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Potions Under Duress Invictus
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Invictus

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

Invictus

Doomspark

87 Reviews   |   87 Ratings, 0 Likes, 105 Favorites )

Drama Angst Potions Under Duress 39,515 Words 12 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Convicted as a Death Eater, Severus Snape is condemned to have his mind and magic ruthlessly torn from him. As restitution for his crimes, he is sold into slavery - and bought by Hermione Granger.

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Chapters (12)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve


About Doomspark

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Doomspark

Member Since 2005  |  27 Stories  |  Favorited by 152  |  35 Reviews Written  |  531 Review Responses

Male. Married. Live in Florida. Owned by two Egyptian Maus, a red tabby, and a hairball-emitting pile of fluff.

Author Website
http://www.doomspark.net
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Sycophant Hex and my own site. Some works archived on AO3 as well.

Reviews for Invictus

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TheCopperDragon2004

A good ending- but Hermione never took her potion, did she? Why did Sirius die? Just because he technically already was until they brought him back? 

Response from Doomspark (Author of Invictus)

Sirius died because ... well, partly because I needed his death to help heal the rift between Snape and Harry.  And partly because I really don't like him.

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TheCopperDragon2004

I don't think I've ever read this story (or the apparent sequel), but I'm intrigued already! Can't wait to keep reading, so I'll shut up now..

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Vacabi

Dear   Doomspark!I`d like to thank you for fanfics(Invictus and Golden Gain),they are really great!Would you mind my translating this fics into Russian?Be sure that I`ll show your authorship and any other additional information.With best wishes from

Response from Doomspark (Author of Invictus)

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Response from Doomspark (Author of Invictus)

I don't mind at all if you want to translate my stories. Just be sure to send me a link so I can see how they turned out.

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EverMystique

Well, that was interesting. Obviously, I like that they found peace in the end, and that they figured a way around it all. Interesting twist to the Amorata potion. LOL.

Elura

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Electryone

This was a really great story! I loved your puzzles (I managed to get a few of the names of the Death Eaters from the first puzzle, alhtough i didn't get the second one until I saw everything written together without the non-puzzle part of the poem. I felt like it ended a bit abruptly, however. Hermione and Severus are still under the influence of a love potion, which I can't imagine is the foundation of a good relationship. I hope you have a sequel or something.

10/10

sherrithewriter

Lovely story -- good plot and adventure. The Soulstriking was a nice twist. I can't wait to read the sequel.

8/10

michiruwater

It's somewhat difficult to believe that these brilliant people didn't figure out that Albus was Soulstricken several chapters ago; I thought it was fantastically obvious. But I'll go with it :-P

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mock_turtle

WOW!!!!

Response from Doomspark (Author of Invictus)

Glad you liked my story!

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elsolel

It is a good thing that they are not evil.  It is entirely to easy for them to get into and out of the MOM.

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elsolel

Good intentions and all that. 

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elsolel

Ooooo.  Nice twist about Fudge.

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elsolel

I hope it works!! 

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elsolel

Hahahaa!  Speak friend and enter!!!

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elsolel

What would happen if the wrong soul went into the wrong body?  Freaky Friday!

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elsolel

Ah, a plan.  I'm so excited!

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elsolel

I'm with Hermione on the Hexing.  At least there is a counter spell.

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elsolel

Oh, that's terrible.  I hope they can help him. 

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elsolel

I hope he's ok.

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elsolel

Nice!  And Fudge got what was coming to him, too. 

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elsolel

I am sooo glad that they got all of the bottles!

10/10

bellarossi

This was really wonderful. I loved the riddles and puzzles-- I'm a huge fan of them. I sat and tried to solve them all before getting to the reveal for each. Thank you for a wonderful story that kept me captivated the whole way through.

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MadEye

Im so glad Harry and sirius got their goodbye, and he apologized to Severus.

10/10

MadEye

Im sooo Glad someone brought Sirius back!!! Wheeeee!I <3 Snuffles!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I can't believe it's over.  Truly amazing story.  Tamara

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Arabella Bloodgood

I love an action packed story.  Brilliant job.  Tamara

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