Provenance
Chapter 3 of 7
BambuExpecting to have a long heart-to-heart talk with Draco about her concerns, Hermione takes an unexpected detour.
ReviewedThe Witch Bower
By Bambu
All standard disclaimers may be found in Chapter One. My thanks to SnarkyWench is perennial, and I should mention that the name of the restaurant in this chapter coincidentally belongs to a cooking school in New York (the use of it in my story was entirely coincidental.)
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Chapter Three: Provenance
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Light and dark were perfectly balanced and the old ways had been honored once again. The bower stretched its limbs, both arcane and mundane. The magic of the plains flowed along leylines unseen by the naked eye, nor those tainted by the advances of the industrial revolution. Leaves, branches, trunks and recent additions to the bower were clothed in elemental fabric.
The Malfoy had been sanctified and would sleep for two cycles of moon and sun, recharging with the influx of his realm's power. He was safe in his wizard-made structure. Soon he would be abroad. Soon he would feel the health of his land, as if it were his own body, his own hands and feet. Soon his land would share in his strength and his husbanding.
It was time.
The bower was ready for its first bride in three centuries.
It knew where she was.
It reached.
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At first, it was impossible to tell if it was a dream or not.
A swooping sensation in my tummy caused me to clutch at the bed to ground myself, but there was nothing to grab beneath my fingers. Suddenly it felt as if I was cocooned by nothing but air. I struggled to open my eyes, to waken if I was asleep, but something held me in its thrall.
Unfamiliar magic tampered with my mind. It was and wasn't like being subject to the Imperius Curse, and I couldn't seem to form a coherent defense.
Panic raced through me as swiftly as a Wronski Feint. After a brief mental struggle, it seemed as if the strange magical touch loosened whatever constriction had been placed on me and I could open my eyes.
Immediately I wished I hadn't.
I was hovering in the cool night air. Damp cloud cover dusted my face with moisture, and a lustrous Wine Moon hung in the sky like a giant galleon yet partially shaded by wisps of cloud cover.
What was going on? Was this an out-of-body experience?
I'd only read of those in fantasy novels and didn't think it was possible in the magical world. Perhaps it was a realistic dream? Except none of my dreams had ever felt so tangible.
Maybe someone had broken through my wards. They were the best known to wizardkind, but nothing was impenetrable. But how? Who?
My defensive skills were a bit rusty, but my mind reeled with possibilities. Was Draco safe? Harry and my parents?
If the Weasley twins had lived, I would have suspected a prank or a mind-altering potion, but there was no one I knew that would've played such a trick on me. Oddly enough, I relaxed as I rounded out the list of suspects in my mind. My mental functions weren't impaired at all.
Remembering an old martial arts film Dad liked, I decided to act like the hero and conserve my energy for whatever experience lay ahead of me.
Unfamiliar magic touched my mind. It was a bit like Legilimency at least the way I experienced Legilimency -- where concepts and emotions were expressed more clearly than language and images. The concept of my safety was paramount.
Swallowing my fear, I reminded myself that I had met many new and wondrous creatures since entering the wizarding world at the age of eleven. This might be something ... er ... someone ... new.
It was then I realized how quiet it was around me. Too quiet ... too dark. London was never this dark. Even in the middle of the night, ambient light from the city glowed in the night sky. In contrast, there was moon and star light above me and nothing but darkness below.
The odd swooping sensation in my tummy continued, and it became obvious that I was moving ... flying.
Again that curious intelligence pressed a concept into my mind. Time. There was a schedule to follow.
An infused calm settled upon me, probably a result of the unfamiliar magic. In my peripheral vision I could see the dark landscape below. Intermittent bonfires dotted the expanse of black, but my constant companion was the moon and whatever sentient being had taken me from my bed. For some reason I couldn't explain, I felt as if I'd been wrapped in a tentacle of magic and was being pulled toward the main body of whatever creature held me. Still, there was no hint of menace and despite my unease and confusion, I did feel safe.
After an indeterminate period I changed directions, the moon was now on my right, and it had begun its descent toward the far horizon. With much effort, I managed to maneuver from a recumbent to standing position. It was extremely odd hovering mid-air, but it was better than being flat on my back.
I looked about me as well as I could in that magical embrace and noticed an eerie dilution of the night sky in the east. It looked as if it had been painted with watercolors and the bottom inch had begun to run with too much water. The palest shade of gray announced the coming of dawn.
It was impossible to tell how far I had traveled or where I was, but bit by bit, the night sky grew lighter, and the landscape revealed itself beneath me. Unfortunately, there was nothing but mist and fog, which roiled like a smoky potion in a cauldron.
My frosty breath told me it was cold although I couldn't feel it. Whimsically, I thought it absurd that I was having an adventure while wearing a tatty flannel nightgown. I felt a bit like Wendy Darling being taken to Neverland. But I didn't have a Peter Pan leading me or a Captain Hook waiting at the other end of my trip. We'd already vanquished the evil scourge of our day, and in his wildest dreams, Captain James Hook had never been as evil as Voldemort.
As daylight approached, gusts of wind blew through the thick cloud cover and fleeting glimpses of the earth below teased me, swirling into view, but not for long. It was like trying to spot a unicorn in the Forbidden Forest. Then, as if catering to my thought, the fog opened long enough for me to see clearly and I realized how very far away the ground was ... or my bed. Flying had never been my strong suit and panic spiked at the edge of my enforced calm.
What if the magic lets me go? What if I fall? Could I Apparate while falling to my death? Get a bloody grip!
My wand was in my bookcase. Fear darkened my peripheral vision and I breathed in shallow gasps. Instantly the cocoon of magic tightened around my body, reassurance washing over me in palpable waves, and I fought off the panic, allowing myself to be calmed.
Half of my problem was that I had so little information to work with. My mind wove outrageous scenarios with scant information, but indulging in that luxury would only leave me terrified. Instead, I looked around me. It was too dark for birds to be about, and I didn't see any planes in the air. It was almost like being aloft in a helicopter or a hot air balloon, but quieter.
A dog barked somewhere below, it's voice carrying in the quiet, early morning.
As we moved beyond the damp cloudbank and with the coming dawn, I could see much better. However, it wasn't comforting at all. I didn't recognize this countryside. Nothing looked right.
From the direction we had flown and the placement of the sun and moon, I should have been west and south of London, but there was no M4 in sight. In fact, there were no highways at all, and from this height it should have been easy to see at least one.
My hair flew into my eyes and I brushed it away impatiently. At least the magic had eased up so I had some freedom of movement.
A gentle notion pressed into my mind; pay attention it seemed to say. I was nothing if not accommodating, after all the entity held me in its power. I looked in the direction I seemed to be pointed toward, and in the distance a glimmer of light shimmered along an undulating ribbon of water. A river. But which river?
It could be any north-south flowing river in England, but something about the broad flat plains reminded me ...
With a sense of rightness I guessed it was the Avon, and if we followed it, we would run right into the Channel at Portsmouth. Wracking my brain for anything I remembered from childhooed geography lessons, I realized I was most likely traveling above Wiltshire.
Wiltshire.
Draco lived in Wiltshire. Did he somehow have a hand in this ... whatever this really was? Was this something to do with his estate business?
He wouldn't do anything to hurt me. I knew that ... instinctively and experientially. The inarticulate conscience guiding my journey seconded my belief in Draco's innocence.
Descent was so gradual and my thoughts so consumed with Draco -- I knew he would worry that it wasn't until I had dropped a dozen meters that I noticed how the growing dawn's light illuminated the entire plain and surrounding forest to the east.
This was a very different landscape than I remembered from trips taken with my parents as a girl. Still, I'd never seen the plains from the air. What was to say this wasn't how it looked normally? Yet, I couldn't see any cities at all, no church spires or roadways crisscrossing the countryside. Things I knew should be there.
Twining columns of smoke rose in the distance, situated along the silver ribbon of water bisecting the land.
If it was the Avon a smug certainty in my mind supported my hypothesis -- then where was the canal? Mum and Dad and I had hired a boat and taken a picnic lunch on the Kennet and Avon Canal one summer. We'd stayed overnight in Avebury to look at the henges.
A warm sense of satisfaction flooded my body, imposed by the magic which had bound me.
As if my thought sped my passing, I suddenly saw the enormous, man-made barrow of Silbury Hill. This I remembered, except it looked very different. Squinting against the pale gray light, I tried to see more clearly in the mist playing peek-a-boo with the ground. My spine prickled with foreknowledge as I stared at the gently rounded peak of the burial mound. This Silbury Hill didn't have a flat top.
Where was I?
Again a deep chuckle echoed deep in my mind, and I had the sense that the entity was amused by me. If I hadn't been so unnerved, I might have been vexed.
Turning my body, I tried to slow my pace to see whether I could spot the enormous henge of Avebury. From my height I should be able to see it over my left shoulder. If only the mist would cooperate.
There.
Curlicues of fog ebbed and flowed around Avebury's stone circle, causeway, and the glinting mirror-like reflection of the water-filled ditch -- moat -- around the henge.
A morning breeze blew more of the fog into whirling eddies allowing me to see the entire Avebury henge intact. The entire ring of massive stones was complete. There was no village of Avebury, no sweet shop, no curio shop to tempt the crowns, shillings, and pence from the pockets of visiting schoolchildren.
I seemed to have forgotten how to breathe. The question hadn't been where was I.
No ... no ... I should have asked when was I?
A rough sort of affectionate hand invisibly tousled the curls on my head, as if patting me like a good student.
I shuddered, suddenly, overwhelmingly terrified.
The otherworldly presence magically erected a mental wall between my fear and my brain. It felt as if cotton wool had been slipped into place odd and dampening. My heart rate slowed down and we resumed our travel, passing Silbury Hill in a wink, before I could truly see how 'young' the structure was.
Southward I was propelled, responding to a sense of urgency my magical host was subordinate to, and the landscape blurred before my eyes.
We sped over flat, fertile land, which, in my experience, had been dotted with cities, towns, and small farming communities, but there was nothing of urban life to be found here and now, or, better yet, here and then.
While I was wrapping my mind around the concept of then, we stopped.
I hovered over another circle, but it wasn't what my subconscious expected. My parents had taken me to the most famous of henges during spring holidays my third year at school. The sheer size of the Sarsen stones had been awe inspiring and I had sneaked a touch of one of the time-worn stones. I distinctly remembered the roughness of its pitted surface and wondering what the massive rocks could say if they could speak.
What I now saw below me bore no resemblance to that circle and it should have. The water-filled moat wasn't a surprise. I was prepared for that by the great ring at Avebury, but there was no stone here. This henge was a ring of wooden posts sunk into the ground near the inner rim of the moat.
Where are the stones, I wondered. Was this a henge I had never heard about? One predating the great standing trilithons of Stonehenge?
Aubrey holes.
The name might have come from the abducting magic or from a memory of my voracious youthful curiosity.
That's what they'd been called. Aubrey holes. A forerunner of the great stones.
My stomach clenched.
I was seeing things which had existed thousands of years ago ... four thousand years.
If my emotions had been entirely under my control I would have been hyperventilating. The entity controlling my actions calmed me. Soon it seemed to be saying, soon I would understand.
Goodie.
Let's hurry it up then. I'd like to go home now.
Really.
Contrary to my wishes, however, I remained suspended in the pre-dawn air, ten or so meters above the circle. If I hadn't been so freaked out, I might have appreciated the beauty of the archeological site. There was no car park nearby, no motorway running alongside whose sole contribution seemed to be corrosive exhaust fumes eating away at stones set in place four thousand years ago ... or was it five hundred years from now?
I closed my eyes, wishing fervently this was all some strange sort of dream. After several minutes, I peeked through my lashes. Nothing had changed except I could see more clearly as the sun began its ascent over the horizon.
And there it was, Stonehenge in all its Neolithic glory.
I bit my lip.
This wasn't all right. It really wasn't. I desperately wished for the comfort of Draco's arms.
Instead, the magical cocoon compressed as if offering the comfort of its embrace in Draco's place.
And then we waited.
I had never been so aware of the planet, of the way the moon set and the sun rose. It was so quiet hovering mid-air. There was nothing to distract me from really looking at my surroundings or to feel the power of the sun as it chased the pre-dawn chill from the air.
Briefly I flirted with the idea that this whole experience maybe it was a vision quest was supposed to teach me my own insignificance. Except that was a lesson I was likely to need. The war had taught me that. Ron's death and Harry's semi-catatonic state had taught me that.
The sun's leading edge limned the horizon, radiant light its crowning glory. With its ascent, the fabric of time and space stretched ... the magic cocooning me seemed to weaken and thin.
Alarmed, I began to tremble, and then a faint caress of my cheek let me know that whatever had brought me would attend to my safety. Nevertheless, I could feel a greater power at work.
Power I was intended to meet.
It was the closest thing to an actual thought I'd yet understood. Then I wondered what greater power there could be other than this amorphous sentience holding me in its grasp.
As the tendril of pre-verbal thought faded, magic -- ancient, ponderous magic pulled at my soul. It wasn't like the Dementors or the quick electrified jolt of instinct which made my incantations work. This was entirely different. I'd never felt it before, except perhaps that time we'd ventured deep into the Forbidden Forest in search of the fifth Horcrux. That had been an ancient, loamy sort of feel. This was the same, but different.
How does one meet power?
Awareness prickled along my spine and I turned my head, instantly sighting the figure of a lone individual walking down the broad causeway leading to the circle of Aubrey posts. Pale light shone on his pale hair.
Malfoy?
Was this a trick? A joke?
What was this?
Impatient magic dropped me closer to earth and the pull of that ancient power centered in the balls of my feet, humming up through my legs and spreading throughout my body.
When I was hovering not five meters above the center of the circle I could tell the approaching figure was indeed a man. His clothing was unlike anything I'd ever seen outside a museum. A heavy hide garment, slit down the front and tied at intervals with strips of hide, covered his torso and fell to mid-thigh. His leggings were also made of animal skin; fur side turned inward and held in place by more thin leather strips. His footwear was bulky but form-fitting, and it appeared to be constructed from a single piece of leather wrapped around each foot and tied at the ankles.
Despite this rudimentary clothing, he walked tall and proud and carried a staff.
He was fascinating, and I hardly noticed that I had dropped lower to the ground, close enough to see his features clearly. His face was narrow and I was sure that if he looked at me I'd see gray eyes. And the hair was as fair as Draco's or his father's had been. It was long and tied in a tail at the nape of his neck.
His inherent magic, backed by the ancient power I was here to meet, called to me. Was he a wizard? It might only be the ancient magic I was feeling. Maybe I was learning that the Malfoys had once been Muggles.
A tight squeeze warned me to pay attention, and it was then I noticed that I hovered barely a meter above him. Why didn't he see me? Perhaps this was a dream -- or a hallucination -- after all.
Draco's ancestor for I was sure he was that -- halted at the perimeter of a denuded circle in the center of the enclosure. Carefully placing his staff onto the flat earth, he then untied the thong restraining his hair. It fell loose and snow white about his shoulders. It reminded me of the way Lucius Malfoy wore his hair on formal occasions. Next, the man removed a pouch slung over his shoulder, letting it drop to the ground before untying his tunic. He shrugged that off, folding it into a neat bundle and placing it on the verge. He wore no shirt of any kind.
Fortunately, this Malfoy ancestor wore a loin cloth so I didn't have to worry about seeing his dangly bits. Using the folded tunic as a seat, he removed his foot coverings and leggings. Finally he stood wearing only his breech clout, and I couldn't help but compare his physique to Draco's. This man was shorter, but he was well-muscled and I fancied I could see Draco's long limbs in this forerunner of his family.
He looped the small pouch over his head, across his chest, and picked up the staff before stepping into the circle of denuded earth. He raised the hand-hewn wood and I could feel power radiating from him. A corresponding vibration echoed in my abdomen, not from my womb or my stomach, but from what Tonks would call the center of my chi. So much for my theory that he'd been a Muggle. This man was definitely a wizard.
This Malfoy ancestor raised his arm, shoulder height, staff balanced horizontally in one hand. One end of the staff pointed toward the rising sun, the other to the setting moon.
Unexpectedly, the air shimmered and rippled around me, and, abruptly, I was dropped onto Draco's many times great-great grandfather.
That is not to say I crushed him, for I didn't. Instead, I seemed to meld with him ... with his body.
His eyes were mine; his hands, my hands, gripped the smooth wood of the staff; and his lungs, my lungs, filled with deep breaths of air. I might not understand his language, per se, but I understood his meaning, and my unnerved thoughts were contained in a tiny corner of our shared mind. It was as if I were a passenger in his body.
It reminded me of the time Barty Crouch, Jr., masquerading as Mad-Eye Moody, cast the Imperius Curse on me. I had that distant feeling of well-being as the body I inhabited proceeded to move as directed, yet I could feel everything which was happening.
I wondered if the ancient magic had taken control of us both.
He ... I ... we ... placed the staff on the earth, its ends pointing toward both sun and moon. When he ... we ... rose, we straddled the staff, and I could feel the coarse dirt beneath his ... our ... feet. Without conscious thought mine he raised our arms, forming the most rudimentary shape of a Bridget's Cross I could imagine. We faced the sun with our eyes closed. Pale yellow sunlight shone on our face.
Turning his head to the right, we aligned our sight with one of the perimeter posts before crossing the thick, damp ground cover. Without ritual, Malfoy retrieved an implement embedded in the ground at the base of the post. It appeared to be a flat sort of bone.
Quickly returning to the center of the circle, the early Malfoy aligned himself ... us ... once again and then dropped to our knees. Using the bone, we dug a small divot in the center of the ground. I felt small pebbles pressing against his knees and the flex of his muscles as we dug in the dirt. He was strong and the task was finished with swift, efficient movements.
When we rose to face the sun once more, I felt the earth change ... our feet were no longer cold. The ground heated beneath us as the blond pulled ancient earth magic from the henge.
It felt as if we were a conduit for the earth's power and I felt alive, connected in a way I'd never felt before.
He arched his neck and suddenly we were looking up into the sky. The sun's light shone in our face and we were warmed from above and below. My body heated and my womb twitched with the combined magic. Correspondingly, Malfoy's groin stirred with the early signs of arousal. I felt it in our shared body. His testicles felt heavy and he had the beginnings of an erection.
He accepted it as if it was a natural aspect of the rite, and turned his mind's eye to a broader range of mental vision. Confined as I was in his mind, I could still sense the greater world beyond this small, denuded circle. One, two, eight people were nearby, several farther beyond. But it wasn't just the people. There was the silken cool touch of the water, the solid presence of the earth, and the myriad animals inhabiting the plains. I could feel their lifes' essence, too. Somewhere at the far edges of his reach, this wizard could feel the ancient woods of the forest which lay south and east of here.
It seemed that we had waited until that last touch - the distant forest -- before dipping into the pouch slung across our chest. Tiny, hulled pieces of grain, slipped through our fingers, before he gripped a handful and removed our hand before carefully spilling the grain into the divot at our feet. He next retrieved a smaller bag from within the pouch. It was quite small, and I remembered its oddly tensile texture from Potions classes. I recognized an animal's stomach lining when I saw and felt it. This bag was filled with water, and we emptied its contents onto the grain.
Kneeling once again, Malfoy placed our palm over the small hole and thanked the moon and the sun for their blessings. Then drawing on the power of the earth he offered her his gratitude for the bounty of the harvest. For a moment, it felt as if the heat of the sun had been channeled through his body, and when he removed our hand, the divot had been covered as if it had never existed in the first place.
He closed his eyes briefly before rising and picking up his staff from the ground, and magic hummed from within the wood.
I stayed with Malfoy while he crossed to one of the timbers in the circle, then removing a slate hand-axe from his pouch examples of this sort of tool, I'd seen at the Museum he cut a notch in the wood. I could see other notch marks lower on the pole, and I realized that we were marking the date.
It was a calendar of some sort. How very, very clever.
The second the thought solidified in my mind, I was ripped from his body; his only acknowledgement was a shudder which shuddered through his lean muscles.
I rose in the air and the proto-Malfoy returned to his clothing.
My abducting, cocooning magic hummed in great satisfaction just before my mind became clouded. Maybe it had all been a dream, but even as I had the thought I knew the experience had been real.
As I sped through the clear blue sky -- for the sun had burned off the last remnants of fog while I'd been with Draco's ancestor a rushing of darkness, its wings fluttering softly in my mind, its feathers metaphorically sweeping gently against me, induced me into a deep, dreamless sleep.
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35 Reviews | 6.17/10 Average
This is very different. I like it, and am enjoying frantic Draco and analytical Hermione.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
It is indeed very different -- even for me -- but I thoroughly enjoyed writing it (especially the research.) Thank you for commenting. It's really made my day.
Neat!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thanks, Pickles. I'm pleased you're enjoying it.
Wow, kidnapped by a bower, eh? Was Draco's ancestor planting the bower? Interesting premise. Interesting story. I wonder what will happen if the bower ever makes it through Hermione's mind? Update soon, pls!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
It's so wonderful to have perceptive readers. You're quite right about the bower (the Proto-Malfoy was a hundred miles north of the forest,) still you're very close.I'm so delighted you're enjoying the premise. It was a blast to toy with.Thanks so much.
Great chapter! You really captured the emotions well. Poor Hermione. What a horrible thing to have to discuss!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
I'm thrilled you're sympathetic to Hermione's situation. It really would be an awful thing to have to raise with someone you love. I just love to read your reviews. Thanks.
I'm so interested to see how this experience will unfold with Draco and the bower. I look forward to more.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thank you very much for your encouraging comment. I hope you enjoy the rest of the adventure.
This is such an amazing story! I love the magic in it. I love the history. And I love Hermione and Draco!
i love the pictures. and the story. sad to see it end.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Please forgive my tardiness in replying. Since I've just posted a new chapter of a story to TPP, I thought I'd check my other stories for any unanswered reviews. Imagine my shock to find yours. I must have a glitch in my spam folders somewhere.Please accept my thanks for your kind words -- even though they're months late. I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story because it's a little different than what I normally write, and I loved doing it.
Nicely ended. They both seem more invested in each other. So, phouka (yeah, traditionally they're supposed to be black, but I can't see one on Malfoy property as that plainly colored)? Or just a feral pony?
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thank you very much. I really wanted to cement their bond with one another, and to play with the whole magical history of the purebloods, per se.I wish I'd known about phouka before I wrote the new forest pony into the story. What a fabulous creature. Regrettably, mine is merely a genuine wild pony from Britain's New Forest.
I want that pony. Seriously, what a little cutie.And what a great story! Very hot ending. Five stars!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Isn't it an adorable pony? Thank you for reading the story. I do so appreciate it.I hadn't realized (having had an email server crash last month) that I had this review, so please accept my apologies for taking so long to respond.
What an INSANELY cute pony!Lovely story! Though I was hoping we'd find out if the newfound heart of the Malfoys was magical enough to restore either Harry or Narcissa's health.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
You are a very kind woman to have read my story ... and I had not idea that you'd left a review. We lost our email server for a week, and then I -- like a complete idiot -- didn't realize until tonight that when you check for unanswered reviews you have to choose the story. ::headdesk::I realize I left several things unanswered, but I wanted it to feel like a slice of life where not everything is neatly tied up at the end.
Lovely! Perfectly wonderful story. I really enjoyed this. Great jokb!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
I beg your pardon for not responding before now. I've somehow -- all these months -- missed the part of the 'unanswered reviews' which says you have to choose the story. I thought I didn't have any left unanswered.You are very kind to have liked my slightly unorthodox method of bringing Hermione and Draco into an understanding.Thank you.
Wow, hot chapter. I'm glad they're back together! And you didn't write "The End", so goody that there will be more, I hope. It's funny how Hermione is schooling Draco on the ritual, and that the magic didn't take him instead, since he's the heir. I wonder if it's because Hermione is a woman, and that makes her like the earth, so the Bower knew that she would understand it better than Draco would? Anyway, waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
I didn't write 'The End,' yet. There's one more chapter to come (probably today or in the morning.)Interesting that you should mention Hermione being like the earth ... there is an element of that in this ritual of theirs. She's the earth power and he's the moon (which is, I realize diametrically opposite much of the Wiccan lore I've read.) But my idea was that the Bower yanked her from her cozy existence because she was a Muggle-born and had no concept of the ancient magical ties to the land. That because the Malfoys had deviated from their ancient vows (and moving down dark and murky paths) someone needed to bring it all back into use. Without her cooperation, it wouldn't happen successfully.I'm really pleased you've been enjoying the story. Thanks so much.
Intense, and with an amazing description of ritual.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thank you. Because it's first person, I thought I could get away with so much description. I didn't think a second person, simple past tense narrative would have worked as well.
I really liked this part. I hope it doesn't end here though. If it does, it seems rather lacking somehow. It needs something more.Good job on this story!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
There's one last chapter to round it out ... I do hope you enjoy it.Thanks for letting me know you've kept reading even when it took a bit of a left turn.
Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)
I am enjoying it.I am a big believer that we need to protect the land because if we continue to abuse it as we've been doing, we're just screwing ourselves over and in the end, nature will get it's revenge on us. I'm not a tree hugger or anything (not that there's anything wrong with that, it's just not me) but I really despise all the cutting down of trees and destroying of rain forests and destruction of National Parks that we seem to have no trouble doing these days and I really believe there will be serious repercussions for these actions.And I do look forward to the next chapter.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thanks!I think you and I have similar outlooks on the husbanding of our natural resources. I live in a big city, but I do think we have to pay attention to what makes the planet such a viable and unique place. After all, there isn't another one we can go to when this one is used up!
Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)
I live on the outskirts of a big city but I have ALWAYS felt that nature is an integral part of things, and the more areas we cut down to make for million dollar homes that only house two or three people, and the more prairie and forested areas we destroy to make room for another shopping center, is very wasteful of our resources.And you are very correct when you say that basically, this is it, this is our home, and once it's destroyed, we've destroyed ourselves! The problem is, most people look at it as, "Well, yeah, we're destroying this or that, but why should I care? By the time it's all gone, I'll be dead and gone anyway!" Which is a very sad way to look at things. But yeah, you and I do seem to think similarly about this kind of stuff. (funiest thing about my views? I'm a staunch Republican, lol. Kind of contradicts things sometimes, lol. I guess you could consider me a Liberal Republican.)
Well, this story has taken quite a twist that I wasn't expecting since my previous review. But I like it and I think I'm beginning to understand (I can be rather dense sometimes). I am off to the next chapter now.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Er ... yeah ... there's a rather large left-field factor involved.This is a big stretch for me in terms of storytelling -- it's not quite what anyone (least of all me) was expecting when I started writing it.If I tell you that in some ways it's not really Draco and Hermione's story ... but it's the Bower's ... will that help?Still thank you for giving it a try.
Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)
Ah now, I have to disagree, it is still their story in a way. Their love and happiness with each other comes from the Bower's need to find a way to make Hermione & thereby Draco, to understand that the land needs them to protect it, as much as Draco and Hermione need each other. At least, this is what I was gathering from what I was reading. But yes, it is definitely the Bower's story first.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
You put it so nicely ... it is their story, but the Bower is an integral part of it; not really a triad but an interesting embellishment to a coupling, if you will.
“Good luck tomorrow,” I said.He gave me a sharp look. “What do you mean?”“You know, with whatever it is you’re doing at the estate. I know you’ve been working on it for months.”The tense look vanished. “Thanks, Granger. I look forward to showing it to you soon.”Lol. This part of the conversation reminded me of a story my Grandmother told me once.My Grandfather was away on business in NY working on a hush-hush deal and only called once a night to say goodnight to my Grandmother. Well, he concluded the deal but it hadn't been released to the media yet and my Grandmother was getting fed up with all the "keep it quiet" nonsense and the day my Grandfather concluded the deal for his boss he called my Grandmother and they talked, but he still wouldn't really say anything. My Grandmother had had enough and innocently asked, "Goodness, what are you doing that you can't talk about anything, purchasing the Empire State building?"My Grandfather got immediately on his guard and responded with, "What? What do you mean?" and my Grandmother was baffled by his response and said, "Nothing, I was joking. You're just all hush hush."This slightly unruffled his feathers and they talked briefly and said goodbye...A few hours later my Grandmother was watching the news and they announced that my Grandfather's boss had just concluded dealings to purchase the Empire State building, lol.She just about fainted on the spot, lol.Anyway, I am enjoying this story. I like the frustration and confusion on Hermione's part and that she wants to work through things. I hope that she can do it without deeply offending Draco and that Draco can work on his "little problem".
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
What an utterly charming story! I love this. Your poor Grandfather must have practically had a coronary, and your poor Grandmother when she realized what had really happened! What a wondeful legacy to have.I'm delighted you're enjoying the story so far, and I'll warn you that it takes a really big left turn! I do hope you find something still to enjoy.Thanks so much for the review.
Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)
lol. Yeah, he apparently was freaking out trying to figure out who had leaked the info and how much damage control needed to be done, lol. Until of course she told him she was only joking, lol.And yes, I found the twist, lol. Goodness, what a twist it was!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
How terribly amusing for your grandparents. I imagine they joked about this for years. It's a pretty unique scenario.::shrugs:: I know. It was a really big left turn!
An absolutely beautiful ritual. I love how they did it in tandem, both feeling the power. Great chapter!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thank you so much. I'm utterly thrilled you liked it.
This is such an interesting story. I am loving the family traditions, and the connection to the earth. I am such a sucker for history.
The pictures you have been including are timed perfectly and really add so much to the entire feel of the story.
I am really enjoying this and can't wait for the next update!
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
I'm so glad you're enjoying the history and the Malfoy family traditions. I started with the concept that the Malfoys' couldn't have such a prominent place in the wizarding world if they had all been Dark. So I figured there had to be a schism, and then I played from there.Thanks so much!
Nice explanation of one of the more annoying aspects of Hermione. Gratitude that something perceived as unnatural actually *had* an explanation would certainly make someone desperately attempt to fit in to their new world.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thank you very much. It just seems terribly logical, especially considering our canon knowledge of Harry's early childhood. Neglect and odd instances of magic which isolated him from any potential, developing friendships. I can easily see Hermione's early childhood being similarly difficult, only with more doting parents attempting to 'fix' their only, seemingly defective, child. She would be desperate to 'fit in' and to prove to herself that she's 'normal' in this world.Thanks for giving the story a read and enjoying it enough to make a comment.
I realize that the force that Hermione is in contact with is very deliberate about what it does; however, it does seem odd that she would pass up this opportunity to ask it whether it could help heal Harry. I mean, after all, it is quite powerful. Who knows what it might be capable of.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
I'm not sure how to respond to your point about Harry -- it's an excellent question. I don't think Hermione really has much of a rapport with the entity yet; however, you've given me much to think about.Thanks so much for giving the story a try and letting me know what you think. I really appreciate it.
Is she seeing what Draco was doing before she arrived?
Great story. Waiting for more. p
Hubby will enjoy this story once its done. I have to wait or he gets discouraged when a story isn't complete.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Yes, exactly. She's seeing what Draco did on the summer solstice, which is what woke the bower. I'm so pleased you're liking it,
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
, and I've always loved that you share with your hubby. I certainly share with mine! You can let him know that the story is finished, I'm just proof-reading -- there are two more chapters to go.Thank you again for your kindness in letting me know what you think.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Awww your so sweet.
Will do.
What a yummy story! I love historical fictions like this.
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Why thank you! It was originally going to be a bit more travelogue-ish, but then I started looking into Wiltshire and it evolved! It makes my day that you're enjoying it.
Another great chapter. It was interesting to read all of that. You're certainly setting the story up well. I guess there's hope for Draco after all. :-)
Response from Bambu (Author of The Witch Bower)
Thanks. I was having a lot of fun with the historical timeline -- a bit like a skipping stone. Because it was an exchange piece, I had limited time to write and the story resolves rather fast ... part of the reason for a history lesson, as it were.I'm thrilled you've enjoyed it so far.
Response from zambonigirl (Reviewer)
I thought that the skipping stone part was a brilliant analogy. Hermione really is sort of ping-ponging through time right there, and it must be very disconcerting for her.
VERY neat, it felt like you were drawing many of the old Celtic myths into this! :)