New Chapter for The Endlessness That You Fear
The Endlessness That You Fear
JackieJLH94 Reviews | 6.14/10 (94 Ratings, 0 Likes, 85 Favorites )
Even though Snape is a traitor, Hermione hopes he finds her. She's barely survived this long, and he may be her only chance.
Start ReadingChapters (8)
About JackieJLH
Author
JackieJLH
Member Since 2006 | 41 Stories | Favorited by 40 | 2 Reviews Written | 177 Review Responses
Eh, I'm too boring to have a proper bio.
Reviews for The Endlessness That You Fear
This is a very promising story, I really hope to see more of it. Good set up so far, it will be interesting to see what you can make of this. :)
I love your story. I was just wondering...Is the Safe area the woman was talking about Hogwarts?
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Glad you like it! The safe area is a Muggle safe zone--Hermione doesn't understand precisely why it's safe yet, but will learn eventually.
I love this! War with the muggles is very dramatic.
I'm loving this so far, and I'm definitely looking forward to some interaction between Hermione and Snape. Can't wait! Update! ;-)
OMG! This keeps getting better! I would have never thought that Voldemort would try to take out the Muggles in such a bold move... it's really interesting, even if it is a rather sad existance.
Thank you for the expositional chapter. I normally don't like them, but this one was definitely necessary. It sounds like the Muggles have no idea that there are two different groups of wizards and really aren't inclined to listen even if someone were to tell them.
I love this story, with or without Snape, although of course with Snape would be very nice . But it's been great darkfic stuff so far. I've read other stories that have played off the notion of Voldemort winning and enslaving all the Muggles,but it is nice (and IMHO, more plausible) to read a scenario where the Muggles are able to muster an effective resistance. And it's very intriguing to figure out where Hermione is going to fit in with all of this.
Don't recall if I left a note before or not ... but must stand up on a soapbox and tell all that this story is just too cool. As sacrilegious as it may seem, I haven't even missed Severus yet!
I've read a few stories that cover the topic of 'what if Voldemort won', but this one is different, better, scary... Even my husband listens when I blab about what I've read and you don't get that kind of endorsement every day!
I really love where you are going with this story. I hope you write more soon.
Hey, I really like where this story is headed and can't wait to see more. Please post more soon!
Wow, this doesn't look good for Hermione and Neville. I hope they get some help soon.
Golly it looks like Hermione has more than Deatheaters to worry about.
This is definitely new and unexpected. Looking forward to reading more.
very interesting beggining..
She's probably going to have to go to a Muggle hospital if she wants treatment for Neville. That could be dangerous if the backlash against the magical world continues. I'm looking forward to more.
Oh my God! What happened?? Sounds like a doomsday scenario... yikes! Looking forward to the next chapter,
I am astounded and very eager to see the rest. I like the spin on this of the Muggles attacking the wizards. It's something I don't usually see, and I find I can't wait to see the rest.
Good luck with the next chapter.
Not being British, but having travelled Britain from Kent to Caithness, I must wonder if there is a forest on the isle that stretches from horizon to horizon with a sea shore boundary. I haven't seen one with a single exception of a very mountainous area around Scottish lochs between Inverness and Fort William. And by the way, the ocean touches only a relatively small part of British west coast; it's seas elsewhere. Is this intentional, and Hermione managed to apparate to London from elsewhere (Norway, France)? The cottage idea is alluring and makes me wonder...Thumbs up for giving Muggles means of destroying Voldemort's reign - at least I think that's what's happening there.
Oh my, this is getting rather trilling. Thank you so much for the update, I hope you will update soon, I can't wait to read more of this!
Muggles! OMG! I didn't see that coming at all...
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Lol. I'd like to think that Muggles would get a bit testy if some random creepy looking dude and a bunch of guys in robes tried to take over the country. Maybe that's just me. *shrug* :D
Wow! I don't think I've ever read a story plot like this! I love it! Please update soon! :-)
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Just posted Chapter Two a minute ago! :) Lol. Glad you like it!!
Very dark and very compelling. You write in an hypnotic way. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Looks promising, hope it continues this same way.
Jackie!!! Come back and continue!!! You can’t leave it like this please!!!
One of the best fics I've read. Please update soon.
Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)
Thank you so much! :D The next update should be finished in January--this month is just so hectic! :(