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Stricken, Smitten, And Afflicted
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LOVE this fic!!! I thought I had found all the Marriage Law stories and am thrilled to be wrong! Definitely going to be 're-reading this many times!
Missy/LovesRickman
I love that they wanted to consummate their marriage again, and also that they have been interrupted from doing so by every single person they know. Poor dears, lol.
Well, that could have gotten ugly. It's good they have friends in high places.
I don't think either of them need worry about what will happen if the law is repealed. If there's anything worth worrying about, it is a neglected cat.
Awww ... He takes such good care of her for a cranky old bastard.
I don't mind attending weddings, but I don't really want to ready too many details about one, unless the specifics are important to the story. It was just right. As for the wedding night, I think it was just right. I've read some really bad smut, and this was not bad at all.
Why can't the poor guy just get some peace? At least he didn't push Hermione away in the end.
The flat is lovely (well, will be), the sex is yummy (and will only become more so), and Lucius ... Any chance he'll get run down by the Knight Bus?
Everything seems to be going so well. Just waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Well, that's one way to make her forget how awful her parents treated them.
I think it seems like a good sign if it's not a good idea that he come to her room. His family is awful. No wonder he wanted to leave early.
I typically think that flirty and Snape don't belong in the same sentence, but I'm finding that I like this side of him. I don't seem to be the only one, either.
Now see, they can play nicely. Let's hope it lasts!
Poor guy! Did McGonagall have to bring up romance? He'll live though, I'm sure.
Oh dear! She is going to be caught in the middle of an ugly situation, isn't she?
So often in fanfic, Snape has no family. This is a nice change of pace. Plus his dad is pushing for Hermione, so he can't be all bad. :)
I'm sure Snape loves having his father meddle in his love life. This ought to be good.
Marriage law fic is my favorite. Can't wait to see where this goes.
I think that Severus and Hermione can hold their own against Lucius Malfoy, but as the old saying goes " Never turn your back on a Malfoy "
It won't be an easy row to hoe but then again, nothing worthwhile comes without a little struggle.
Poor pansy, to lose the baby, and then have Draco behave so baddly, was just awful.
The time to chose is coming fast, they both need to stop fooling around and get on with it.
Oh God, the only thing missing from the "personal" was "on the beach"
A good begining, looking forward to more.
A Marvelous, funny, gay, intelligent story,surprising themes, and an intuitive tenderness flowing through it... Brava, well done. You had me in stitches with Crooks' sly attack upon the lovers. Do, do, please,write more soon. Y.