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Erised Desire

1: Simmering Seduction

2: Mesmerising Memories

3: Climactic Conclusion

Erised Desire

dacian goddess

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 73 Favorites )

Romance Erotica Smut post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 6,634 Words 3 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

The sequel to 'Revere and Desire', in which the war is taken care of, our two favourite Slytherins get to be devious and we find out how good Hermione is at getting what she wants.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Simmering Seduction

Chapter 2: Mesmerising Memories

Chapter 3: Climactic Conclusion


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10/10

salvamea

10/10

Marty21

Wow that was hot! 

10/10

lmm

mmmmm....to be Hermione!!!all my secret fantacies in one great sexy story.luved it!

10/10

Kore

Oh...wow.

*Melts into a pile of goo on the floor*

 Please... can I have some more?

0/10

shiv5468

meeps

 meeps again

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

~teases you with glimpse of ankle and promises of sequel~

Response from shiv5468 (Reviewer)

meeps again

10/10

sinbad

Wow, I need a cold shower!  I don't think I have to go any farther.  Except for maybe a wedding?

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Hee! I'm glad you liked it to the point of being in need of cooling off! :D

Erm, a wedding hadn't really occurred to me in all honesty, but a longer sequel is in the works. Any potential developments will creep their way in between the smut there, I'm sure!

10/10

ubiquirk

Okay, this had me laughing:

He had attempted to sway her back into his arms with tales of being Aurors together, fame and fortune thanks to his success at Quidditch, and ‘a few children that she would surely enjoy bringing up, as one or two of them would maybe even share her definition of light reading’.

How very Ron!

Love your characterization of HG! 

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Haha, yes, seduction a la Ron - now we know why I was so wary of the exchange curse! ;o)

Thank you! Between books and Slytherins, she had to get in there and hold her own...

10/10

ubiquirk

I really like how you portray the Ministry treating the Order members - I can easily picture such occurring.  And the way you have HG deteremined to do something about it!  And of course the HG/LM interaction!

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

The Ministry are really out of luck when they go against her ... If she stood up for house-elves who didn't want to be liberated, the injustice of imprisoning someone who fought on their side would really set her in motion!

Hee! Thank you! Lucius' voice was particularly strong when I wrote that chapter. The poor man hadn't bantered flirtatiously since long before Azkaban ... He was quite relieved indeed that his skills hadn't rusted any. 

10/10

lupinschewtoy

I can't wait till you get to the smutty stuff.  I so love Hermione with either Snape or Lucius, but when the three get together to play I'm overjoyed.  I love the darker Hermione as well.  She would have made an excellent slytherin. 

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

I think so too, in a sense ... Slytherin would have made an excellent Hermione, though her deviousness in canon certainly shows she's more than capable enough. That's one of the reasons I love Hermione with either Snape or Lucius also.

The smutty stuff is now approaching at a very rapid pace ... I hope it will be more than satisfactory. 

0/10

EverMystique

 good heavens, that was seriously hot. I love that particular trio... any trio with Severus and Lucius is hot anyhow, but adding the brainiac into the mix allows me to live vicariously through the writer's imagination. Well executed.

0/10

cmwinters

So this story is complete, but will you write more SS/HG/LM?  (*F-A-S-T* becoming an OT3 of mine . . . )

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

I wrote another one-shot OT3, but it's currently only posted on my Livejournal. I'll give it a polish and post it here when I have a bit more spare time, but you're welcome to pop by and read it there. The link is in my profiles, and the fic should be in the memories.

Certainly more to come, yes. There's a sequel to this one in the works, as well as several other one-shots that I've been prompted for.

Thanks for the review, and I'm chuffed you enjoyed! 

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Mmm, yay!  I will look!

10/10

Sampdoria

How evil of you to end the chapter where you did:-)  I absolutely love a scheeming Hermione and when you add my two favourite Slytherins you have my attention!!! Very well written first two chapters, a brilliant plot, I find it quite belivable that a MOM that without problems put innocent people in Ascaban to look good for the people, will scheeme on how to steel the glory and honour of saving the Wizarding World.  But, there is no doubt in my mind that MOM and the Weasleys never thought of who they were up against when they challenge Hermione, Severus and Lucius. I do soo look forward to see rest of the story! And please, pretty please, sometime along the way towards the end of the story, could I please have a scene where Ron (and Molly, I don't favour her that much either) realise just who Hermione is scheeming with and how happy that makes her???? Update soon, I am placing this story on top of my "Look for updates list"

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Thank you for your very thoughtful review! I'm afraid I'll have to deal you a momentary disappointment, actually ... I wrote this fic on something of a deadline, so it is complete with the next chapter. Having said that, I have begun working on a sequel that I will take my time to develop fully. There I will focus heavily on the threesome's social interactions - with each other and with their friends/family/acquaintances. Ronald, Molly and the rest will have to deal with whom Hermione is scheming with, because Hermione is about as ready to give up her two Slytherins as Severus and Lucius are to send her away.

Thank you once more, and I am delighted that you enjoyed my story! 

10/10

MistressSnape

Holy shite!  I bet Severus was having a hard time (pun TOTALLY intended) just watching Hermione's thoughts.  And OMG that was a good kiss.  But it looks like Lucius has discovered them already....and I wonder if the slamming door was to get their attention or signalling anger.  Wouldn't want our favorite Slytherins to hurt each other now.  It's crunch time for Hermione!!  Stuck between Severus and Lucius.....*lust puddle* 

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Hee! He certainly was having a hard time. I shall be a tease and say Lucius will have an even harder time (same pun intended); well, now that the door-slamming is out of the way, of course (you sort of see why in the next chapter, and most certainly in the sequel).

Mmm, crunch time indeed - no library in this world measures up to being stuck between those two... ~joins you in the lust puddle~

10/10

MistressSnape

I like the way this is beginning.....and I'm so glad you're not afraid to take the Weasley's through to their logical end.  Yes, they're very nice people, for the most part, but if you take the different things from canon to their logical ends, it's plainly seen that our favorite family of redheads aren't saints.  I can totally see them taking their own prejudices that far.  I'm eager to see how this plays out.

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Mm, no, the Weasleys are most certainly not saints. They are very nice people, but the key word there is people - much like everyone else, they do have their flaws. This was one scenario where I could certainly see them disregarding facts in a quest for retribution (particularly since, as I touched upon in the narrative, the hostility and prejudice were very much mutual in CoS).

The sequel, once I get round to it, will be equal parts social interaction and obligatory smut, and I shall try to touch upon more of these 'logical conclusions' there. 

I'm very glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for taking the time to let me know! =D 

9/10

MlleGigi

I think it's safe to say that's one of Hermione's fish hooked and landed (although it was a bit naughty of Severus to go into Hermione's thoughts without her permission) -- and if I'm not mistaken, the other fish just swam over to find out what's going on...

Mmmmmmmm...a Slytherin sandwich!  Yummy...

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Mm, it was, but when isn't Severus naughty, really ... Suffice it to say she was broadcasting her lustful feelings to such extent that he decided it would be a harmless peek.

As for the other fish, he'll soon find out more than he thought he'd bargained for. And I certainly hope the sandwich will prove to be as yummy as these Slytherins are worthy of...

10/10

sinbad

Oh what a nasty cliffie, UPDATE SOON!  Great tension build up.

Response from dacian goddess (Author of Erised Desire)

Ooh, it would have been a far nastier cliffie if I had given a hint, even for a moment, that Draco would stick around. As it is, we know who came in ... just not yet why. ;-)

Thank you! I certainly hope the conclusion is at the very least as satisfactory as the tension balling up into it.

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