he gasped.
"Without stopping to remember that the anti-Apparition wards are still down," Madam Pomfrey noted as she took the bag from him and began sorting through its contents.
"Bloody hell." Seamus collapsed dramatically on the floor, rolling away just in time to dodge as yet another victim was brought in.
"Did you get everything?" Charlie asked.
"Not quite. Pharmacist wouldn't give me any antibiotic without a prescription, even Confunded."
"Mr. Finnegan, tell me you did not perform a Confundus Charm on a Muggle pharmacist," Madam Pomfrey demanded.
"Had to, didn't I? They ask questions when you get this stuff." He held up a red packet, crossed with a yellow lightning bolt. "'When pain strikes, hit back with the power of Solpadeine!' Figured this was the stuff; looks like it was made for Harry." He turned to Charlie. "I got some antiseptic. Can you use that 'stead of the antibiotic?"
"It'll do for now. Good thinking. Now, go talk to an Auror; they'll go easier on you if you explain before they catch you."
Following Charlie's instructions, Madam Pomfrey thinned the antiseptic ointment and poured it into the bath, then added a potion and several packets of the Solpadeine to a large vat of sterile water. Hermione paused briefly in her work to watch as the nurse efficiently measured out cups of the solution and performed a spell to transfer them into the stomachs of the patients.
"What is that?"
"The potion? It's a simple nutritive. I give it to all my patients who can't eat for themselves; you've had it a time or two yourself. The powder is some kind of Muggle pain relief, I just hope it will work," Madam Pomfrey replied shaking her head.
"They'll need more of that solution every hour," Charlie instructed. "Need to keep their fluids up."
It took most of an hour before the lungs were clear, by which time Hermione could begin to see hints of reddened flesh beneath the external charring of what was now clearly a male figure. The treatment was slow and laborious, though nothing was as bad as that first half-hour when Hermione had avoided looking at the pain-stricken eyes of her patient. The Muggle medicine did its job, making everyone just that little bit more comfortable. Keeping the patient suspended in the bath, the antiseptic solution circulating, and the image of the airways projected were all simple spells, but managing all three at once took a bit of concentration and a fair amount of power. Hermione tried it once, switching roles with Charlie, but she didn't have enough power to keep all three spells going at once, so she stuck with applying the healing potion within the lungs. It was a complicated and delicate process, but less draining. Meanwhile, Madam Pomfrey arranged for nurse-trainees from St. Mungo's to perform the constant rounds of purifying the patients' oxygen and refilling their stomachs with solution.
The first few times each patient was treated, the globules of ointment blackened quickly and needed replacing after covering no more than a scant square inch of tissue. Once the initial cleaning was finished, however, the damaged surfaces quickly became clogged with scabs and pus, requiring regular repetition of the treatment to allow unfettered breathing. To ensure that they were not disturbed in their work, Hermione and Charlie carried out the procedures in the only private room the Hogwarts infirmary possessed the same room that, for security reasons, Severus Snape resided in.
It was their fourth day of treating patients. The work required intense concentration, so they rested for a few minutes between each case.
"Why do you use Muggle medicines? Don't potions work better?"
Charlie paused in his stretches, letting his arms swing free and swivelling his torso back to face Hermione. "Normally, yeah. But when they're this bad, you can't. It overloads their systems and they go into shock."
"But potions are more effective." She was clearly not going to accept his word as definitive. "It just doesn't make sense."
"Think, Miss Granger. How are potions different from spells?" The voice was weak and raspy, but unmistakable.
Peeking cautiously around the curtain that divided the room, Hermione replied. "Professor Snape? We didn't mean to disturb you."
"I am not disturbed, I am bored. This conversation holds some slim promise of distracting me from my otherwise fascinating occupation of intensively studying the ceiling tiles. Now, answer the question."
Hermione opened the curtain partway as she considered the matter carefully. Obviously, he wanted more than the simple distinction between the process of incantation and the application of a physical substance. "I'm not sure. They both involve the use of magic, though the methods of delivery are different."
"Just the methods of delivery? What else is different?"
It took a moment before she got it. "Spells work on anything. They can be used to levitate inanimate objects or attack Muggles. Potions only work on people or creatures that are magical."
"Precisely." There was a polite silence while he wheezed. When he got his breath back, he continued. "What does that tell you?"
"That potions are not magical in and of themselves? They only affect the magic of others?"
"Astounding. It seems, Miss Granger, that there is more to you than book learning. Now, finish the thought."
Flushed with pride at the first compliment she had ever received from the Potions master, she focused intently on the original question. "Charlie said the patients go into shock if they have potions for their skin damage and pain as well as for the internal damage. If the potions stimulate the patients' magic, and these are patients who are already very badly weakened, then multiple potions would diffuse their magical energy."
"Exactly. By using Muggle treatments on the skin and for pain, we're focusing the magical energy on the critical organs." Charlie completed the explanation.
Snape nodded. "It is an ingenious method. In the last war, there were attempts to deal with severe burns by treating only the organs, but the patients invariably experienced severe infections. It seems that Muggle medicine can stave off those complications without draining magical energies."
"That should be points to Gryffindor, don't you think?" Hermione asked Charlie, carefully not looking at Snape.
"Five points for Miss Granger. No more."
"Oi! That's a bit stingy. It's my method," Charlie replied indignantly.
"I will grant you five points each ... if you allow me to observe the procedure."
Charlie and Hermione exchanged grins. "I think that can be arranged."
As the patients improved, Charlie gradually introduced a series of potions targeting the worst problems first. The lung-cleansing process was still needed, but only once or twice a week; in between, they gave treatments to heal the skin and re-grow lost ears and fingers and such. If the patients behaved themselves, that was.
The day Hermione returned to the infirmary from yet another funeral service only to smell cigarette smoke clinging to the skin of a middle-aged male patient and discovered traces of black in lungs that had been nearly healed just days before, the strain and exhaustion caught up with her. Charlie was speechless in his admiration as she raged for a full twenty minutes without once repeating herself or resorting to the use of either hexes or bad language. By the time she had covered the general idiocy of smoking, the particular idiocy of a burn victim getting a mate to smuggle fags into an infirmary, and the criminal idiocy of the other patients who had witnessed his behaviour and failed to report him, even Snape was impressed enough to comment.
"Really Miss Granger, I had hoped that you'd outgrown your habit of disappointing."
Turning on him with a glower, she demanded to know just what, precisely, he thought he was on about.
"You show great promise as a Healer, but your bedside manner is abominable. I'm afraid you shall have to pursue some other career," he explained.
She was never certain if it was his words or the flat, almost bored way he said them that snapped her out of her fit. All she knew was that one moment she had been shaking with the force of her righteous indignation and the next she was laughing for the first time in weeks.
Charlie put an arm around her, saying, "It was a hell of a performance though. Nearly put Mum to shame there."
Even Snape managed a chuckle when the deservedly maligned patient escaped from the room without waiting to get into his gown.
The mood was broken when Madam Pomfrey stepped into the room, bringing the senior mediwizard in charge of Snape's case with her. There had been innumerable tests and consultations over the past weeks, many of which Hermione and Charlie had heard through the curtain, but the grim looks on the Healers' faces were new.
Charlie went and fetched the next patient, and they worked quietly on their side of the room, trying not to let too much of their attention be drawn to the murmuring of voices from behind the now-drawn curtain. It was fortunate they were on the last treatment of the session and that it turned out to be a quick one. They were just cleaning up for the day when the shouting started. Hermione and Charlie had barely enough time to exchange worried glances when they heard the mediwizard declare he would not be spoken to in that manner. As he stalked past them and out of the room, Hermione peered around the curtain to find Snape and Pomfrey locked in a struggle.
"Will you get out ... of ... my ... way." Severus was gasping to get out the words.
"No, Severus. I will not."
Chest heaving, he collapsed back onto the bed from which he had not been allowed to rise. "So. I am a prisoner here."
"Of course not. But I will not allow you to further endanger your health "
"I have no health to endanger. As there is nothing further you can do for me here, if I am not a prisoner, I am entitled to return to my home."
"And how do you plan to accomplish that, eh? You can barely get out of bed."
"Madame Pomfrey? If the professor would permit it, Charlie and I would be happy to help him to his quarters," Hermione offered.
"Don't be ridiculous, girl. I have no interest in spending one more minute in this castle. I will convalesce in my home, not some draughty pile of rubble, barely held together by aging spells and wishes."
"Dammit, Severus!" Madam Pomfrey was upset enough to raise her voice, an unprecedented event in Hermione's experience. "It's not convalescing when there is no hope for improvement. You need to be cared for, not wasting away on your own."
"Am. I. Free?"
Poppy Pomfrey shook her head, concern etched on her already strained features.
Hermione tried to help Snape out of his bed, but he brushed her aside. "Please, sir. I want to help you."
He grimaced but nodded his acquiescence, and Hermione sent Charlie to get a hover-chair.
"You'll have a full-time carer or I'll drag you back here myself," Madam Pomfrey declared as Hermione and Charlie took her erstwhile patient out of the infirmary.
Snape was quiet, speaking only to give them directions to his house and to lower the wards to allow them entrance.
"Is there somewhere nice we can go?" Hermione asked as she and Charlie left the shabby house at Spinner's End.
"You're hungry?" asked a confused Charlie.
"No. Not a restaurant. Just ... somewhere nice. Somewhere where no one is injured or heartbroken and people who spent twenty years hiding everything good in themselves to help others aren't rewarded with incurable illnesses and I don't have to think about the reports coming out about all the horrible things that happened to Muggle-borns or the mess the Ministry is making of the war crimes trials or ... anything. I'm so tired of it all. Please, Charlie. Is there anywhere nice left in the world?"
"I know one."
He Apparated her to a small, empty, non-descript flat and took her straight to the fireplace. "It's Kogaionon," he said, holding out a pot of Floo powder.
Hermione stepped through the fireplace into a space like none she had ever seen before.
She was in a large room, clearly designed for dining, with long wooden tables and benches, but she barely noticed those. It was the heavily beamed wooden walls and ceiling that caught her attention, covered as they were in bright paintings of scenes from stories of dragons, both historical and mythic. She picked out a panel depicting the crimes of the dragon hunter Christians call Saint George, another of Tiamat giving birth to the first dragons, and even, along one beam, a Hungarian Horntail chasing an egg-carrying wizard with a familiar scar, who turned and waved at her before whipping around to the other side of the beam to slip past his pursuer.
The dozen people sitting in small groups around the room were all staring at her when Charlie stepped out of the fireplace behind her.
"It's all right," he said. "She's with me."
At that, they turned back to their conversations and drinks.
"This is the reserve." It was a statement, not a question.
"Thought you might like to meet my girl."
He took her out of the common house and along a path that led down a grassy hill and along a woven wooden fence. Hermione counted four gates before they stopped and turned into one. It was the first time Charlie had mentioned a woman, and Hermione wondered what she'd be like. She worked on the reserve, obviously, so she'd be fit, probably pretty tough. Then again, Charlie was a Weasley and as friendly and sociable as any of his clan. Someone like Tonks, Hermione decided, as they came over a small rise.
"There she is. What do you think?"
Hermione froze. Not twenty yards away was a full-grown, Australian Opal-Eye dragon, quietly sunning herself. At least, Hermione assumed it was "herself," since Charlie had referred to her as a "she". Hermione was far more interested in backing away without being noticed than in checking for any sort of physical sex markers.
"This is your idea of nice?" she whispered, as she tried to step backwards.
"Trust me," Charlie replied, grabbing her hand and leading her right up to the very relaxed-looking dragon. "This is Illuyanka. You walk up to her and bow, yeah, just like that. Now, you stand right in front of her and let her check you out before you make any moves."
Illuyanka rolled lazily onto her stomach and peered at Hermione, stretching her neck to one side and then the other as she looked the terrified witch over from both sides, before ducking down and rubbing the top of her head against Hermione's shoulder.
Charlie sat beside his familiar, leaving Hermione on her own. "She's accepted you now; you can touch her. Scratch behind her ears, she likes that."
The Opal-Eye's skin was surprisingly warm and soft, and she responded to Hermione's touch with a deep, rumbling sound, not unlike the one Crookshanks made when his tummy was rubbed.
Hermione gasped in shock as a heavily-clawed hand suddenly thrust her to the ground, but recovered when Illuyanka settled her head in Hermione's lap and rolled one, glowing eye towards Hermione's in a clear demand for more scratching. As Charlie lounged against the dragon's undulating rib-cage, Hermione asked, "Why is she letting me do this? I thought dragons were violent."
"Nah. They're only dangerous when they feel threatened or when they're protecting their young. For the Triwizard Tournament? We brought brooding dragons. Kept the real eggs in incubators and gave them enough time with the fake ones that they'd try to protect them."
They sat quietly until the sun began to set and the dragon got to her feet and lumbered off.
"Where is she going?"
Scrambling to his feet, Charlie gave Hermione a hand up. "They sleep in Zalmoxis' Cave. There's a hot spring that runs through the cavern, keeps it warm all year round."
"But, Zalmoxis' Cave has been lost for thousands of years. All the books say so."
Charlie grinned. "Nah. It was never lost, just secret-kept. You'll forget you know about it as soon as you leave."
As they walked back up the hill, Charlie asked, "Nice enough for you?"
"Wonderful. Thank you, Charlie. It was just what I needed. I had no idea dragons could be such peaceful creatures."
"Ready to go back?"
She stopped walking, looking off into the distance at the oddly curved and layered roofs of the huts that dotted the valley. "Not really."
He put an arm around her, a friendly, supportive arm, with just a hint of the possibility of more in the way his hand cradled her hip, his fingertips brushing the subtle curve of her belly. "You can stay if you want."
Turning into his embrace she replied, "I'd like that."
Sex with Charlie was a revelation. Not that she was a virgin she and Ron had celebrated Voldemort's demise and mourned their dead in a night of passionate exploration. It had been everything a first time should be, awkward at first, with a moment or two of embarrassment, then all-consuming. There had been a sense of desperation in the way they'd reached for each other, over and over, as if somehow their coupling would make the victory real and the losses less important, and in between there were tears and reminiscences of the events of the past year. In the morning, sore and tired, they'd shared a smile.
"That was ... a long time coming," Hermione had offered.
He'd smiled again. "You know I love you, yeah?"
"I do. But not that way. It's all right; I don't either."
"It was a great night, though. I'm glad my first time was with you."
"Me too."
Where sex with Ron had been fraught with layers of tension and emotion, sex with Charlie was fun. There was a lot of, "Tell me how you like it," and "Try this," and "What if we?" Mostly, there was a single-minded focus on the pleasure of the moment. It was exactly what she needed.
After five days of escort duty, Hermione had learnt to be grateful for having been made an Alder. While her task had become easier as the days went on, the other Journeymen had become more and more tense.
By Friday, the apprentices all knew their results and were ready to go out and celebrate. Hermione was grateful that each of them had managed to pass at least one stage. An apprentice who failed to progress in a cycle would be given probationary status, if they failed to progress a second time, their apprenticeship ended. While not every apprentice could achieve Journeyman status, it was always preferable when they recognised their own limitations and took their leave with grace rather than being pushed out.
Journeymen, on the other hand, reached the end of the week in a heightened state of anxiety. Those who had not been given postulants to supervise had taken turns administering the examinations, and the final act of the examination drama was the testing of the Journeymen. On Friday afternoon, the apprentices were released early and given the evening off; tradition dictated that those who had advanced the greatest number of stages bought the first rounds, while the applicants, despite their tender years, were expected to indulge in at least a taste of the local brews. Meanwhile, the Journeymen waited nervously in the gather room and prepared to be grilled. They had long since mastered the most intricate techniques of brewing and potion assessment, now it was their skills in assessing brewers that were being measured. The Potion Master had sat in on the apprentices' exams to observe, not the apprentices, but their examiners. With that done, he interviewed each Journeyman in his office, one after the other, asking each to identify the strengths and weaknesses of every apprentice in the House.
Not having been part of the examination process, Hermione would only have to give her general assessment of the various apprentices, as well as her impression of Tasgall. Nevertheless, the procedure would be the same, and she would still be evaluated on her performance. Hermione had very little idea of what to expect, although she rather suspected that J.J. had indulged in a touch of artistic license when describing the process. If J.J. was to be believed, and Hermione was quite sure that he wasn't, the exam began with the kissing of the hem of the Potion Master's robe, the entire interview was conducted with the Journeyman on his knees with his forehead pressed to the floor, and every poor answer was rewarded with a stinging hex. She'd managed to keep a straight face until he started in on the proper way to exit when the exam was finished (crawling backwards while intoning "Thank you, master").
Davvy had snorted. "As if anyone could ever make me grovel."
Privately, Hermione thought of a few who could, but those thoughts didn't belong inside the Guild.
In the event, she found herself sitting comfortably in a leather armchair, sipping tea, and having a perfectly civilised conversation. Dunford's questions were probing, and she had to choose her words carefully, but having survived nearly a year of private tutelage with Severus, it was nothing she couldn't handle.
"There is one more brewer I'd like to discuss, sir." They had completed the roster of the apprentices and applicants, but Hermione wasn't quite finished. "Claude Pyrites."
Dunford frowned. "I hope you don't expect me to share with you my assessment of his work in this House that information is only for his ears and those of his Master but if there is something you think I should know before making that assessment, I'm happy to listen."
"It's not about his assessment, not really, though it is related. The thing is, he has such a talent for healing potions, and he's not at all interested in cosmetics. Isn't there some way he could stay here? Switch Houses?"
"Ah. Sadly, there is nothing I can do." He held up a hand to forestall her protest. "I agree that his talents are not ... as suited as they might be to his current House, but there is currently no means of changing Houses."
"'Currently'?" Hermione sat forward in her chair. "If there once was, then perhaps we could find a way ..." The sad expression on the Potion Master's shaking head stopped her. "Sir?"
"The only way that a member of the Guild can change their House allegiance is to enter or leave the House of a newly named Potion Master. The rule was set in the 17th century, when a Potion Master was murdered by one of the Alchemists of his own House. It seemed the two had been competitors since they had apprenticed together, and the Alchemist could not bear to serve his rival. There was some fear that an unpopular appointment would result in an empty House, so the rule was set to work both ways; there will always be dissatisfied apprentices willing to chance a new master, allowing the new Potion Master to make up for his losses."
"Then, in the ... current circumstances," Hermione knew better than to explicitly mention what those circumstances were; the subject was never openly discussed "perhaps there should be a new rule. Wouldn't that make sense?"
Once again shaking his head, Dunford replied, "In the ... current circumstances, as you put it, such a rule will not be needed long, will it?"
"No. I suppose not."
With a wry smile, Dunford asked, "Have you chosen your next journey?"
While there was no set rule, most Journeymen spent no more than every second quarter at their own Houses. As much as they owed service to their House, it was the role of a Journeyman to journey.
"Xie," Hermione replied firmly.
"Interesting choice. What is your reasoning?"
"Doesn't every Journeyman want to journey to Xie?"
"Many, not all. And I'll need a better answer before I'll submit a petition," he answered sternly.
Taking a deep breath, Hermione replied. "I believe there may be unexplored medical potential in the work of Xie House. The experiments I've been running, mixing Muggle technologies with traditional potion brewing suggest interesting possibilities, but the Muggle methods mute the effect of magical ingredients. With the power of "
"Enough!" Potion Master Dunford frowned at Hermione. "You know that I have my doubts about that line of research."
"Yes, sir."
He swept his fingers across his lips and grasped his chin. "You are the most promising brewer to enter this house in twenty years. I tell you that, not to flatter you, but as a warning. The last to show such promise insisted on following his own path against my advice, and was lost to us. You know of whom I speak."
Hermione nodded. In all her years at the Guild, this was the first time that Dunford had in any way referred to Severus Snape.
"I will allow you this attempt under one condition. Give me your word that if it fails, you will give up this foolishness."
"You have my word."
"Then I will submit the petition."
...
Calpurnia Bagshot's notes on the text:
[1] Our Muggle readers may be interested to know more about the devastation of the wizarding population of Europe. The following is a general survey of the matter, taken from the introduction to my recent book, Voldemort Redux: The Second Fall of the Dark Lord, now in its second printing by Obscurus Books:
The 20th century devastated the European wizarding world. Wards and spells that kept Muggle and wizard apart for centuries crumbled under the onslaught of modern warfare. No Disillusionment Charm could stop a bomb or a rampaging squadron of tanks. The innate tendency of magical folk to hide in plain sight, to gather in hidden corners of capital cities, left them vulnerable as war followed war. The greatest destruction came during what the Muggles refer to as the Second World War.
As they had always done in times of turmoil, wizards and witches by the tens of thousands collected in the great schools of London, Dresden, Thessalonika, and Warsaw, and in the Great Hall of the Arithmatic Guild of Zara, and were wiped out as their cities were destroyed. Rural populations, by and large, survived intact the wealthy families with private estates and those who chose quiet lives in remote hamlets but urban ones were decimated, with only the occasional borough, like London's Diagon Alley, escaping the carnage. The only children left were those at the elite academies situated in the isolated fortresses of Beauxbatons, Durmstrang and Hogwarts. Only a few of the major, urban wizarding districts survived, most notably: the Ile Centrale of Paris, located between the Ile de la Cite and the Ile Saint Louis; the Reussplatz of Lucerne; and the Alchemist's Quarter of Tallinn.
As each wave of Muggle destruction ebbed, it was followed by a secondary destruction, one from within the world of magic. The majority of the survivors were those who had already chosen to spurn modern trends and cling to tradition. Few remained of the older mixed-blood families and the Muggle-borns were virtually eliminated. It was this distinction, the brutal severing of the magical community, which spurred the movement for a return to purity. The pureblooded began to believe that it was their very purity that had saved them from the carnage. Thus was born the notion that wizardkind must purge itself of Muggle-borns and half-bloods.
In the waning days of the Muggle Second World War, they found a leader in Grindelwald, who preached that Muggles were too dangerous to allow any contact between the Muggle and the magical, and that the wizarding world would only survive as a segregated, pure community. Frightened witches and wizards, terrified by the carnage they had already witnessed, followed him in an orgy of 'cleansing'. Secret tribunals worked around the clock, judging only one crime, that of 'fraternisation with Muggles'. No evidence was required beyond an accusation by a pure-blooded wizard or witch, and only one sentence was ever given out: death. By the time of Grindelwald's defeat, the damage wrought by wizardkind on itself had so severely compounded that of the Muggle war machines that the magical community was nearly wiped out. Across Europe, a vibrant, progressive, magical population of nearly a million souls was reduced in two generations to less than a hundred thousand.
In Eastern Europe, a third wave of destruction came with the Soviet invasions of Poland, Hungary and Czechoslovakia. Few of the wizarding neighborhoods that survived the initial incursion made it through the sovietisation of the grand, ancient capitals. As elegant, period architecture was bulldozed to make way for concrete blocks, the secret places tucked into the interstices of crenellated cornices were crushed, and their owners made homeless. A new leader arose who promised to keep witches and wizards safe from this latest, rising tide of terror. He called himself Voldemort. His base was not, however, in the East where the horrors were greatest, but in Britain, where distance encouraged perspective. Those who opposed him found a leader in a hero of an earlier age, the great Albus Dumbledore who had led the struggle against Grindelwald. Like all great conflicts, there were moments of despair and moments of heroism, but unlike most, this one was ended by a mere babe.
[2] The secrecy that shrouds the dragon reserve is legendary. From the beginning, when Harvey Ridgebit first proposed the creation of the reserve in 1927, he had hoped to make it an exclusive haven for the magnificent creatures, limiting their human contact to only reserve workers. His request was refused by the members of the Special Committee for the Control of Dragons of the International Confederation of Wizards, made up of the heads of the various departments and bureaus responsible for magical creatures throughout the wizarding world. They insisted that free access by committee members was imperative to ensure that the dragons were properly cared for and that management of such a valuable resource not become corrupted. As the International Code of Wizarding Secrecy had, since 1750, made the concealment of magical creatures a strictly national affair, it was only the seeming impossibility of controlling dragons and preventing them from both revealing themselves to Muggles and crossing national boundaries that had permitted them any sort of international dealings, and they were determined to make the most of the opportunity. While they were all scrupulously exacting in their efforts to capture and deliver all dragons within their territories to the reserve, they were far less scrupulous in their use of their inspectorial authority.
As Ridgebit had expected, "inspections" quickly became frequent occurrences, as members of the Committee brought large entourages of cronies and business associates to ogle the animals. As junkets became more elaborate, they began to strain the finances of the reserve, with guests demanding to be wined and dined in a manner befitting their status. Worse, visitors began to encroach on the dragons themselves. No longer content with merely seeing the animals, "inspectors" and their guests began to insist on entering the enclosures for up-close encounters. When the Norwegian representative insisted on being taken for a flight on dragonback, Ridgebit refused, insisting that he would close the reserve and eradicate every dragon from the face of the planet before he would condone such madness.
The matter was taken to the full Committee, but even as they debated ousting Ridgebit and replacing him with a more malleable director, the matter was taken out of their hands with the eruption of a mass outcry following the infamous Ilfracombe Incident. With so many people entering the reserve, its location had become an open secret in the elite circles of magical society. Inevitably, there were a number of incidents when young people (mostly wizards and generally heavily intoxicated) on dares found their way into the reserve and attempted a variety of interactions with the dragons. Needless to say, most of these incidents ended badly. Severe, and very public, punishments were instituted in an effort to discourage such folly, but it was the deaths of two wizards and a witch that turned public opinion in favour of Ridgebit. The three, all students at Durmstrang, had been attempting to "liberate" a Welsh Green by releasing it in Brecon Beacons. They had made it as far as Devon when the enraged dragon escaped from its confinement and attacked its captors, then fled to a nearby beach. The resulting mayhem required the casting of the single largest Memory Charm ever performed, covering the entire Muggle population of the village of Ilfracombe. By the time the uproar died down, the reserve was secured beyond the power of the Committee to interfere.
Today, the only ways in or out of the reserve are through a very small, tightly controlled set of nodes on the Floo network or to fly on dragonback. To further protect against trouble, should the wards somehow fail, no photographs have ever been taken at the reserve. At the request of the Potion Mistress, however, the current director of the reserve indicated to me buildings of a similar style outside the reserve in order to allow you, dear readers, to create a mental image of the sights that the Potion Mistress was privileged to see.
Sorina Ridgebit, Harvey's wife, has been the designer for the reserve since its creation. A native of Romania, it was she who first suggested the location, on the sacred mountain Kogaionon, hidden from Muggles by the Romanian magical community since the time of the Roman conquest and the beginning of the persecution of the old ways. Under her guidance, traditional Romanian forms, today most commonly seen only in churches, were used for all the structures. An example of the wave pattern of the common house roof can be seen here:
Strong anti-flammation spells are woven into the wood of the buildings, as well as the fences and gates of the paddocks, which resemble these:
Sorina herself decorated the walls and ceiling of the common house in the painting style seen below, albeit with very different motifs:
[3] While unknown to most Muggles, Zalmoxis is nearly as famous among wizard-kind as Merlin. A Thracian wizard, as a youth he traveled to Greece where he was trained by Pythagoras, the founder of the Arithmantic arts. Upon reaching his majority, he returned to his homeland to serve his people. Never a ruler himself, he advised rulers, settled disputes, and used his magic for the protection and welfare of his people. After years of toiling in vain to resolve their constant intra-tribal disputes, he sealed himself inside a cave on the holy mountain of Kogaionon, warning his people that if they did not mend their ways he would never return. When the Dacian Alliance was formed, three years later, he emerged from the cave and served many years as the chief advisor to the ruling council. Long after he was gone, his legend grew amongst the people, until they came to believe that he had died during his sojourn in the cave and been reborn as a god. For centuries, the Dacians sacrificed their noblest warriors to Zalmoxis, believing that in death they would serve Zalmoxis and bring his blessings to their people.
The cave has a later role in history, as the local wizarding community tells the tale of a visit to the region by a beautiful young witch who lured Muggle men into the cave, from which they never emerged. After she left, the remains of the Muggles were found embedded within the living rock of the cave walls, and Zalmoxis' writings, which had been preserved by his descendants for hundreds of years, were gone. This story coincides with the known travels of Nimue in the region, and it is believed that it was there that she learnt the secret to the spell she used to trap Merlin. Unfortunately for historians, in the Middle Ages, the cave became the residence of Hungarian Horntails, and any physical evidence of her experiments was obliterated.
[4] Solpadeine, a low-strength, over the counter mix of paracetomol (acetaminophen) and codeine phosphate, is manufactured by GlaxoSmithKline, a major pharmaceutical company that traces its origins to the humble Plough Court pharmacy, established in 1715 by Silvanus Bevan. What is not well known is that Bevan's maternal grandfather was, in fact, a Potion Master. When young Silvanus turned out to be a Squib, his parents defied the tradition that would have had them cast him out and instead apprenticed him to a Muggle pharmacist. As his business expanded, through his grandfather he recruited other Squib sons of Guild-trained brewers, a practice that has continued through all the incarnations of the company, as a consequence of which no child of a Guild member has been abandoned in at least two centuries. There are, of course, some who find their careers elsewhere, such as Xiaolong Xie, Squib son of Potion Master Jiaolong Xie, who changed his name to the more Muggle-sounding Xiaoliang and currently heads the Xie research group at Harvard University.
The distinctive packaging of Solpadeine, with its Gryffindor colours and lightning-bolt motif, was designed as a tribute to Harry Potter's role in the first defeat of Voldemort:
[5] Some of the locations mentioned by the Potion Mistress are easily accessible, even to Muggles.
From Pirita Drive, one can see the old city of Tallinn rising above the modern port facilities. During the summer months, when the sun rises early in the far north, the Potion Mistress would have enjoyed this view during her morning runs:
When Pirita Drive turns away from the sea, it passes through Kadrioru Park:
Katariina Kaik, or the Katriina passage, leads from the Muggle town square of Old Tallinn towards the city walls:
Muggle authorities have separated the old city from the new, circumscribing the walls with neat lawns:
In spring, a white lilac blooms just outside the Viru Gate:
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I absolutely love this story. Please do continue it! It's one of the best I've read in a while.
I just happened upon this story.
It might well be one of the best fics I've ever read in the Potterverse. And I've read a lot.Hopefully you will one day find the inspiration to continue this. And hopefully it will be soon!
Has this story been abandoned...? I just remembered there was this very original, intriguing storyline that I started enjoying 2 years ago...
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I hope not. I'm on break from fic, but may get back to it some time.
I love the backstory about the attack on Hogsmeade and Hermione's work with the burn victims. Her relationship with Charlie works, I think. (Frankly, I can see her with just about any of the Weasleys except Ron.) And while I'm longing to see more of Severus, the bit you've shown here is great. The amount of detail you've poured into the world of the Guild Houses is fascinating, and I love the pictures. They add so much.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I have real trouble seeing Hermione with Molly! ;-)One of the first things Bambu suggested, when this story was just an outline, was that I try to have some bit of Severus in each of the early chapters before he joins the main story line. So I'm giving the backstory of their earlier connection in bits and pieces, rather than all at once. I'm pleased to hear it's not feeling too disjointed for you.I'm having tremendous fun developing the Guild and it's history and traditions. I've got files of notes on all the Houses and a timeline of the Guild and the development of alchemy that mixes Muggle and magical elements, though I'm not sure how much of that will get into the story. It's becoming a very real place for me.You like the pictures! They are my precious babies. I'm still a bit wibbly about not posting on Ashwinder, but I can't cut out my pretty pictures.
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Er, okay, let me reframe that: I can see Hermione with any of the Weasley kids except Ron. LOLI've got files of notes on all the Houses and a timeline of the Guild and the development of alchemy that mixes Muggle and magical elements, though I'm not sure how much of that will get into the story.That does happen. And while probably only a small fraction will ever actually be shown in the story, it's making it a very real place for us readers as well.I'm still a bit wibbly about not posting on Ashwinder, but I can't cut out my pretty pictures.I can understand that. The pictures do add quite a lot.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I once read a Hermione/Arthur fic, and it was exactly as awful as I'd expected it to be. That was before I learned to be selective in my reading. I can't much stomach her with Percy either, though I can see how there might be an intellectual connection.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I have real trouble seeing Hermione with Molly! ;-)One of the first things Bambu suggested, when this story was just an outline, was that I try to have some bit of Severus in each of the early chapters before he joins the main story line. So I'm giving the backstory of their earlier connection in bits and pieces, rather than all at once. I'm pleased to hear it's not feeling too disjointed for you.I'm having tremendous fun developing the Guild and it's history and traditions. I've got files of notes on all the Houses and a timeline of the Guild and the development of alchemy that mixes Muggle and magical elements, though I'm not sure how much of that will get into the story. It's becoming a very real place for me.You like the pictures! They are my precious babies. I'm still a bit wibbly about not posting on Ashwinder, but I can't cut out my pretty pictures.
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Er, okay, let me reframe that: I can see Hermione with any of the Weasley kids except Ron. LOLI've got files of notes on all the Houses and a timeline of the Guild and the development of alchemy that mixes Muggle and magical elements, though I'm not sure how much of that will get into the story.That does happen. And while probably only a small fraction will ever actually be shown in the story, it's making it a very real place for us readers as well.I'm still a bit wibbly about not posting on Ashwinder, but I can't cut out my pretty pictures.I can understand that. The pictures do add quite a lot.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I once read a Hermione/Arthur fic, and it was exactly as awful as I'd expected it to be. That was before I learned to be selective in my reading. I can't much stomach her with Percy either, though I can see how there might be an intellectual connection.
I'm sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, but this is one of those fics where I really want to have time to sit down and enjoy properly!Anyway, once again, I loved this - both the present and, especially, the flashback. I wasn't all too sure about Hermione's sort-of relationship with Charlie before, but with the back story added, it makes perfect sense and was fascinating to read about. (And I also found it believable that there would still be rogue DEs out and about, causing trouble - it's quite unlikely that one battle was all it took for everything to be fine, after all!) And the bits with Snape, weaving him into the tale, were wonderful, too.I rather suspect JJ might have his suspicions about Hermione's identity - one can but hope that Hermione's secret is safe for now!~Kribu
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm so glad you liked the Hermione/Charlie part. I worry that the true ss/hg fans will get turned off by that relationship, but it's an important part of who she is and how she's organized her life at this point in the story. You'll notice I brushed over the Ron relationship rather quickly - there is only so much I can ask my readers to tolerate!Severus has been a bit player in the story so far, but he'll be getting more important very soon, I promise.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm so glad you liked the Hermione/Charlie part. I worry that the true ss/hg fans will get turned off by that relationship, but it's an important part of who she is and how she's organized her life at this point in the story. You'll notice I brushed over the Ron relationship rather quickly - there is only so much I can ask my readers to tolerate!Severus has been a bit player in the story so far, but he'll be getting more important very soon, I promise.
Just read this story today...and I found it quite intriguing in a good way. There is a lot of detail and groundwork laid out for more to come, but I just wish there was just a smig more to go on.Oh, I see the mystery, the questions, and the possibilities, and it's great, but it is just a touch broad for me.Now, it could be me (I'm only a reader), it could be the sheer number of ideas and possibilities that you could be bringing in, or you are about to do something with the story to help me out and I'm just impatient. That's cool! I'm an easy reader.Can not wait for the update! Thank you for writing and posting!~
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You are quite right, the story is very broad at the moment, with lots of threads, but I promise that I will be bringing them all together eventually. It's going to be a long story, so right now I'm still introducing plot elements. Sorry if that's a bit confusing. I'm very pleased that you are enjoying it, even if it isn't everything you could want just yet.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
You are quite right, the story is very broad at the moment, with lots of threads, but I promise that I will be bringing them all together eventually. It's going to be a long story, so right now I'm still introducing plot elements. Sorry if that's a bit confusing. I'm very pleased that you are enjoying it, even if it isn't everything you could want just yet.
Thank you for continuing this story. I was impressed a few months ago when I found it. It is very interesting. Please remember to write more.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I can promise I won't forget. RL got a bit busy, but I never abandoned the story. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I can promise I won't forget. RL got a bit busy, but I never abandoned the story. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
I’m re-reading, because I have a feeling that we’ll get an update soon, and I have to say that I love this chapter even more the second time around.
You’re a wonderful world-builder: I could feel the heart of old Tallinn, in the intricacy of its two worlds, Muggle and Wizarding, both overlapping and apart. The account of Hermione’s daily life as Journeyman is vivid and credible, and it also sheds a retrospective light on Snape’s story, in such details as the brewer’s costume or having to give up one’s wand on joining the Guild.
What is most fascinating for me, though, is the feeling of time-depth you create.Using the model of the Mediaeval Guild was already a brilliant idea, but framing the story between the publisher’s notes and Calpurnia Bagshot’s notes at the end, as if it were already an object of scholarly debate, is both intriguing and moving. It means that Hermione’s deeds were important, even the stuff of legend. That final note, about “the photograph of the very bed cover the Potion Mistress slept under as an apprentice and a Journeyman” suggests there’s deep affection and curiosity about her character.
The note about Sunjata House is also thrilling, especially accompanied by the beautiful photos. On that subject, may I ask how you managed to insert the images in the text?
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
It shouldn't be too long; I'll finish it up as soon as I'm done with the end of semester marking. The world-building is so much fun, but also time consuming. This is true not just for Tallinn, but also the broader world. I'll be continuing to use the footnotes as my version of the Silmarillion - a place outside of the narrative to describe the history and culture of the world in which the story resides. As to Hermione's importance, well, maybe a bit of forshadowing there.To insert images in text, I just use Photobucket. Go to www.photobucket.com, get yourself a (free) account, and upload a picture. It will give you the HTML code you need to insert it into a story. It's very easy, but let me know if you have you any trouble.
Response from duniazade (Reviewer)
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. I'm jealous of Tallinn, though, as the location of the story - I'd love to see your evocative powers applied to old Bucharest! But you needed a Hanseatic city. I guess I'll have to deal with Bucharest myself.I have tested the photobucket method, and it seems to work fine - thank you so much for the information!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Actually, I had a different reason for choosing Tallin, but it hasn't come out yet. *tries to act mysterious*Glad photobucket's working for you. It's a wonderfully convenient little toy.
Response from duniazade (Reviewer)
A different reason for choosing Tallinn? I'm on tenterhooks!
I love the originality of this story! It would appear that with just a little tweaking it could stand on its own - outside of the Potterverse - as an intriguing *original* story! I look forward to reading more!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
It is, by far, the most original story I've attempted. There will be plenty of links to canon - Hermione is still very much connected to her friends and family back in Britain - but the main story is separate from that world. I'm glad you are enjoying it, I was worried it was too original to appeal.
Response from starmom (Reviewer)
I guess what I like about it is that it COULD exist in its own world outside of canon and wondered whether you thought to attempt to write this as a wholly original piece. I know that I often wonder if I'd ever be inspired to write something original and be brave enough to actually attempt it if I was... Don't get me wrong - I love writing HP fanfic. It's comforting to write within a universe someone else created. But I always wonder if I can do more....
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
The idea for this story actually started with a discussion of why Severus is referred to as a Potions master, when none of the other professors are given the title of "master". It immediately made me think of the medieval guilds, with their ranks of apprentice, journeyman, and master. We only see a very little of the wizarding world in canon, so there is no reason why there shouldn't be all sorts of different aspects to it outside of Britain, and the education recieved at Hogwarts is clearly not specialized enough or advanced enough to account for some of the professions we encounter in canon.
I suppose this could have been done as an original work, but for the moment I like the challenge of seeing how much of canon I can fit into and explain from this different perspective.
Like you, though, I do think about writing original fic someday. I see this story as a bit of a practice run - seeing if I can manage world-building on my own, but still holding onto that HP framework.
Response from starmom (Reviewer)
And you have SO much to work with, given the Guild-framework! Rivalries! Mysteries! Rituals! Secrecy! It's a perfect framework that uses the foundation of the Medieval Guild system and its peculiarities and then adds magic on top of it. Very cool!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm sitting here with a big grin on my face, because you've just said exactly what I think of this story. It's ambitious, but if I can pull it off, it should be a lot of fun.
This would be fascinating even without the illustrations - as it is, it is wonderful.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you so much. "Fascinating" and "wonderful" are truly lovely words.
I'm very pleased that you liked the illustrations. For canon, being set in Britain, most of us have a pretty good idea of what things look like. We don't need a picture of a British pub to imagine The Leaky Cauldron. I don't think most readers have as clear a sense of what Estonian art and architecture look like, so I wanted some visuals to help the readers form mental images. There will be more of them as we go along.
I was so happy to see an update to your story. Though this chapter is quite different from the previous ones I wasn't disappointed. On the contrary I love the rich background you create for the Potions Guild and the different threads that seem to open up. Very intriguing and I hope to read more soon.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
It is quite different; this chapter is the real beginning of the main story. The prologue was a link to DH and Chapter One introduced the ideas of the Guild and the mystery Hermione has to solve (finding true love along the way, of course), and catching us up on where everyone is in their lives. Now is where it gets interesting. At least, that's what I'm hoping. If you found it intriguing, then it did what it was supposed to do.
awesome! please update soon :)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you, but no promises on timing. I've got an exchange piece to write, and I've been told the mods get mean if you slip the deadline.
I'm enjoying the slow reveal of the mystery, and the time you've taken to draw us into the Guild. Looking forward to more.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. This is going to be a long story, so there is a bit of build-up here at the start.
dunno about this Charlie-Hermione thing. So Ron married Luna, huh? That's good, because she's so eerily calm that she'd keep his temper and impulsiveness in check. Much better than that Crappy "epilogue." I like the sound of Harry being Snape's "carer." Talk about giving him added incenntive to get back to "normal", LOL (whatever that is).
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Not to worry, Charlie won't last. You wouldn't want Hermione stuck on a shelf while she waits for Severus, would you? She deserves better than that.
I do think Luna would be good for Ron. She would appreciate his good qualities and let his annoying habits roll off her. And I just couldn't help myself putting Harry and Severus together. They do have so much unfinished business. Plus Harry would push all of Severus' buttons. (And he has so, so many buttons!)
Snape's condition makes perfect sense, as he could "brew glory and stopper death" better than most anyone else. Sounds like a great continuation to what DH termed an ending (of Snape's life, that is). I'm still pissed about his 'death' in DH and appreciate your effort to set things right by Snape.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm so glad you liked my version of saving Severus. I drafted this piece just days after finishing DJ, when I was still feeling really angry about how Severus had been abandoned by both Jo and the characters. This was my attempt to set the story right.
Ohhh, I LOVE that. Seriously. To get Harry to take care of him and become his friend. That's fair brilliant.
And an ancient, medieval Guild. With its own magic and mythology and mysteries. I think I'm in love.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I figured he and Harry had some unfinished business. Putting them together makes them deal with it so they can then move on with their lives, not to mention letting me skip the annoying "but what will the boys say?" nonsense.
I'm so glad you like my idea of the Guild! It's my very own little world to play in.
SQUEEE! I loved this first chapter. YAY! He's alive.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I dashed this off pretty quickly after DH came out, so it's not as polished as some of my writing, but I was determined to save Severus as quickly as possible. Yay, indeed.
Interesting story. Looking forward to the next part.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you.
Holy wow.
I very nearly didn't make it to this chapter. Your first two chapters are full of dialogue which at times feels rushed and flat, and the transitions aren't as smooth as they could be.
This chapter? VERY, VERY different. In fact it's almost as if they're not written by the same writer! This chapter is lush and full and intriguing. Your narrative voice is really fantastic! And oh my god, your knowledge of history and culture is really impressive. A lot of fanfic writers can't be arsed to discover that people don't typically trick or treat in modern day Britain, much less the extent of research you've done. And PICTURES! z0mg!
*is impressed*
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I'm not quite sure how to respond to this. I'm pleased that you liked this chapter. The previous ones were necessary bridges from DH and the canon settings before the story could move into the Guild. This has a lot more description because it's new territory for the reader. I didn't feel like the Burrow needed describing, nor do we need a lot of explanation to picture Harry or Ron's behavior in a conversation.
As for the history, some is researched and some comes naturally - I'm a historian by trade. There will be a lot more of that as the story unfolds.
I like the exposition in the chapter. Lots of background, very detailed. Nice.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. I was worried it was too much exposition and not enough action. I'm glad you didn't find that a problem.
A very interesting story so far. Love the historian! Looking forward to the next chapter. Good work!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. I'm very please with Calpurnia. As a writer, there is so much you want to tell that doesn't fit in the story. She lets me tell some of it. I'm so glad you like her.
Being a native of Tallinn meself, I was quite delighted with the description, especially as I've been toying with similar ideas and placing the wizarding Tallinn in roughly the same areas as you've done here. Technically though, it's quite some distance from the "nondescript concrete housing" area to the Old Town; and if we assume that until the Middle Ages at least, and (as per your) also afterwards, there used to be closer contacts between the muggle and wizarding traditions, it would have been more appropriate to use German words and terms, or perhaps Swedish (Estonia was under Sweden in 16th-18th century) instead of the French "petit dejeuner" and such. We've had very little French influence up here.Other than that, I really enjoy the story.It made me realize though, how hard it must be for the Brit readers to see their familiar education systems, speech patterns, foods etc mangled by the rest of the world, as we do in HP fanfic. I suppose I may have been a bit more critical towards this chapter than I would have been if it had been set in the UK, or Africa, or anywhere else in the world. (OK, that was not really a review, rather a piece of self-reflection.) Say lehva-lehva to Kribu and I'd suggest to her(?) to look also into Katariina Käik and Katariina kirik for other possible wizarding sites :)
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you so much for the concrit, it truly is appreciated.
Kribu's found me a particular building that Hermione has her flat in, which she assures me is only about 10 minutes from the Old Town - it will appear in more detail in a later chapter. It's not in one of the major concrete housing areas, but there is enough there that the description should fit.
I'm very pleased that you picked up on the language issue - it's a very complicated one. The question is, how much is the Guild influenced by being in Tallinn, versus how international it is. While they are physically in Tallinn, the Houses each represent a different geographic area or language group, covering the whole world. So there should be linguistic influences from all over. But the Guild is not all of wizarding Tallinn, and the rest is heavily Estonian. I actually chose the French term deliberately, because the House next door is French and to balance using a British term for the evening meal, but I did check first to make sure the types of meals were appropriate for medieval Estonia.
I hope you do write a story set in Tallinn; I'd love to see how another author uses the same spaces.
I love the detailed, rich background you have constructed for the Guild!
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you. This really is a foundation chapter, that creates the setting for the rest of the story, so I'm very pleased that you found it detailed and rich.
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
There were things that made me go "hmm", but I chalked them up to poetic licence, and also going with the idea of the Wizarding part of Tallinn (and its history) being as separate from the Muggle part as the Wizarding part of London is clearly very different from the Muggle part.
Anything that I might have found odd otherwise can quite easily be explained away, such as the West African apprentices - we can for instance assume that being from a pureblood background, they wouldn't be interested in visiting the Muggle town during any free time (as, well, having black youths seen in real/Muggle Tallinn would be something quite unusual).
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Don't forget that, in canon, Muggles generally don't notice witches and wizards wandering around in robes, walking through walls, and taking owls through train stations. OTOH, they do notice flying cars. There seems to be some sort of "don't notice me" aura around magical people, which would apply to the Guild members in Tallinn.
Was there anything else that made you go "hmm"?
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
Nothing that I couldn't have reasoned away, really.
And that would make sense. I was mostly thinking that if someone already goes to the Muggle part, they might want to interact with people, too, but I guess that wouldn't be necessary.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
I just realised you're Kribu - I'm sorry, I'd forgotten you use
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
around here. Which explains why you're thinking about West Africans running around Tallinn and makes the whole conversation make much more sense.
If it is rich and detailed, it's because you helped to make it that way. I hope you don't mind if I keep picking your brain every now and then for elements of Tallinn life.
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
Oops, I should probably have reminded you. :-D And pick away, it's what it's there for!
Wonderful and fascinating. I'm enjoying the back story of the various Guilds as well as the pictures! Can't wait to read more.
Response from a_bees_buzz (Author of The Potion Mistress)
Thank you so much.