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The Endlessness That You Fear
JackieJLH94 Reviews | 6.14/10 (94 Ratings, 0 Likes, 85 Favorites )
Even though Snape is a traitor, Hermione hopes he finds her. She's barely survived this long, and he may be her only chance.
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*poke*
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Lol, should I take that as a hint that I should hurry up with the update? :D
Response from Aurette (Reviewer)
*pokes again*
Just seven, Jackie.Please.This story is so very strong that I want to read it through. I want to know who helps the Muggles, I want to know where Ron disappeared to and why. I want to know what Severus and Hermione wait for. I want to know how Voldemort would die. I want to know if the wizarding world would be rebuilt. I want to know why Severus wants to be with Hermione.Please.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
*hugs you for your wonderful reviews* I promise, more is coming. You'll definitely get some answers soon, as well as some more familiar faces! :D
Response from nata (Reviewer)
Squeee! Yes, as verbose as that. I love the imagery of this story.
Wants and Needs ... toooo short! I was so happy to see a new chapter up, but really, I wanted and needed it to be more! This is such a great story, different; and in all the multitudes of stories, the fact that someone came up with a new twist to write on, is much appreciated.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
*grins* Sorry, I wanted to get something up sooner rather than later, and that was going to be a scene change anyway, so I posted that bit while I continue to work on the rest. I promise, the next chapter won't be nearly as long in coming. :)
Oh, my. I think this is the very first story I have ever read about what life would be like after Voldemort when after the muggle world. You certainly have picked an epic topic here. I am very impressed and really quiet taken with your writing style. You have definitely NOT bitten off more than you can chew, your story is grand and sweeping and yet intimate and personal at the same time. Fantastic. Your Hermione is Gryffindor brave, and realistically close to the breaking point at the same time. Your Snape is nasty and noble, as irritating and alluring as ever. You should be very proud of yourself with this one.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you so much for your detailed and kind review!! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it, and that everything comes across as believable. It's certainly been quite an undertaking, but I'm loving every minute of it. :D
I'm so glad you updated because I was already afraid you had abandoned this wonderful story. But I am glad you haven't and completely reassured now you wrote you will finish it. Interesting developments in this chapter. Although Severus is blunt, it feels sincere to me. Hope Hermione is satisfied with his answer.. Please update soon!
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Nope, definitely not abandoned! It's been a very, very long journey with this fic, and I refuse to give up on it. Lol. Over the last few months I've actually been writing, after not really writing anything at all for about two years, so I'm going to do my best to get this story finished soonish, before my muse goes on an extended vacation again. :)
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
Well that sounds pretty determined :-) and I'm glad your muse is cooperating now. Maybe you can bribe her somehow so that she is willing stay? Most muses seem to like chocolate LOL
Hmm... this is really interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you!! I'm glad it caught your interest!! :D
Oh my gosh! How COULD you leave us here, right in the middle of such a conversation!?!So glad you're back and updating, and will be following closely (and with pounding heart) this very intense tale.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Because I'm evil, you see.*grins*Okay, not really evil. :D I hope you continue to enjoy the story!! I promise, I will do my very best to not wait six months to update again. Lol.
This story is quite chilling.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thanks! It's really interesting to write; the end-of-the-world-as-the-characters-know-it scenario is really awful to contemplate, but incredibly, incredibly interesting. :)
So glad to see another chapter for this great story!! Looking forward to future updates.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you!! :D
fascinating! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :D
have you read "How I live Now" by Meg Rosoff? Great book.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
I've never heard of it. I just went and read the description on Amazon, and it looks really interesting, though. I'll have to see if they have it at the library next time I'm there. :)
I began reading this from the beginning today and I'm enjoying it immensly. It's a particularly orginal storyline and you write the about the harrowing and isolating circumstances they find them in a succinct and believable way. I ike the details you describe within their environment such as the brain room. I can't wait to read further!Keep up the great work!
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!!
This a great alternative world you've created here. I am looking forward to reading more, and hope against hope for a happy ending. I also hope Harry isn't really dead, but that's just me! I am loving this so far, and hope to see more of this very soon!
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you!! There will definitely be more--this story has been a very, very slow project, but I promise I'll finish it. :D
Wow! What a great story so far! By far the most original plot I've read in a long time! I love the post-apocalyptic feel! It's very creepy at times! Love the interaction between the two of them! I can't wait for the update! :)
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
I'm glad you like it!! It's definitely been interesting to write. I can't promise extremely frequent updates, but I swear it's not going to be abandoned. Lol. I will finish this story one of these days. :)
Oohhh...I'm very curious! Great opener! :)
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
I'm glad it caught your interest! :D
So where do they go from here? :)
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
*grins* You shall see! :D
Great chapter, Severus was brutal but likely correct with his words.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you! I've always pictured Severus as incredibly blunt, even when trying to be nice. Lol. I just can't see him being one for sugar-coating. :D
That was a great chapter!What happened to Voldmort though?I wonder if this was part of his big plan after all?He is part muggle and has lived in the muggle world after all.He should have known the muggles would'nt go down without a fight.Why did Severus send Hermione to a safe place in the begening?
Trapped and utterly hemmed-in----but feeling "safe" as long as he is with her.
When you wrote about him "protecting" her, I couldn't help but give a great sigh of relief myself.
I am completely intrigued as to how all this will resolve---a new wand for Hermione, meeting with other surviving witches/wizards, finding a way out or a way back to sanity for their country, what being thrown together in this way will bring about for Snape and Hermione---you most definitely have my interest.
Update again soon!
This was the most beautiful get-together scene I have read in a very long time. With all the desperation and amount of stress we cannot even begin to comprehend, the way he accepted her in his life was a pure delight.
Bleak prospects, but where there is Snape, there's hope. :)
Fabulous. Great foward movement, despite them being deep in hiding and "bunker" mode.
He should have told her where he left her, but I'm glad they found each other.
Having this story back is fantastic. Thank you for coming back to us, your readers. This story is so tense and fresh (pending death stench, of course) that I missed it very much.
I wish you your real life would treat you well.
I'm very glad you are updating again so soon. This story is really staying with me.