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Animagus

Alison

14 Reviews | 3.71/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 236 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Severus Snape

Severus fears it's going to be one of those days.

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Member Since 2006 | 42 Stories | Favorited by 26 | 8 Reviews Written | 149 Review Responses

A published Aussie author for a number of years now, I decided to dabble in the waters of HP fanfic for the first time. I hope my stories are acceptable.

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WriterMerrin

That was an unexpected twist. Hilarious!

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ddddddd

I love it!

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MollysSister

A spider spy gets no respect from birds! hahaha!

8/10

helshez

LOL!!! That could account for his abilities as a spy, but I prefer to think he was just uber-talented. *wanders off to polish her Snape Pedastal*

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beaweasley2

Oh this was hilarious!

Response from Alison (Author of Animagus)

I love your little rolling emoticon! So glad you enjoyed the story.Alison

10/10

jenonymous

Funny, in a gruesome sort of way. I'm sure my son would love this story, and my daughters would cry for the poor raven.

Response from Alison (Author of Animagus)

Well, keep in mind that the raven was going to commit murder on the spider, and spiders may not be cute and fluffy, but they (presumably) value their lives as much as birds do ;DAlison

10/10

amsev

Oh, what a visual. LOL! Boom!Splatter!Thud!

Excellent Drabble.

Response from Alison (Author of Animagus)

Thanks for that! I was writing in answer to a 100 word drabble challenge at Bewitched Mind, and the original story was twice as long. It was an interesting exercise to cut it down and still have it make sense. And I love the idea of Snape's reaction - SO p***ed off at the world in general!Alison

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septentrion

LOL very funny, though I imagine Severus would disagree.

8/10

nata

Poor... Now, I don't know who. Raven or Snape? The idea is wonderful, although the last line feels a bit forced. It must provide the explanation, but perhaps a bit of word juggling might improve it.

10/10

Fawkes_07

*snort* A quick laugh was just what I needed this morning. Perfect!

Response from Alison (Author of Animagus)

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!Alison

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EverMystique

LOL. Poor severus, being eaten by birdies.

6/10

norwegianeyes

go figure. snape as a spider.icky.

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Perselus

LOL I love your writing!

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magic_101

I always wondered what would happen if a bug Animagus got eaten. The summary says it all! He shpuld have a tally going of how many times it's happened.

Response from Alison (Author of Animagus)

Poor old Sev! I like him, I really do, and I could just imagine his exasperation if he kept getting eaten in the line of duty!Alison

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