Excellent story - lively and quick. Will there be more?

I found this to be a very cute story. I would have actually liked another chapter, to see them come to appreciate each other or something. Still, comical bits in place, Snape!Sex in place, and all sorts of entrapments. Enjoyable read.

Elura

ROFLMAO  I can't believe you left it here.  This is so bloody good.  Tamara

LOL You go girl.  I love this chapter.  Tamara

I think it was very well done.  Tamara

What a way to look at marriage.  Love it.  Tamara

LOL  oh boy so that is how you get a reaction from Severus.  Bloody brilliant.   Tamara

LOL OMG you are too much.  They are going to burn that building and everyone in it down.  lol  Tamara

ROFLMAO  Now they have no choice but see where this will be going.  Bloody brilliant.  Tamara

Oh I see now this is going to be a very funny fic.  Awesome.  Tamara

Cute, funny story. I look forward to the updates!

Thank you for writing this amusing tale!  I look forward to more- later.    I hope you enjoy your trip!

can't wait to read the rest.

cute!  Thanks for writing this silliness. 

OH! Busted! I cannot wait for the next update!

Do you think that you could find the time to continue this story.  It was listed as the only favorite story of Lady of the Masque. It was a rather fun beginning.  I wonder if there are more of the Yenta stories?

OOh this is hilarious!  Please madam, may I have some more?  *bats eyelashes and looks cute* lol

i thought this was updated. great to read through a second time.

Loved it! Though, do you have to call him 'Snape' all the time? I don't want to be rude or anything, but when its in third P.O.V. I'd like to read 'Severus' every now and then, otherwise Snape is all right with me ^_^ Anyway, so that was an 'accidental' marriage? Creative, very creative. Hope to see this updated soon.

Funny chapter!I can see the horror in both of their eyes. Your wtiting is good.

Mice begining. This sounds like it's going to be s fun read.

WOO-HOO!!! ...More, Please! ~Lotm

--AAAAUUUGH!! That's IT?!? I went back to read the next chapter...and...and... *WAAAAAHH!!* *sniffle*...More, please! (dammit) ~Lotm

P.S. Actually, the chapter 6 lemons are just fine; in this fic, after all, neither of them is a SexGod(dess)! ;-D ~Lotm (And yes, practice *does* make perfect, in writing this sort of stuff--you'd cringe if you ever read my earliest attempts at smut, really...)

Actually, that's a fallacy, that this is the one subject you cannot learn from a book. Nothing beats hands-on experience, but trust me--I learnt quite a bit from books, and my first lovers were *most* appreciative...mweheh... ;-> Muwahaha...nice eeeviiiil cliffie! More, please! ~Lotm