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Potions Under Duress The Bridge
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The Bridge

1: The Bridge

The Bridge

sinbad

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

General Potions Under Duress 493 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

This is based on a challenge issued by readingwriters group.

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Chapter 1: The Bridge


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sinbad

5 Stories  |  Favorited by 5  |  3,441 Reviews Written  |  224 Review Responses

I am a happily divorced woman with two children. My hobbies include writing, taking care of pets, politics and I help run a family owned not-for-profit dog shelter/sanctuary. I am also known as cat_jumped1.

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Reviews for The Bridge

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10/10

beaweasley2

Oh how sad. I'm sorry about your uncle. I liked that Severus was there and wanted to take her out to clebrate life. After all the loss, especially all those Hermione lost, it's good to remember what they have.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thanks, he had a full life and is sadly missed.Thank you for the review.

10/10

Lainylvs48

That was beautiful, hun, wtg and tyvm for a gorgeous story

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thank you for the lovely comment!  I'm happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

sapphire

I am so glad I finally got time to read your stories.  Awesome job on this one!!!!

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thank you so much!

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

A splendid portrayal of loss and grief and moving on. Nicely done.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thankyou for the golden unicorn (review).  I enjoyed doing this story, even if I sweated all the way through the process.   I am glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

EverMystique

Touching and imbued with sentimentality.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thank you for the review.  This was the first work I ever posted and it was a sentimental time for me and my family.

10/10

potterbrat

I was so happy to see a story from you -- I just had to read it.  I am very impressed; you did a wonderful job.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thank you, I'm very pleased you enjoyed my first fiction, you might want to try my second fiction, Zazza's Tale.  This was written in a almost Kipling style and was a result of a heated debate between my mother and myself.  I hope you enjoy it as well.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Nicely done, dear. :)

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

To get a compliment from an icon, wow, I'm touched.  Thanks.  Words just can't describe how I feel so I'm not going to insult your intelligence by trying.  I have read and reviewed so many of your works and never thought  I could do this.  You have been an inspiration to me.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

Oh, great! I'm gladly you've finally braved the waters of posting. It's such a fun hobby. :) Keep up the good work.

0/10

MMADfan

Interesting ending. Good first fic!

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thankyou,  I hope you will enjoy other stories I have floating in my head!  thanks for taking time to review!

10/10

Bambu

What a wistful, reminiscent tone ... and I liked Severus' line.  This is very nicely done.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thanks,  it was a difficult ending for me.  I'm glad you liked the story.

9/10

sassy19

A nice moment in time and quite touching.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

septentrion

Wonderful! So well written, so many things told in so few words.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thankyou very much, actually the challange was 500 words so I didn't quite make it.  I was sent a picture of a bridge, I was was going to ignore it, but my uncle passed away and this inspired me.

10/10

amsev

I'm so sorry for your loss!   :_(

What a moving trip down memory lane (with a serving of the MLC) Thank you for writing!

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thankyou!  Needless to say he was loved and is remembered by family and friends.

0/10

Vorona

That's beautiful.  As sharp as Snape's temper is, I do think that a comfortable and kind relationship would work between the two of them.  Very nicely done.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Yes, I imagine they had to work some issues out, but all relationships are hard work.  I agree however that their relationship was especially difficult.  Thanks for the review!

6/10

odogoddess

Aw... how sad and sweet.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thankyou, I hope you enjoyed the story.

10/10

Stormi

Very well written.

Response from sinbad (Author of The Bridge)

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

Anonymous

I like the idea that their love isn't passionate.  It's almost always so in this type of storyline.  But they make a good life nonetheless.  Refreshing.

Author's Response:   Thank you so much for your review!  This is my very first story, and you are my very first reviewer. I appreciate the time you took to leave a review.
  I am working on another story as well.  I hope you will enjoy it.  Thanks again!
                                    ~sinbad~

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